[Predictions] Naruto Manga 663: Fates Beyond Death

[Son Ryuto Uzumaki]

With no heartbeat They're No longer Jinchuuriki Or Uchiha


First Page
Scene Starts With Naruto and Sasuke's heart's stop beating and they enter a deep consciousness

Naruto:......Kurama......I died(In tears)I'm sorry that I couldn't-
?: Crying already Scaredy Cat
Naruto: !!!!!
Sasuke: Scared without your beast you can't save everyone
Naruto: No I'm sorry I couldn't save you
Sasuke: (Shocked Expression....Then Anger)


Second Page
Sasuke: Screw you I never needed you why are you so obsessed with me
Naruto: Because I'm your Friend......Your Sasuke Uchiha a Shinobi of the Leaf Village my comade
Sasuke: I WANTED TO BURN YOU AND ITACHI'S PRECIOUS LEAF VILLAGE DOWN even after knowing that You still Pursue me Why I don't owe you anything
Naruto: (Laugh's through tears of Death) Since I first seen you I knew that you were lonely just like me and I just wanted to be friends

Third Page
Sasuke: Go be friends with the other dead Ninja then
Naruto: Remember when I told you I would take in all your hatred away
Sasuke: Remember when I told you that you would die first along with your beast
Naruto: Yeah but were both dead now Sasuke you have no reason to be angry
Naruto/Sasuke: Your no longer a Uchiha/Jinchuuriki

Fourth Page

Sasuke: My Brother always left me so (in tears) even as an Uchiha I was still alone.
Naruto: !!!Sasuke did you know that our mothers were best friends
Sasuke: No what does that matter NARUTO they are dead!!! WE ARE DEAD!!!
Naruto: So that makes us GOD BROTHERS Sasuke, we are no longer what used to make us lonely
Sasuke: (Laugh's) I see.....So even in Death I can't get away from you
Naruto: Nope (Laugh together) We're brothers its our Fates/Destiny

Fifth Page
Meanwhile: Hinata gets up and races to Naruto's Location
Gaara: SAKURA what are you doing Bring Naruto back we have to follow Kurama's plan!!!(Hinata arrives out of breath in tears)
Sakura: Hinata I'm so Sorry(cries in shame) I just can't......NARUTO!!! PLEASE WAKE UP COME BACK TO US
Gaara: (in disbelief) Shit No Sakura you have to try some other way.... DON'T GIVE UP
Hinata: (in raged) Sakura-chan don't give up on Naruto he didn't give up on any of us
Gaara/Sakura: (remembering)

Sixth Page
Gaara: Flash backs When he came back to life when Naruto and when Lady Chiyo saved him

Seventh Page
Sakura: Flash backs when Naruto saved her for Gaara

Eighth Page
Hinata: Flash backs when Naruto encouraged her while fighting Neji

Ninth Page

Hinata: I will never give up(looks at Naruto)
Sakura: They're nothing we can d- !!!
Hianta: GENTLE FIST(on Naruto's chest and release blocked chakra in his heart then his heart regains rhythm)Believe it Thats My Ninja Way!!!
Sakura: (shocked) It worked (thinking of Hinata's confidence and then starts to mold her chakra) I'll finish healing him
Gaara: Hurry we need to get started on Kurama's plan
Hinata: What would that be Gaara-sama?
Gaara: (In deep thought) We must connect Naruto with-

Tenth Page
Scene is of Orochimaru's squad

Karinhysterical) I don't won't Sasuke-kun to die
Juugo: Lead the Way
Suigetsu: (panicing) Orochimaru what should we do
Orochimaru: Time is of the essence but we must be patient Sasuke can wait Karin can still bring him back if-
Karin: NO!! He is dying there's no time to wait (rushes off but then falls in Shock)

Eleventh Page
?: Did you just poop? Let me see
Orochimaru/Suigetsu: You fool!!!
Spiral Zetsu: I asked did you just poop (prepare's to attacks Karin)
karin: (Afraid) No I didn't shit!! (Gets up and try's to run but is paused by missed attack)
Spiral Zetsu: Then what is wet and sliding down your leg running on the ground (Shocked by a punch to the face)
Juugo: (Says with Badass Murder face) Pee!!!!! B!tch

Twelfth Page

Spiral Zetsu: (Shocked that he was hit but was barely fazed by Juugo while attached to the buddha)I see pee all the time(demon shadow faced) Show me your poop (Intimidating voice) I already know your going to pee(to Juugo)
Juugo: I'm not pissy like Suigetsu
Suigetsu: HEY I'M not PISSY
Karin: (Runs)
Orochimaru: Juugo take Karin to Sasuke

Thirteenth Page

Juugo: Right (fully embrace Nature Chakra) AAAHAAAAHHAHA (explodes fly's to the ground picks up Karin and fly's in Sasuke's direction)
Spiral Zetsu: (Looking at Suigetsu) Can Water-Boy Poop?
Orochimaru: Suigetsu distract him
Suigetsu: (Melancholy) I knew I was going to DIE TODAY (turns into full water demon and distracts Zetsu)

Fourteenth Page

Orochimaru: Now I must wait for-
?: Oh and What would that be Orochimaru?
Orochimaru: (laughs comically) you know me so well, but would you, a dead man, try to stop me........would you SENSEI!!!!!?
Hiruzen: OROCHIMARU WE DON'T HAVE TIME FOR THIS
Orochimaru: The God of all Ninja Has been Defeated so maybe Its time for another

Fifthteenth Page

Hiruzen: Orochimaru(looks down in Shame) Where did we go wrong?
Orochimaru: (Tsunade approches) I went wrong When I let Nawaki die
Tsunade: Orochimaru..........(Sadness covers them)
Hiruzen: Well you can't let this apprentice die!!
Orochimaru/Tsunade: (Shocked pause, Orochimaru looks up sinister then smile spread's on his face)(Hiruzen notice's and is filled with more shame) Your right Sensei
Meanwhile: Juugo and Karin race to Sasuke body

Sixteenth Page

Juugo: Karin can you bring him back
Karin: Yes He didn't go to far his heart just stopped
Juugo: Restart it now hurry
Karin: Uzumaki Art:Cell Regeneration Pulse Justsu

Seventh Page
Within the Depths of Sasuke's and Naruto's Consciousness

Naruto: We are the Suns of the Leaf so we can't burn it (Smiles)We-
Sasuke: (laughs) yeah I know......We give it Light
Naruto/Sasuke: (shocked) We're fading!!!
Naruto: What does this mean?(Scared but remaining optimistic)
Sasuke: It means I go back to being a Uchiha and you go back to being a Jinchuuriki
Naruto: (Saddens) But Madara took Kurama
Sasuke: (Smile widens) Hump! well were going to get him back from that dead bastard
Naruto: Wow I'm not used to having a little brother(Smile's)
Sasuke: (Smilies then catches on) Hey I'm the big brother because I'm older so COME HERE NARUTO!!

Eighteenth Page

Naruto: (Runs over to Sasuke and Gets poked in the head) Hey (Smile and frowns at the same time) Big brother my azz
Naruto/Sasuke: (returns to the world to be hugged my crying women) We can't die!! We're not Hokage yet!!
Hinata/Sakura: NARUTO!!!!
Gaara: Naruto lets go (Gaara's squad fly's off) Do you remember Kurama's plan
Naruto: (Still weak from the extraction) yeah (Sakura start's healing him without words)

Nineteenth Page
Karin: SASUKE!!!
Sasuke: I'm still not 100% but we have to go!
Karin: Let me heal you first
Naruto and Sasuke return to the World with Smiles on their faces and Greater Bond than Ever preparing for the Next Moment

Twentieth Page

?: You knew Madara was alive back then didn't you......OROCHIMARU!!!!
Tsunade: (Shocked) SENSEI
Orochimaru: EDO TENSEI RELEASE
Hiruzen: Why Orochimaru?
Orochimaru: Because he will help make ME A GOD (As he looks up to see the GOD TREE BLOOM) (Licks his lips) ITS MY FATE

Hey Everybody This was my very first Prediction Please Give me a Negative rep or Positive if you like it with your comments and critiques thanks :bye:

 

[ANiMUS]

Do you really want me to neg rep you if I didn't like it?

 

[Son Ryuto Uzumaki]

Do you really want me to neg rep you if I didn't like it?

Yep I also need your critique

 

[ANiMUS]

Yep I also need your critique

1. Ok, the Piss and poop thing had me reeling, but it dragged on for a little long.
2. I remember the gentle palm thing, but it won't save Naruto
3. Healing doesn't work so whatever means is utilized has to be supernatural
4. Orochimaru actually betting on Hiruzen's help seems a little unlikely. Are you a Hiruzen fan??? Orochimaru is preparing a sneek attack from the looks of it.
5. The best part was the Naruto/ Sasuke dialog twas gold dude:T_T:

Though I get the reason why, a growing problem in predictions is that they seem to force development too soon and add in too much. Slow it down be patient and try to make the prediction as close to a real chapter as possible.

 

[Son Ryuto Uzumaki]

1. Ok, the Piss and poop thing had me reeling, but it dragged on for a little long.
2. I remember the gentle palm thing, but it won't save Naruto
3. Healing doesn't work so whatever means is utilized has to be supernatural
4. Orochimaru actually betting on Hiruzen's help seems a little unlikely. Are you a Hiruzen fan??? Orochimaru is preparing a sneek attack from the looks of it.
5. The best part was the Naruto/ Sasuke dialog twas gold dude:T_T:

Though I get the reason why, a growing problem in predictions is that they seem to force development too soon and add in too much. Slow it down be patient and try to make the prediction as close to a real chapter as possible.

Good looking but Naw all Oro has to do is release the EDO, I was explaining how Since Madara beat Hashirama already Oro didn't have to worry about a struggle from the other edo's when he sends them back so I was also hinting that Minato was leaving the battle field as well

 

[ANiMUS]

Good looking but Naw all Oro has to do is release the EDO, I was explaining how Since Madara beat Hashirama already Oro didn't have to worry about a struggle from the other edo's when he sends them back so I was also hinting that Minato was leaving the battle field as well

Ok, I must have misread. U really think Oro will betray everybody. That could work, but I thought he'd just die somehow. Maybe join Jaraiya XDXDXD

 

[Son Ryuto Uzumaki]

Ok, I must have misread. U really think Oro will betray everybody. That could work, but I thought he'd just die somehow. Maybe join Jaraiya XDXDXD

Yeah I called it Fates beyond Death for a couple reasons 1. being Naruto is really sasuke's god brother 2. Even beyond death they were linked and 3. Orochimaru follow his destiny from beyond the grave considering how many times he was killed and how much he eludes death the god tree must really be his end goal

 

[ANiMUS]

Yeah I called it Fates beyond Death for a couple reasons 1. being Naruto is really sasuke's god brother 2. Even beyond death they were linked and 3. Orochimaru follow his destiny from beyond the grave considering how many times he was killed and how much he eludes death the god tree must really be his end goal

Hmph... Not bad

 

[MinatoTheYellowFlash]

I liked it but that spiral part was unnecessary :/

Also if you made Sasuke act less happy and more saddy happy like then I'd like it even more.

 

[Son Ryuto Uzumaki]

I liked it but that spiral part was unnecessary :/

Also if you made Sasuke act less happy and more saddy happy like then I'd like it even more.

Yeah it was my bad i didnt think i had to imply that considering we all know his persononality yes his is more so sad happy but also accepting new things will come

 

[ahmher]

great predication i like it but i didnt like orochimaru part i mean last part

 

[SIR HERDERP PRESIDERP SDO]

I like the ending, that sneaky snake Oro :snick:

 

[HyuugaHeir]

Decent Prediction.
Vern Nice

 

[Xāvî1]

Not Awesome but more then good.. Try Harder... +15 p

 

[Ahmed1993]

The Naruto and Sasuke interaction was hilarious XD but a bit unlikely.
The spiral Zetsu part was a bit dragged out , and you have some grammar mistakes too but since its your first prediction i won't take it into consideration.

Overall its a great prediction and i can really see it happening , +rep.

 

[chaos control]

It was great and pretty funny. My only critique is this: Naruto and Sasuke were too mushy. They are not God brothers. Jiraiya was Naruto's Godfather and Sasuke is not Jiraiya's kid. A God sibling is the child of a God parent. A God parent is one who is supposed to take care of the child in case something happens to the real parents.

 

[Byron123]

So that was your very first prediction huh? Well I must say it was outstanding. It had a lot of things going on, personalities were perfectly fitting, I liked orochimaru's part and most importantly the dialogue between Naruto and Sasuke, although that the thing with the poking was a little far-fetched. In any case, you have a bright future in writting predictions, that I can tell with certainty.

 

[Son Ryuto Uzumaki]

It was great and pretty funny. My only critique is this: Naruto and Sasuke were too mushy. They are not God brothers. Jiraiya was Naruto's Godfather and Sasuke is not Jiraiya's kid. A God sibling is the child of a God parent. A God parent is one who is supposed to take care of the child in case something happens to the real parents.

They are god brothers Mikoto didn't know that Naruto was Kushina son considering Hiruzen concealed his identity

 

[Ahmed1993]

They are god brothers Mikoto didn't know that Naruto was Kushina son considering Hiruzen concealed his identity

She obviously did , Naruto was given his Mother's surname and the Kyuubi , but the village wouldn't have let her take care of him because the issue between them and the Uchihas.

 

[phantomlord22]

nice job !

considering this is your first time
I'm sure you can do better than this...