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Madara: "Finally... Did you miss your true master, Nine Tails?" (Smirks)
Editor's text: "KURAMA IS EXTRACTED FROM NARUTO!"
Naruto is shown falling, almost unconscious, as suddenly arm made of sand catches him.
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Gaara: "Naruto! You have no right to die, friend, not now, not here!"
Gaara pulls Naruto and puts him on the ground, as he activates his Absolute Defense in the shape of his mother to protect him and Naruto.
Gaara: "You have to be strong, snap out of it!"
Naruto is shown barely looking at Gaara, as he's in a very bad shape.
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Gaara: "No, I won't allow this to happen... Shukaku!"
Shukaku: "Yeah, that brat saved me after all... I'll try to do what I can."
Shukaku turns at the Shinobi Alliance, as he screams to them.
Shukaku: "Listen up, humans! The fox boy lost his friend and is about to die, every medic that's available should come to his aid!"
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Hinata is shown with a zoom on her face, as her eyes are full with tears.
Hinata: "He's right... I saw him losing big part of his chakra... And now he's..."
Sakura: "But that's... impossible..." (Starts crying)
Tsunade: "Sakura!"
Sakura: "Huh?!"
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Tsunade: "Don't cry... Not yet! We have to heal him, he won't die... He promised me that he'll become Hokage, and he won't die before he completes his goal!"
Sakura: "Naruto..."
Tsunade: "Let's go, it will be better if we don't lose any time!"
Karin: "I'll come too. Though I doubt that he'll die instantly. We're from the Uzumaki clan after all."
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Tsunade: "Uzumaki? That explains your red hair, girl. Okay, let's go you two!"
Hinata: "I'll come too! I want to be with him..."
Tsunade: "Of course..."
Tobirama, Hiruzen and Hashirama land near the medics, as they look in surprise.
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Tsunade: "Grandfather!"
Hashirama: "Yeah, Tobirama and Saru helped me with those black things... That Madara... I'll make sure that he won't cause any troubles in the future, let's go!"
Hiruzen: "Tsunade, we'll protect you and the girls while you're aiding Naruto, we know everything thanks to Lord Second."
Tobirama: "I have my markings on Naruto's back, we'll use my Flying Thunder God to go there."
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Tobirama: "It's not on the level of the Fourth's, but it's a better option that walking on feet. I want all of you to gather in a circle and to join your hands."
The 7 of them are shown in a circle, as they both are holding their hands.
Tobirama: (Thinking) "Okay... Chakra Transfer Technique! Now that they have part of my chakra, it will be easy to use... the Flying Thunder God!"
The group disappears, as Tobirama teleported it to Naruto's lifeless body.
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Ino: "Naruto... I hope they'll save him!" (With worried look on her face)
Choji: "They will. They won't let him die, our only chance in this war lies within him!"
Shikamaru: "Yeah, you're right. Naruto won't die so easily. He's not like that. Our only role now... is to protect him!"
Lee: "Exactly, we have to offer him our hands, too!"
Shino: "That's right, we'll support him with everything we have."
The remainder of the K11 are shown heading towards Naruto and Gaara.
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The scene changes to Minato, Kakashi, and Obito with Black Zetsu, as Kurama is shown in Minato's mind.
Kurama: "Minato, you felt it, didn't you?"
Minato: "Yes... That Naruto is... DYING!"
Kakashi and Obito are shown with shocked faces, as Minato is shown with calm face, but with a tear in one of his eyes.
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Kakashi: "Sensei, what are you talking about?"
Black Zetsu: "Kukuku, Madara-sama extracted successfully the Nine Tails from Naruto... This is what he's talking about!"
Obito: "Damn you, Madara! That bastard... will pay! Kakashi, do it!"
Kakashi: "KAMUI!"
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Obito's body is shown spinning, as it's about to be teleported in the Kamui dimension.
Black Zetsu: "What? What are you doing?"
Obito: "We'll leave you... in the dimension... of our eyes!"
Black Zetsu: "Leave me? You leave me no choice then, I have to leave your body..."
Black Zetsu separates from Obito's body, as suddenly Kakashi stops the Kamui and Minato disappears.
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Minato appears before Black Zetsu with angry look, cutting his body in two halves with one of his Kunais.
Minato: "You're first... I'll kill that bastard Madara next!!"
Black Zetsu: "Yellow Flash... but how..."
Obito: "Kakashi... wasn't going... to teleport me in the Kamui dimension... You were tricked..."
Kakashi: "Yeah, the one that I teleported was Minato-sensei, who put a marking on you... You're finished!"
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Black Zetsu: "Damn... you... I failed you... Madara-sama... Forgive me..."
Kakashi is shown falling on his knee, as he's exhausted from the Kamui and Obito is panting heavily.
Minato: "Kakashi, Obito, we're going to Tsunade-sama and the others, they'll heal you along with Naruto."
Obito: (Thinking) "Comrades, huh..."
Minato transfers part of his chakra to Obito and Kakashi, as they prepare to leave.
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Scene changes to Sasuke and Sai who land near Naruto and the others from the back of one of Sai's ink birds, as Sakura, Tsunade and Karin are healing Naruto.
Sai: "Naruto, hold on!"
Sasuke: "Stupid moron, always rushes in recklessly... Don't die, Naruto!"
Sakura: "Tsunade-sama, Karin, please! We have to save him!" (Screams and cries)
Naruto: (Thinking) "Sasuke... Sakura-chan..."
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Suddenly, Naruto finds himself in a empty room, as he sees a silhouette in the darkness.
Naruto: "Where am I? And who are you, mister?"
???: "Ah, it's been a long time since we last met, my precious student!"
Naruto: "Is this you... Ero-sennin?"
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Jiraiya: "Yeah, dumbass! Of course it's me!"
Naruto: "But, how is this possible? I was on the battlefield, and-"
Jiraiya: "Battlefield? Geez, you're talking nonsense, Naruto. More importantly, tell me your story, did you find the answer?"
Naruto: "So... This can mean only one thing... That I'm dead?!" (Makes shocked face, similar to the one that he made when he found out that Obito used Rinne Tensei to revive Madara)
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The last page shows Naruto with his eyes closed, in the arms of Hinata and surrounded by Sakura, Sasuke and the others.
Hinata: "No... this... I can't believe it!"
Editor's text: "DID NARUTO REALLY DIE?!"
Chapter 661/END
Hehe, I tried to write something sad, something different, and I hope you'll like it. Of course, if I am to make a sequel, Naruto would be revived somehow, he can't stay dead forever, I mean he's the main character and stuff... But for the next chapter, I want something like this to happen. What are your thoughts?
Madara: "Finally... Did you miss your true master, Nine Tails?" (Smirks)
Editor's text: "KURAMA IS EXTRACTED FROM NARUTO!"
Naruto is shown falling, almost unconscious, as suddenly arm made of sand catches him.
PAGE 2:
Gaara: "Naruto! You have no right to die, friend, not now, not here!"
Gaara pulls Naruto and puts him on the ground, as he activates his Absolute Defense in the shape of his mother to protect him and Naruto.
Gaara: "You have to be strong, snap out of it!"
Naruto is shown barely looking at Gaara, as he's in a very bad shape.
PAGE 3:
Gaara: "No, I won't allow this to happen... Shukaku!"
Shukaku: "Yeah, that brat saved me after all... I'll try to do what I can."
Shukaku turns at the Shinobi Alliance, as he screams to them.
Shukaku: "Listen up, humans! The fox boy lost his friend and is about to die, every medic that's available should come to his aid!"
PAGE 4:
Hinata is shown with a zoom on her face, as her eyes are full with tears.
Hinata: "He's right... I saw him losing big part of his chakra... And now he's..."
Sakura: "But that's... impossible..." (Starts crying)
Tsunade: "Sakura!"
Sakura: "Huh?!"
PAGE 5:
Tsunade: "Don't cry... Not yet! We have to heal him, he won't die... He promised me that he'll become Hokage, and he won't die before he completes his goal!"
Sakura: "Naruto..."
Tsunade: "Let's go, it will be better if we don't lose any time!"
Karin: "I'll come too. Though I doubt that he'll die instantly. We're from the Uzumaki clan after all."
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Tsunade: "Uzumaki? That explains your red hair, girl. Okay, let's go you two!"
Hinata: "I'll come too! I want to be with him..."
Tsunade: "Of course..."
Tobirama, Hiruzen and Hashirama land near the medics, as they look in surprise.
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Tsunade: "Grandfather!"
Hashirama: "Yeah, Tobirama and Saru helped me with those black things... That Madara... I'll make sure that he won't cause any troubles in the future, let's go!"
Hiruzen: "Tsunade, we'll protect you and the girls while you're aiding Naruto, we know everything thanks to Lord Second."
Tobirama: "I have my markings on Naruto's back, we'll use my Flying Thunder God to go there."
PAGE 8:
Tobirama: "It's not on the level of the Fourth's, but it's a better option that walking on feet. I want all of you to gather in a circle and to join your hands."
The 7 of them are shown in a circle, as they both are holding their hands.
Tobirama: (Thinking) "Okay... Chakra Transfer Technique! Now that they have part of my chakra, it will be easy to use... the Flying Thunder God!"
The group disappears, as Tobirama teleported it to Naruto's lifeless body.
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Ino: "Naruto... I hope they'll save him!" (With worried look on her face)
Choji: "They will. They won't let him die, our only chance in this war lies within him!"
Shikamaru: "Yeah, you're right. Naruto won't die so easily. He's not like that. Our only role now... is to protect him!"
Lee: "Exactly, we have to offer him our hands, too!"
Shino: "That's right, we'll support him with everything we have."
The remainder of the K11 are shown heading towards Naruto and Gaara.
PAGE 10:
The scene changes to Minato, Kakashi, and Obito with Black Zetsu, as Kurama is shown in Minato's mind.
Kurama: "Minato, you felt it, didn't you?"
Minato: "Yes... That Naruto is... DYING!"
Kakashi and Obito are shown with shocked faces, as Minato is shown with calm face, but with a tear in one of his eyes.
PAGE 11:
Kakashi: "Sensei, what are you talking about?"
Black Zetsu: "Kukuku, Madara-sama extracted successfully the Nine Tails from Naruto... This is what he's talking about!"
Obito: "Damn you, Madara! That bastard... will pay! Kakashi, do it!"
Kakashi: "KAMUI!"
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Obito's body is shown spinning, as it's about to be teleported in the Kamui dimension.
Black Zetsu: "What? What are you doing?"
Obito: "We'll leave you... in the dimension... of our eyes!"
Black Zetsu: "Leave me? You leave me no choice then, I have to leave your body..."
Black Zetsu separates from Obito's body, as suddenly Kakashi stops the Kamui and Minato disappears.
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Minato appears before Black Zetsu with angry look, cutting his body in two halves with one of his Kunais.
Minato: "You're first... I'll kill that bastard Madara next!!"
Black Zetsu: "Yellow Flash... but how..."
Obito: "Kakashi... wasn't going... to teleport me in the Kamui dimension... You were tricked..."
Kakashi: "Yeah, the one that I teleported was Minato-sensei, who put a marking on you... You're finished!"
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Black Zetsu: "Damn... you... I failed you... Madara-sama... Forgive me..."
Kakashi is shown falling on his knee, as he's exhausted from the Kamui and Obito is panting heavily.
Minato: "Kakashi, Obito, we're going to Tsunade-sama and the others, they'll heal you along with Naruto."
Obito: (Thinking) "Comrades, huh..."
Minato transfers part of his chakra to Obito and Kakashi, as they prepare to leave.
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Scene changes to Sasuke and Sai who land near Naruto and the others from the back of one of Sai's ink birds, as Sakura, Tsunade and Karin are healing Naruto.
Sai: "Naruto, hold on!"
Sasuke: "Stupid moron, always rushes in recklessly... Don't die, Naruto!"
Sakura: "Tsunade-sama, Karin, please! We have to save him!" (Screams and cries)
Naruto: (Thinking) "Sasuke... Sakura-chan..."
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Suddenly, Naruto finds himself in a empty room, as he sees a silhouette in the darkness.
Naruto: "Where am I? And who are you, mister?"
???: "Ah, it's been a long time since we last met, my precious student!"
Naruto: "Is this you... Ero-sennin?"
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Jiraiya: "Yeah, dumbass! Of course it's me!"
Naruto: "But, how is this possible? I was on the battlefield, and-"
Jiraiya: "Battlefield? Geez, you're talking nonsense, Naruto. More importantly, tell me your story, did you find the answer?"
Naruto: "So... This can mean only one thing... That I'm dead?!" (Makes shocked face, similar to the one that he made when he found out that Obito used Rinne Tensei to revive Madara)
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The last page shows Naruto with his eyes closed, in the arms of Hinata and surrounded by Sakura, Sasuke and the others.
Hinata: "No... this... I can't believe it!"
Editor's text: "DID NARUTO REALLY DIE?!"
Chapter 661/END
Hehe, I tried to write something sad, something different, and I hope you'll like it. Of course, if I am to make a sequel, Naruto would be revived somehow, he can't stay dead forever, I mean he's the main character and stuff... But for the next chapter, I want something like this to happen. What are your thoughts?
