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MANGA 657 : THE CONTROL
SFX : SUFFFFF!!!
( The steam/gas releases out of Edo Madara as he turns from Edo to a living human )
MADARA : ( stares at his hand ) Amazing... This sensation of having an actual body!
SFX : BADUMP.. BADUMP
( The rocks gets crushed and the dust spreads from the location )
MADARA : Feeling my blood boil.... Feeling my skin crawl... as I crush SKULLS!!
EDO-MINATO : What is that thing?! [ He forced Obito to do some hand seals... ]
KAKASHI : Black Zetsu?
SFX : ZINGGGG!!
OBITO/KAKASHI : ?!!
( Bright Light falls on Obito and B-Zetsu )
BLACK ZETSU : ?!!
( Minato is prepared with a normal rasengan in his hand )
( Minato aims for B-Zetsu's head )
BLACK ZETSU : [ Shit!! ]
( Loosen up his grip on Obito )
( Minato lowers his hand quickly to hit B-Zetsu )
( The rasengan and B-Zetsu moves simultaneously )
( B-Zetsu sneaks into the ground quickly )
EDO-MINATO : Obito!!
( Minato increases the size of Rasengan quickly )
( Minato hits the Odaama Rasengan on the ground passing through Obito )
SFX : SLAM!!!!! CRACK!!
( The place below Obito's head on the left gets destroyed by the O-Rasengan )
( Obito is shown with MS active but still lying on the ground at same place )
KAKASHI : ?!!
( Minato forces the O-Rasengan through the ground completely )
( The rocks are thrown out of the crater created by the O-Rasengan )
BLACK ZETSU : Gyaaaah!!!
( Kakashi grabs Obito and moves on one side )
( B-Zetsu is crushed by the O-Rasengan before he escapes into underground )
BLACK ZETSU : Damn.... you! ( falls dead )
OBITO : Gahh!! ( cough.... cough... cough ) ( coughs blood )
( Blood falls on Kakashi's hand )
KAKASHI : Are you alright?!! Obito?! [ He forced himself to use Kamui in such a state... ]
KAKASHI : Obito, you need to take rest for now.
OBITO : You must take Madara down. He forced me to revive him... ( cough ) He won't hold himself back anymore.. ( pant... pant )
EDO-HASHIRAMA : Kids step back!! ( pants )
SAI : What happened to him?
NARUTO : He isn't a Zombie anymore?!! Hey Gramps!!
EDO-HASHIRAMA : He forced that Juubi's Jinchuuriki to use Rinne Tensei no Jutsu on him. He is alive now.
SFX : STEP... STEP...
( Madara walks out of the rubble )
SFX : FDASH...SPDASH..
( clears dust from his armor )
( Holds his neck with his right hand )
SFX : KDIK.. KDIK..KDAAK
( Wringes his neck and shoulders )
( Put his hands on waist )
EDO-HASHIRAMA/NARUTO : ....
MADARA : ( smirks ) Shall I start?
EDO-HASHIRAMA : Naruto... I'll deal with him.
SFX : CLAP!!!
( Madara Claps his hands )
( Naruto activates KCM )
SFX : CLAP!!
( Hashirama claps his hands )
EDO-HASHIRAMA : ?!!
MADARA : ( makes hand seals ) Mokuton!!
NARUTO : ..... ( attentive )
( Chakra cloak forms over Sai )
EDO-HASHIRAMA : ( makes hand seals ) ?!!
SFX : GURPPP..
( Wood grows out of Hashirama's back around the black rods without touching them )
( The rods hides into those wood spikes )
MADARA : Let's take the control.
( forms a hand seal )
( Madara dashes towards Hashirama )
( Hashirama's shocked face zooms in, as Madara approaches )
( Wood grows out of Madara's left shoulder while stretching it out at Hashirama )
SFX : WHIP!!!
( Madara whips the wood at Hashirama )
( the wood changes into dragon, crashes over Hashirama )
( Dust scatters all over the area )
( Naruto and Sai are shown jumping out from the dust )
NARUTO : ( while jumping ) Gramps!!
SFX : SLITHER!!
( Rough noise of sliding is heard in the clouds of dust )
SFX : FUUUU...
( A wave pushes the dust away )
NARUTO/SAI : ?!!
( The wood dragon has coiled its body around Hashirama with its head right above him )
( Madara is shown seated on the dragon with his arm on the lap and giving a cool look )
SAI : Why didn't he dodged it?
NARUTO : ?!! Could it be ? [ Madara is.. ]
EDO-HASHIRAMA : Tch. What is the meaning of this, Madara?
MADARA : Hmm... I'm don't want to fight with fodders. So I'm taking control over the War.... by taking the control.... Over You! ( smirks )
( touches Hashirama )
( His dark Will spreads over Hashirama's Edo body )
EDO-HASHIRAMA : What are yo...u du....inn..g?
SHINOBIS : Let's go!!!
( Shinobis' voices falls on ears )
MADARA : Ok then.
( makes handseal )
SFX : SLIDE...
( The dragon falls apart )
( Hashirama is shown completely black with round eyes like Black Zetsu, standing still )
( Wind brushes through his hair )
( Tobirama is shown along with Hiruzen standing outside the pit )
EDO-TOBIRAMA : ?!! ( widens his eyes )
( senses the strong chakra )
EDO-MINATO : ?!!
( Looks towards the direction )
( Kakashi is standing near him, Obito is lying on the ground while Sakura is helping him to recover at faster rate )
KAKASHI : What happened Sensei?
EDO-MINATO : Kakashi. Stay here. I'll go out.
KAKASHI : ( observes Minato's serious look ) ......
MADARA : Hashirama, Make them Dance!!
SFX : SKSKSKSKSKS.... SLAM!!!
( Hashirama recoils back and lands on the ground, crushing it, facing the approaching Shinobis )
( Hashirama runs towards the Shinobis with his hands lowered back in air, Ninja style run )
( No expression on his face )
SHINOBI : ?! ( notices someone approaching ) [ Whose Shadow is it? ]
SFX : THAK!!
( Hashirama kicks a shinobi right on his throat )
SHINOBI : Gyahh!! ( spits out blood )
SHINOBIS : ( stopped with a shock ) ?!!
SFX : PUNCH!! KICK!! KICK!! GRAB!!
( Hashirama stomps on Shinobis around with no mercy )
( He grabs one of the shinobi and throws him randomly in the air )
NARUTO : What the hell?!! We must stop him.
SFX : KLAKSH!!
( Madara's Susano'o crosses the swords and opens them wide )
MADARA : Oh No..No..No.. Naruto. Please don't spoil my mood.
( Suddenly Madara's Susano'o covers in Amaterasu )
NARUTO : ?!!
( The eight Bijuus are shown )
SHUKAKU : ( full of rage ) Damn that brat!! Ordering me around. ( punches on the wall of pit )
SON GOKU : Let's wait here. As that fur coat said.
( flashback )
[
EDO-TOBIRAMA : ( talking to Shukaku ) You racoon! Don't pop out of the pit. Hold there. We got our hands full.
SHUKAKU : Hey brat!! Mind your tong-
EDO-TOBIRAMA : Saru! Let's go!!
SON GOKU : .....
]
GOKAGES : ( standing outside the pit ) ....
( remembers )
[
EDO TOBIRAMA : Gokages! This isn't your battle anymore. Protect this area at the cost of your life.
]
EDO-HASHIRAMA : ..... ( makes hand seals ) ( Mokuton : Jukai Koutan!! )
SHINOBIS : Gyahh!!!
EDO-TOBIRAMA : Water Style : Water Jet!!
EDO-HIRUZEN : Earth Style : Mud Wall!!!
( Tobirama spits high speed jet on the Mokuton jutsu thus cutting them down )
( Hiruzen adds his jutsu with the water jet )
( The Mud falls at a large distance and starts activating )
SFX : THAK!!
( A kunai digs into the Mokuton )
EDO-MINATO : ( hands placed on the shoulders of Tobirama and Hiruzen ) Let's go!
( The Mud Wall stands tall )
( A huge panel showing the growing trees crashing on the wall and are halted )
SFX : ZUPPP!!
( The three Edo Hokages appears on the other side )
EDO-MINATO/EDO-HIRUZEN : .......
EDO-TOBIRAMA : [ Brother..... ]
EDO-HASHIRAMA : .... ( No expression ) ( holding the seal )
???? : Finally, we can make you Dance.
MADARA : Hmm.. ( gives an evil smile )
( Susano'o is shown deactivated )
( Amaterasu flames vanishes along with it )
NARUTO : Sasuke.
( Sasuke walks in front while unsheathing his snake sword )
( His EMS is zoomed )
( Hokage Brothers clashes.... )
( Brothers fights together.... )
SFX : SUFFFFF!!!
( The steam/gas releases out of Edo Madara as he turns from Edo to a living human )
MADARA : ( stares at his hand ) Amazing... This sensation of having an actual body!
SFX : BADUMP.. BADUMP
( The rocks gets crushed and the dust spreads from the location )
MADARA : Feeling my blood boil.... Feeling my skin crawl... as I crush SKULLS!!
EDO-MINATO : What is that thing?! [ He forced Obito to do some hand seals... ]
KAKASHI : Black Zetsu?
SFX : ZINGGGG!!
OBITO/KAKASHI : ?!!
( Bright Light falls on Obito and B-Zetsu )
BLACK ZETSU : ?!!
( Minato is prepared with a normal rasengan in his hand )
( Minato aims for B-Zetsu's head )
BLACK ZETSU : [ Shit!! ]
( Loosen up his grip on Obito )
( Minato lowers his hand quickly to hit B-Zetsu )
( The rasengan and B-Zetsu moves simultaneously )
( B-Zetsu sneaks into the ground quickly )
EDO-MINATO : Obito!!
( Minato increases the size of Rasengan quickly )
( Minato hits the Odaama Rasengan on the ground passing through Obito )
SFX : SLAM!!!!! CRACK!!
( The place below Obito's head on the left gets destroyed by the O-Rasengan )
( Obito is shown with MS active but still lying on the ground at same place )
KAKASHI : ?!!
( Minato forces the O-Rasengan through the ground completely )
( The rocks are thrown out of the crater created by the O-Rasengan )
BLACK ZETSU : Gyaaaah!!!
( Kakashi grabs Obito and moves on one side )
( B-Zetsu is crushed by the O-Rasengan before he escapes into underground )
BLACK ZETSU : Damn.... you! ( falls dead )
OBITO : Gahh!! ( cough.... cough... cough ) ( coughs blood )
( Blood falls on Kakashi's hand )
KAKASHI : Are you alright?!! Obito?! [ He forced himself to use Kamui in such a state... ]
KAKASHI : Obito, you need to take rest for now.
OBITO : You must take Madara down. He forced me to revive him... ( cough ) He won't hold himself back anymore.. ( pant... pant )
EDO-HASHIRAMA : Kids step back!! ( pants )
SAI : What happened to him?
NARUTO : He isn't a Zombie anymore?!! Hey Gramps!!
EDO-HASHIRAMA : He forced that Juubi's Jinchuuriki to use Rinne Tensei no Jutsu on him. He is alive now.
SFX : STEP... STEP...
( Madara walks out of the rubble )
SFX : FDASH...SPDASH..
( clears dust from his armor )
( Holds his neck with his right hand )
SFX : KDIK.. KDIK..KDAAK
( Wringes his neck and shoulders )
( Put his hands on waist )
EDO-HASHIRAMA/NARUTO : ....
MADARA : ( smirks ) Shall I start?
EDO-HASHIRAMA : Naruto... I'll deal with him.
SFX : CLAP!!!
( Madara Claps his hands )
( Naruto activates KCM )
SFX : CLAP!!
( Hashirama claps his hands )
EDO-HASHIRAMA : ?!!
MADARA : ( makes hand seals ) Mokuton!!
NARUTO : ..... ( attentive )
( Chakra cloak forms over Sai )
EDO-HASHIRAMA : ( makes hand seals ) ?!!
SFX : GURPPP..
( Wood grows out of Hashirama's back around the black rods without touching them )
( The rods hides into those wood spikes )
MADARA : Let's take the control.
( forms a hand seal )
( Madara dashes towards Hashirama )
( Hashirama's shocked face zooms in, as Madara approaches )
( Wood grows out of Madara's left shoulder while stretching it out at Hashirama )
SFX : WHIP!!!
( Madara whips the wood at Hashirama )
( the wood changes into dragon, crashes over Hashirama )
( Dust scatters all over the area )
( Naruto and Sai are shown jumping out from the dust )
NARUTO : ( while jumping ) Gramps!!
SFX : SLITHER!!
( Rough noise of sliding is heard in the clouds of dust )
SFX : FUUUU...
( A wave pushes the dust away )
NARUTO/SAI : ?!!
( The wood dragon has coiled its body around Hashirama with its head right above him )
( Madara is shown seated on the dragon with his arm on the lap and giving a cool look )
SAI : Why didn't he dodged it?
NARUTO : ?!! Could it be ? [ Madara is.. ]
EDO-HASHIRAMA : Tch. What is the meaning of this, Madara?
MADARA : Hmm... I'm don't want to fight with fodders. So I'm taking control over the War.... by taking the control.... Over You! ( smirks )
( touches Hashirama )
( His dark Will spreads over Hashirama's Edo body )
EDO-HASHIRAMA : What are yo...u du....inn..g?
SHINOBIS : Let's go!!!
( Shinobis' voices falls on ears )
MADARA : Ok then.
( makes handseal )
SFX : SLIDE...
( The dragon falls apart )
( Hashirama is shown completely black with round eyes like Black Zetsu, standing still )
( Wind brushes through his hair )
( Tobirama is shown along with Hiruzen standing outside the pit )
EDO-TOBIRAMA : ?!! ( widens his eyes )
( senses the strong chakra )
EDO-MINATO : ?!!
( Looks towards the direction )
( Kakashi is standing near him, Obito is lying on the ground while Sakura is helping him to recover at faster rate )
KAKASHI : What happened Sensei?
EDO-MINATO : Kakashi. Stay here. I'll go out.
KAKASHI : ( observes Minato's serious look ) ......
MADARA : Hashirama, Make them Dance!!
SFX : SKSKSKSKSKS.... SLAM!!!
( Hashirama recoils back and lands on the ground, crushing it, facing the approaching Shinobis )
( Hashirama runs towards the Shinobis with his hands lowered back in air, Ninja style run )
( No expression on his face )
SHINOBI : ?! ( notices someone approaching ) [ Whose Shadow is it? ]
SFX : THAK!!
( Hashirama kicks a shinobi right on his throat )
SHINOBI : Gyahh!! ( spits out blood )
SHINOBIS : ( stopped with a shock ) ?!!
SFX : PUNCH!! KICK!! KICK!! GRAB!!
( Hashirama stomps on Shinobis around with no mercy )
( He grabs one of the shinobi and throws him randomly in the air )
NARUTO : What the hell?!! We must stop him.
SFX : KLAKSH!!
( Madara's Susano'o crosses the swords and opens them wide )
MADARA : Oh No..No..No.. Naruto. Please don't spoil my mood.
( Suddenly Madara's Susano'o covers in Amaterasu )
NARUTO : ?!!
( The eight Bijuus are shown )
SHUKAKU : ( full of rage ) Damn that brat!! Ordering me around. ( punches on the wall of pit )
SON GOKU : Let's wait here. As that fur coat said.
( flashback )
[
EDO-TOBIRAMA : ( talking to Shukaku ) You racoon! Don't pop out of the pit. Hold there. We got our hands full.
SHUKAKU : Hey brat!! Mind your tong-
EDO-TOBIRAMA : Saru! Let's go!!
SON GOKU : .....
]
GOKAGES : ( standing outside the pit ) ....
( remembers )
[
EDO TOBIRAMA : Gokages! This isn't your battle anymore. Protect this area at the cost of your life.
]
EDO-HASHIRAMA : ..... ( makes hand seals ) ( Mokuton : Jukai Koutan!! )
SHINOBIS : Gyahh!!!
EDO-TOBIRAMA : Water Style : Water Jet!!
EDO-HIRUZEN : Earth Style : Mud Wall!!!
( Tobirama spits high speed jet on the Mokuton jutsu thus cutting them down )
( Hiruzen adds his jutsu with the water jet )
( The Mud falls at a large distance and starts activating )
SFX : THAK!!
( A kunai digs into the Mokuton )
EDO-MINATO : ( hands placed on the shoulders of Tobirama and Hiruzen ) Let's go!
( The Mud Wall stands tall )
( A huge panel showing the growing trees crashing on the wall and are halted )
SFX : ZUPPP!!
( The three Edo Hokages appears on the other side )
EDO-MINATO/EDO-HIRUZEN : .......
EDO-TOBIRAMA : [ Brother..... ]
EDO-HASHIRAMA : .... ( No expression ) ( holding the seal )
???? : Finally, we can make you Dance.
MADARA : Hmm.. ( gives an evil smile )
( Susano'o is shown deactivated )
( Amaterasu flames vanishes along with it )
NARUTO : Sasuke.
( Sasuke walks in front while unsheathing his snake sword )
( His EMS is zoomed )
( Hokage Brothers clashes.... )
( Brothers fights together.... )
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