Mr Hiru
Sannin of the Scrolls 📜
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[ ] : Thoughts
SFX : SOUND EFFECTS
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MANGA 654 : RENEWED HOPE
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NARUTO : ( observing Obito's reactions ) If Rin were still alive, She would probably say... " Stop putting up that front... and trying to hide behind it... Remember.... I'm always watching you. "
OBITO : ( lowered head ) .....
( Naruto extends his left hand towards Obito )
NARUTO : " Don't try to be anyone but yourself. You can stop running... ( Obito raises his left hand and looks at Naruto with widened eyes ) we're all waiting for you on this side... "
OBITO : [ On the other side... ? ]
( A transparent image gets created which is layered on top of Naruto )
OBITO : ( shocked expression ) Ri..n?
( Obito faces Rin's transparent image in place of Naruto's solid image with the same posture )
( Obito's left hand trembles as he moves his left hand towards Rin's left hand )
RIN : ( worried ) Stop putting up that front and don't hide behind it... Remember... I'm always watching you. Don't try to be anyone but yourself. You can stop running... We're all waiting for you on this side.. ( smiles )
( Rin is shown with a smiling face with her right hand at her back )
RIN : Saving you is the same as me saving the world.
SFX : GRAB
( Obito grabs Rin's hand )
OBITO : ?!!
( Obito views a transparent image of his good side standing in his place layered over his current image and grabbing Rin's hand )
( Transparent image of Obito is shown in Konoha's uniform with his left side of face covered with a cloth )
( Rin moves her left foot towards left and then turns towards left holding Obito's hand )
( Obito moves his right foot towards right and then turns right holding Rin's hand )
( Both runs towards the Shinobi Alliance )
OBITO : ( looking at Rin and Obito running ) ....
( raises his head a little in eagerness to approach them )
( Obito blinks his eye for a split second )
OBITO : ?!!
( He could not see them around anymore )
( turns suddenly looking at his front )
( Naruto is still standing with his extended left hand )
( Obito's face is covered with sweat )
OBITO : ( confused ) .....
( remembers Rin's serious face )
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( An echo )
RIN : I'm always watching you.
RIN : I'm always watching you.
RIN : Show me how you'll save the world.
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( Obito lowers his left hand )
OBITO : No. No! No!! I can't.
NARUTO : ?!!
OBITO : I've promised Rin that I will save the world. I can't step back. I am going to create a world where I can see her again. She'll-
NARUTO : Do you think she'll watch over you?
OBITO : ?!!
NARUTO : The promise you made with her, you think you're keeping it? Can you face Rin in the afterlife?
OBITO : ( confused ) ....
NARUTO : The dream you're approaching will only be an illusion which will try to comfort you according to your own needs. Will you be able to feel the warmth of her skin the moment she holds your hand? She'll be a mere puppet whose strings will be pulled by you. How can you expect a puppet to believe in you and correct your mistakes?
OBITO : ......
NARUTO : You still got a chance to change. Won't you agree to change if Rin would have asked you to come back? She's not anymore but what she hoped ... haven't faded yet. Her hope... can be renewed once again.
( Obito's confused face changes and he nods to Naruto's request )
NARUTO : Your friends are still waiting for you.
( Obito extends his hand towards Naruto )
( Naruto smiles )
( The Shinobis smiles )
( Obito smiles while extending his hand )
( Both the hands are close enough )
( An intense light flashes )
( Naruto's and Obito's smiling face disappears into the flash )
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SFX : SLASH!!! SLAM!!!
( Dust emerges from the hole to the surface )
NARUTO : ?!! [ What happened? ]
OBITO : ( surrounded by the dust ) ?!!
( A huge Susano'o is standing on its knees holding a sword with a big cut in the ground )
SUSANO'O : Groah!!!!
( Susano'o is deactivated )
( a dark image approaches Obito in the dust )
OBITO : ?!!
SFX : GRAB!!
( The thing grabs Obito and slams him on the walls of the hole )
( The chakra of the bijuus' coming out of Obito's body gets stretched as Obito gets slammed )
( The thing is holding Obito still, blocking his legs and hands with a weird back )
OBITO : ( sees the clear picture of the thing holding him ) That mark.
( A dot inscribed into a circle is shown )
( Madara smirks standing on the ground with a cross look at Obito's location )
( Last Page )
( right rectangular panel )
MADARA : Let's continue...
( Left huge panel )
( Hashirama with no expression is shown blocking Obito with rods pierced in Obito's arms and legs )
( Obito with a shocked look is shown)
( Several rods are shown pierced in Hashirama's back )
( The whole scene is covered in dust )
( Madara played his trump card? Or he still... )
NOTE : Kishi finish this TnJ, I can't think anymore :NO:
By the way, Don't forget to share your thoughts friends
My thoughts... I liked everything until you bought a Hashirama impaled by black rods. That's not original anymore.
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