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MANGA 648 : THE LAST STAND
NARUTO : ( a serious and refreshed look ) [ I don't wanna look back and think, "What might have been"!!! ]
HINATA : ( worried ) Naruto...
( a screen time for Obito )
MINATO : ( remembers Kushina ) .....
NARUTO : ( jumps off ) [ And everything we've done and endured up until now... All of it.. ]
SHINOBIS : ( with a regained spirit ) ......
( Naruto stands beside Sasuke's Susano'o in Bijuu Sage Mode )
NARUTO : I won't let it all go to Waste!!!!
SASUKE : ( give a glance at Naruto ) ....
INO : What do you mean, Sakura?!!
CHOUJI : ?!!
SAKURA : I'm sorry Ino, It's too late. Shikamaru...Shikamaru cannot be saved.
( Konoha 11 are standing near Ino-Shika-Cho with a depressed look )
SASUKE : Karin.
KARIN : ( shocked with her ears alert ) Ye...Yes Sas..Sasuke.
SASUKE : Heal that man.
NARUTO : Hmm?
KARIN : Whaaaaaat?!!! ( adjusts her glasses )
SUIGETSU : Fuuuuuuuus!! ( spits out water with a laugh ) Oooh... I can feel the heat here Hehehehh.
KARIN : Shut up!! What are you saying Sasuke?
SASUKE : He's an important guy here. Do it.
KARIN : Ok Sasuke. Hmm ( turns with an attitude and runs )
SAKURA : Lady Tsunade can save him.
KATSUYU : Lady Tsunade's almost close.
KARIN : ( pushes Shinobis in her way ) Hey move out of my way. ?!! ( senses the Kyuubi chakra and Naruto's chakra on the Shinobis ) [ This chakra is so...pure and strong. ]
SFX : SLIDE!!
( Karin stands near Sakura )
KARIN : Let me see him.
SAKURA : ?!! You're...
KARIN : Greetings later. Heal me.
SAKURA : ( moves at one side ) What are you doing?
KARIN : I'm doing this because Sasuke said. ( checks Shikamaru's nerves ) He can still be saved. Help me while I heal him.
SAKURA : [ Sasuke? ] OK!! ( stands behind Karin, puts her hands on Karin's shoulder and starts her healing process )
( Karin pulls the shirt, on part of her hand, back )
INO : ( looking at the circles on Karin's hand ) [ Ewww. gross!! ]
KARIN : ( moves her hand close to Shikamaru's face ) Here, bite my hand. ( moves her hand close to his mouth ) Hurry.
( Shikamaru opens his mouth slowly )
( The skin around his mouth is stretched to the limits )
( Shikamaru's face shivers )
( Karin moves her hand into his mouth )
( Shikamaru closes his mouth and bites Karin's hand slowly )
SFX : BITE
KARIN : ....
( Shikamaru slowly and steadily gains chakra from Karin and turns to healthy )
SAKURA : ?!! [ What is this chakra? ] ( senses Karin's chakra flowing in Shikamaru ) [ This is just like... Granny Chiyo's... ]
( remembers Granny Chiyo's jutsu when she tries to transfer her life force in Sakura )
SAKURA : [ She can mold her life force with her chakra like that... That is why Sasuke made her his subordinate... ]
( Everyone around Shikamaru are relieved )
( Temari lands near Sakura )
SFX : DIG!
KARIN : Uh...Uhhh!!!
SFX : THATCH!!!
KONOHA 11 : <(O.O)> ( shocked )
SHIKAMARU : Ahh!! ( shocked )
( Panel shows a print of palm on Shikamaru's cheek and a shocked Shikamaru )
KARIN : Enough already. You're healthy enough now.
TEMARI/INO : How dare you slap him?!!!
KARIN : Shut up!!! ( walks away )
SHIKAMARU : Woman, I tell you ( sighs )
SFX : THAK!!!
TEMARI/INO : ( hits on Shikamaru's head ) Shut up!!
NARUTO : ( enjoying the scene ) Hehe... ( turns to Sasuke ) Thanks Sasuke.
SASUKE : ....
NARUTO : Shikamaru!!
SHIKAMARU : .....
( A chakra hand emerges out of Ino's cloak and touches Shikamaru )
SFX : ZMMMM!!
SHIKAMARU : ?!!
( Shikamaru is covered with the Kyuubi's cloak )
NARUTO : Sasuke and I handle this Obito guy. You and the Alliance handle this big ass Tree. Don't die right now ( smiles )
SHIKAMARU : You bet!! ( smiles ) [ Sorry Asuma Sensei... Thank You Naruto... Sasuke. ]
NARUTO : You must be willing to say something to that guy, eh? ...Kakashi Sensei?
SASUKE : ( turns a little ) ....
SAKURA : Sensei?
SFX : TIP... TAP... TIP... TAP...
( Kakashi walks in front )
KAKASHI : You got me.
( remembers )
[
( Obito warps back )
KAKASHI : ( panting ) Huff...huff..
( coughs out blood )
( falls on knees )
( lays on the ground )
KAKASHI : ( panting ) Hufff...
( His MS turns to three tomoe Sharingan )
KAKASHI : ( gets up ) I need to go back.
( focus on his Sharingan )
( activates MS )
KAKASHI : ( places his hand on his eye ) Kamui!!
( The spiral starts to form )
( The spirals stops )
KAKASHI : ?!! Kamui didn't work? I must try it again. ?!! What is happening? Dammit. ( panting ) I don't have... enough chakra now.... I can't die here. ( fells unconscious )
( Obito was turned to Juubi's Jinchuuriki )
SFX : BLUP BLUP!!
KAKASHI : ( opens his eye ) ?!! This is... ( looks at his hand ) Kyuubi's chakra?
( Naruto raises the Kyuubi chakra level of everyone who have a small portion of it and Minato teleports outside the barrier taking everyone present in the real world )
( Obito releases the Juubi out and the Juubi turns into its final form )
KAKASHI : I'll try it once more.
SFX : ZMMMM...LAND!!
( Kakashi warps back to the real world )
KAKASHI : ( knelt down ) ..... ( then looks up )
( A huge branch of tree is about to slam the shinobis )
OBITO : That's right... Just stand there... Let's all go to that carefree world..
SFX : SLASH!!!
( Sasuke cuts down the branch with Susano'o sword )
KAKASHI : Sasuke?!!
]
KAKASHI : It's unusual to see some old faces.
SASUKE : .....
NARUTO : It's a long story, Sensei.
OBITO : So you still want to play, huh?
( Panel shown Obito's looking at Naruto, Kakashi and Sasuke ferociously )
SFX : ZUUUUFFF!!! GROW!!!
( A complete Kyuubi chakra forms around BSM Naruto )
( Huge branches grow out free to attack the Alliance )
( Kakashi steps inside )
NARUTO : Lets go!!
( Kyuubi dashes forward holding Naruto and Kakashi inside it )
( Sasuke's Susano'o dashes forward holding Juugo )
SHIKAMARU : ( synced with Ino's jutsu ) Let's do this. We can't let Naruto down. We have a job to complete.
SHINOBIS : ( raised hands ) Yeahhhhhhhh!!!!!
HIRUZEN : We need to help them too.
MINATO : Yes, Lord third.
TOBIRAMA : Lets go!!
TOBIRAMA/MINATO/HIRUZEN : ?!! ( stopped where they were )
OROCHIMARU : Kukukuku... Why not wait for a while? ( hand seal position ) Let them show their worth. After all they want to live. You're the dead.
SUIGETSU/KARIN : ....
TOBIRAMA : Bastard.
SFX : SLASH!!!!
( Susano'o cuts another branch with its sword )
SFX : GROW!!!! GROW!!!
( The branches grows again from the cut part )
SFX : ZMMM!!!
( A black ball approaches )
SFX : THATCH!!
( The ball slams on the cut part and blasts it into pieces )
SASUKE : ?!! ( turns back within the susano'o )
( Three black balls appraoches Susano'o from back )
SASUKE : .... ( again looks at front )
( The balls passes from sides ahead and slams on the huge branch at the front )
NARUTO : Mini Sage Bijuudamas!!!
( The huge branch infront of Susano'o blasts into logs of wood )
SFX : GRAB!!
( Susano'o grabs one of the log and dashes forward jumping from one onto another )
[
KURAMA : Naruto!! Use Sage chakra at your feet!!
]
( Kyuubi runs over the branches towards Obito )
OBITO : .....
NARUTO : Let's hit him with it once more!!!
( prepares to make sage chakra mixed Bijuudama )
OBITO : I won't let you.
( Kyuubi is surrounded by branches )
( Susano'o is running at the front )
SASUKE : ....
( Susano'o stops and retreat backwards )
OBITO : ....
( Susano'o opens up )
JUUGO : ....
NARUTO/KAKASHI : ?!!
( The pieces of Susano'o sticks around Kyuubi's chakra cloak and shields from the side attacks )
( Sasuke and Juugo lands on forehead of Kyuubi, outside the cloak )
( Sasuke widens his EMS )
( Branches attacks Susano'o cloaked Kyuubi )
SFX : ZUUMM!!!
( The whole Susano'o is covered with Amaterasu )
SHINOBIS : ( stunned at their positions ) After what we felt inside Naruto's heart..
SHINOBIS : Wh... What a team spirit?
( Hokages are having a smile on their faces )
( Kyuubi whips its nine tails around on the branches )
( The Sage chakra mixed Bijuudama is prepared )
SFX : APPEAR!! APPEAR!! APPEAR!!
( The panel zooms out )
( Edo Hashirama is shown covered with black rods all over his body )
EDO HASHIRAMA : ?!!
EDO MADARA : ( handseal position ) Hmm ( smirks ) Your Edo Tensei is resurrected in one of my minions. ( A badass face ) Unfortunately, I'm running low on time here...
( Madara activated his trump card... )
NARUTO : ( a serious and refreshed look ) [ I don't wanna look back and think, "What might have been"!!! ]
HINATA : ( worried ) Naruto...
( a screen time for Obito )
MINATO : ( remembers Kushina ) .....
NARUTO : ( jumps off ) [ And everything we've done and endured up until now... All of it.. ]
SHINOBIS : ( with a regained spirit ) ......
( Naruto stands beside Sasuke's Susano'o in Bijuu Sage Mode )
NARUTO : I won't let it all go to Waste!!!!
SASUKE : ( give a glance at Naruto ) ....
INO : What do you mean, Sakura?!!
CHOUJI : ?!!
SAKURA : I'm sorry Ino, It's too late. Shikamaru...Shikamaru cannot be saved.
( Konoha 11 are standing near Ino-Shika-Cho with a depressed look )
SASUKE : Karin.
KARIN : ( shocked with her ears alert ) Ye...Yes Sas..Sasuke.
SASUKE : Heal that man.
NARUTO : Hmm?
KARIN : Whaaaaaat?!!! ( adjusts her glasses )
SUIGETSU : Fuuuuuuuus!! ( spits out water with a laugh ) Oooh... I can feel the heat here Hehehehh.
KARIN : Shut up!! What are you saying Sasuke?
SASUKE : He's an important guy here. Do it.
KARIN : Ok Sasuke. Hmm ( turns with an attitude and runs )
SAKURA : Lady Tsunade can save him.
KATSUYU : Lady Tsunade's almost close.
KARIN : ( pushes Shinobis in her way ) Hey move out of my way. ?!! ( senses the Kyuubi chakra and Naruto's chakra on the Shinobis ) [ This chakra is so...pure and strong. ]
SFX : SLIDE!!
( Karin stands near Sakura )
KARIN : Let me see him.
SAKURA : ?!! You're...
KARIN : Greetings later. Heal me.
SAKURA : ( moves at one side ) What are you doing?
KARIN : I'm doing this because Sasuke said. ( checks Shikamaru's nerves ) He can still be saved. Help me while I heal him.
SAKURA : [ Sasuke? ] OK!! ( stands behind Karin, puts her hands on Karin's shoulder and starts her healing process )
( Karin pulls the shirt, on part of her hand, back )
INO : ( looking at the circles on Karin's hand ) [ Ewww. gross!! ]
KARIN : ( moves her hand close to Shikamaru's face ) Here, bite my hand. ( moves her hand close to his mouth ) Hurry.
( Shikamaru opens his mouth slowly )
( The skin around his mouth is stretched to the limits )
( Shikamaru's face shivers )
( Karin moves her hand into his mouth )
( Shikamaru closes his mouth and bites Karin's hand slowly )
SFX : BITE
KARIN : ....
( Shikamaru slowly and steadily gains chakra from Karin and turns to healthy )
SAKURA : ?!! [ What is this chakra? ] ( senses Karin's chakra flowing in Shikamaru ) [ This is just like... Granny Chiyo's... ]
( remembers Granny Chiyo's jutsu when she tries to transfer her life force in Sakura )
SAKURA : [ She can mold her life force with her chakra like that... That is why Sasuke made her his subordinate... ]
( Everyone around Shikamaru are relieved )
( Temari lands near Sakura )
SFX : DIG!
KARIN : Uh...Uhhh!!!
SFX : THATCH!!!
KONOHA 11 : <(O.O)> ( shocked )
SHIKAMARU : Ahh!! ( shocked )
( Panel shows a print of palm on Shikamaru's cheek and a shocked Shikamaru )
KARIN : Enough already. You're healthy enough now.
TEMARI/INO : How dare you slap him?!!!
KARIN : Shut up!!! ( walks away )
SHIKAMARU : Woman, I tell you ( sighs )
SFX : THAK!!!
TEMARI/INO : ( hits on Shikamaru's head ) Shut up!!
NARUTO : ( enjoying the scene ) Hehe... ( turns to Sasuke ) Thanks Sasuke.
SASUKE : ....
NARUTO : Shikamaru!!
SHIKAMARU : .....
( A chakra hand emerges out of Ino's cloak and touches Shikamaru )
SFX : ZMMMM!!
SHIKAMARU : ?!!
( Shikamaru is covered with the Kyuubi's cloak )
NARUTO : Sasuke and I handle this Obito guy. You and the Alliance handle this big ass Tree. Don't die right now ( smiles )
SHIKAMARU : You bet!! ( smiles ) [ Sorry Asuma Sensei... Thank You Naruto... Sasuke. ]
NARUTO : You must be willing to say something to that guy, eh? ...Kakashi Sensei?
SASUKE : ( turns a little ) ....
SAKURA : Sensei?
SFX : TIP... TAP... TIP... TAP...
( Kakashi walks in front )
KAKASHI : You got me.
( remembers )
[
( Obito warps back )
KAKASHI : ( panting ) Huff...huff..
( coughs out blood )
( falls on knees )
( lays on the ground )
KAKASHI : ( panting ) Hufff...
( His MS turns to three tomoe Sharingan )
KAKASHI : ( gets up ) I need to go back.
( focus on his Sharingan )
( activates MS )
KAKASHI : ( places his hand on his eye ) Kamui!!
( The spiral starts to form )
( The spirals stops )
KAKASHI : ?!! Kamui didn't work? I must try it again. ?!! What is happening? Dammit. ( panting ) I don't have... enough chakra now.... I can't die here. ( fells unconscious )
( Obito was turned to Juubi's Jinchuuriki )
SFX : BLUP BLUP!!
KAKASHI : ( opens his eye ) ?!! This is... ( looks at his hand ) Kyuubi's chakra?
( Naruto raises the Kyuubi chakra level of everyone who have a small portion of it and Minato teleports outside the barrier taking everyone present in the real world )
( Obito releases the Juubi out and the Juubi turns into its final form )
KAKASHI : I'll try it once more.
SFX : ZMMMM...LAND!!
( Kakashi warps back to the real world )
KAKASHI : ( knelt down ) ..... ( then looks up )
( A huge branch of tree is about to slam the shinobis )
OBITO : That's right... Just stand there... Let's all go to that carefree world..
SFX : SLASH!!!
( Sasuke cuts down the branch with Susano'o sword )
KAKASHI : Sasuke?!!
]
KAKASHI : It's unusual to see some old faces.
SASUKE : .....
NARUTO : It's a long story, Sensei.
OBITO : So you still want to play, huh?
( Panel shown Obito's looking at Naruto, Kakashi and Sasuke ferociously )
SFX : ZUUUUFFF!!! GROW!!!
( A complete Kyuubi chakra forms around BSM Naruto )
( Huge branches grow out free to attack the Alliance )
( Kakashi steps inside )
NARUTO : Lets go!!
( Kyuubi dashes forward holding Naruto and Kakashi inside it )
( Sasuke's Susano'o dashes forward holding Juugo )
SHIKAMARU : ( synced with Ino's jutsu ) Let's do this. We can't let Naruto down. We have a job to complete.
SHINOBIS : ( raised hands ) Yeahhhhhhhh!!!!!
HIRUZEN : We need to help them too.
MINATO : Yes, Lord third.
TOBIRAMA : Lets go!!
TOBIRAMA/MINATO/HIRUZEN : ?!! ( stopped where they were )
OROCHIMARU : Kukukuku... Why not wait for a while? ( hand seal position ) Let them show their worth. After all they want to live. You're the dead.
SUIGETSU/KARIN : ....
TOBIRAMA : Bastard.
SFX : SLASH!!!!
( Susano'o cuts another branch with its sword )
SFX : GROW!!!! GROW!!!
( The branches grows again from the cut part )
SFX : ZMMM!!!
( A black ball approaches )
SFX : THATCH!!
( The ball slams on the cut part and blasts it into pieces )
SASUKE : ?!! ( turns back within the susano'o )
( Three black balls appraoches Susano'o from back )
SASUKE : .... ( again looks at front )
( The balls passes from sides ahead and slams on the huge branch at the front )
NARUTO : Mini Sage Bijuudamas!!!
( The huge branch infront of Susano'o blasts into logs of wood )
SFX : GRAB!!
( Susano'o grabs one of the log and dashes forward jumping from one onto another )
[
KURAMA : Naruto!! Use Sage chakra at your feet!!
]
( Kyuubi runs over the branches towards Obito )
OBITO : .....
NARUTO : Let's hit him with it once more!!!
( prepares to make sage chakra mixed Bijuudama )
OBITO : I won't let you.
( Kyuubi is surrounded by branches )
( Susano'o is running at the front )
SASUKE : ....
( Susano'o stops and retreat backwards )
OBITO : ....
( Susano'o opens up )
JUUGO : ....
NARUTO/KAKASHI : ?!!
( The pieces of Susano'o sticks around Kyuubi's chakra cloak and shields from the side attacks )
( Sasuke and Juugo lands on forehead of Kyuubi, outside the cloak )
( Sasuke widens his EMS )
( Branches attacks Susano'o cloaked Kyuubi )
SFX : ZUUMM!!!
( The whole Susano'o is covered with Amaterasu )
SHINOBIS : ( stunned at their positions ) After what we felt inside Naruto's heart..
SHINOBIS : Wh... What a team spirit?
( Hokages are having a smile on their faces )
( Kyuubi whips its nine tails around on the branches )
( The Sage chakra mixed Bijuudama is prepared )
SFX : APPEAR!! APPEAR!! APPEAR!!
( The panel zooms out )
( Edo Hashirama is shown covered with black rods all over his body )
EDO HASHIRAMA : ?!!
EDO MADARA : ( handseal position ) Hmm ( smirks ) Your Edo Tensei is resurrected in one of my minions. ( A badass face ) Unfortunately, I'm running low on time here...
( Madara activated his trump card... )
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