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MANGA 645: A NEW RESOLVE AT 12
[
NARUTO : You're as bad as mom! I already know all of it! Everything that you guys ever wanted to tell me!!
( Minato is relieved with his son's words )
MINATO : ( relieved ) She then already met you. ( sighs )
NARUTO : Lets beat the hell out of that man.
MINATO : Naruto...
NARUTO : Huh?
MINATO : As I said, I would have liked to talk to you a little longer... but I've nothing left to say anymore.
NARUTO : What are you talking about Dad?
MINATO : I've no more regrets.
( pulls his fist back )
NARUTO : Huh?
( Minato starts fading away from Naruto's mind )
NARUTO : What's happening?
D-KURAMA : He can't do anything. The moment my chakra came in contact with my other half, we were destined to become one once again.
( FLASHBACK )
[
D-KURAMA : ...He's not a baby anymore. Tomorrow he will... Grrr..
MINATO : Tomorrow?
D-KURAMA : I'm not sure yet... But your kid resembles me the old man. The Sage of the six Paths. ( grins ) My other half must have fallen for that. It is just the matter of time for him to contact me.
MINATO : ?!!
]
MINATO : ( fading ) Happy Birthday... ( smile ) Naruto.
KURAMA : So we'll at full power now.
( D-Kurama merges with Kurama as Minato fades away )
NARUTO : Thank You.
]
( Naruto undergoes a transformation )
( The black region above the circle on his stomach starts shrinking )
( The black part is gathered around the seal on his stomach )
( The comma-like white signs around his neck turns black )
( The thick lines along his thighs retracts back to 3/4th of the previous )
( The number of circles on Naruto's stomach doubles and is connected with the comma-like figures with a black strip )
( Minato turns back to normal )
SASUKE/TOBIRAMA : ?!!
NARUTO : I'm happy..
MINATO : ?!!
NARUTO : ( a big smile on his face ) ...being the proud son of you guys.
MINATO : ( shocked ) ?!!
SASUKE : ...
( remembers )
[
( At the Valley of End )
( Naruto holding Sasuke's collar )
SASUKE : ( shouts ) You had nothing in the first place!! What the hell do you understand about me!!! Huh?!!
]
MINATO : ( lowers head ) No Naruto.
( remembers )
[
D-KURAMA : Look at how the world has become now... Your son is trying to change it...
]
MINATO : Its quite the opposite. ( a peaceful smile on his face ) Thank You for being our son. ( tears flows down from his right eye )
TOBIRAMA : You're not supposed to cry like this, Fourth.
SASUKE : ....
( remembers )
[
( Sasuke standing at the dock of the river )
( Steam is rising from the surface of the river )
( His father walking away )
SASUKE : ( sad face ) ....
FUGAKU : Now..
SASUKE : Hmm?
FUGAKU : ... That's my boy!
SASUKE : ?!!
( Wind brushes through )
]
( Wind brushes through the clouds of dust heavily )
SFX : ZMMMMM!!!
SHINOBIS : ( cloaked ) ( turns to the sound ) What's happening?!
( The sides of the barrier shakes )
( The upper edges starts lowering with a flame effect )
SFX : PHHT!!!
( The barrier disperses )
( Everyone watches in awe )
( Obito is floating in the air )
OBITO : ( still surrounded by black fluid ) You managed to save everyone with the Kyuubi's chakra.
NARUTO : ( smirks ) Hmm.
OBITO : Quite a nuisance you've become Naruto. You're wasting my time. ( starts coming down on the land ) I will deal with you personally after ( crashes on the land with his staff ) ... everyone.
( The rubble is spaced out as Obito lands )
SHINOBIS : ?!!
NARUTO : Shadow Clone Jutsu!!
( One clone is created )
( Obito dashes forward while leaving his staff standing )
( SLOW MOTION )
( Rocks are lifted and surrounded to Obito due to the crash )
( The black fluid changes its shape )
( The fluid enters Obito's hand from back and starts to emerge out to front )
( Obito points his hands at front cross )
( Sweat rolls down a shinobi's head )
( NORMAL )
SFX : DRIP!
( The drop falls on the ground )
SFX : SLASH!!!
( Obito slashes the surrounding rocks with the black fluid )
( Obito dashes forward )
( The crowd is totally shaken with the approaching Obito )
( Scene shows view of the battlefield from above as Obito reduces the gap )
( Obito creates a havoc in the crowd )
( Shinobis thrown like twigs )
SFX : SHOUTING!!! SCREAMING!!
( Shinobis are screaming and shouting as they are slaughtered by Obito )
SFX : RETRACT!! RETRACT!! SHOOT!! SHOOT!!
( Obito retracts the black fluid, shapes it into sphere and shoots in the crowd )
SHINOBIS : Aaaaaaaa!!!! Wrahhhhhhhh!!!
SFX : BOOOOM!!! BOOOOM!!
( Two huge blasts in the crowd )
NARUTO : ?!!
( His eye pupil starts shaking )
( Obito smirks at Naruto's expression )
MINATO : We must stop him.
TOBIRAMA : Wait for a while Fourth.
MINATO : ....
( Minato stares at Tobirama while Tobirama observing Naruto )
( Naruto is looking down on the left )
SASUKE : I'll deal with him.
( Dashes forward )
NARUTO : Sasuke!!
SASUKE : ( stops and turns ) ?!!
NARUTO : Wait for a while. Sakura is there to heal the others.
OBITO : What happened Naruto? Your world is falling apart. Such weak resolve.
( about to pierce the black fluid spear in one of the shinobi in his way )
SHINOBI : ( looking at Obito face to face ) ?!!
SFX : MOVE!!!
( The shinobi moves at the last moment from getting pierced )
SHINOBI : ?!!!
OBITO : ?!!
SHINOBIS : ?!! He dodged the attack?
( Obito approaches further to other shinobis to stab them )
SFX : MOVE!! MOVE!!! JUMP!! DODGE!!
( Shinobis are shown moving out of Obito's way while some dodging the attack from close before getting pierced while some jumps out from his way )
OBITO : [ What is happening? ] ....
( Manipulates the black fluid to stab everyone around him at once )
SFX : MOVE!!
( Shinobis dodge the attacks by kneeling, moving aside and moving back )
OBITO : ?!!
SHNOBIS : ?!!
SASUKE : ?!!
JUUGO : ....
MINATO : ?!!
TOBIRAMA : .... [ This kid... ] ( smiles ) [ ...never stops surprising me. ]
[
( A huge figure in the background )
KURAMA : You nicely combined the use of my chakra and your sage chakra
NARUTO : ( scratches head ) Hehehe... I couldn't combined both together.
]
( Tobirama notices Naruto's clone )
( The clone is in Sage mode sitting next to BM Naruto standing on his right side )
SASUKE : What are you doing Naruto?
NARUTO : .....
MINATO : Naruto?
TOBIRAMA : Let him concentrate.
SASUKE/MINATO : ....
TOBIRAMA : He's using his sage chakra to sense the attacks and protect the Shinobis by controlling them with his own chakra. This is one hell of a kid to use his clone's chakra without dispersing his clone. He mastered the Shadow Clone Jutsu.
( Obito is shown standing in the middle of crowd )
SHIKAMARU : [ Naruto is still protecting us...Damn it. ]
OBITO : Naruto!!! ( flies back away from the Alliance ) How long are you going to protect this hopeless world?
NARUTO : ......
OBITO : ( lands ) I'm going to end this world.
NARUTO : A nobody like you has no right to decide about the future of this world. No matter how many times you spout those words... We will stand again!!! Because...
SHINOBIS : ?!!
OBITO : .....
NARUTO : This world belongs to us!!!!
SHINOBIS : Yeah!!!!!!!!!
( LAST PANEL )
( Shinobis are shouting back with Naruto at Obito )
( Obito is shown with a shocked look )
( The new generation refuses to step back )
( What will be Obito's next step? )
[
NARUTO : You're as bad as mom! I already know all of it! Everything that you guys ever wanted to tell me!!
( Minato is relieved with his son's words )
MINATO : ( relieved ) She then already met you. ( sighs )
NARUTO : Lets beat the hell out of that man.
MINATO : Naruto...
NARUTO : Huh?
MINATO : As I said, I would have liked to talk to you a little longer... but I've nothing left to say anymore.
NARUTO : What are you talking about Dad?
MINATO : I've no more regrets.
( pulls his fist back )
NARUTO : Huh?
( Minato starts fading away from Naruto's mind )
NARUTO : What's happening?
D-KURAMA : He can't do anything. The moment my chakra came in contact with my other half, we were destined to become one once again.
( FLASHBACK )
[
D-KURAMA : ...He's not a baby anymore. Tomorrow he will... Grrr..
MINATO : Tomorrow?
D-KURAMA : I'm not sure yet... But your kid resembles me the old man. The Sage of the six Paths. ( grins ) My other half must have fallen for that. It is just the matter of time for him to contact me.
MINATO : ?!!
]
MINATO : ( fading ) Happy Birthday... ( smile ) Naruto.
KURAMA : So we'll at full power now.
( D-Kurama merges with Kurama as Minato fades away )
NARUTO : Thank You.
]
( Naruto undergoes a transformation )
( The black region above the circle on his stomach starts shrinking )
( The black part is gathered around the seal on his stomach )
( The comma-like white signs around his neck turns black )
( The thick lines along his thighs retracts back to 3/4th of the previous )
( The number of circles on Naruto's stomach doubles and is connected with the comma-like figures with a black strip )
( Minato turns back to normal )
SASUKE/TOBIRAMA : ?!!
NARUTO : I'm happy..
MINATO : ?!!
NARUTO : ( a big smile on his face ) ...being the proud son of you guys.
MINATO : ( shocked ) ?!!
SASUKE : ...
( remembers )
[
( At the Valley of End )
( Naruto holding Sasuke's collar )
SASUKE : ( shouts ) You had nothing in the first place!! What the hell do you understand about me!!! Huh?!!
]
MINATO : ( lowers head ) No Naruto.
( remembers )
[
D-KURAMA : Look at how the world has become now... Your son is trying to change it...
]
MINATO : Its quite the opposite. ( a peaceful smile on his face ) Thank You for being our son. ( tears flows down from his right eye )
TOBIRAMA : You're not supposed to cry like this, Fourth.
SASUKE : ....
( remembers )
[
( Sasuke standing at the dock of the river )
( Steam is rising from the surface of the river )
( His father walking away )
SASUKE : ( sad face ) ....
FUGAKU : Now..
SASUKE : Hmm?
FUGAKU : ... That's my boy!
SASUKE : ?!!
( Wind brushes through )
]
( Wind brushes through the clouds of dust heavily )
SFX : ZMMMMM!!!
SHINOBIS : ( cloaked ) ( turns to the sound ) What's happening?!
( The sides of the barrier shakes )
( The upper edges starts lowering with a flame effect )
SFX : PHHT!!!
( The barrier disperses )
( Everyone watches in awe )
( Obito is floating in the air )
OBITO : ( still surrounded by black fluid ) You managed to save everyone with the Kyuubi's chakra.
NARUTO : ( smirks ) Hmm.
OBITO : Quite a nuisance you've become Naruto. You're wasting my time. ( starts coming down on the land ) I will deal with you personally after ( crashes on the land with his staff ) ... everyone.
( The rubble is spaced out as Obito lands )
SHINOBIS : ?!!
NARUTO : Shadow Clone Jutsu!!
( One clone is created )
( Obito dashes forward while leaving his staff standing )
( SLOW MOTION )
( Rocks are lifted and surrounded to Obito due to the crash )
( The black fluid changes its shape )
( The fluid enters Obito's hand from back and starts to emerge out to front )
( Obito points his hands at front cross )
( Sweat rolls down a shinobi's head )
( NORMAL )
SFX : DRIP!
( The drop falls on the ground )
SFX : SLASH!!!
( Obito slashes the surrounding rocks with the black fluid )
( Obito dashes forward )
( The crowd is totally shaken with the approaching Obito )
( Scene shows view of the battlefield from above as Obito reduces the gap )
( Obito creates a havoc in the crowd )
( Shinobis thrown like twigs )
SFX : SHOUTING!!! SCREAMING!!
( Shinobis are screaming and shouting as they are slaughtered by Obito )
SFX : RETRACT!! RETRACT!! SHOOT!! SHOOT!!
( Obito retracts the black fluid, shapes it into sphere and shoots in the crowd )
SHINOBIS : Aaaaaaaa!!!! Wrahhhhhhhh!!!
SFX : BOOOOM!!! BOOOOM!!
( Two huge blasts in the crowd )
NARUTO : ?!!
( His eye pupil starts shaking )
( Obito smirks at Naruto's expression )
MINATO : We must stop him.
TOBIRAMA : Wait for a while Fourth.
MINATO : ....
( Minato stares at Tobirama while Tobirama observing Naruto )
( Naruto is looking down on the left )
SASUKE : I'll deal with him.
( Dashes forward )
NARUTO : Sasuke!!
SASUKE : ( stops and turns ) ?!!
NARUTO : Wait for a while. Sakura is there to heal the others.
OBITO : What happened Naruto? Your world is falling apart. Such weak resolve.
( about to pierce the black fluid spear in one of the shinobi in his way )
SHINOBI : ( looking at Obito face to face ) ?!!
SFX : MOVE!!!
( The shinobi moves at the last moment from getting pierced )
SHINOBI : ?!!!
OBITO : ?!!
SHINOBIS : ?!! He dodged the attack?
( Obito approaches further to other shinobis to stab them )
SFX : MOVE!! MOVE!!! JUMP!! DODGE!!
( Shinobis are shown moving out of Obito's way while some dodging the attack from close before getting pierced while some jumps out from his way )
OBITO : [ What is happening? ] ....
( Manipulates the black fluid to stab everyone around him at once )
SFX : MOVE!!
( Shinobis dodge the attacks by kneeling, moving aside and moving back )
OBITO : ?!!
SHNOBIS : ?!!
SASUKE : ?!!
JUUGO : ....
MINATO : ?!!
TOBIRAMA : .... [ This kid... ] ( smiles ) [ ...never stops surprising me. ]
[
( A huge figure in the background )
KURAMA : You nicely combined the use of my chakra and your sage chakra
NARUTO : ( scratches head ) Hehehe... I couldn't combined both together.
]
( Tobirama notices Naruto's clone )
( The clone is in Sage mode sitting next to BM Naruto standing on his right side )
SASUKE : What are you doing Naruto?
NARUTO : .....
MINATO : Naruto?
TOBIRAMA : Let him concentrate.
SASUKE/MINATO : ....
TOBIRAMA : He's using his sage chakra to sense the attacks and protect the Shinobis by controlling them with his own chakra. This is one hell of a kid to use his clone's chakra without dispersing his clone. He mastered the Shadow Clone Jutsu.
( Obito is shown standing in the middle of crowd )
SHIKAMARU : [ Naruto is still protecting us...Damn it. ]
OBITO : Naruto!!! ( flies back away from the Alliance ) How long are you going to protect this hopeless world?
NARUTO : ......
OBITO : ( lands ) I'm going to end this world.
NARUTO : A nobody like you has no right to decide about the future of this world. No matter how many times you spout those words... We will stand again!!! Because...
SHINOBIS : ?!!
OBITO : .....
NARUTO : This world belongs to us!!!!
SHINOBIS : Yeah!!!!!!!!!
( LAST PANEL )
( Shinobis are shouting back with Naruto at Obito )
( Obito is shown with a shocked look )
( The new generation refuses to step back )
( What will be Obito's next step? )
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