Legend:
SFX: PUT !, CLAPS ! CONNECT ! FORMS !
[Blackness keep overflowing Obito's entire body as his right side is completly blacked ]
SFX: OVERFLOWS !
[Obito try to withstand Madara's will in form of blackness]
Obito(struggles to repel Madara's will): ARGHH !
[Small breeze blows around Brushing through Obito's hairs]
SFX: WIND ! MOVES ! BLOWS!
[Madara is shown sitting as he keep handseal with malicious look in his eyes]
SFX: GLARE !
Madara: It's no use trying to withstand my will Obito(serious look) Heaven Control: Takeover !
Minato(uneasy look): *That figure... (spot entire Obito's figure from back's profile) seems familliar*
Hiruzen(distracted): *It can't be...(glance at Uchiha Symbol on Obito's cloak)*
Tobirama(confused): *Another Uchiha ?!*
Hashirama: *(spot at Uchiha symbol on Obito's cloak)Uchiha(moves his eyes and lock at Madara) What are trying to reach, Madara...*
[Cracks appear under Obito's feet and spread in all directions in 3 meters radius]
SFX: CRACK CRACK CRUMBLE !
Obito(begin to loose to Madara's will): *Cursed Madara(glance at Madara emotionless face) ?! (Spot new four people) All Hokage ?!*(Minato, Hiruzen, Hashirama and Tobirama are shown)
Obito(turns his face to Edo Hokages): Edo Tensei..., but how, who ?! How can you be there, Minato-sensei ?! (focus back on fighting against Madara's will)ARGHH !
Hiruzen(schocked): It may seems impossible, but there is no doubt, that is Obito...
Obito(turns back to Edo hokages): That me, Minato-sensei and Lord Hiruzen(send them evil smirk)
Tobirama, Hashirama(in unison totally clueless): Who is he ?!, (turns to Minato and Hiruzen)Do you know him ?!
[Wind moves Madara's hair at side]
SFX: WIND ! BLOWS !, MOVES !
Madara: oh... What a beautifull reunion we have here(smirks) *I let them talks for now*
[Back to Edo Hokages]
Minato(with sad but serious look): He was my student, Great Shinobi of Hidden leaves village...(questioned facial expression)
Hashirama: Then why is he appearing from nowhere now ?!
Tobirama: He is ally of Madara, isn't he ?!
Minato: I don't know even if he is, but(flashback to young Kakashi talking about Obito's death) He certainly died at Kanabi bridge battle against Hidden rock shinobi while saving his teammate(image of Rin) *Then why*
Minato(loud in high tone): How can you be here alive, What did happen to you and Why are you here, answer me Obito ?!
[Obito's body is shown with blackness almost all around his body ]
[ Left hand and left leg's Obito without blackness]
[Obito's struggling face expression changes to anger ]
Obito: you don't need to know anything, (screams)sensei !, but fine I will(get interrupted) ?!
[Madara's shown focused on handseal with his eyes closed ]
Madara(calm and firmly): He didn't die, he was found and saved by me.
Everyone: ?!
Madara(don't bother with suprised face expressions of Edo Hokages and other people): He was entrusted with my so called real plan to carry on with it. He has found criminal organization and gathered all tailed beasts to ressurect Juubi. That should be enough for you, I don't feel like need to go into details(smirks)
Everyone: ?!
Minato(lower his head then raise it with sorrow look): I see..., But Why didn't you come back to village, Obito ?!
[Obito's is shown with his face looking forward with his back turned to Edo Hokages]
Minato(trying to be calm and serious): Obito !
SFX: HAHAHAHAHAH !
Obito: HAHAHAHAHA(slowly moves his face to meet Minato's eyes with his right's eye): You don't seem to understand how much I changed, Do you sensei ?!(smirks)
Minato(surpised): What do you mean, Obito ?!
Hashirama: He seems to be full of my cells in his body, be carefull Fourth !
Obito(looking at different face expression of Hokages): Very well, do you remember kyuubi attack on Konoha, Sensei(smirks)
Minato: No..., It can' be...
Hiruzen: I don't like the direction it is leading...
Obito(calm and firmly): Yes, The Masked man was me !(serious)
Everyone: ?!
Hiruzen: You was great Shinobi of hidden leaves village, why could you ?!
Obito(serious): leave you ?! I was left by you first changed so much ?! I grown up simply
Hiruzen: Grown up, just it ! There have to be more then that, stop hidding it Obito !
Obito(calm and serious): Very well....(pauses) It was because you left me in certain death, let Rin die. However I don't have any grudge against you. I have to destroy current World and create new !
Edo Hokages: ?!
[In the background Alliance Shinobi is shown fighting against Juubi's clones]
Obito: *It seems Madara may loose his focus...(look at Juubi) it will reach final form soon... I will talk a little more to deceive Madara* Look at Alliance Army, they are keep fighting against Juubi to save this worthless World, I am tired of that...*I need to find opening in Madara's doings*
Obito: ?! (loose control over his body) *Damn you Madara* ARGH !!! Ying Yang release: Recreation of body !
[Crossover of Madara's both Rinnengan glowing in purple color and Obito's Rinnengan glowing in purple color ]
Edo Hokages: ?!
[Obito's body is enveloped by very bright light then shot off in Madara Direction in form of stream]
SFX: GLOWS ! ENVELOPES ! GLOWS ! BLIND !
Edo Hokages(shout): Everyone, focus your attack at Madara !
[Many shinobi are shown charging straight at Madara]
[Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura are shown charging at Madara on their respective summons]
[Juubi's clones are shown chasing after Alliance Shinobi]
Naruto: Wind release: Rasen Shuriken !(throws large Rasen Shuriken at Incomming Juubi)
Sasuke(serious with evil look): I will deal with them
[Sasuke's both eyes are shown bleeding as he focus his eyesight at Juubi's clones as some of them are overhelmed by many micro wind needles hitting them all over again]
Sasuke: Amaterasu !
[Black flames appear on Juubi's clones covering them completly]
SFX: BURN BURN BURN !
[Some Juubi clones are shown keep chasing out of black flames range]
Sakura: Leave them to me, Sasuke !
Sasuke: Hmpf !
[Sakura jumps down and slams her heel with great force in ground creating powerfull shockwave incomming at Juubi's clones]
SFX: SLAMS !, CRACK ! DESTROY, QUAKE !
SFX: PIERCE !, SLAMS !, HIT !
[Alliance Shinobi Army is shown stopping their's movement and fight againt incomming Juubi's clones]
Random Shinobi: GUAH! (trying to kick Juubi's clone)
Random Shinobi 2: Fire release: Fire streams !
Random Shinobi3: Wind release: sphere of vacuum !
[Juubi clones are shown hit by quite strong flaming sphere which is empowered by wind]
SFX: HIT ! CUT ! BURN ! SPREAD ! BLOWS ! BURN !
[Madara is shown smirking mallicously at Edo Hokages as stream of light disspear around him]
[Bones begin to forms laying on ground as some flesh creates around bones]
Madara: There is nothing you can do stop me !
[Edo Hokages shocked facial expression are shown]
Hiruzen: We have to do something !
Tobirama: But we can't move or Juubi will be released and attack us !(glance at Hashirama)
Hashirama: Unfortunetly my clones are done as well and I can't disrupt my chakra now by doing more clones as Juubi is increasing in power by each second passed...
Minato: There is only one way...
[All Edo Hokages are shown looking at Minato clueless]
[Obito is shown struggling to don't let himself be under complete control.]
Obito: ?!
Minato: There is still hope for you, fight against Madara's will !
[Bones covered by flesh and muscles begin to forms in human shape]
SFX: FORMS ! FORMS ! FORMS !
Obito: I won't loose to Madara, but not for you...
Minato: Obito... There is still time... you could (get interrupted)
Obito: Return to Konoha, really ?! After I killed many shinobi including Konoha ones, after leading Kyuubi attack. Could you really forgive me and let stay in Konoha, answer me Minato Sensei !
Minato(lower his head): ....?!
Obito(spit salivia): Tsk... As I thought, You can't... noone ca...(get interrupted)
Obito(totally schocked face): ?!
[Minato is shown serious while tears are flowing from his eyes]
Minato: I can't speak for everyone but...(struggle to speak)I will forgive you my death, My wife's death...
Obito(totally schocked): ?! Why(calmly and quiet voice)
Minato: Naruto could forgive Pain in the end then like son as father I will do that...
Obito: ...
Minato: To stop cycle of hate in this world which destroy this great world and blind us with hate.
Obito: ?! (flashback of himself talking with Minato)
[young Obito finds Minato sitting on rock with worried look]
Obito: Minato- Sensei, are you ok ?!
Minato: ?! Yes, of course (smiles)
Obito: I really want to help you, sensei(unconvinced by Minato's explanation)
Minato: Really(smiles) Tell me How could you create everlasting peace in this world, Obito
Obito: Hmm... I will become Hokage and stop cycle of hate in this world which destroy this great world and blind us with hate !(honestly smiles with honest look in his eyes)
Minato: ?! That it, let's go to Kakashi and Rin, Kakashi may bore Rin with emotionless look
Obito: ok, Sensei !
[They are comming together while laughing]
/FLASHBACK
[The body forming on ground can be finally recognized as exact copy of Edo Madara with clothes on]
[Back to Madara ]
Madara(smirks): About time...
[Obito weaves through few handseals, Rinnengan glows very strongly in purple color]
Obito: Gedo Rinne Tensei ! *so this is my end...*
Obito: I am sorry..., Minato-sensei (Last happy memories as Team of Minato flashes before his eyes) I am.. truelly sorry... *Farewell Kakashi, my best friend* (Image of Kakashi fade away) *I am comming to meet you finally* (image of smilling Rin) Rin...
[Obito's body fall down on ground with tear flowing from his eye]
[Stream of Light shoot off in air then fly at Madara hitting him ]
SFX: BLAZE ! GLOW !
[Minato's special Kunai is shown glowing]
Hiruzen: that signal !
Minato: I know ! Reverse Flying Thunder God !
[Suddenly Orochimaru, Karin, Suigetsu and 5 Kages appear around Minato]
Orochimaru(looks around): so that is Juubi !(spot huge monster) ?!(moves his eyes to bright light which begin to fade away slowly) That my chance !
[Orochimaru pull out scroll then uneveils it's fast]
Orochimaru: Summoning no Jutsu !
[Kabuto's unconcionous body appear at ground ]
Orochimaru(claps both his arms): Forbidden technique: Temporary Life Transfer !
[Black markings appear on ground comming from kabuto's body to Obito's body which looses life force]
[Madara's soul is shown descending into Madara's real body laying on ground.]
[Back to Orochimaru, Orochimaru waves through some handseals as everyone is blinded by green light comming from Madara's real body]
Orochimaru: Forbidden technique: Transfer of soul !
[Obito's body fall on ground as Orochimaru in snake shape comes into Obito mouth ]
Obito/Orochimaru: Transfer Succes !
[Evil laugh is heard comming behind smokescreen]
SFX: STEP STEP STEP STEP !
Everyone: ?!
[ Smokescreen fade away completly revealing Madara ! ]
Madara: It is great feeling to be alive again ! (evil laugh)
[Evil laugh is heard around as it is reflecting from surroundings]
SFX: ECHO EFFECT !
Madara is alive again !
What will happen now !
[END]
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637 - Unexpected Meeting
Madara's Cruelty !!PAGE ONE
[Obito struggles to control his body as he put both his hands together in handseal preparing Rinne Tensei]SFX: PUT !, CLAPS ! CONNECT ! FORMS !
[Blackness keep overflowing Obito's entire body as his right side is completly blacked ]
SFX: OVERFLOWS !
[Obito try to withstand Madara's will in form of blackness]
Obito(struggles to repel Madara's will): ARGHH !
[Small breeze blows around Brushing through Obito's hairs]
SFX: WIND ! MOVES ! BLOWS!
[Madara is shown sitting as he keep handseal with malicious look in his eyes]
SFX: GLARE !
Madara: It's no use trying to withstand my will Obito(serious look) Heaven Control: Takeover !
PAGE TWO
[Shots of Edo Hokages are shown with different face expressionos as they are stuck to keep chakra barrier intact]Minato(uneasy look): *That figure... (spot entire Obito's figure from back's profile) seems familliar*
Hiruzen(distracted): *It can't be...(glance at Uchiha Symbol on Obito's cloak)*
Tobirama(confused): *Another Uchiha ?!*
Hashirama: *(spot at Uchiha symbol on Obito's cloak)Uchiha(moves his eyes and lock at Madara) What are trying to reach, Madara...*
[Cracks appear under Obito's feet and spread in all directions in 3 meters radius]
SFX: CRACK CRACK CRUMBLE !
Obito(begin to loose to Madara's will): *Cursed Madara(glance at Madara emotionless face) ?! (Spot new four people) All Hokage ?!*(Minato, Hiruzen, Hashirama and Tobirama are shown)
Obito(turns his face to Edo Hokages): Edo Tensei..., but how, who ?! How can you be there, Minato-sensei ?! (focus back on fighting against Madara's will)ARGHH !
PAGE THREE
Minato(recognizes Obito as he is totally shocked): We were summoned by Orochimaru via Edo Tensei but... You can't be..., Obito ?!Hiruzen(schocked): It may seems impossible, but there is no doubt, that is Obito...
Obito(turns back to Edo hokages): That me, Minato-sensei and Lord Hiruzen(send them evil smirk)
Tobirama, Hashirama(in unison totally clueless): Who is he ?!, (turns to Minato and Hiruzen)Do you know him ?!
[Wind moves Madara's hair at side]
SFX: WIND ! BLOWS !, MOVES !
Madara: oh... What a beautifull reunion we have here(smirks) *I let them talks for now*
[Back to Edo Hokages]
Minato(with sad but serious look): He was my student, Great Shinobi of Hidden leaves village...(questioned facial expression)
PAGE FOUR
Hiruzen(pridefull look with sadness): That right, He was even called as The great Hero of Hidden leaves village among very few of our shinobi.Hashirama: Then why is he appearing from nowhere now ?!
Tobirama: He is ally of Madara, isn't he ?!
Minato: I don't know even if he is, but(flashback to young Kakashi talking about Obito's death) He certainly died at Kanabi bridge battle against Hidden rock shinobi while saving his teammate(image of Rin) *Then why*
Minato(loud in high tone): How can you be here alive, What did happen to you and Why are you here, answer me Obito ?!
[Obito's body is shown with blackness almost all around his body ]
[ Left hand and left leg's Obito without blackness]
[Obito's struggling face expression changes to anger ]
Obito: you don't need to know anything, (screams)sensei !, but fine I will(get interrupted) ?!
PAGE FIVE
[Blackness keep overflowing Obito's body as he loose control over his body slowly][Madara's shown focused on handseal with his eyes closed ]
Madara(calm and firmly): He didn't die, he was found and saved by me.
Everyone: ?!
Madara(don't bother with suprised face expressions of Edo Hokages and other people): He was entrusted with my so called real plan to carry on with it. He has found criminal organization and gathered all tailed beasts to ressurect Juubi. That should be enough for you, I don't feel like need to go into details(smirks)
Everyone: ?!
Minato(lower his head then raise it with sorrow look): I see..., But Why didn't you come back to village, Obito ?!
[Obito's is shown with his face looking forward with his back turned to Edo Hokages]
Minato(trying to be calm and serious): Obito !
PAGE SIX
[Evil laugh begin to spread around battlefield as Obito's upper torso is shown shaking ]SFX: HAHAHAHAHAH !
Obito: HAHAHAHAHA(slowly moves his face to meet Minato's eyes with his right's eye): You don't seem to understand how much I changed, Do you sensei ?!(smirks)
Minato(surpised): What do you mean, Obito ?!
Hashirama: He seems to be full of my cells in his body, be carefull Fourth !
Obito(looking at different face expression of Hokages): Very well, do you remember kyuubi attack on Konoha, Sensei(smirks)
Minato: No..., It can' be...
Hiruzen: I don't like the direction it is leading...
Obito(calm and firmly): Yes, The Masked man was me !(serious)
Everyone: ?!
PAGE SEVEN
Minato: No... I could suspect anyone besides you, Obito.... why ?!Hiruzen: You was great Shinobi of hidden leaves village, why could you ?!
Obito(serious): leave you ?! I was left by you first changed so much ?! I grown up simply
Hiruzen: Grown up, just it ! There have to be more then that, stop hidding it Obito !
Obito(calm and serious): Very well....(pauses) It was because you left me in certain death, let Rin die. However I don't have any grudge against you. I have to destroy current World and create new !
Edo Hokages: ?!
[In the background Alliance Shinobi is shown fighting against Juubi's clones]
Obito: *It seems Madara may loose his focus...(look at Juubi) it will reach final form soon... I will talk a little more to deceive Madara* Look at Alliance Army, they are keep fighting against Juubi to save this worthless World, I am tired of that...*I need to find opening in Madara's doings*
PAGE EIGHT
Madara(serious and calm): Enough of talking, it is about time for me to act (strengthen his handseal) Obito: ?! (loose control over his body) *Damn you Madara* ARGH !!! Ying Yang release: Recreation of body !
[Crossover of Madara's both Rinnengan glowing in purple color and Obito's Rinnengan glowing in purple color ]
Edo Hokages: ?!
[Obito's body is enveloped by very bright light then shot off in Madara Direction in form of stream]
SFX: GLOWS ! ENVELOPES ! GLOWS ! BLIND !
Edo Hokages(shout): Everyone, focus your attack at Madara !
[Many shinobi are shown charging straight at Madara]
[Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura are shown charging at Madara on their respective summons]
[Juubi's clones are shown chasing after Alliance Shinobi]
PAGE NINE
Naruto: We have to stop Madara ?! (feel something following after them, look behind himself, spot Juubi's clones) Look out, Juubi's clones are following after us !Naruto: Wind release: Rasen Shuriken !(throws large Rasen Shuriken at Incomming Juubi)
Sasuke(serious with evil look): I will deal with them
[Sasuke's both eyes are shown bleeding as he focus his eyesight at Juubi's clones as some of them are overhelmed by many micro wind needles hitting them all over again]
Sasuke: Amaterasu !
[Black flames appear on Juubi's clones covering them completly]
SFX: BURN BURN BURN !
[Some Juubi clones are shown keep chasing out of black flames range]
Sakura: Leave them to me, Sasuke !
Sasuke: Hmpf !
[Sakura jumps down and slams her heel with great force in ground creating powerfull shockwave incomming at Juubi's clones]
SFX: SLAMS !, CRACK ! DESTROY, QUAKE !
PAGE TEN
[Some of alliance shinobi army is attacked by fast moving Juubi's clones]SFX: PIERCE !, SLAMS !, HIT !
[Alliance Shinobi Army is shown stopping their's movement and fight againt incomming Juubi's clones]
Random Shinobi: GUAH! (trying to kick Juubi's clone)
Random Shinobi 2: Fire release: Fire streams !
Random Shinobi3: Wind release: sphere of vacuum !
[Juubi clones are shown hit by quite strong flaming sphere which is empowered by wind]
SFX: HIT ! CUT ! BURN ! SPREAD ! BLOWS ! BURN !
[Madara is shown smirking mallicously at Edo Hokages as stream of light disspear around him]
[Bones begin to forms laying on ground as some flesh creates around bones]
Madara: There is nothing you can do stop me !
[Edo Hokages shocked facial expression are shown]
PAGE ELEVEN
Edo hokages: Cursed Juubi's clones !Hiruzen: We have to do something !
Tobirama: But we can't move or Juubi will be released and attack us !(glance at Hashirama)
Hashirama: Unfortunetly my clones are done as well and I can't disrupt my chakra now by doing more clones as Juubi is increasing in power by each second passed...
Minato: There is only one way...
[All Edo Hokages are shown looking at Minato clueless]
PAGE TWELVE
Minato: Obito ! Let's forget about Past and move on.[Obito is shown struggling to don't let himself be under complete control.]
Obito: ?!
Minato: There is still hope for you, fight against Madara's will !
[Bones covered by flesh and muscles begin to forms in human shape]
SFX: FORMS ! FORMS ! FORMS !
Obito: I won't loose to Madara, but not for you...
Minato: Obito... There is still time... you could (get interrupted)
Obito: Return to Konoha, really ?! After I killed many shinobi including Konoha ones, after leading Kyuubi attack. Could you really forgive me and let stay in Konoha, answer me Minato Sensei !
Minato(lower his head): ....?!
Obito(spit salivia): Tsk... As I thought, You can't... noone ca...(get interrupted)
PAGE THIRTEEN
Minato: I... forgive you, Obito...(pauses)Obito(totally schocked face): ?!
[Minato is shown serious while tears are flowing from his eyes]
Minato: I can't speak for everyone but...(struggle to speak)I will forgive you my death, My wife's death...
Obito(totally schocked): ?! Why(calmly and quiet voice)
Minato: Naruto could forgive Pain in the end then like son as father I will do that...
Obito: ...
Minato: To stop cycle of hate in this world which destroy this great world and blind us with hate.
Obito: ?! (flashback of himself talking with Minato)
PAGE FOURTEEN
FLASHBACK[young Obito finds Minato sitting on rock with worried look]
Obito: Minato- Sensei, are you ok ?!
Minato: ?! Yes, of course (smiles)
Obito: I really want to help you, sensei(unconvinced by Minato's explanation)
Minato: Really(smiles) Tell me How could you create everlasting peace in this world, Obito
Obito: Hmm... I will become Hokage and stop cycle of hate in this world which destroy this great world and blind us with hate !(honestly smiles with honest look in his eyes)
Minato: ?! That it, let's go to Kakashi and Rin, Kakashi may bore Rin with emotionless look
Obito: ok, Sensei !
[They are comming together while laughing]
/FLASHBACK
PAGE FIFTEEN
Obito: ..., Sensei...[The body forming on ground can be finally recognized as exact copy of Edo Madara with clothes on]
[Back to Madara ]
Madara(smirks): About time...
[Obito weaves through few handseals, Rinnengan glows very strongly in purple color]
Obito: Gedo Rinne Tensei ! *so this is my end...*
Obito: I am sorry..., Minato-sensei (Last happy memories as Team of Minato flashes before his eyes) I am.. truelly sorry... *Farewell Kakashi, my best friend* (Image of Kakashi fade away) *I am comming to meet you finally* (image of smilling Rin) Rin...
[Obito's body fall down on ground with tear flowing from his eye]
[Stream of Light shoot off in air then fly at Madara hitting him ]
SFX: BLAZE ! GLOW !
PAGE SIXTEEN
Minato: ?![Minato's special Kunai is shown glowing]
Hiruzen: that signal !
Minato: I know ! Reverse Flying Thunder God !
[Suddenly Orochimaru, Karin, Suigetsu and 5 Kages appear around Minato]
Orochimaru(looks around): so that is Juubi !(spot huge monster) ?!(moves his eyes to bright light which begin to fade away slowly) That my chance !
[Orochimaru pull out scroll then uneveils it's fast]
Orochimaru: Summoning no Jutsu !
[Kabuto's unconcionous body appear at ground ]
Orochimaru(claps both his arms): Forbidden technique: Temporary Life Transfer !
[Black markings appear on ground comming from kabuto's body to Obito's body which looses life force]
PAGE SEVENTEEN
[Madara's soul is shown ascending from Edo Madara's body as it slowly dissolves into gathering of dust][Madara's soul is shown descending into Madara's real body laying on ground.]
[Back to Orochimaru, Orochimaru waves through some handseals as everyone is blinded by green light comming from Madara's real body]
Orochimaru: Forbidden technique: Transfer of soul !
[Obito's body fall on ground as Orochimaru in snake shape comes into Obito mouth ]
Obito/Orochimaru: Transfer Succes !
PAGE EIGHTEEN
[Bright light fade away completly letting everyone to see again][Evil laugh is heard comming behind smokescreen]
SFX: STEP STEP STEP STEP !
Everyone: ?!
[ Smokescreen fade away completly revealing Madara ! ]
Madara: It is great feeling to be alive again ! (evil laugh)
[Evil laugh is heard around as it is reflecting from surroundings]
SFX: ECHO EFFECT !
Madara is alive again !
What will happen now !
[END]
638 - Pure evil unleashed - comming soon...
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