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MANGA 637 : EVERYTHING BLACK
OBITO : Wooaahhh!!!
SFX : CLAP!!!
(forcibly prepared for handsigns)
MINATO : (looking at Obito) ?!
NARUTO : (turns his eye pupils to the scream) ?!!
HOKAGES : ?!!
SA : ?!!
JUUBI CLONES : Grrrrr......
SFX : SWISHHH!!
(One of the clone attacks one of the diverted shinobi)
SHINOBI : Gyaahhh!!!
SASUKE : ?!! (glaring at Obito) [ He's here..... But who's he? ]
MADARA : (smirks) You're helpless like that time...
SFX : JUMP!
(jumps off from the cliff)
(lands on the ground holding the hand seal)
SFX : TIP...TAP....TIP....TAP...
(walk towards Obito)
OBITO : (half blackened face) (falls forward on his hands) Arrghhh!! Wooaaaaaaa!! [ shit!! Shit!! He... ] (pants) (looking at the rods) [ ....he had planned this from the start. ]
MADARA : Eh....Obito?
MINATO : [ Obito?!! Did he? ]
(looks at the left half of Obito's face and imagines kid Obito's right half smiling face on adult Obito's pitiful and scary left half)
(remembers)
[
OBITO : One day....(challenging Kakashi) one day I'll be Hokage.
]
(eyes shaking with the cloak)
HASHIRAMA : (looking at screaming Obito and approaching Madara) [ He's controlling him? ]
OBITO : (coughs blood) (panting) ...........
(remembers Rin's smiling face)
(the face turns dark black)
(crumbles to ashes)
(the surrounding space in his mind turns black)
[
RIN : I'm watching you.... always.
KAKASHI : Your future is death.
]
OBITO : ?!! (widens his eyes)
(forced to stand)
OBITO : (hands shivering) Ri...... Rin..... Rinne Tensei....... no Jut...su.
MADARA : It's time.
(a purple colored huge circle is formed on the ground and the demon's head emerges out)
(Obito falls on his knees)
HOKAGES : ?!!
NARUTO : That is...What is going on?
KATSUYU : Naruto!!
SAKURA/NARUTO : ?!!
SASUKE : .......
KATSUYU : This is similar jutsu..... pain used to revive the villagers.
NARUTO : ?!! (remembers tug of war between his soul and Edo Nagato's technique)
NARUTO : Everyone stay alert!! That demon can devour souls.
(panel shows the surrounding shinobis)
SHINOBIS : ?!! What? (sweat rolls down their head after hearing)
SASUKE : No..... That's not the case here.
(Aoda wounds around one of the clone)
NARUTO : What do you mean?
(Gamakichi cuts down one of the clone)
SASUKE : [ He wasn't sitting idle for nothing. He was waiting for him. That means? ] (turns to Naruto) Madara is planning to be revived back. [ using him. ]
NARUTO : Huh?! [ Those nasty rods ] Hey Sasuke! He's controlling him through those rods.
SASUKE : (widens Sharingan) [ He's right. But why is he planning to become mortal? What is he planning for? ]
SFX : ZOOP!!!ZOOP!!!
(A light travels through the battlefield in a crooked zigzag manner)
MINATO : ...... (holding the seal and the barrier)
(The dust blows up from the ground as the light travels)
MADARA : (while walking towards Obito and holding the seal) Hmm?
(as he turns, a huge sized arm emerges out of the light and extends over Madara)
SFX : BAMM!!!
(slams on Madara)
(the attacked area is crushed)
(With the support of the chakra arm, Minato raises himself and lands in front of Obito)
NARUTO : Dad?!
MINATO : (holding the seal near the barrier) It really takes a toll on the chakra levels. Shodaime made five clones.
(The barrier shakes a little near Minato)
(Chakra arms emerges out of Minato's cloak standing near Obito)
SFX : GRAB! PULL!!
(grabs the rods and pulls them out of Obito)
OBITO : (raises himself as the pain increases) Aaaarghhh!!! (holding himself at arms length from the ground) (panting) I don't need any help from you....
MADARA : (crushed under the chakra arm) I can regenerate those rods out from his body. (turns to wood) Who are....
OBITO : .....Naruto.
MINATO : (smiles and turns to Obito) You're not wearing your goggles. So I thought something might have gone into your eyes again.
OBITO : (lowered head) ?!! [ That voice... ] Sensei?
(raises his head)
MINATO : I was too late to save you, Obito.
(worried face)
(Minato's image is shown into a small sphere which zooms out to be a drop of tear in Obito's shivering left eye)
OBITO : ......
(A SECOND CHANCE ?)
OBITO : Wooaahhh!!!
SFX : CLAP!!!
(forcibly prepared for handsigns)
MINATO : (looking at Obito) ?!
NARUTO : (turns his eye pupils to the scream) ?!!
HOKAGES : ?!!
SA : ?!!
JUUBI CLONES : Grrrrr......
SFX : SWISHHH!!
(One of the clone attacks one of the diverted shinobi)
SHINOBI : Gyaahhh!!!
SASUKE : ?!! (glaring at Obito) [ He's here..... But who's he? ]
MADARA : (smirks) You're helpless like that time...
SFX : JUMP!
(jumps off from the cliff)
(lands on the ground holding the hand seal)
SFX : TIP...TAP....TIP....TAP...
(walk towards Obito)
OBITO : (half blackened face) (falls forward on his hands) Arrghhh!! Wooaaaaaaa!! [ shit!! Shit!! He... ] (pants) (looking at the rods) [ ....he had planned this from the start. ]
MADARA : Eh....Obito?
MINATO : [ Obito?!! Did he? ]
(looks at the left half of Obito's face and imagines kid Obito's right half smiling face on adult Obito's pitiful and scary left half)
(remembers)
[
OBITO : One day....(challenging Kakashi) one day I'll be Hokage.
]
(eyes shaking with the cloak)
HASHIRAMA : (looking at screaming Obito and approaching Madara) [ He's controlling him? ]
OBITO : (coughs blood) (panting) ...........
(remembers Rin's smiling face)
(the face turns dark black)
(crumbles to ashes)
(the surrounding space in his mind turns black)
[
RIN : I'm watching you.... always.
KAKASHI : Your future is death.
]
OBITO : ?!! (widens his eyes)
(forced to stand)
OBITO : (hands shivering) Ri...... Rin..... Rinne Tensei....... no Jut...su.
MADARA : It's time.
(a purple colored huge circle is formed on the ground and the demon's head emerges out)
(Obito falls on his knees)
HOKAGES : ?!!
NARUTO : That is...What is going on?
KATSUYU : Naruto!!
SAKURA/NARUTO : ?!!
SASUKE : .......
KATSUYU : This is similar jutsu..... pain used to revive the villagers.
NARUTO : ?!! (remembers tug of war between his soul and Edo Nagato's technique)
NARUTO : Everyone stay alert!! That demon can devour souls.
(panel shows the surrounding shinobis)
SHINOBIS : ?!! What? (sweat rolls down their head after hearing)
SASUKE : No..... That's not the case here.
(Aoda wounds around one of the clone)
NARUTO : What do you mean?
(Gamakichi cuts down one of the clone)
SASUKE : [ He wasn't sitting idle for nothing. He was waiting for him. That means? ] (turns to Naruto) Madara is planning to be revived back. [ using him. ]
NARUTO : Huh?! [ Those nasty rods ] Hey Sasuke! He's controlling him through those rods.
SASUKE : (widens Sharingan) [ He's right. But why is he planning to become mortal? What is he planning for? ]
SFX : ZOOP!!!ZOOP!!!
(A light travels through the battlefield in a crooked zigzag manner)
MINATO : ...... (holding the seal and the barrier)
(The dust blows up from the ground as the light travels)
MADARA : (while walking towards Obito and holding the seal) Hmm?
(as he turns, a huge sized arm emerges out of the light and extends over Madara)
SFX : BAMM!!!
(slams on Madara)
(the attacked area is crushed)
(With the support of the chakra arm, Minato raises himself and lands in front of Obito)
NARUTO : Dad?!
MINATO : (holding the seal near the barrier) It really takes a toll on the chakra levels. Shodaime made five clones.
(The barrier shakes a little near Minato)
(Chakra arms emerges out of Minato's cloak standing near Obito)
SFX : GRAB! PULL!!
(grabs the rods and pulls them out of Obito)
OBITO : (raises himself as the pain increases) Aaaarghhh!!! (holding himself at arms length from the ground) (panting) I don't need any help from you....
MADARA : (crushed under the chakra arm) I can regenerate those rods out from his body. (turns to wood) Who are....
OBITO : .....Naruto.
MINATO : (smiles and turns to Obito) You're not wearing your goggles. So I thought something might have gone into your eyes again.
OBITO : (lowered head) ?!! [ That voice... ] Sensei?
(raises his head)
MINATO : I was too late to save you, Obito.
(worried face)
(Minato's image is shown into a small sphere which zooms out to be a drop of tear in Obito's shivering left eye)
OBITO : ......
(A SECOND CHANCE ?)
