[Predictions] NARUTO MANGA 635 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

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( ) : Actions
[ ] : Thoughts
SFX : Sound Effects
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MANGA 635 : HEALING THE DEAD

SFX : LAND!! LAND!! LAND!!
(A blow of wind breezes through their hair)
OROCHIMARU : You don't seem to be holding up so well.... Tsunade.
SUIGETSU : [ Ehhh? Lord Orochimaru acting wise. ]
KARIN : (adjusts her goggles) Eheheeh?!! What happened here?
TSUNADE : (blinks her eyes) (looking at three blurry images standing infront of her) Ka..tsuy...suyu... Who...Who are?
(A small version of Katsuyu is shown)
KATSUYU : (looking at Tsunade) Don't push your self Lady Tsunade. (turns) What are you up to? Lord Orochimaru?
SFX : RAISE...WALK..STOP

(Orochimaru stands near Tsunade)
OROCHIMARU : Nothing cruel... Katsuyu. (looks at Tsunade's panting face) [ She's still holding herself... The Will of Fire still burning.... Just like them ]
(A huge panel showing Hashirama's, Tobirama's, Hiruzen's, Minato's, Jiraiya's, Naruto's, Itachi's images in the background surrounding Orochimaru from all sides)
OROCHIMARU : It makes me cry to see you like this... Tsunade.
(Katsuyu starts healing Tsunade)

(remembers)
[
HIRUZEN :
(pierced by the snake sword) When they are protecting something important... that's when a shinobi's true strength appears...
]

(Tsunade's hair is freely flowing in the air)
(Her forehead mark is half faded away)
(Her healing hands are placed on Gaara's and Mei's body lying unconscious on both sides of her body)
(Tsuchikage's and Raikage's body is shown at the behind Katsuyu lying on the ground)
(Tsuchikage's body is covered with blood)
(Raikage is lying on the ground with a hole on his bloodstained coat on his back with no marks on his back)
KATSUYU : Lord Raikage is unconscious...
OROCHIMARU : Looks like Raikage and Tsuchikage ate up her half mark.
KATSUYU : Lady Tsunade was able to heal Lord Raikage till now. Lord Tsuchikage is already dead. Sh-
OROCHIMARU : Detailed information comes later. Let me take a look at Tsunade.
OROCHIMARU : Karin...
KARIN : .....
OROCHIMARU : Heal the other Kages as fast as possible.
KARIN : Right!!
(comes forth)
(Suigetsu walks in front)
(The scene zooms out showing a wide distorted land)
(Four crooked dark lines from various places on the battlefield are shown meeting at one point under the grown forest)
(Suigetsu is standing in a huge crater with a similar one on the other side which looks like a huge footprint)
SUIGETSU : How much powerful is that Uchiha Madara?
KATSUYU : I don't know.. but... [ Lady Tsunade and the Kages faced him. ]
OROCHIMARU : So foolish.
TSUNADE : ...Madara...must be dealt.
OROCHIMARU : Don't worry. Everything'll be handled. Tsunade....
TSUNADE : Hmm?
ORCHIMARU : Aren't you surprised? I'm here in front of you. Alive.
TSUNADE : I thought I'm dead already watching you in hell (faint smile) But you're here. Helping the Kages. Don't know why. But I can't do anything at the moment.
OROCHIMARU : Yes... You're right. Sasuke revived me. And decided to protect Konoha.
KARIN : .... (healing Gaara)
TSUNADE : Protect Konoha, huh?
OROCHIMARU : [ For now... ] (licks his tongue out)
TSUNADE : Our existence doesn't matters anymore. Jiraiya had already passed his will. (remembers Naruto) and now...mine either (remembers Sakura)
OROCHIMARU : Hmmm (a faint smile) That's true but... your grandfather wants to see you last time.
TSUNADE : ?!! You revived them back?
OROCHIMARU : He decided to stop Madara.
TSUNADE : ...... [ But can he stop the Madara we witnessed here? ]
(remembers)
[
MADARA : My enjoyment was ruined.... I guess I might as well go get the Kyuubi, now....
ONOKI : ?!!
SFX : LIFT...MOVE..
MADARA : ?!!

(Onoki lifts himself in the air and blocks Madara's view)
MEI : ?!! Lord Tsuchikage!! It's not an opponent we can beat!!!
ONOKI : But we must do it!! We have to stop him here...
SFX : FLOAT...
MADARA :
(looking at Onoki) ...... Unsightly....
KAGES : ?!!
ONOKI : We will stop you here.
MADARA : .....
(widens Rinnegan slowly)
ONOKI : .... ?!!
(feeling being pulled)
SFX : PULL....
KAGES : ?!!
ONOKI : Dammit.
[ Earth Sty- (tries to bring his hands together) ] ?!! (tries one more time) ?!! [ What's going on? ]
MADARA : You crossed your limit Onoki.
(raises his hand towards Onoki)
(Gaara moves his hand)
SFX : MOVE!!
(Sand rapidly moves to aid Onoki)
SFX : MOVE!!!! GRAB!!!
KAGES : ?!!

(A huge sand layer is shown separating the Kages and Madara)
SFX : BOOOOOM!!!!
(The sand is thrown away)
(The scene clears)
KAGES : (shaking) ?!!
MADARA :
(one hand raised and other pointing at the Kages) You haven't seen my full power yet. You (smirks) brats.
SFX : CRUSH!!
ONOKI : Gahhhh!!!
(coughs blood)
(Onoki's is shown grabbed by Madara who just crushed his throat)
(Blood is shown spilled out of his mouth)
(His hands falls down like a dead)
MEI : Lor...Lord Tsuchikage!!
GAARA/A/TSUNADE : ?!!
MADARA :
(looking at Onoki) (smirk) Feel my power? Now you won't talk.
(throws him down towards the Kages)
(The Kages holds Onoki)
TSUNADE : You bastard!! Now we won't let you get away from here. (tightens her fist)
MADARA : Still playing around. Tchh....
(turns) I've changed my mind.... I won't go until I kill you all now....(raise his finger).. except you (points at one of the Kage)
(The finger is pointed at Tsunade)
TSUNADE : ?!!
KAGES : ?!!
(shaking)
MADARA : I'll leave you to heal them.... after they die
(smirks)
SFX : STEP!! STEP!! STEP!!
(Gaara, Mei and A stands in the way to defend Tsunade)
GAARA : We are not afraid to die here. (moves his hand and the sand moves)
MEI : (Still shaking) (makes handsign) Whether we live or die... doesn't matters!!
A :
(activates lightning armor) (tightens his fist) Grrr!!
(Tsunade starts healing Onoki)
MADARA : Hmmm. Lets start!!!
SFX : JUMP!!
KAGES : ?!!
(looking at him)
ONOKI : ?!!
A : Move!!!

(The Kages moves away)
TSUNADE : (about to hold Onoki and dodge) ?!!
SFX : GROW!!!! GROW!!!!

(A rocky structure emerges out from Onoki's hand)
(A wooden branch grows out of Madara's arm)
SFX : PUSH!!!!
TSUNADE : ?!!

(Onoki pushes her away from him while she was healing him)
(Madara is about to land with the wooden spear)
KAGES : ?!!
GAARA : Dammit!!
(moves his hand)
SFX : MOVE!!!!!

(The sand moves rapidly)
(Madara is about to stab Onoki)
(A huge panel of Madara with the wooden spear, Gaara's sand layer in the middle and Onoki lying on the ground is shown)
SFX : BOOOOOOM!!! CRACK!!
(Cracks appear on the ground due to the impact)
(The sand splashes out)
(Gaara in hand extended position)
(A and Mei away from the location)
(Tsunade fallen down on the opposite side looking at the scene shakily)
MADARA : (looking at Tsunade) One down! Who's next?
(Gaara's sand is layered on Onoki with the wooden spear intact)
(The blood is flowing out making the sand red)
]

(Onoki's dead!!)
(How the others will act?)
 
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To say you have come a long way is an understatement. This sir, I now consider the best prediction by a long shot. Even if it's proven to not be correct, it's still a flawless model of what could happen. You got the length, conversation, plot transition, and suspenseful ending perfectly. You captured Kishi's style perfectly. It truly felt like I was reading the manga
 
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This is beautiful, well done
YEAAAAH!!!! >:U Now this is a prediction whoooooo!
Cool. Awesome. That's what I believe. Orochimaru will help aid in the fight against Madara. Very well scripted.
To say you have come a long way is an understatement. This sir, I now consider the best prediction by a long shot. Even if it's proven to not be correct, it's still a flawless model of what could happen. You got the length, conversation, plot transition, and suspenseful ending perfectly. You captured Kishi's style perfectly. It truly felt like I was reading the manga
Amazing! This would be so cool if it actually happened :)

THANKS A LOT =D
I really appreciate as well as respect your comments.
I don't know whether it'll go this way or not but I can see my work is appreciated. That's all I want.
 

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as Expected truelly epic prediction as always ;)

I enjoyed reading conversation between Orochimaru and company with five kages =D, their interaction was made by you very well and funny.

Very good characterization, pace of plot. Maybe lack of plot twist as I did, but still nice to read with tense and suspense moment up in air ;)

As always nice description of scenery and easy to follow action. I could literally create picture in my mind each scene, each action I read ;)

Nice idea to show flashback of what did happen to rest of kages ;)

Keep it up, my friend :win:
 

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i liked this one.
Good job ^^
as always brother you just nailed it :d
truly awesome br00!:nosebleed:
nice idealogy
great prediction
good prediction
as expected truelly epic prediction as always ;)

i enjoyed reading conversation between orochimaru and company with five kages =d, their interaction was made by you very well and funny.

Very good characterization, pace of plot. Maybe lack of plot twist as i did, but still nice to read with tense and suspense moment up in air ;)

as always nice description of scenery and easy to follow action. I could literally create picture in my mind each scene, each action i read ;)

nice idea to show flashback of what did happen to rest of kages ;)

keep it up, my friend :win:
great prediction bro.... :win: :win:
thanks to all of you
 
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