[Predictions] NARUTO MANGA 634 PREDICTION [by KCMNaruto]
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ILikeBigYolos
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Thanks you very much
, I hope too that It will happen =DOk, I just changed name of technique, hope you will take some time and finish reading some times :'(
ILikeBigYolos
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Sorry for recycling Kakashi vs Obito part, I even tried to change it a bit but basics were same, that maybe you getting sick of this part.
Anyway thank you very much for nice comment and honest feedback
anonymous27
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LordYondaimeHokage
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-ahhimane-
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Awards
About the prediction including the matter...... it was awesome to continue till the end. The story the way you took it to Jiraiya's revival was good enough. That made me to think about Orochimaru's master plan or change of heart or betrayal. 
Technical problems :
Technical problems :
-Frankly, it's a bad impression when you put Kakashi vs Obito again and again in the middle pages.
-The length of the prediction with respect to the content in every page was too much.
-If you suspend the Kakashi vs Obito part for some chapters and manage the remaining content in 17 pages along with appropriate amount per page then it would look neat and good.
-In every page, the actions in those brackets also play an important role in occupying a panel along with the dialogues. So it doesn't matter if a whole page is only consisting of actions. Dialogues ain't matter much in a chapter or a page.
-The length of the prediction with respect to the content in every page was too much.
-If you suspend the Kakashi vs Obito part for some chapters and manage the remaining content in 17 pages along with appropriate amount per page then it would look neat and good.
-In every page, the actions in those brackets also play an important role in occupying a panel along with the dialogues. So it doesn't matter if a whole page is only consisting of actions. Dialogues ain't matter much in a chapter or a page.
amarusboobs
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Some people say that Jariaya shouldn't be revived, but I am really glad he was ;_; + ****ing rep for you KCM, you have did it again!
Thank you very much kind sir =D, Yeah Jirayia's revival could be troublesome, but this is Orochimaru we are talking about
Sorry, I just run out of idea with kakashi vs Obito part, but wanted to insert them as Kishi can't drag lack of them on screen time forever
Yeah, I know already some people pointed me Obito vs Kakashi part already, Recycling this part may be trully annoying I seeAbout the prediction including the matter...... it was awesome to continue till the end. The story the way you took it to Jiraiya's revival was good enough. That made me to think about Orochimaru's master plan or change of heart or betrayal.
Technical problems :-Frankly, it's a bad impression when you put Kakashi vs Obito again and again in the middle pages.
-The length of the prediction with respect to the content in every page was too much.
-If you suspend the Kakashi vs Obito part for some chapters and manage the remaining content in 17 pages along with appropriate amount per page then it would look neat and good.
-In every page, the actions in those brackets also play an important role in occupying a panel along with the dialogues. So it doesn't matter if a whole page is only consisting of actions. Dialogues ain't matter much in a chapter or a page.
As always I put too much content per page, well what can I say this is really hard to use fitting amount of content in each page =D
That is true with dialogs but I didn't notice this before, well I won't make same mistakes again
Thanks a lot friend for listing me my mistakes I made in my prediction, also for giving me adivces how to avoid them, this is really helpful. I will improve on my next prediction at least won't make same mistakes again
ShadowCloneJutsu
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inoyamanaka98
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RelapseTherapy
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I really like it... great job... though none of the chapters will be that long or entertaining. Great Work
