[Predictions] Naruto Manga 634: Densetsu no Gakusei! The three legendary students!

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Hey all,

Here is my prediction for Naruto Chapter 634! I found it kind of challenging to write just because there's so much going on right now, there's just so many different things that can happen. I hope you enjoy! Rate/Rep/Comments are appreciated!

Thanks! :bye:
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KUCHIYOSE NO JUTSU!!


(The trio appears!!)

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Naruto Chapter 634: Densetsu no Gakusei! The three legendary students!


(Chapter starts off with the four hokage looking at the summoned beasts)

Hiruzen: That's..! (sees a vision of Jiraiya, Orochimaru and Tsunade)

Hashirama: Hahah wow!! Look at what strong prospects the village has!!

Tobirama: To have such incredible abilities at their age.. Hmph (smirks)

Minato: Naruto can even summon the great toads!? Jiraiya sure taught him well! (Smiles)

Hiruzen: The Sannin have trained.. The Three Legendary Students!!

(Scene shows Gamakichi looking around to figure out where he is. He looks over to see Sasuke on a giant snake)

Gamakichi: Eh? SHIT~ IT'S MANDA! (Turns and enters battle position)

Gamakichi: Yo! Naruto is that you?! What's the meaning of this? Why are you glowing??

Naruto: Of course it's me! I've just gotten stronger since last time we met! You look stronger too 'Kichi, but there's no time to play catch up at the moment. Right now our opponent is the Juubi, not him!

Gamakichi: You can't just summon me so close to that wretched snake!

Sasuke: You can relax, the real Manda was killed by my hands. This is just a cloned version of him.

Gamakichi: Dead? Well that's a relief. Hm (Looks over at the Juubi) I see.. (Thinks: This is what the Great Sage has forseen.. )

Katsuya: Sakura, What is this..? Where is Katsuyu and Tsunade?

Sakura: ? (Thinks: Tsunade must have already summoned Katsuyu..) I don't know, Katsuya, but we are in the middle of a great battle against the Juubi. Right now our main focus is to treat the casualties. Please tend to the injured shinobi right away !

Katsuya: .. As you wish, Sakura! (breaks off into little clones and starts healing the injured shinobi)

Naruto: (Thinks: Awesome Sakura, now I don't have to focus so much on protecting everyone!)

Sakura: (Smiles) Now's your chance, Naruto and Sasuke!

Sasuke: Don't get in my way, Naruto!

Naruto: Yeah right Sasuke we'll see who gets in whose way! 'Kichi, think you can get me past these beasts?

Gamakichi: Heh.. it is my destiny, Naruto!

Sasuke: Follow my lead! (Bursts towards the giant Juubi clones and starts smashing and biting them apart)

Naruto: HEY!! You cheated! Let's go 'Kichi!

(Gamakichi jumps and is shown slicing up some of the giant Juubi clones)

Naruto: Sasuke, if we can get past these monsters we can land a direct attack at the Juubi!

Sasuke: Right! (Sasuke's snake launches Sasuke forward over the Juubi clones and he starts running toward the Juubi)

Naruto: Gamakichi, I put my trust in you!

Gamakichi: Yoshhha! (Spins and throws Naruto forward with Sasuke, then with his sword he slices a huge Juubi clone in half)

Sakura: We can still assist them! Let's go Katsuya!

(Katsuya spits acid at the Juubi clones and they are shown melting away)

(Naruto and Sasuke run side by side dodging many of the attacks that the clones are throwing at them)


Kiba: MAN what showoffs! Let's show them that we can hold our own guys! (shows Konoha 11 fighting the smaller Juubi clones)

(Naruto and Sasuke finally get close enough to the Juubi, as it stares at them coming forward, it see's an sillouette of the Sage of 6 paths)

Juubi: UUUOOOOOOGHHH!!

Minato: Don't let up! We've almost got it! (The Kages are shown focusing the seal to keep the Juubi down)

Sasuke: Chidori!!

Naruto: Rasengan!!

(Naruto and Sasuke attack the Juubi right in the eye and a huge explosion is shown!)

Sakura: They did it..! (smiles) Good job Sasuke! Naruto!

Hashirama Clone: What are your true intentions here Madara? You won't even get up and protect the Juubi that you've summoned!

Madara: Still talking to me through a clone hmn? Well.. If you only realized how pointless their attempts are, you would be sitting with me too, Hashirama.

Hashirama Clone: ?! What do you mean by that..!

Madara: The Juubi is entering it's final stage.. The fun is finally about to begin! (Evil Smile)

Chapter ends with the smoke clearing around the Juubi as it appears unharmed. It has broken the restraints and has curled it's tails together forming the shape of a ball.

Naruto + Sasuke: ?!

The Juubi takes it's final form!
 
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This is my favourite part of your predictions.=D Good one!
Haha thanks dude!

Nice predictions. xd
Thank you!

Good prediction but i didn't like the fact that you put Sasuke's Snake as clone of Manda , he must be the son of Manda.
Yeah I thought of that, but I made it a clone due to the fact that Sasuke killed Manda. If you remember, Manda cursed Sasuke in his last moments and I don't think think that Manda's son would want to cooperate with Sasuke after that. Just my personal opinion, but thanks!

nice Prediction
Thank you!
 

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Man it would have been cool if Naruto went in SM and got Kichi sword and jumped up and sliced the Juubi while sasuke chidori/amaterasu's the sword <3
That would be awesome :D
i felt this prediction bit rushed but it's plot going a correct direction, though it would be impossible if sasuke and naruto attackin juubi with their ordinary technic overall i like it :D
 
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Haha thanks dude!
Yeah I thought of that, but I made it a clone due to the fact that Sasuke killed Manda. If you remember, Manda cursed Sasuke in his last moments and I don't think think that Manda's son would want to cooperate with Sasuke after that. Just my personal opinion, but thanks!
Well thought. As expected, I really enjoy your predictions.
 
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Excellent prediction ;) but a bit shot in my opinion

keep it up :win:

Still you can improve on:

- adding emotions to characters while they are thinking or speaking something, I know it may be hard. However it makes readers even more sympathetic about characters and care about them, which further pull readers's attention to read it. Example(Angry)(sad)(smiks)(smiles)(laugh)(mad)(enraged)(dissapointed)(annoyed)etc.

- Make action more detailed, so readers can picture action of manga panel in their mind while reading your prediction. (For example: Naruto and Gamikichi jump high as powerfull shockwave came from they were standing. etc.)

- Add some descriptions of surrondings(For example: Raindrops began to fall from sky, lightining occured at sky, Wind blowing everyone away, Slight wind moving charactr's hair, ground was cracking, ground was shaking etc. )

- Describe exactly states of characters(For example: Shinobi was sweatdropping/shaking/quivering/panting/smilling/made rape face/serious etc.)

- You can add pages sections to split your entire script in pages sections, which can allow reader to read easier and visualize each Manga page, when you add good descriptions of actions or dialogs creating manga panels effects.

- Sound effects would be nice addition too :), check ahhimane prediticon to see how it should be done :hooray:
 
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Man it would have been cool if Naruto went in SM and got Kichi sword and jumped up and sliced the Juubi while sasuke chidori/amaterasu's the sword <3
LOL that would be crazy!

Great prediction
Thank you!

That would be awesome :D
i felt this prediction bit rushed but it's plot going a correct direction, though it would be impossible if sasuke and naruto attackin juubi with their ordinary technic overall i like it :D
Thanks!

Well thought. As expected, I really enjoy your predictions.
Thanks man!

good work keep it up
Thank you

Real nice prediction !!
Thanks :)
 
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Excellent prediction ;) but a bit shot in my opinion

keep it up :win:

Still you can improve on:

- adding emotions to characters while they are thinking or speaking something, I know it may be hard. However it makes readers even more sympathetic about characters and care about them, which further pull readers's attention to read it. Example(Angry)(sad)(smiks)(smiles)(laugh)(mad)(enraged)(dissapointed)(annoyed)etc.

- Make action more detailed, so readers can picture action of manga panel in their mind while reading your prediction. (For example: Naruto and Gamikichi jump high as powerfull shockwave came from they were standing. etc.)

- Add some descriptions of surrondings(For example: Raindrops began to fall from sky, lightining occured at sky, Wind blowing everyone away, Slight wind moving charactr's hair, ground was cracking, ground was shaking etc. )

- Describe exactly states of characters(For example: Shinobi was sweatdropping/shaking/quivering/panting/smilling/made rape face/serious etc.)

- You can add pages sections to split your entire script in pages sections, which can allow reader to read easier and visualize each Manga page, when you add good descriptions of actions or dialogs creating manga panels effects.

- Sound effects would be nice addition too :), check ahhimane prediticon to see how it should be done :hooray:
Haha I write these while I'm at work so that's why they're kinda short not so descriptive. I really enjoy yours and ahhimanes well descriptive predictions but I think my style is more straight to the point. Thanks for your advice I appreciate it!
 
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