I really like to read your honest and detailed feedback which conatains criticism as well. It help me improve on my mistakes or improve even further some aspects.It was a nice read.
But you stretched it too long this time.
I don't know why you gave Senjuu Sage mode to Tobirama. He did nothing using it. If you used it for Tobirama to hold the seal then it proves that Hiruzen > Sage mode Tobirama.
Last three pages were totally not required.
Kakashi and Obito's dialogues were too much for their characters.
Other than that, I can't say anything bro![]()
Well You didn't list too much, so that mean this predicitons is quite good and well constucted, that what I am getting from your feedback, am I right ?
Thank you very much my dear friend
