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NARUTO : Good!! Team 7..(slamming his left fist on his right hand palm).. is reborn now!!
SASUKE : .....
SAKURA : .....
SAKURA : Kakashi Sensei will be happy to see the team together once again.
MINATO : [ Kakashi must be their sensei. Where would he be now? ]
SFX : ROAR!!!!
JUUBI : Grrraaaaaaahhhhhhh!!! (trying to lift his tails)
(Scene change to other dimension)
OBITO : (lowers head and laughs) So you won't give up? Then I have to tear apart your heart to cut off those memories then!!
KAKASHI : ?!! [ Release!! ] (gets out of Genjutsu) ?!!
(Obito close to him with a kunai and is about to swipe hard)
OBITO : I'll start with that eye of yours!!
(moves his hand towards Kakashi's Sharingan to damage it)
(edge of the kunai is focussed)
SFX : SLASH!!
OBITO : (blood splashes on his face) ...
SFX : DRIP! DRIP!! DRIP!!!
(Blood falls on the floor)
(An inclined cut with respect to Kakashi's previous cut on his eye is shown in the dark)
OBITO : You're ha- ?!! (feels the push on his hand coming through the kunai) (blinks his eyes to see clearly)
KAKASHI : (panting) Obito...no matter what...(pushes Obito and his kunai still intact back into the light) I won't let you cut me off from those memories!! (His Sharingan is focussed glowing in the dark)
(Kakashi comes out of the dark with the kunai cutting the flesh of his left hand)
OBITO : (angry face) ....
(Kakashi jolt his hand against Obito's kunai and with blinding Obito's vision...)
SFX : GRIP!!
SFX : ZOOOOP!!!
SFX : THUD!!!
(A straight full forced punch on Obito's left face)
OBITO : (shocked face) Gahhh?!! (blood is thrown out of his mouth with a distorted face)
(Kakashi's right fist intact on Obito's face while holding back his left hand along his waist and advancing towards Obito)
(Obito holds himself against the punch)
SFX : THUDDD!!!!
(Simultaneously, Kakashi lifts himself and jumps in the air and lands a hard kick right on Obito's right face with his left leg)
OBITO : (eyes gets closed with the impact) Gyahhhhh!!
(Obito's head is shaken completely and rolls on the ground in the direction of the kick)
(Kakashi lands on the ground and holds himself from falling due to exhaustion with the help of his left hand)
(Turns his head to Obito's location)
(Gets up)
KAKASHI : Look at you! That eye of yours...Uchihas eyes meant everything to you (focus on Kakashi's Sharingan) You were depending on that eye so much that you forgot about your own strength.(remembers Obito using the eye drop into his eyes to awaken Sharingan) Its true that Uchihas were strong and known because of their ocular powers...but that eye of yours helped me to improve my physical strength and agility (remembers killing that earth style shinobi with his raikiri during Obito's death) Even Sasuke used them effectively..... In this place you can't use your intangibility to avoid the attacks. You have to depend on your physical strength to pass through me. Show me what you've become during these period.
SFX : SLIDE....
OBITO : (laughs) Heheheheh (lifts himself from the ground) Your words make me laugh. (laughs madly while standing) Hahaaaaahaa....who cares for the Uchihas (warms up his arms, shoulder and neck) I murdered them all by my own hands. And Sasuke...he's just a pawn for me. (raises both his hands along the waist) I'm not weak like before.
KAKASHI : ......
OBITO : You want to see what I've become so far? I'll show you.
(Zooms in on Obito's Mangekyo Sharingan started rolling)
(The rolling of the MS stops, changing the MS to Sasuke's EMS as the scene changes)
(The scene zooms out on the battlefield)
(Dust flowing with the wind with the roar of the Juubi)
SFX : SLAM!! SLAM!! SLAM!!
(Juubi slams his hand together and then slams its tails on the ground to forcibly lift off those Gate of Great God)
JUUBI : Groaahhhhh!!!
HASHIRAMA : Tsk... Damn that monster.
SA : (shaking) ?!!
RANDOM SHINOBI : How strong is that thing?
(Focus on Second, Third and Fourth Hokage)
(The tails starts growing in the size big enough to throw off the Gates)
SA : ?!!
RANDOM SHINOBI : He just blew off the gates like twigs.
NARUTO/SAKURA/SASUKE : ?!!
NARUTO : Sasuke get ready!! Sakura, are you ready?
SAKURA : I need a little more time.
NARUTO : We'll buy you some time then.
(Naruto goes into KCM)
SFX : Zoooooom! GLOW.
SASUKE : So that's your new outfit. Is there anything else you can do apart from changing clothes? Or you're still the loser?
NARUTO : O_O Heh...Don't crack shitty jokes at this time. There's lot many things I want to show you. [ At least then, you'll acknowledge me as your equal. ] (grins)
SASUKE : Hmm. (grins)
SAKURA : [ Is he really the same Sasuke we knew in the past? ]
MADARA : Hmm? (looks at Sasuke's EMS) [ Too many lose knot in my plan. Did he left him purposely? ] Hey Uchiha kid.
SASUKE : ?!! [ Uchiha kid? So that's Uchiha Madara. ]
MADARA : Show me your potential....What are you capable of....that you were left alive?
SASUKE : ?!! (remembers)
[
ITACHI : The only reason I played the role of the brother you wanted me to be...was to measure your abilities, your potential, for myself.
]
NARUTO : Hey Sasuke? Don't get mocked by him.
SASUKE : (looking at Madara but talking to Naruto) You think I'll get carried away with such words?
SFX : BAM!! BAM!!
EVERYONE : ?!!
(Juubi is shown slamming his hands and tails on the seal to break through)
(The sealing wall is shown shaking)
HASHIRAMA/TOBIRAMA/HIRUZEN/MINATO : ?!!
GAI : ?!! The Juubi isn't affected by the seal. What kind of monster he is?
MADARA : Hey Hashirama!! Aren't you strong enough to hold the Juubi? I hoped you'd be able to handle him alone.
TOBIRAMA/HIRUZEN/MINATO : ....
HASHIRAMA : You dumbass. You're not even stronger than me and you want to become the Juubi's Jinchuriki?
MADARA : (trolled face) ..... (then smiles) Still think I'm same as before. Huh?
SFX : CRACK!! CRACK!!
RANDOM SHINOBI : Huh?!!
(The cracks connected)
(Juubi slams his hands and tails one more time)
SFX : BAM!!
SFX : TSSSHHHHSHSHSHHHH!!
(The sealing barrier breaks from all sides like a mirror and then into pieces and fades away while falling)
JUUBI : Groahhhhhhhhh!!!
(Juubi frees himself....)
SFX : SLAM!!!
(Slams his tails on the ground over a wide area)
(The ground around him gets destroyed completely throwing evryone away)
SHINOBIS : Gahh!!!
(Dust spreads all over the battlefield with the speed of the impact)
SFX : RAISE!! RAISE!! RAISE!! RAISE!!
MADARA : Still playing with toys.
SFX : BELL SOUND!!
(Three huge Rashomons are raised from three directions by Second, Third and Fourth Hokage)
(And a huge thick wall and huge length of wood is raised infront of Juubi thus protecting the Shinobis)
(Juubi destroys the Rashomons and the wooden wall with its tails)
(Out of the dust a huge bird flies out along with Sasuke on it)
(The hawk takes Sasuke high in the air)
(Naruto's clones takes everyone near him away from the chaos)
NARUTO : [ He's going for it. ]
(The hawk then approaches towards the juubi)
(Juubi raises his tails to attack the hawk)
(The hawk dodges Juubi's tails while advancing)
SASUKE : (zooms in on his closed eyes) ......
SFX : FLOW
SASUKE : (blood flows from his eyes and instantly opens wide) Amaterasu!!
(A huge circle of black flames is created in the midair and falls on the ground covering a huge area surrounding the Juubi)
MADARA : ?!! That's Amaterasu. That kid knows how to use it.
(Some of the flames stick to the Juubi's tails during the attack on the hawk)
(Juubi tries to extinguish the flames with its tails but the tails catches fire)
(Juubi screams in agony)
SFX : HIGH ROATATION!!
(Out of the surrounding dust, several Rasen Shurikens are hurled towards the Juubi by the clones of Naruto)
MADARA : ?!! (jumps off from the cliff)
HOKAGES : ?!!
SA : ?!!
(The shurikens passes through the wall of Amaterasu taking along with it)
(The flames are expanding because of the wind as they are heading towards the Juubi)
(The black flame covered shurikens hits Juubi from all sides and expands into huge spheres of wind mixed Amaterasu creating an unparalleled shape of black and bluish white pattern covering the Juubi)
(Juubi screams aloud in agony because of the burning skin)
(Everyone witnesses Juubi's awful situation)
HASHIRAMA : What a team work.
TOBIRAMA : That's Uchiha's inextinguishable flames.
HIRUZEN : They've grown a lot. (grins)
MINATO : He modified the rasengan. That's my son.
???? : Shinra Tensei!!!
(Juubi's eye glows)
(An imaginary sphere forms inside the huge burning figure and grows throwing the black flames away from the Juubi's body. The technique is used at a lower level just to throw off the flames from Juubi's body)
NARUTO : That's the rinnegan ability (remembers Nagato using it to free himself from Itachi's Amaterasu)
(The black flames falls over the battlefield)
(Some of the shinobis gets hit with the black flames)
(Simultaneously Tobirama raises a hugh wall of water covering the Juubi to protect the shinobis from the black flames)
(The shinobis screams in pain)
(Most of the shinobis hit by the flames dies)
NARUTO : Hey Sasuke. We're in a big problem here.
(Sasuke flies over the affected area and extinguishes the black flames readily from the shinobis)
(Some of the shinobis still remains alive after the black flames are extinguished, but are in a really bad shape)
VICTIM SHINOBIS : (screaming in pain) Arghh!!! Gahhh!!
(Some of the bodies are totally fried up like meat)
SAKURA : (looking at the condition) [ A little more time.... ]
NARUTO : Sakura!! we need you here (pointing to a badly burned shinobi)
SAKURA : I'm almost done now.
(The water wall gets steamed out because of the black flames and the clears the image of the Juubi)
(There are burned marks on most of the Juubi's body)
MADARA : Thanks to you. I got to get a hold of the Juubi. Uchiha kid and Kyuubi kid.
NARUTO/SASUKE : ?!!
SAKURA : ?!!
HOKAGES : ?!!
(The picture is zoomed out showing Madara on the top of the Juubi connected with the cord like previously)
SAKURA : Finished. (bits her thumb) (makes handsigns) (slams hand on the ground) Kuchiyose on Jutsu!!
(The area bursts into smoke)
(Sakura blooms)
(What is Sakura's Ninja way?)
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NARUTO : Good!! Team 7..(slamming his left fist on his right hand palm).. is reborn now!!
SASUKE : .....
SAKURA : .....
SAKURA : Kakashi Sensei will be happy to see the team together once again.
MINATO : [ Kakashi must be their sensei. Where would he be now? ]
SFX : ROAR!!!!
JUUBI : Grrraaaaaaahhhhhhh!!! (trying to lift his tails)
(Scene change to other dimension)
OBITO : (lowers head and laughs) So you won't give up? Then I have to tear apart your heart to cut off those memories then!!
KAKASHI : ?!! [ Release!! ] (gets out of Genjutsu) ?!!
(Obito close to him with a kunai and is about to swipe hard)
OBITO : I'll start with that eye of yours!!
(moves his hand towards Kakashi's Sharingan to damage it)
(edge of the kunai is focussed)
SFX : SLASH!!
OBITO : (blood splashes on his face) ...
SFX : DRIP! DRIP!! DRIP!!!
(Blood falls on the floor)
(An inclined cut with respect to Kakashi's previous cut on his eye is shown in the dark)
OBITO : You're ha- ?!! (feels the push on his hand coming through the kunai) (blinks his eyes to see clearly)
KAKASHI : (panting) Obito...no matter what...(pushes Obito and his kunai still intact back into the light) I won't let you cut me off from those memories!! (His Sharingan is focussed glowing in the dark)
(Kakashi comes out of the dark with the kunai cutting the flesh of his left hand)
OBITO : (angry face) ....
(Kakashi jolt his hand against Obito's kunai and with blinding Obito's vision...)
SFX : GRIP!!
SFX : ZOOOOP!!!
SFX : THUD!!!
(A straight full forced punch on Obito's left face)
OBITO : (shocked face) Gahhh?!! (blood is thrown out of his mouth with a distorted face)
(Kakashi's right fist intact on Obito's face while holding back his left hand along his waist and advancing towards Obito)
(Obito holds himself against the punch)
SFX : THUDDD!!!!
(Simultaneously, Kakashi lifts himself and jumps in the air and lands a hard kick right on Obito's right face with his left leg)
OBITO : (eyes gets closed with the impact) Gyahhhhh!!
(Obito's head is shaken completely and rolls on the ground in the direction of the kick)
(Kakashi lands on the ground and holds himself from falling due to exhaustion with the help of his left hand)
(Turns his head to Obito's location)
(Gets up)
KAKASHI : Look at you! That eye of yours...Uchihas eyes meant everything to you (focus on Kakashi's Sharingan) You were depending on that eye so much that you forgot about your own strength.(remembers Obito using the eye drop into his eyes to awaken Sharingan) Its true that Uchihas were strong and known because of their ocular powers...but that eye of yours helped me to improve my physical strength and agility (remembers killing that earth style shinobi with his raikiri during Obito's death) Even Sasuke used them effectively..... In this place you can't use your intangibility to avoid the attacks. You have to depend on your physical strength to pass through me. Show me what you've become during these period.
SFX : SLIDE....
OBITO : (laughs) Heheheheh (lifts himself from the ground) Your words make me laugh. (laughs madly while standing) Hahaaaaahaa....who cares for the Uchihas (warms up his arms, shoulder and neck) I murdered them all by my own hands. And Sasuke...he's just a pawn for me. (raises both his hands along the waist) I'm not weak like before.
KAKASHI : ......
OBITO : You want to see what I've become so far? I'll show you.
(Zooms in on Obito's Mangekyo Sharingan started rolling)
(The rolling of the MS stops, changing the MS to Sasuke's EMS as the scene changes)
(The scene zooms out on the battlefield)
(Dust flowing with the wind with the roar of the Juubi)
SFX : SLAM!! SLAM!! SLAM!!
(Juubi slams his hand together and then slams its tails on the ground to forcibly lift off those Gate of Great God)
JUUBI : Groaahhhhh!!!
HASHIRAMA : Tsk... Damn that monster.
SA : (shaking) ?!!
RANDOM SHINOBI : How strong is that thing?
(Focus on Second, Third and Fourth Hokage)
(The tails starts growing in the size big enough to throw off the Gates)
SA : ?!!
RANDOM SHINOBI : He just blew off the gates like twigs.
NARUTO/SAKURA/SASUKE : ?!!
NARUTO : Sasuke get ready!! Sakura, are you ready?
SAKURA : I need a little more time.
NARUTO : We'll buy you some time then.
(Naruto goes into KCM)
SFX : Zoooooom! GLOW.
SASUKE : So that's your new outfit. Is there anything else you can do apart from changing clothes? Or you're still the loser?
NARUTO : O_O Heh...Don't crack shitty jokes at this time. There's lot many things I want to show you. [ At least then, you'll acknowledge me as your equal. ] (grins)
SASUKE : Hmm. (grins)
SAKURA : [ Is he really the same Sasuke we knew in the past? ]
MADARA : Hmm? (looks at Sasuke's EMS) [ Too many lose knot in my plan. Did he left him purposely? ] Hey Uchiha kid.
SASUKE : ?!! [ Uchiha kid? So that's Uchiha Madara. ]
MADARA : Show me your potential....What are you capable of....that you were left alive?
SASUKE : ?!! (remembers)
[
ITACHI : The only reason I played the role of the brother you wanted me to be...was to measure your abilities, your potential, for myself.
]
NARUTO : Hey Sasuke? Don't get mocked by him.
SASUKE : (looking at Madara but talking to Naruto) You think I'll get carried away with such words?
SFX : BAM!! BAM!!
EVERYONE : ?!!
(Juubi is shown slamming his hands and tails on the seal to break through)
(The sealing wall is shown shaking)
HASHIRAMA/TOBIRAMA/HIRUZEN/MINATO : ?!!
GAI : ?!! The Juubi isn't affected by the seal. What kind of monster he is?
MADARA : Hey Hashirama!! Aren't you strong enough to hold the Juubi? I hoped you'd be able to handle him alone.
TOBIRAMA/HIRUZEN/MINATO : ....
HASHIRAMA : You dumbass. You're not even stronger than me and you want to become the Juubi's Jinchuriki?
MADARA : (trolled face) ..... (then smiles) Still think I'm same as before. Huh?
SFX : CRACK!! CRACK!!
RANDOM SHINOBI : Huh?!!
(The cracks connected)
(Juubi slams his hands and tails one more time)
SFX : BAM!!
SFX : TSSSHHHHSHSHSHHHH!!
(The sealing barrier breaks from all sides like a mirror and then into pieces and fades away while falling)
JUUBI : Groahhhhhhhhh!!!
(Juubi frees himself....)
SFX : SLAM!!!
(Slams his tails on the ground over a wide area)
(The ground around him gets destroyed completely throwing evryone away)
SHINOBIS : Gahh!!!
(Dust spreads all over the battlefield with the speed of the impact)
SFX : RAISE!! RAISE!! RAISE!! RAISE!!
MADARA : Still playing with toys.
SFX : BELL SOUND!!
(Three huge Rashomons are raised from three directions by Second, Third and Fourth Hokage)
(And a huge thick wall and huge length of wood is raised infront of Juubi thus protecting the Shinobis)
(Juubi destroys the Rashomons and the wooden wall with its tails)
(Out of the dust a huge bird flies out along with Sasuke on it)
(The hawk takes Sasuke high in the air)
(Naruto's clones takes everyone near him away from the chaos)
NARUTO : [ He's going for it. ]
(The hawk then approaches towards the juubi)
(Juubi raises his tails to attack the hawk)
(The hawk dodges Juubi's tails while advancing)
SASUKE : (zooms in on his closed eyes) ......
SFX : FLOW
SASUKE : (blood flows from his eyes and instantly opens wide) Amaterasu!!
(A huge circle of black flames is created in the midair and falls on the ground covering a huge area surrounding the Juubi)
MADARA : ?!! That's Amaterasu. That kid knows how to use it.
(Some of the flames stick to the Juubi's tails during the attack on the hawk)
(Juubi tries to extinguish the flames with its tails but the tails catches fire)
(Juubi screams in agony)
SFX : HIGH ROATATION!!
(Out of the surrounding dust, several Rasen Shurikens are hurled towards the Juubi by the clones of Naruto)
MADARA : ?!! (jumps off from the cliff)
HOKAGES : ?!!
SA : ?!!
(The shurikens passes through the wall of Amaterasu taking along with it)
(The flames are expanding because of the wind as they are heading towards the Juubi)
(The black flame covered shurikens hits Juubi from all sides and expands into huge spheres of wind mixed Amaterasu creating an unparalleled shape of black and bluish white pattern covering the Juubi)
(Juubi screams aloud in agony because of the burning skin)
(Everyone witnesses Juubi's awful situation)
HASHIRAMA : What a team work.
TOBIRAMA : That's Uchiha's inextinguishable flames.
HIRUZEN : They've grown a lot. (grins)
MINATO : He modified the rasengan. That's my son.
???? : Shinra Tensei!!!
(Juubi's eye glows)
(An imaginary sphere forms inside the huge burning figure and grows throwing the black flames away from the Juubi's body. The technique is used at a lower level just to throw off the flames from Juubi's body)
NARUTO : That's the rinnegan ability (remembers Nagato using it to free himself from Itachi's Amaterasu)
(The black flames falls over the battlefield)
(Some of the shinobis gets hit with the black flames)
(Simultaneously Tobirama raises a hugh wall of water covering the Juubi to protect the shinobis from the black flames)
(The shinobis screams in pain)
(Most of the shinobis hit by the flames dies)
NARUTO : Hey Sasuke. We're in a big problem here.
(Sasuke flies over the affected area and extinguishes the black flames readily from the shinobis)
(Some of the shinobis still remains alive after the black flames are extinguished, but are in a really bad shape)
VICTIM SHINOBIS : (screaming in pain) Arghh!!! Gahhh!!
(Some of the bodies are totally fried up like meat)
SAKURA : (looking at the condition) [ A little more time.... ]
NARUTO : Sakura!! we need you here (pointing to a badly burned shinobi)
SAKURA : I'm almost done now.
(The water wall gets steamed out because of the black flames and the clears the image of the Juubi)
(There are burned marks on most of the Juubi's body)
MADARA : Thanks to you. I got to get a hold of the Juubi. Uchiha kid and Kyuubi kid.
NARUTO/SASUKE : ?!!
SAKURA : ?!!
HOKAGES : ?!!
(The picture is zoomed out showing Madara on the top of the Juubi connected with the cord like previously)
SAKURA : Finished. (bits her thumb) (makes handsigns) (slams hand on the ground) Kuchiyose on Jutsu!!
(The area bursts into smoke)
(Sakura blooms)
(What is Sakura's Ninja way?)
