Unlike others, you put everything in pages. That's a good way to counter comments like "Too long" "didn't read lol" blah blah...But still it seemed too much for a page. The content per page went on increasing as the page number goes on. That doesn't matter because that's technical problem.
Back to the prediction.
You covered all the scenes of the Hokages, Kakashi vs Obito. Thanks to you for pulling Kakashi and Obito out from lazy TnJ and showed an interesting battle.
And a surprise battle on the battlefield as well.
The further content (after Kakashi vs Obito stuff and a little reunion of the Hokages and Madara) you should have saved it for your next continuation. That made it long even for 17 pages.
Other than that, you served everyone 's dialogue in proper amount. No too much or not too less. That's what kept me reading till the end.
Hope you're getting what I wanted to say. Even I got carried away with my prediction with all those flashbacks.