Legend:
[Minato's blonde hair are shown blown away behind his head as he keep calm face expression]
[His both arms extended forward with both hands connected together formed in triangle shape(his index fingers and thumbs of both hands connected together and between them his special kunai placed).]
[In middle top panel is shown Huge seal in circular shape positioned vertically in air few inches above ground]
[Dust is floating around ground close to seal]
[In top left panel Edo Tobirama is shown standing at right side of ditch made in earth created by flying Jubi's bijuudama.]
[Tobirama's silver hair are shown blown away behind his head as he keep calm face expression]
[His both arms are extended forward with both hands connected together formed in triangle shape(same as Minato's)]
[Bottom right panel Huge seal in circular shape positioned vertically in air fade away]
Alliance Shinobi(shocked): Bijuudama vanished ?!
Alliance Shinobi 2(concerned): But where ?
SFX: SHSHSH
[Juubi's bijuudama is shown slowly comming out from circular seal and fly high into sky]
[Everyone rise their heads and look up, watching as bijuudama come out from glowing in circular shape seal ]
Naruto: *That Bijuudama has huge radius ?!* Everyone! fall on ground fast !
SFX: WSSS
[Suddenly bright light fill entire sky over battlefield blinding everyone as all shinobi alliances fall on ground]
?????????: Wood release: Wood dome pretection !
???????: Earth release: Earth barrier !
Everyone: ?!
[Huge explosion in shape of gigantic sphere reaching almost ground occur.]
[Powerfull heavy blows of winds push everything and everyone in all directions.]
[Ground being to shake beneath shinobi bodies from power of impact.]
SFX: FSHSHSH
[Explosion of Bijuudama cause dust to rise from ground floating around completly covering battlefield.]
SFX: TSHTSH
[Broken pieces of wood and rocks are shown flying in different directions]
[Some pieces of wood and rocks crash into dome made of wood and earth]
Alliance Shinobi(slowly stand up then raise his head to look up): Ugh... ?!
Alliance Shinobi 2(slowly stand up then raise his head to look up): That it ?!
[Big panel from bird eye view at huge and wide dome made of wood covering everyone with holes scattered around where smoke is comming from.]
[Under dome made of wood, huge and wide dome made of earth is visible with holes scattered around it and smoke comming from it.]
[Under earth dome Monster made of chakra is shown protecting many shinobi along with giant snakes falling dead on ground around.]
Madara(look around): This was quite powerfull able to wipe out one country at one blow from explosion radius at leats I can say, heh ?!(spot Huge dome made of wood) That is
[Madara's face is not shown, only his back as his body is shaking]
Madara(rape face): Hashirama ?!
?????????: Wood release: release !
???????: Earth release: release !
[Remains of dome made of wood and earth are shown slowly moving down and sink into ground]
[Big snakes dissapear one by one and Monster made of chakra dissapear as well]
[Smoke completly cover small part of battlefield from where voices were heard]
Madara: *Multi-layered dome and then even used snakes as shield to protect Shinobi. However the most interesting is that I saw monster made of chakra for brief moment, Sussano ?!* very clever tactic and powerfull abilities
[Madara bottom part of face is shown as smirk appear on his lips.]
[Edo Minato is shown at left side of ditch made in ground by Juubi's bijuudama then disappear in smoke. ]
[Edo Tobirama is shown at right side of ditch with his head turned to where Edo Minato were as smirk appear on his face]
Edo Tobirama: *He was fast enough to create Shadow clone for us to use Space time barrier technique, while he appeared to help his son.* Clever Man...
Sakura(read characters written on Minato's coat): *F O U R T H, FOURTH ?!* Fourth Hokage ?! (recall Naruto calling this man his dad)
[Flashback]
Minato: Was I late
Naruto: No... you were right on time, Dad !
[/Flashback]
Sakura(snap out from her thoughts): Naruto, did you say dad to Fourth Hokage ?!
Naruto: Yeah..., ?! oh sorry I forgot to say you that, my bad...(moves his hair with his hand nervously)
[Edo Minato is back are shown as he slowly stand up from ground with his kunai in his right hand.]
[Sakura pat Naruto in back of head]
Naruto: Oww ! for what (gentle rub his head)
Sakura(mad): Naruto, how could you ?! I didn't know you was Fourth Hokage's son
Naruto: sorry but I don't have time to tell you, besides I don't have to announce to everyone that I am son of great Hokage, have I
Edo Minato(smirks): I was worried Naruto...
Naruto: or Son of saviour of The Word(smiles)
Edo Minato: but looks like you were doing well(smiles)
[Obito and Kakashi are shown in other dimenssion.]
Kakashi: That enough Obito, finish this genjutsu and let's settle this once and for all.
Obito(schocked): ?!
Kakashi(serious): You don't want to listen to me and I won't give up and join you, that is clear.
Obito(angry then become enraged): You fool, In this world nothing wait you other then pain...
Kakashi(angry and concerned): Even then I will be able to share my feelings with people I care about. Not like you who will talk to your illusions. I say it once time more and last, stop deny reallity Obito !
Obito: That is your last word Kakashi, I see... (lower his head)
Kakashi(stares at Obito calmly with his sharingan): *I know he caught me into Genjutsu and looks like I can't release myself from it via using my sharingan* This is only way then !
Obito: ?!
[Kakashi pull kunai from his pocket and hit himself in left hand with kunai]
SFX: TSHSH
[Obito is shown complelty schocked and caught off guard]
[Blood is shown dropping down on ground from Kakashi's left hand]
SFX: DRIP DRIP
[Suddenly image of Obito begin to dissolve to be replaced by Obito without hole in his heart]
[Kakashi open his eyes as he notices Obito hand reaching out for his sharingan]
Kakashi: What the ?!
(Kakashi lean at left side as he send powerfull kick to Obito's guts sending him backwards)
Kakashi(restoring his balance): *As I thought, he used genjutsu on me to make me join him. He used my raikiri for me to think that this hole was real and made by me...* Obito let's finish this once and for all
Obito: You will die, Kakashi !
[Kakashi and Obito take out and swallows shinobi pills as they continue their glare]
SFX: GULP
Kakashi(shouts angry): Your last hours are counted, Obito !
Obito(shouts angry): I will erase your existence, Kakashi !
(Kakashi and Obito are shown waving through few handseals)
(Obito takes deep breath and release fire stream at Kakashi while holding tiger seal)
Obito: Fire release: Fire stream
Kakashi: ?!
(Fire stream completly engulf place where Kakashi was, then slowly fade away)
SFX: SHSHSHS
[Kakashi is nowhere seen as Obito notices Kakashi abssence and look around nervously]
Obito: come out trash, stop hiding !
SFX: TRSHTRSH
(Suddenly Kakashi right hand come out from ground and catch Obito right leg.)
Kakashi: Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique ?!
(Suddenly Roots come out from Obito leg and come at Kakashi' right hand, with which Kakashi try to pull Obito into ground)
Kakashi: ?!
(roots stop moving as they slowly retreacts back into Obito's leg)
Obito: You thought that I would fall at such stupid trick, stop understimate me Kakashi !
(Kakashi suddenly jumps out behind Obito's back and try to kick him in back)
(Obito blocks Kakashi kick stepping at his side and catching Kakashi's leg with his right hand)
Kakashi: Bastard !
Obito: I will finish you trash !
(Obito and Kakashi are shown in close hand to hand combat exchanging their punches and kicks)
(Obito sprouts root which come out from his right sleeve and aim at Kakashi as he lean forward )
Obito: Wood release: Piercing root
SFX: WSSHH
(Kakashi activates Raikiri in his right hand as he aim at Obito's heart while leaning forward)
Kakashi: Raikiri !
SFX: CHICHICHIRI
Alliance Shinobi: That is...(spot his red armour) First Hokage-sama
Alliance Shinobi 2: This another one is...(look closer and spot old man in Hokage robes) Third Hokage-sama
Alliance Shinobi 3: But (spot Sasuke) there is enemy there (points at Sasuke)
Alliance Shinobi 4: There is another one too ! (spot Orochimaru ) and three peoples we don't have information on.
[Some Shinobi take out kunai and shurikens with some others pulling their hands together to prepare some handeals]
Alliance Shinobi: ?!
SFX: TSH
Naruto: Stop !, they are not enemies so please lower your weapons down
Alliance Shinobi: Naruto-sama, but ?!
Naruto: Naruto-sama ?!
Sasuke(smirks towards Naruto): You got quite nice reputation, dead last
Naruto: Sasuke bastard !
Orochimaru: *Naruto changed and grown up a lot from what I remember him..., interesting boy * (smirks)
[Minato is shown from Naruto back with proud face as tear fall down from his eye.]
Hiruzen: Hello Naruto, long time no see ,how are you ?!
Naruto: I am doing well, and you look good too
Hiruzen(cough): ehm...
[Everyone sweatdrop]
Naruto(smirks): yeah
Sasuke: ?! *Naruto is Fourth Hokage's son..., I see*
Tobirama: You fought against Madara... you are tough one...(smirks)
[Orochimaru comes towards Shinobi Alliance as he keep smirking]
Orochimaru: I came there to help you, so don't worry. I ressurected all four hokages but I give them free will to aid Shinobi Alliance against them ?!
[Suddenly Sussano sword is comming at Naruto and rest company]
SFX: two Metal clash sound
[Madara is shown in Sussano with suprised and curious face]
Madara: ?! *How can he ?!*
[Madara's Sussano sword is being shown blocked by another Sussano's sword]
Sasuke(enraged as he looks at him): Who are you ?!
Madara: ?!
Naruto: *so Sasuke doesn't know* he is reall Uchiha Madara, Sasuke !
Sasuke: Real Uchiha Madara ! but then *so that masked man called Tobi is imposter, I see...*
Minato: Obito ?!, * How that can be * He died in battle of Kanabi bridge where he was crushed by boulders
Madara(smirks malliciously): Unfortunetly he fell to my hideout and I opened his eyes
Minato: so that masked man was (pauses) Obito ?!
Naruto: Yes and he took Kakashi to other dimenssion to fight him
Minato: That bad... *that masked man was very strong shinobi* I am not sure if Kakashi handle him *nervous and serious*
Naruto: I believe in him besides he is my sensei(smiles)
Madara(interested): who are you and how can you use Sussano ?!
Sasuke: I am last living Uchiha and only one who stops you !
Madara: ?!
Madara(moves his eyes from Sasuke to Hashirama): Hashirama, fight me ! (rape face)
Hashirama: Ehh... You didn't change at all Madara. How are you doing my friend ?!
Tobirama(face palm): Oh boy, it begins again
Madara: I am good, very good. As you see I got your cells, and awake Rinenngan but that not all. I and my ally recreated Ten tails, and I fought against five kage but I left them in not-ok state (smirks)
Hashirama: ?!
Tobirama(turns to Hashirama): Brother, Didn't Orochimaru say that Tsunade is current Hokage ?!
Hashirama: ?!
Madara: Ahh... That was her name. I remeber her but she is laying down in almost death state cut in two parts by my wood release
Tobirama: Bastard ! ?! (feel powerfull aura then turns to Hashirama)
Hashirama(with death glare): I will never forgive you, Madara !, What did you do to her ?!
Madara(hides his smirks): well, I was doing a lot with her, it depends what you mean, friend (smiles)
Tobirama, Minato and Naruto: ?!
Tobirama: Actually I feel very weak source of chakra close to us..., there is even four more but even more weak...
Hashirama: ?!Take me there asap Tobirama !
Tobirama: But, Madara ?!
Sasuke: I will take care of Madara along with Orochimaru and rest Hokages until your return, First Hokage-sama and Second Hokage-sama
Madara: Big words for small boy, let's play then a little
Naruto: Look out Sasuke, he is very strong...
Sasuke: ...
[Tobirama and Hashirama dissapear]
Minato: speaking about strength..., I have gift for you Naruto (smiles)
(Minato comes to Naruto and put his hand at Naruto's stomach)
[Naruto's inner world]
(Minato appear where Kyuubi gate where, but nowhere can't spot gate.)
Minato: What the...
Naruto: Here dad !
(Minato look around and spot Naruto and behind him Kyuubi)
(Minato slowly walk towards them)
(suddenly Kurama is speaking as he is shown gathering chakra)
Kurama(sad and gulity): Welcome back Fourth Hokage... I am sorry for your death... it is all my fault
Naruto(looks sad): Kurama...
Minato(smiles): Heh. Kurama, yes. you don't have to be guilty Kurama, you was under genjtusu so I am not goona to blame you. Besides I am happy that you and Naruto are partners now and supporting each other
Naruto/Kurama(look at themselves then back at fourth and smile): hehe
Minato: So you met your mother Kushina, Naruto
Naruto: yeah, but Kurama and I are friends just recently
Kurama: It is true but we expierienced a lot positive feelings, don't we Naruto ?
Minato: Hehe, You are interacting with each other very well
Naruto: What is it, Kurama ?!
Kurama: It looks like Juubi is gathering huge amount of nature energy. I can already feel as nature is dying in around us... It is trying to reach it perfect form so it won't attack or move for some time.
Minato( become serious): Then we don't have time for chit chat for now. I want to give you back someting Kurama
Kurama: ?!
[Minato come closer to Kurama, then weaves through handseals as he rises his shirt to shows seal slowly opening up]
SFX: TRHRHRH
[Seal completly open up as suddenly Kurama Yin chakra come and sink into Kurama]
[Kurama begin glowing bright light as Minato is shown being proud]
Minato: You grown up a lot Naruto (smiles)
[/Naruto's inner world]
[Juubi's is shown evolving as black sphere slowly envelopes it closing for inside.]
END
So, what do you think about my prediction guys ?
Sorry for any grammar or typing mistakes
Should I wrote sequel to it ?
yes or no ?
- (actions)
- (emotions)
- [descriptions of scenery/surrondings]
- *thoughts*
- characters
- jutsu
- SFX : Sound effects
631 - Edo Hokages arrival
Edo Minato arrives !PAGE ONE
[In top right panel Edo Minato is shown standing at left side of ditch made in earth created by flying Juubi's bijuudama.] [Minato's blonde hair are shown blown away behind his head as he keep calm face expression]
[His both arms extended forward with both hands connected together formed in triangle shape(his index fingers and thumbs of both hands connected together and between them his special kunai placed).]
[In middle top panel is shown Huge seal in circular shape positioned vertically in air few inches above ground]
[Dust is floating around ground close to seal]
[In top left panel Edo Tobirama is shown standing at right side of ditch made in earth created by flying Jubi's bijuudama.]
[Tobirama's silver hair are shown blown away behind his head as he keep calm face expression]
[His both arms are extended forward with both hands connected together formed in triangle shape(same as Minato's)]
[Bottom right panel Huge seal in circular shape positioned vertically in air fade away]
Alliance Shinobi(shocked): Bijuudama vanished ?!
Alliance Shinobi 2(concerned): But where ?
PAGE TWO
[Huge seal in circular shape positioned diagonally forms in air high in sky]SFX: SHSHSH
[Juubi's bijuudama is shown slowly comming out from circular seal and fly high into sky]
[Everyone rise their heads and look up, watching as bijuudama come out from glowing in circular shape seal ]
Naruto: *That Bijuudama has huge radius ?!* Everyone! fall on ground fast !
SFX: WSSS
[Suddenly bright light fill entire sky over battlefield blinding everyone as all shinobi alliances fall on ground]
?????????: Wood release: Wood dome pretection !
???????: Earth release: Earth barrier !
Everyone: ?!
PAGE THREE
SFX: BOOOM [Huge explosion in shape of gigantic sphere reaching almost ground occur.]
[Powerfull heavy blows of winds push everything and everyone in all directions.]
[Ground being to shake beneath shinobi bodies from power of impact.]
SFX: FSHSHSH
[Explosion of Bijuudama cause dust to rise from ground floating around completly covering battlefield.]
SFX: TSHTSH
[Broken pieces of wood and rocks are shown flying in different directions]
[Some pieces of wood and rocks crash into dome made of wood and earth]
PAGE FOUR
[Some Shinobi are slowly opening their eyes as they rise their heads up while standing up. ]Alliance Shinobi(slowly stand up then raise his head to look up): Ugh... ?!
Alliance Shinobi 2(slowly stand up then raise his head to look up): That it ?!
[Big panel from bird eye view at huge and wide dome made of wood covering everyone with holes scattered around where smoke is comming from.]
[Under dome made of wood, huge and wide dome made of earth is visible with holes scattered around it and smoke comming from it.]
[Under earth dome Monster made of chakra is shown protecting many shinobi along with giant snakes falling dead on ground around.]
PAGE FIVE
[Close to Juubi location Madara is shown in Sussano Complete form]Madara(look around): This was quite powerfull able to wipe out one country at one blow from explosion radius at leats I can say, heh ?!(spot Huge dome made of wood) That is
[Madara's face is not shown, only his back as his body is shaking]
Madara(rape face): Hashirama ?!
?????????: Wood release: release !
???????: Earth release: release !
[Remains of dome made of wood and earth are shown slowly moving down and sink into ground]
[Big snakes dissapear one by one and Monster made of chakra dissapear as well]
[Smoke completly cover small part of battlefield from where voices were heard]
PAGE SIX
[Madara's back are shown turned to us]Madara: *Multi-layered dome and then even used snakes as shield to protect Shinobi. However the most interesting is that I saw monster made of chakra for brief moment, Sussano ?!* very clever tactic and powerfull abilities
[Madara bottom part of face is shown as smirk appear on his lips.]
[Edo Minato is shown at left side of ditch made in ground by Juubi's bijuudama then disappear in smoke. ]
[Edo Tobirama is shown at right side of ditch with his head turned to where Edo Minato were as smirk appear on his face]
Edo Tobirama: *He was fast enough to create Shadow clone for us to use Space time barrier technique, while he appeared to help his son.* Clever Man...
PAGE SEVEN
[Edo Minato is shown going to his special kunai being in ground, as his coat is falling down]Sakura(read characters written on Minato's coat): *F O U R T H, FOURTH ?!* Fourth Hokage ?! (recall Naruto calling this man his dad)
[Flashback]
Minato: Was I late
Naruto: No... you were right on time, Dad !
[/Flashback]
Sakura(snap out from her thoughts): Naruto, did you say dad to Fourth Hokage ?!
Naruto: Yeah..., ?! oh sorry I forgot to say you that, my bad...(moves his hair with his hand nervously)
[Edo Minato is back are shown as he slowly stand up from ground with his kunai in his right hand.]
[Sakura pat Naruto in back of head]
Naruto: Oww ! for what (gentle rub his head)
Sakura(mad): Naruto, how could you ?! I didn't know you was Fourth Hokage's son
Naruto: sorry but I don't have time to tell you, besides I don't have to announce to everyone that I am son of great Hokage, have I
PAGE EIGHT
[Edo Minato turn around to face Naruto and Sakura]Edo Minato(smirks): I was worried Naruto...
Naruto: or Son of saviour of The Word(smiles)
Edo Minato: but looks like you were doing well(smiles)
[Obito and Kakashi are shown in other dimenssion.]
Kakashi: That enough Obito, finish this genjutsu and let's settle this once and for all.
Obito(schocked): ?!
Kakashi(serious): You don't want to listen to me and I won't give up and join you, that is clear.
Obito(angry then become enraged): You fool, In this world nothing wait you other then pain...
Kakashi(angry and concerned): Even then I will be able to share my feelings with people I care about. Not like you who will talk to your illusions. I say it once time more and last, stop deny reallity Obito !
Obito: That is your last word Kakashi, I see... (lower his head)
PAGE NINE
Obito(rise his head up suddenly as he sent death glare to Kakashi): I wanted to give you chance but now... (shouts)There is nothing you can do Kakashi, to stop me !Kakashi(stares at Obito calmly with his sharingan): *I know he caught me into Genjutsu and looks like I can't release myself from it via using my sharingan* This is only way then !
Obito: ?!
[Kakashi pull kunai from his pocket and hit himself in left hand with kunai]
SFX: TSHSH
[Obito is shown complelty schocked and caught off guard]
[Blood is shown dropping down on ground from Kakashi's left hand]
SFX: DRIP DRIP
[Suddenly image of Obito begin to dissolve to be replaced by Obito without hole in his heart]
[Kakashi open his eyes as he notices Obito hand reaching out for his sharingan]
Kakashi: What the ?!
(Kakashi lean at left side as he send powerfull kick to Obito's guts sending him backwards)
Kakashi(restoring his balance): *As I thought, he used genjutsu on me to make me join him. He used my raikiri for me to think that this hole was real and made by me...* Obito let's finish this once and for all
Obito: You will die, Kakashi !
PAGE TEN
[Kakashi and Obito are shown taking battle stance as they stare at each other with serious glare][Kakashi and Obito take out and swallows shinobi pills as they continue their glare]
SFX: GULP
Kakashi(shouts angry): Your last hours are counted, Obito !
Obito(shouts angry): I will erase your existence, Kakashi !
(Kakashi and Obito are shown waving through few handseals)
(Obito takes deep breath and release fire stream at Kakashi while holding tiger seal)
Obito: Fire release: Fire stream
Kakashi: ?!
(Fire stream completly engulf place where Kakashi was, then slowly fade away)
SFX: SHSHSHS
[Kakashi is nowhere seen as Obito notices Kakashi abssence and look around nervously]
Obito: come out trash, stop hiding !
SFX: TRSHTRSH
(Suddenly Kakashi right hand come out from ground and catch Obito right leg.)
Kakashi: Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique ?!
(Suddenly Roots come out from Obito leg and come at Kakashi' right hand, with which Kakashi try to pull Obito into ground)
Kakashi: ?!
PAGE ELEVEN
(Kakashi free Obito's right leg from his tight grip and pull it back as he barerly avodis roots piercing his hand.)(roots stop moving as they slowly retreacts back into Obito's leg)
Obito: You thought that I would fall at such stupid trick, stop understimate me Kakashi !
(Kakashi suddenly jumps out behind Obito's back and try to kick him in back)
(Obito blocks Kakashi kick stepping at his side and catching Kakashi's leg with his right hand)
Kakashi: Bastard !
Obito: I will finish you trash !
(Obito and Kakashi are shown in close hand to hand combat exchanging their punches and kicks)
(Obito sprouts root which come out from his right sleeve and aim at Kakashi as he lean forward )
Obito: Wood release: Piercing root
SFX: WSSHH
(Kakashi activates Raikiri in his right hand as he aim at Obito's heart while leaning forward)
Kakashi: Raikiri !
SFX: CHICHICHIRI
PAGE TWELEVE
[Dust cloud fall down and smoke screen dissappear completly revealing seven figures ]Alliance Shinobi: That is...(spot his red armour) First Hokage-sama
Alliance Shinobi 2: This another one is...(look closer and spot old man in Hokage robes) Third Hokage-sama
Alliance Shinobi 3: But (spot Sasuke) there is enemy there (points at Sasuke)
Alliance Shinobi 4: There is another one too ! (spot Orochimaru ) and three peoples we don't have information on.
[Some Shinobi take out kunai and shurikens with some others pulling their hands together to prepare some handeals]
Alliance Shinobi: ?!
SFX: TSH
PAGE THIRTEEN
(Minato along with Naruto and Sakura land on right side of Orchimaru, Sasuke and Taka, while Tobirama land close to Hashirama too)Naruto: Stop !, they are not enemies so please lower your weapons down
Alliance Shinobi: Naruto-sama, but ?!
Naruto: Naruto-sama ?!
Sasuke(smirks towards Naruto): You got quite nice reputation, dead last
Naruto: Sasuke bastard !
Orochimaru: *Naruto changed and grown up a lot from what I remember him..., interesting boy * (smirks)
[Minato is shown from Naruto back with proud face as tear fall down from his eye.]
Hiruzen: Hello Naruto, long time no see ,how are you ?!
Naruto: I am doing well, and you look good too
Hiruzen(cough): ehm...
[Everyone sweatdrop]
PAGE FOURTEEN
Hashirama: So you are nine tails jinchurki, Fourth Hokage's son right ?!Naruto(smirks): yeah
Sasuke: ?! *Naruto is Fourth Hokage's son..., I see*
Tobirama: You fought against Madara... you are tough one...(smirks)
[Orochimaru comes towards Shinobi Alliance as he keep smirking]
Orochimaru: I came there to help you, so don't worry. I ressurected all four hokages but I give them free will to aid Shinobi Alliance against them ?!
[Suddenly Sussano sword is comming at Naruto and rest company]
SFX: two Metal clash sound
[Madara is shown in Sussano with suprised and curious face]
Madara: ?! *How can he ?!*
[Madara's Sussano sword is being shown blocked by another Sussano's sword]
Sasuke(enraged as he looks at him): Who are you ?!
Madara: ?!
Naruto: *so Sasuke doesn't know* he is reall Uchiha Madara, Sasuke !
Sasuke: Real Uchiha Madara ! but then *so that masked man called Tobi is imposter, I see...*
PAGE FIFTEEN
Madara(bored): Ahh... you are talking about Obito..., Yes I am not him and he went somehere with his friendMinato: Obito ?!, * How that can be * He died in battle of Kanabi bridge where he was crushed by boulders
Madara(smirks malliciously): Unfortunetly he fell to my hideout and I opened his eyes
Minato: so that masked man was (pauses) Obito ?!
Naruto: Yes and he took Kakashi to other dimenssion to fight him
Minato: That bad... *that masked man was very strong shinobi* I am not sure if Kakashi handle him *nervous and serious*
Naruto: I believe in him besides he is my sensei(smiles)
Madara(interested): who are you and how can you use Sussano ?!
Sasuke: I am last living Uchiha and only one who stops you !
Madara: ?!
Madara(moves his eyes from Sasuke to Hashirama): Hashirama, fight me ! (rape face)
Hashirama: Ehh... You didn't change at all Madara. How are you doing my friend ?!
Tobirama(face palm): Oh boy, it begins again
Madara: I am good, very good. As you see I got your cells, and awake Rinenngan but that not all. I and my ally recreated Ten tails, and I fought against five kage but I left them in not-ok state (smirks)
Hashirama: ?!
Tobirama(turns to Hashirama): Brother, Didn't Orochimaru say that Tsunade is current Hokage ?!
Hashirama: ?!
Madara: Ahh... That was her name. I remeber her but she is laying down in almost death state cut in two parts by my wood release
Tobirama: Bastard ! ?! (feel powerfull aura then turns to Hashirama)
Hashirama(with death glare): I will never forgive you, Madara !, What did you do to her ?!
Madara(hides his smirks): well, I was doing a lot with her, it depends what you mean, friend (smiles)
PAGE SIXTEEN
Hashirama: You freaking bastard, you will pay me for that.Tobirama, Minato and Naruto: ?!
Tobirama: Actually I feel very weak source of chakra close to us..., there is even four more but even more weak...
Hashirama: ?!Take me there asap Tobirama !
Tobirama: But, Madara ?!
Sasuke: I will take care of Madara along with Orochimaru and rest Hokages until your return, First Hokage-sama and Second Hokage-sama
Madara: Big words for small boy, let's play then a little
Naruto: Look out Sasuke, he is very strong...
Sasuke: ...
PAGE SEVENTEEN
[Hashirama put his hand at Tobirama's shoulder ][Tobirama and Hashirama dissapear]
Minato: speaking about strength..., I have gift for you Naruto (smiles)
(Minato comes to Naruto and put his hand at Naruto's stomach)
[Naruto's inner world]
(Minato appear where Kyuubi gate where, but nowhere can't spot gate.)
Minato: What the...
Naruto: Here dad !
(Minato look around and spot Naruto and behind him Kyuubi)
(Minato slowly walk towards them)
(suddenly Kurama is speaking as he is shown gathering chakra)
Kurama(sad and gulity): Welcome back Fourth Hokage... I am sorry for your death... it is all my fault
Naruto(looks sad): Kurama...
Minato(smiles): Heh. Kurama, yes. you don't have to be guilty Kurama, you was under genjtusu so I am not goona to blame you. Besides I am happy that you and Naruto are partners now and supporting each other
Naruto/Kurama(look at themselves then back at fourth and smile): hehe
Minato: So you met your mother Kushina, Naruto
Naruto: yeah, but Kurama and I are friends just recently
Kurama: It is true but we expierienced a lot positive feelings, don't we Naruto ?
Minato: Hehe, You are interacting with each other very well
PAGE EIGHTEEN
Kurama: ?!Naruto: What is it, Kurama ?!
Kurama: It looks like Juubi is gathering huge amount of nature energy. I can already feel as nature is dying in around us... It is trying to reach it perfect form so it won't attack or move for some time.
Minato( become serious): Then we don't have time for chit chat for now. I want to give you back someting Kurama
Kurama: ?!
[Minato come closer to Kurama, then weaves through handseals as he rises his shirt to shows seal slowly opening up]
SFX: TRHRHRH
[Seal completly open up as suddenly Kurama Yin chakra come and sink into Kurama]
[Kurama begin glowing bright light as Minato is shown being proud]
Minato: You grown up a lot Naruto (smiles)
[/Naruto's inner world]
[Juubi's is shown evolving as black sphere slowly envelopes it closing for inside.]
END
Sorry for any grammar or typing mistakes
Should I wrote sequel to it ?
yes or no ?
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