[Predictions] Naruto manga 628 - The Friend and The Foe

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Before u read this a little warning this is my first prediction so it properly Anit good and its quite long because next time two mangas will come out so it's for both of them but I just don't know when 628 finishes. Hope you enjoy please comment and give some feedback on how I could improve

( heads up - my spelling and grammar Anit that good so some of the words are short form)

- start of speech
( ) actions
* * thoughts
... Some one being interrupted

The friend and the foe :)

(The Hokages on their own stone head accompanied by one other person either harshi with sisgetsu 2nd with jugo 3rd with oro 4th with Karin and sasuke)

1st - is it just me or can any one else sense the large amount of chakra coming from that direction (points to it )

2nd 3rd 4th - yep

Oro- that's where the war is happening and they r battleing it out right now

1st I know but that chakra is unreal for one person to have that much chakra is inhuman even I don't have that much chakra that person must be a extraordinary shinobi

Minato - that's the kubyis chakra it seems naruto finally learnt how to control it. that's my son!

Sasuke - what? Narutos Ur son ? * No wonder he has so much chakra and it turns out he did lose his family after all*

Minato - yes but there's no time to talk about that now we have to go help him we...

1st - how do we get there?

Minato - I have one of my teleportation seals put into narutos 9 tail seal we can teleport there right away.

2nd - third it turns out u made a fine shinobi out of the fourth he even surpassed me in my thunder god blade jutsu ((I forgot the justu name)).

3rd - He's called the Yellow Flash of the leaf because his speed is incredibal.

4th - Everyone Hold on Tight ( he weaves a hand sign while holding the kunai)

-On the battle Field Front-

Hokages and taka arrive at the battle field directly behind naruto kakasi guy and Konha 11

Naruto - I've had enough of you ( gets 2 shadow clones to make wind style rasen-wind shuriken) all you do us put people's hopes down but now Ur gonna pay for Negis death. take this wind style rasen-wind shuriken

(Madera dodges the attack but obito is distracted by the jubbi and the wind style rasen-wind shuriken cuts his other liquid shoulder off)

Minato - You really have grown naruto

(They all turn around )

Kakasi - sensei ?!

Naruto - dad! ...

Konha 11 - Dad????

Naruto - ...And grandpa hokage and two other people and Sasuke and orochimaru... WAIT WHAT SASUKE AND OROCHIMARU!

(Madara sends a fire ball straight to naruto since he was distracted)

Sasuke - Naruto watch out ( pushs naruto and activates his susanoo and stops the fireball )

Sasuke - Watch out next time .. scaredy cat (grins and offers naruto his hand)

Naruto - always knew you would come back (grins)

Obito - Sasuke it seems you have betrayed me

(everyone turns to face Madera and obito)

Sasuke - I told u once and I'm telling u again we were never part of Ur group or Ur plans got it

Madera - who is this insolent little brat obito

Minato - obito to think you would turn out like this ?

Obito -.....

Sasuke - I'm.....

(naruto interprets)

Naruto - that so called brat is Sasuke Uchiha of the hidden leaf village and of the great Uchiha clan and he's also my friend

Sasuke - grins

1st - no time no see Madera

Madera - harshirama ???

1 st - u may have some how survived last time but now u go down there's no way you can win we have the will of fire you cannot defeat us

Madera - oh yeah well let's see

( they both charge for each other and the ultimate show down begins)

Next time will naruto get his gift ?

The End
 

shonu

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Nice...Its seriously Good!!:win:
 

Markomil

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im not a grammar nazi but you should really try to work on that(i know that it's not your native language :p ) but COOL STORY BRO
 

uchihamad

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Really ?two mangas come will next time ?
 

palmer

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Well you did well in your english,but sure can improve. And by the way good one
 

Aomine

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*starts reading* Hashirama: whos chakra is that? I dont even have that mu- wait a minuuute :O no.. Just no don't go that far -_-
 
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