[Predictions] NARUTO MANGA 624 PREDICTION [by ahhimane]

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MANGA 624 : Our Goal
TAJIMA : We had the same idea..... Butsuma Senju. (removes the sword)
IZUNA : Yo Tobirama.
BUTSUMA : So it seems.....
TOBIRAMA : Yo Izuna.

(Madara and Hashirama stops with widened eyes)
HASHIRAMA : Father! Tobirama!
MADARA : Izuna!

(Izuna turns back as he hears Madara's voice)
TAJIMA : Izuna... handle that brat. (pointing at Tobirama)
IZUNA : (looking in the front again) Roger!!
TOBIRAMA : Brat?!! (smirks) (glares at Izuna) I'll show you who's the brat here.(swings his sword) We have a score to settle.
BUTSUMA : He's yours Tobirama.....
TOBIRAMA : Hmm.

(wind blows)
(Tree leaves blows away with the wind)
(Hashirama and Madara still standing at their places)
(Everything's calm down)
(The leaves flowing with the wind began to fall)
BUTSUMA : (as soon as one of the leaf touches the surface of water) Lets go!!
(Everyone dashes towards each other)
(The falling leaves blows away)
(The surface of water burst out with their speed)
TAJIMA : (Sharingan activated) Hah!!
(Tajima attacks with his sword from upside down)
BUTSUMA : Hmm. (swings his kunai about his index finger of the left hand while dashing forward) (stops) (blocks the sword's cut with the kunai)
(Tajima clenches his teeth to force down Butsuma's kunai)
(Butsuma single handedly forces Tajima back and throws a kick right in the gut)
TAJIMA : ?!! (jumps back before getting hit by the kick)
(as Tajima leaps back, water spikes emerges out from the river)
(Tobirama is shown with his one hand on the water and the other with a seal)
IZUNA : ?!! [ Father! ] (jumps back to avoid the spikes) (makes handsigns while retreating) Fire Style : Fireball Jutsu!!
(Fireball vaporises water spikes)
(steam is created as the jutsu collides)
(Tajima lands outside the river)
(Tobirama and Butsuma dodge the jutsu)
(Izuna emerges out of steam and attacks Tobirama with his sword)
TOBIRAMA : ?!!
(blocks Izuna's attack with his sword in the right hand and a seal active on his left hand)
(Izuna skin turns black)
(As Tobirama swings his sword to attack Izuna, water spills out on Izuna)
(water cuts through like a sharp blade)
(Izuna keeps on attacking while being attacked by the water but not affected by it)
TOBIRAMA : (while dodging Izuna's attacks) You're using Hagaromo clan's earth style solidification jutsu?You copycat Uchihas.
(Tobirama attempts one more slash)
TOBIRAMA : ?!!
(Izuna blocks the sword by bare hands, grabs the blade with left hand and pulls Tobirama towards him)
(strengthens his right fist)
IZUNA : Aaaaahhh!!
(As Tobirama gets in the range, Izuna punches right in his chest with full force)
TOBIRAMA : ?!!
IZUNA : ?!! [ where is he? He made a clone at the last moment. ]
(water clone bursts as gets punched)
(Izuna searches for Tobirama)
(Two hands comes out from the river near Izuna, grabs his legs and pulls him under the water.)
IZUNA : ?!!
TOBIRAMA :
(smirks) (holding Izuna's legs) [ Even if you protect yourself from my water attacks, you won't be able to hold your breath for long inside the water. ]
MADARA : Izuna?!!
(dashes forward to jump in the river)
(After simultaneous attacks, Butsuma and Tajima separates away)
TAJIMA : Madara!! Stop there!!
MADARA : ?!!
(stops with a shocked look at Tajima) But.....
TAJIMA :
(being attentive to Butsuma's movements) This is Izuna's fight. Don't interfere if you're still acting as a peacemaker. (remembers last night conversation with Madara)
MADARA : ......(looks at the river again and then at Hashirama)
HASHIRAMA : (looks at Madara trembling in deciding the answer to his father's question) (remembers Madara's words)
[ MADARA : If I really was elite.... then my brothers wouldn't have.... I couldn't protect any of them.... What good is....]
[ HASHIRAMA : So all your...brothers are..?
MADARA : I've got one younger brother.
HASHIRAMA : ......
MADARA : I'm gonna protect him at any and all costs.
]

(Hashirama nods)
MADARA : (after watching Hashirama gives a confused look and then becomes confident) (Nods as a reply)
(Hashirama makes handsigns and ends with a clap)
TAJIMA : Hmm? [ What does that boy do just now? ] ?!!
BUTSUMA : ?!!

(Hashirama points his arm towards the river)
(Keeps a seal active with two fingers of the left hand stretched and wood emerges out of his right arm with unavoidable speed and pursues into the river)
(moves his fingers of his right hand as if manipulating the wood)
BUTSUMA : (turns to Hashirama) When did you?
TAJIMA : What speed? [ This boy must be dealt with first. ]
(attacks Butsuma and slashes on his back with the sword)
BUTSUMA : Arghhh!!
MADARA :
(looking at his father and noticing his intentions) ?!! Hashirama!!
HASHIRAMA :
(looks at Tajima who is about to attack him) ?!! [ Damn ]
BUTSUMA :
(falling on the surface of the river) [ I won't be able to make it. ]
TAJIMA :
(points out his blood covered sword and raises it to cut Hashirama) Hahhhhh!!
(Hashirama stands there closing his eyes with fear)
(His jutsu stops in between)
(ripples are shown on the surface of water as every step reaches towards Hashirama..... for saving him)
TAJIMA : ?!!
(A mettalic sound is created due to the clash)
HASHIRAMA : (opens his eyes) ?!!
BUTSUMA :
(sitting on the water surface looking at Tajima facing Hashirama and losing a hope of saving him on the last moment) ?!!
(Madara is shown with his fan blocking his father's attack on Hashirama)
(Hashirama relieves and continues his jutsu)
TAJIMA : You fool!!!
(The wood extended and pursued into the river grabs Tobirama as well as Izuna)
HASHIRAMA : Found!!
(Tajima gives a frontal kick in Madara's gut and throws him away and attacks Hashirama)
BUTSUMA : (looks at Madara who just got knocked away) [ Did he saved Hashirama? ]
(Madara rumbles over the land as he gets kicked off)
(Tajiama is about to behead Hashirama)
(Hashirama bends down to avoid the attack)
(Tajima attempts for the second attack but notices something huge coming out from the river)
TAJIMA : ?!! (jumps back)
(The wood emerges out from the river holding Tobirama and fainted Izuna)
BUTSUMA : ?!! (gets up) [ Hashirama ]
TAJIMA : [ Izuna? ] Izuna!!

(Izuna is shown like a dead boy)
(Tobirama is confused with the jutsu)
(Hashirama puts both of them on the land where Madara is)
MADARA : (looking at Izuna) Izuna!
TOBIRAMA :
(gets up) Don't worry. He's still alive. He just got lucky when I was about to stab him.... because of my foolish brother.
(Hashirama pants and falls on the ground)
(Everyone is staring at Hashirama)
(Tobirama walks towards Hashirama)
TOBIRAMA : (knocks in Hashirama's head) What the hell are you doing, brother? I got the perfect opportunity to kill him.
HASHIRAMA :
(panting) Madara wanted to protect his younger brother no matter what. Madara is my friend. I can't let his beloved brother die here.
TAJIMA/BUTSUMA : ?!!
TOBIRAMA : .....
MADARA : ......
HASHIRAMA : Madara regrets for not able to save his brothers who were killed by Shinobis like us. That is why, he wanted to save his only brother. He believed in me that I can save his brother from death. And I don't want to lose that trust, that faith which he has on me. He is my friend which I can't lose no matter what.
TAJIMA : What rubbish?!! Uchihas and Senju can never become friends.
HASHIRAMA :
(with a confident look) That's what I want to change. When I became friend with Madara, I didn't knew his Surname. Or rather, I was not interested in knowing the surname whether he's an Uchiha or not. Instead, because we both seek the same goal. The goal to bring peace in this Shinobi world.

(What will be the reaction of their fathers?)
 

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I dnt knx hw u do it man,but your predictions are always great(even though they dont always turn out to be true),,but yours is always my favourite.(hope you are not kishi in disguise eh!?.lol).nonetheless,nice one and keep it up.
 
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