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Manga 594
MANGA : 595 : WHY??
(Scene switch to Madara vs 5 Kages)
5 KAGES : Kyuubi?!!!
TSUNADE : What are you up to now?.....You Bastard!!
OONOKI : We are your opponents.....Make handsigns.
MADARA : ?!!(Who was giving a twist to his neck stretches his hand towards Oonoki and pulls him towards himself)
OONOKI : ?!!! (Stops making handsigns with shocked face).
REMAINING KAGES : ?!!!
(A wooden stick emerges out of Madara's other hand forming a shape of a weapon)
MADARA : You lived enough........(As Oonoki reaches near, Madara grabs his neck damaging his throat and pierce the wooden weapon through his heart)........and you talked a lot.
OONOKI : (Coughing out blood)?!!!! (Struggling to scream).
TSUNADE/MEI/A/GAARA : ?!!!
(Runs towards Madara)
MADARA : (Watches at the Kages approaching him.Stretches his hand towards them). S..H..I..N..R..A.....T..E.....?!!!
(Senses a huge wave approaching him along with rocks and the hand pointed towards the kages moves towards the incoming wave to block it to protect himself while the kages unaware of the sudden blow gets thrown away)
(In slow motion)
(Madara is shown standing while the dust, trees, stones moves from his side ways without touching him.)
MADARA : (throws Oonoki on the ground who is struggling to breathe) (Smirk on his face) Hmm........looks the Juubi
is revived.......but looking at the chakra level it seems its still....... incomplete!!
(Leaves the Battlefield)
(The fallen Kages lying on the ground struggles to stand.After standing looks around)
(the field is still covered with dust)
MEI : (on her feet) What was that......?
(The remaining Kages stand. The dust clears out.)
KAGES : (Watching Oonoki surrounded by blood).......... ?!!!! (Rushes towards him)
(Oonoki lying on the ground unconscious watches kages approaching him with one eye closed hearing their voice)
(Kages stand near Oonoki watching him shivering on the ground)
A : Hokage, hurry up!!!
TSUNADE : (sits near Oonoki and starts healing him)...............
MEI : .........
GAARA : .......(looking into Oonoki's eyes) You knew you won't be able to beat Madara but you still tried hard........WHY?....Why did you go that far?
(Oonoki tries to talk but couldn't)
TSUNADE : Don't push yourself..... (Stops healing his chest and concentrates on healing his throat)
OONOKI : (Becoming a little conscious looking at Gaara and remembers his past, the way he used Akatsuki to increase his strength during past battles against the villages, the way he let Roshi[four tail jinchuriki] to get captured by the Akatsuki, the way he used his own people for decoy, his stubborn behaviour)
(After some time, Tsunade stops healing Oonoki)
A : What happened Hokage?
TSUNADE : He can't be saved now....his heart suffered a massive damage....but he can spe...
OONOKI : .....I.....I did lot of mistakes throughout my life.......(remembers facing Madara in the past)..he made me to hate the world.....(remembers his sensei Muu dying).....made me stubborn old geezer.....(remembers the ninjas who went rogue)....made my people suffer because of me.....but....(remembers gaara asking him "When did you all forsake yourselves?")....you made me to think again.....(remembers gaara holding naruto and oonoki with his sand while facing against Madara) showed me a path to correct my mistakes and......... to rebuild my village filled with love, faith in each other with......my death......(coughs out blood)......Maybe......now I can face my people in the........ afterlife.
(Closes his eyes forever)
KAGES : ?!!!!
(Kages stands there for a moment watching the Tsuchikage of the Hidden Stone Village resting in peace)
(Scene switch to Naruto, KB vs Tobi)
TOBI : Its over for you two now (watching Naruto and Killer Bee)(Stretches out his hand towards them)
(The Gedo statue grow chakra hands and grabs Killer Bee who was lying unconscious on the ground.)
(The Shinobis who survived the Gedo's previous attack watches Killer Bee takeen by the Masked Man)
TOBI : (looking at Naruto) You talked too much.....(remembers Nagato's mind change) changed people's mind....and now look at yourself.
(Naruto is shown standing on his feet but still some what unconscious)
(Meanwhile Gedo extracts out the Hachibi from KillerBee and throws away Killer Bee's corpse)
(After the extraction process gets completed, Gedo grows one more tail and bones around its body)
TOBI : I must kill you now and then I'll take the Kyuubi from you....... Uzumaki Naruto!!
(At Tobi's actions, Gedo stretches out one of its tail towards Naruto to kill him)
(The Konoha 11 who were thrown away along with the others watches Naruto getting captured)
TOBI : Finally.....Hmm?!!
NARUTO : ?!!!
KAKASHI & GAI : ?!!!
KONOHA 11 : ?!!!
(Hinata is shown standing infront of Naruto facing her back to him with her hand activating the lion fist.The hand approaching for Naruto is diverted by Hinata's attack impaling her chest and then pinned down to the ground)
NARUTO : Hinata......Hinata.......?!!!! (looks on the ground shedding tears) ......Why?....Why did you did this?
HINATA : Beca....use......Even during this war...I was a burden on you....You saved me.....but.....(remembers her fight with pain)..now......I can say that I did my best to protect you.
(The hand of the Gedo retrieves back)
(As the hand gets removed, Hinata falls down on the ground)
(Naruto still in the shock watching Hinata dead near his feet)
(Naruto starts boiling chakra cloak of the Nine Tailed fox)
Manga 594
MANGA 594 : THE PROMISED TIME!!
SASUKE : Where are we going?
OROCHIMARU : Fuuuh....to a place that you know very well.
SUIGETSU : ?!!
OROCHIMARU : Well then,lets go!
(Sunlight falls in the cave brightly while Sasuke and Orochimaru watches in the sky ready to move)
(Orochimaru looks at Kabuto for a moment and then jumps out of the cave)
(Sasuke, Suigetsu and Juugo then follows him)
(On their way)
SASUKE : (The place I know very well....).Are you heading towards Konoha?
SUIGETSU & JUUGO : ?!!!
OROCHIMARU : Well...yes,because the answers you want to find out to decide your destiny will be obtained within the village.
SASUKE : But how can we obtain it now.....
OROCHIMARU : The secrets still lies there....
SASUKE : how?
OROCHIMARU : Because....(looks at Sasuke)...only the leader and some elder members of the Uchiha clan knew about it.
SASUKE : Leader of the clan!!(Father......)....what is it?
OROCHIMARU : Don't get hard on me...but you'll get those answers when we reach there!!
SASUKE : !!! (And increases his speed to reach Konoha)
SUIGETSU : Hey Sasuke, don't get mad, stay cool.
(Sasuke looks at Suigetsu with an angry look)
SUIGETSU : (Scared).D..Do ...Do as your wish...
OROCHIMARU : (My...My...he's much eager than before to get his answers....But What will happen when he will knew the truth?)
(Scene switch to TOBI vs NARUTO)
TOBI : Here comes the promised time....(keeps his last handsign intact)......UNLEASH JUUBI!!!
NARUTO : ?!!!
BEE : ?!!!
KAKASHI & GAI : ?!!!
(Gedo Mazo screams aloud unleashing huge blows of wind.Even Tobi hardly able to stand around the statue.)
(The white band around Gedo's eyes gets removed.The black dots inside the nine eyes starts shaking violently and after some time they stops shaking.)
GEDO : Grrrrrrrr.........(Slowly moves his head here and there and the nine eyes gets closed and disappears)
NARUTO, BEE, KAKASHI & GAI : ?!!!
(Suddenly one big center eye opens.As it opens up, sweat with fear travels down through Kakashi's and Gai's face)
(Scene switch to Shinobi's running towards Naruto's battlefield)
EVERYONE : What's that feeling? Such....dense chakra...We must hurry...
(Scene switch to TOBI vs NARUTO)
(Gedo Mazo's eye transforms into a three (tomoe)d Sharingan and then as the tomoe swirls around the central dot it transforms into Rinnegan)
NARUTO : (Senses chakra of Shinobis approaching the field)Damn....why are they heading here now? Its ....too dangerous here.(Several Shinobis comes out of the woods an lands on the Battlefield surrounding Gedo Mazo)
EVERYONE : What...is ....that monster?(Shocked faces)
(At the same time Tobi who is still holding his handsign gets phased into the ground and orders Gedo Mazo to attack)
TOBI : SHINRA....TENSEI.
(Gedo Mazo attacks with SHINRA TENSEI forming a huge transparent wave with Gedo as the centre and advancing towards the Shinobis also increasing the damage factor)
(In Slow Motion)
(Shinobis are shown thrown away and a huge crate is formed same as during pain's attack but three times wide)
(A red chakra cloak starts boiling around Gedo Mazo's entire body and forming eight chakra tails)
(Many shinobis are shown dead on the field. Blood is shown spread on some rocks.)
(Some Leaf Shinobis with whom Naruto is familiar with are shown dead on the ground and some tears are shown in his eyes)
(After some time,Naruto is shown struggling hard to stand on his feet.)
Last Panel is shown with Sasuke heading towards Konoha and Naruto holding his legs for support to stand.
SASUKE : Where are we going?
OROCHIMARU : Fuuuh....to a place that you know very well.
SUIGETSU : ?!!
OROCHIMARU : Well then,lets go!
(Sunlight falls in the cave brightly while Sasuke and Orochimaru watches in the sky ready to move)
(Orochimaru looks at Kabuto for a moment and then jumps out of the cave)
(Sasuke, Suigetsu and Juugo then follows him)
(On their way)
SASUKE : (The place I know very well....).Are you heading towards Konoha?
SUIGETSU & JUUGO : ?!!!
OROCHIMARU : Well...yes,because the answers you want to find out to decide your destiny will be obtained within the village.
SASUKE : But how can we obtain it now.....
OROCHIMARU : The secrets still lies there....
SASUKE : how?
OROCHIMARU : Because....(looks at Sasuke)...only the leader and some elder members of the Uchiha clan knew about it.
SASUKE : Leader of the clan!!(Father......)....what is it?
OROCHIMARU : Don't get hard on me...but you'll get those answers when we reach there!!
SASUKE : !!! (And increases his speed to reach Konoha)
SUIGETSU : Hey Sasuke, don't get mad, stay cool.
(Sasuke looks at Suigetsu with an angry look)
SUIGETSU : (Scared).D..Do ...Do as your wish...
OROCHIMARU : (My...My...he's much eager than before to get his answers....But What will happen when he will knew the truth?)
(Scene switch to TOBI vs NARUTO)
TOBI : Here comes the promised time....(keeps his last handsign intact)......UNLEASH JUUBI!!!
NARUTO : ?!!!
BEE : ?!!!
KAKASHI & GAI : ?!!!
(Gedo Mazo screams aloud unleashing huge blows of wind.Even Tobi hardly able to stand around the statue.)
(The white band around Gedo's eyes gets removed.The black dots inside the nine eyes starts shaking violently and after some time they stops shaking.)
GEDO : Grrrrrrrr.........(Slowly moves his head here and there and the nine eyes gets closed and disappears)
NARUTO, BEE, KAKASHI & GAI : ?!!!
(Suddenly one big center eye opens.As it opens up, sweat with fear travels down through Kakashi's and Gai's face)
(Scene switch to Shinobi's running towards Naruto's battlefield)
EVERYONE : What's that feeling? Such....dense chakra...We must hurry...
(Scene switch to TOBI vs NARUTO)
(Gedo Mazo's eye transforms into a three (tomoe)d Sharingan and then as the tomoe swirls around the central dot it transforms into Rinnegan)
NARUTO : (Senses chakra of Shinobis approaching the field)Damn....why are they heading here now? Its ....too dangerous here.(Several Shinobis comes out of the woods an lands on the Battlefield surrounding Gedo Mazo)
EVERYONE : What...is ....that monster?(Shocked faces)
(At the same time Tobi who is still holding his handsign gets phased into the ground and orders Gedo Mazo to attack)
TOBI : SHINRA....TENSEI.
(Gedo Mazo attacks with SHINRA TENSEI forming a huge transparent wave with Gedo as the centre and advancing towards the Shinobis also increasing the damage factor)
(In Slow Motion)
(Shinobis are shown thrown away and a huge crate is formed same as during pain's attack but three times wide)
(A red chakra cloak starts boiling around Gedo Mazo's entire body and forming eight chakra tails)
(Many shinobis are shown dead on the field. Blood is shown spread on some rocks.)
(Some Leaf Shinobis with whom Naruto is familiar with are shown dead on the ground and some tears are shown in his eyes)
(After some time,Naruto is shown struggling hard to stand on his feet.)
Last Panel is shown with Sasuke heading towards Konoha and Naruto holding his legs for support to stand.
MANGA : 595 : WHY??
(Scene switch to Madara vs 5 Kages)
5 KAGES : Kyuubi?!!!
TSUNADE : What are you up to now?.....You Bastard!!
OONOKI : We are your opponents.....Make handsigns.
MADARA : ?!!(Who was giving a twist to his neck stretches his hand towards Oonoki and pulls him towards himself)
OONOKI : ?!!! (Stops making handsigns with shocked face).
REMAINING KAGES : ?!!!
(A wooden stick emerges out of Madara's other hand forming a shape of a weapon)
MADARA : You lived enough........(As Oonoki reaches near, Madara grabs his neck damaging his throat and pierce the wooden weapon through his heart)........and you talked a lot.
OONOKI : (Coughing out blood)?!!!! (Struggling to scream).
TSUNADE/MEI/A/GAARA : ?!!!
(Runs towards Madara)
MADARA : (Watches at the Kages approaching him.Stretches his hand towards them). S..H..I..N..R..A.....T..E.....?!!!
(Senses a huge wave approaching him along with rocks and the hand pointed towards the kages moves towards the incoming wave to block it to protect himself while the kages unaware of the sudden blow gets thrown away)
(In slow motion)
(Madara is shown standing while the dust, trees, stones moves from his side ways without touching him.)
MADARA : (throws Oonoki on the ground who is struggling to breathe) (Smirk on his face) Hmm........looks the Juubi
is revived.......but looking at the chakra level it seems its still....... incomplete!!
(Leaves the Battlefield)
(The fallen Kages lying on the ground struggles to stand.After standing looks around)
(the field is still covered with dust)
MEI : (on her feet) What was that......?
(The remaining Kages stand. The dust clears out.)
KAGES : (Watching Oonoki surrounded by blood).......... ?!!!! (Rushes towards him)
(Oonoki lying on the ground unconscious watches kages approaching him with one eye closed hearing their voice)
(Kages stand near Oonoki watching him shivering on the ground)
A : Hokage, hurry up!!!
TSUNADE : (sits near Oonoki and starts healing him)...............
MEI : .........
GAARA : .......(looking into Oonoki's eyes) You knew you won't be able to beat Madara but you still tried hard........WHY?....Why did you go that far?
(Oonoki tries to talk but couldn't)
TSUNADE : Don't push yourself..... (Stops healing his chest and concentrates on healing his throat)
OONOKI : (Becoming a little conscious looking at Gaara and remembers his past, the way he used Akatsuki to increase his strength during past battles against the villages, the way he let Roshi[four tail jinchuriki] to get captured by the Akatsuki, the way he used his own people for decoy, his stubborn behaviour)
(After some time, Tsunade stops healing Oonoki)
A : What happened Hokage?
TSUNADE : He can't be saved now....his heart suffered a massive damage....but he can spe...
OONOKI : .....I.....I did lot of mistakes throughout my life.......(remembers facing Madara in the past)..he made me to hate the world.....(remembers his sensei Muu dying).....made me stubborn old geezer.....(remembers the ninjas who went rogue)....made my people suffer because of me.....but....(remembers gaara asking him "When did you all forsake yourselves?")....you made me to think again.....(remembers gaara holding naruto and oonoki with his sand while facing against Madara) showed me a path to correct my mistakes and......... to rebuild my village filled with love, faith in each other with......my death......(coughs out blood)......Maybe......now I can face my people in the........ afterlife.
(Closes his eyes forever)
KAGES : ?!!!!
(Kages stands there for a moment watching the Tsuchikage of the Hidden Stone Village resting in peace)
(Scene switch to Naruto, KB vs Tobi)
TOBI : Its over for you two now (watching Naruto and Killer Bee)(Stretches out his hand towards them)
(The Gedo statue grow chakra hands and grabs Killer Bee who was lying unconscious on the ground.)
(The Shinobis who survived the Gedo's previous attack watches Killer Bee takeen by the Masked Man)
TOBI : (looking at Naruto) You talked too much.....(remembers Nagato's mind change) changed people's mind....and now look at yourself.
(Naruto is shown standing on his feet but still some what unconscious)
(Meanwhile Gedo extracts out the Hachibi from KillerBee and throws away Killer Bee's corpse)
(After the extraction process gets completed, Gedo grows one more tail and bones around its body)
TOBI : I must kill you now and then I'll take the Kyuubi from you....... Uzumaki Naruto!!
(At Tobi's actions, Gedo stretches out one of its tail towards Naruto to kill him)
(The Konoha 11 who were thrown away along with the others watches Naruto getting captured)
TOBI : Finally.....Hmm?!!
NARUTO : ?!!!
KAKASHI & GAI : ?!!!
KONOHA 11 : ?!!!
(Hinata is shown standing infront of Naruto facing her back to him with her hand activating the lion fist.The hand approaching for Naruto is diverted by Hinata's attack impaling her chest and then pinned down to the ground)
NARUTO : Hinata......Hinata.......?!!!! (looks on the ground shedding tears) ......Why?....Why did you did this?
HINATA : Beca....use......Even during this war...I was a burden on you....You saved me.....but.....(remembers her fight with pain)..now......I can say that I did my best to protect you.
(The hand of the Gedo retrieves back)
(As the hand gets removed, Hinata falls down on the ground)
(Naruto still in the shock watching Hinata dead near his feet)
(Naruto starts boiling chakra cloak of the Nine Tailed fox)
