Naruto: Legendary shinobi

[Kyuubi Sage]

Chapter 1: The attack of Akatsuki leader Pain.

It was a nice warm day as Naruto is training alone in the hidden leaf village forest until the hidden leaf village was at red alert as the akatsuki leader Pain arrived while attacking innocent shinobi which Naruto dashed right over to the battle field to look face to face with Akatsuki leader pain so as Naruto arrived Naruto yelled "Hey you Akatsuki you looking for me".

After Naruto spoke Akatsuki leader pain said "I am looking for the nine tail fox demon Kyuubi and since it is sealed in you I'll take you and instract Kyuubi out of you then seal it in a demonic like statue" then Naruto said "I am not letting you have Kyuubi and I am not letting you harm my home which your evil ends here plus I am going to kill you to make sure my goal to be hokage is closer to me to earn it by protecting the hidden leaf village" which Naruto powers up into his sage mode knowing that fighting a rinnigan user is tough.

 

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make your stories last longer, and dont get to the point too quickly. But i can see this story getting better.

 

[Kyuubi Sage]

Chapter 2: Kyuubi saves the day.

After Naruto spoke Akatsuki leader Pain instantly attcked Naruto until deep inside the 4th hokage seal Kyuubi said "I am getting a feeling that Naruto is in great danger but I can't do anything except be ready to protect Naruto when the right time comes" then as Akatsuki leader Pain attacked Naruto instantly Naruto makes a hand sign as Naruto yells "Multi Shadow clone jutsu" which Naruto makes 25 shadow clones knowing that Naruto is getting them in formation for Naruto to use Uzumaki Barrage.

As Naruto shadow clones got into formation they slid right at Akatsuki leader pain while they yelled "Na-ru-to" then as they kicked Pain right up into the air Naruto springs up and lands a kick right into Pains head as Naruto yelled "Uzumaki Barrage" which Pain lands down n the ground with a deverstating force so Akatsuki leader Pain does a and sign to use summoning jutsu to summon up his summoning creature.

After Akatsuki leader Pain summoned his summoning animal Naruto bit his thumb which as Naruto slammed it down Naruto yelled "Summoning jutsu" then out of the 4th hokage seal arrived the nine tail fox demon Kyuubi then Kyuubi said "Naruto I knew this would come and let me show show the reward you get for summoning me plus you get to completely control me including the truth that you are from the Uzumaki clan the most powerful clan of all which your clan is special" so Kyuubi looks at Pains summoning animal as Kyuubi laughed "If it isn't Lord Rhio I was hoping to destroy Lord Monda a snake summon but you'll do just fine".