Naruto: Kyuubi Shinobi

[Kyuubi Sage]

Chapter 1: A hidden sand village visit.

It was a cool relaxing day as Naruto in the Kazekage office with his demon brother Garaa as Naruto smiles then Garaa said "OK Lord Hokage Naruto I have recieved word that Orochimaru is planning to invade hidden leaf village again" which Naruto replied "Sasuke Uchiha will be there for sure because he joined Orochimaru".

After Naruto spoke Garaa said "OK It is time for my anbu to go on a mission with you after all I hope you have complete control of your demon as I have their mission" so Naruto went off to the hidden leaf village with Garaa's anbu member Temari which Temari was happy to go with Naruto as Temari thought "This might be fun if I hang with Naruto even when I think he is cool".

 

[Ben-sama]

*starts rofling*

 

[Kyuubi Sage]

Chapter 2: Temari's crush.

After Temari had her thought the two arrived at the hidden leaf village until in stepped both Sasuke Uchiha and Orochimaru as Sasuke Uchiha said "Naruto it seems you have gone stronger than I wished well once I defeat you with Orochimaru I will be able to defeat my blasted brother Itachi Uchiha" then Naruto growled "Sasuke Uchiha I have worked really hard to try to save you and this is how you reapy me well now instead of saving you I will destroy you".

After Naruto spoke Temari said "I see this is the trouble you caused well that will be the end of you Orochimaru and as for you Sasuke Uchiha I believe that this will be the time where I wished Garaa killed you inspecially for causing Naruto enough pain to make Naruto go demon fox mode" which Naruto instantly went to attack Sasuke Uchiha hoping to get through him.

 

[Orochimaru the Snake]

huh what is happening and how are you back you been banned again

 

[Watari]

Make it a bit longer and try to implement more complex sentences, It could end up quite a good fan fiction if you considered these points.

 

[Kyuubi Sage]

Chapter 3: Kyuubi sage mode.

After Naruto attacked Sasuke Uchiha hoping to remove the curse mark Sasuke Uchiha bit his thumb which Sasuke Uchiha slammed his hand down while Sasuke Uchiha said "Summoning jutsu" then Lord Monda appears as Lord Monda said "Hey boy where is the sacrifice that I want from you" which Sasuke points to Naruto as Sasuke said "There is Naruto Uzumaki a perfect sacrifice for you Lord Monda so Lord Monda goes to attack Naruto.

As Lord Monda goes to attack Naruto red demon chakra shields Naruto and Temari which Temari said "Naruto this chakra what is it and why does it remind me of the Kazekage Garaa's demon Shukaku" then Naruto said "Temari this is the nine tail fox demon Kyuubi who shielded us with its chakra and my demon defeated Shukaku plus I don't know if this is what is safe but I must release the nine tail fox defore we get killed plus as for you Sasuke Uchiha I'll save you from Orochimaru by calling out a demon who knows the Uchiha clan demon child Madara Uchiha".

After Naruto spoke Naruto made a hand sign as Naruto yelled "Summoning jutsu demon release" then out of the red demon chakra appears the nine tail fox demon Kyuubi even when Temari is sitting on its head with Naruto so the nine tail fox demon Kyuubi looked at Lord Monmda as Kyuubi roars "I am free from that 4th hokage seal and Lord Monda I am going to destroy you for harming my host plus as for you Naruto I am at your full command forever for now on since that is my way to thank you for releasing me from the 4th hokage seal but lets destroy that foolish snake Lord Monda but you young lady Temari use whatever to shield my host from harm which if you protect him from harm I'll repay you by protecting your village from whatever inspecially if my fellow demon bro Shukaku helps me in that quest".

 

[Kyuubi Sage]

(This is a good story).

 

[Gatsndshanks]

(This is a good story).

Agreed.

 

[yusufms]

(This is a good story).

i have to say your story writing has improved, nice one...

 

[Kyuubi Sage]

Chapter 4: Flaming wind jutsu.

After Kyuubi spoke Lord Monda goes to attack the nine tail fox demon Kyuubi until Kyuubi makes a hand sign with Naruto as Naruto yelled "Flaming wind jutsu" which Kyuubi blasts Lord Monda with a scourching hot air bullet then as it impacted right into Lord Monda Temari striked Lord onda with wind sythe jutsu as Kyuubi said "Now Naruto its time to fulfil a promise that you made to your team mate Sakura" which Naruto replied "OK Kyuubi time to unleash my secret jutsu straight from the hand book of Kakashi sensei".

After Naruto spoke Naruto makes a hand sign as Naruto said "Ninja art curse mark removal jutsu" which Naruto successfully removed the cursae mark from Sasuke Uchiha causing Sasuke to see that Naruto is Sasuke Uchiha's friend and fellow team 7 team mate then Kyuubi made a hand sign as Kyuubi said "Demon style true oblivion" which Lord Monda instantly died in the effect of Kyuubi's jutsu while Kyuubi returns home inside the 4th hokage seal knowing that Kyuubi is needed when Naruto takes on Orochimaru.