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[size=+1]There was a deep rumbling noise, and the chamber they where all in started to shake.
Kabuto: And so it begins....
Naruto and Shikamaru rushed over to the window, to see what had happened. Standing in the middle of the village, was a gaint bear. On top of it was a person in strange clothers. They where wearing a gray jacket, with white stripes on the left arm; there was no right sleeve. Under that, was a strange gray cloak, that seemed to hang ridgidly in the back. The pants where gray as well, the right leg missing from the knee down, instead, was covered in bandages. the left leg was the same as the left sleeve of the shirt. When the person spoke, that realized it was a woman.
Robed Woman: Naruto Uzumaki! Show yourself! Or the village will pay the price!
All four men looked at each other, and then used a jutsu to appear on the building infront of the woman.
Robed Woman: Ah, so you brought friends... And Kabuto? Have you betrayed us?
Kabuto: Shut up Teki; you new from the beginning I didn't really want to be a part of the organization.
Teki: Shame...I had grown quite fond of you as well...
Naruto: Enough with the talk! What is it you want?!
Teki: You know exactly what it is I want. Hand over the eight orbs, and come with me, and we'll leave you village in peace.
Naruto: ......
Shikamaru: Go.... I 'll send an ANBU squad after you.
Teki: You'll do no such thing, and to make sure you don't, I'll leave Baron here.
The bear roared, aparently having been asleep.
Baron: Why are we here? I was enjoying my hibernation....
Teki: Oh, shut up.
Baron: Don't tell me to shut up. Puny!
Teki: Puny?!? Why you...! I oughta send you back right now!
Baron: Punypunypuny!
Teki: I'm not kidding, shut up you stupid bear!
Baron: P. U. N. Y.
Teki: That's it! Dismissed!
The bear had a sarcastic smile on its face as it disappeared.
Teki: That probably wasn't the smartest thing to do......
Suddenly, she was imprisoned in a cocoon of sand.
Gaara: No...It was not.
Moments later, they stood infront of her, and where questioning her.
Shikamaru: *sighs* I wish Ibiki still did this.... Who comands you?
Teki: ......
Naruto: Why do you want the spheres?
Teki: ......
Kabuto: Well, we know why she wants the spheres, but even I don't know who leads "Gray Sky", and I was at the same level in the organization as her...Of coarse, that's not very high, either.
Suddenly, Teki started crying.
Naruto: Uh...Crap...Did we do something?
Kabuto: You still haven't taken off her hood...Look, and you'll see why.
Naruto pulled back her hood, and discovered that Teki was a child, not just short.
Shikamaru: A kid? What a drag...Now I have to interagate, and babysit...
Naruto: Mabye Sakura could help?
Shikamaru: Probably not, plus, she's in the surgery room, treating Kankuro; apparently, he was struck by lightening.
Naruto: What?! Is he okay?
Gaara: He is fine, buy it knocked him unconcious....
Teki: *Sniff...sniff...* I'm still here....
Naruto: Oh, right! Well, what should we do? We can't exactly interagate a child.
Shikamaru: I'm not quite sure...How about we send her to -
Shikamaru was cut off, as a dome of fire engulfed the eastern gate.
Kabuto: Crap...He's here.
Teki: Ketito!
Naruto: Keitio?
Kabuto: He's a very high ranking member of "Gray Sky" and an expert in Fire, Lightening, and Earth Jutsu, he's also Teki's older brother. I'm guessing he was ordered to come in if the bear dissappeared.
Naruto: Gaara, can you?
Gaara: Yes...I'm curious as to his strenghts anyways.
Naruto: Shikamaru, take these orbs, I'm going to go back up Gaara, take Teki and these, and hide them.
Shikamaru: Got it.
Naruto left Shikamaru, and headed off, right behind Gaara.
Shikamaru: I'm Hokage, and I'm the one taking orders, and I'm babysitting...What a drag.....
Gaara and Naruto stood infront of a man in the same clothing as Teki. His left arm was infulfed in fire, and his right in lightening.
Keitio: So you'd da one's who messen wid my sister?
Naruto: Why are you attacking the village?
Keitio: Why'd you hurt Teki?
Naruto: We haven't yet!
Keitito: Like I'ma gonna beilve you! (Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain!
Naruto: Crap!
A sand sheild came between Gaara, Naruto, and the Fire jutsu.
Gaara: Let me handle this...[/size]
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Naruto Kangen: Sono Kan Kagai.
[/size][size=+1]Naruto Revolution: The First Assault.
[/size][size=+1]There was a deep rumbling noise, and the chamber they where all in started to shake.
Kabuto: And so it begins....
Naruto and Shikamaru rushed over to the window, to see what had happened. Standing in the middle of the village, was a gaint bear. On top of it was a person in strange clothers. They where wearing a gray jacket, with white stripes on the left arm; there was no right sleeve. Under that, was a strange gray cloak, that seemed to hang ridgidly in the back. The pants where gray as well, the right leg missing from the knee down, instead, was covered in bandages. the left leg was the same as the left sleeve of the shirt. When the person spoke, that realized it was a woman.
Robed Woman: Naruto Uzumaki! Show yourself! Or the village will pay the price!
All four men looked at each other, and then used a jutsu to appear on the building infront of the woman.
Robed Woman: Ah, so you brought friends... And Kabuto? Have you betrayed us?
Kabuto: Shut up Teki; you new from the beginning I didn't really want to be a part of the organization.
Teki: Shame...I had grown quite fond of you as well...
Naruto: Enough with the talk! What is it you want?!
Teki: You know exactly what it is I want. Hand over the eight orbs, and come with me, and we'll leave you village in peace.
Naruto: ......
Shikamaru: Go.... I 'll send an ANBU squad after you.
Teki: You'll do no such thing, and to make sure you don't, I'll leave Baron here.
The bear roared, aparently having been asleep.
Baron: Why are we here? I was enjoying my hibernation....
Teki: Oh, shut up.
Baron: Don't tell me to shut up. Puny!
Teki: Puny?!? Why you...! I oughta send you back right now!
Baron: Punypunypuny!
Teki: I'm not kidding, shut up you stupid bear!
Baron: P. U. N. Y.
Teki: That's it! Dismissed!
The bear had a sarcastic smile on its face as it disappeared.
Teki: That probably wasn't the smartest thing to do......
Suddenly, she was imprisoned in a cocoon of sand.
Gaara: No...It was not.
Moments later, they stood infront of her, and where questioning her.
Shikamaru: *sighs* I wish Ibiki still did this.... Who comands you?
Teki: ......
Naruto: Why do you want the spheres?
Teki: ......
Kabuto: Well, we know why she wants the spheres, but even I don't know who leads "Gray Sky", and I was at the same level in the organization as her...Of coarse, that's not very high, either.
Suddenly, Teki started crying.
Naruto: Uh...Crap...Did we do something?
Kabuto: You still haven't taken off her hood...Look, and you'll see why.
Naruto pulled back her hood, and discovered that Teki was a child, not just short.
Shikamaru: A kid? What a drag...Now I have to interagate, and babysit...
Naruto: Mabye Sakura could help?
Shikamaru: Probably not, plus, she's in the surgery room, treating Kankuro; apparently, he was struck by lightening.
Naruto: What?! Is he okay?
Gaara: He is fine, buy it knocked him unconcious....
Teki: *Sniff...sniff...* I'm still here....
Naruto: Oh, right! Well, what should we do? We can't exactly interagate a child.
Shikamaru: I'm not quite sure...How about we send her to -
Shikamaru was cut off, as a dome of fire engulfed the eastern gate.
Kabuto: Crap...He's here.
Teki: Ketito!
Naruto: Keitio?
Kabuto: He's a very high ranking member of "Gray Sky" and an expert in Fire, Lightening, and Earth Jutsu, he's also Teki's older brother. I'm guessing he was ordered to come in if the bear dissappeared.
Naruto: Gaara, can you?
Gaara: Yes...I'm curious as to his strenghts anyways.
Naruto: Shikamaru, take these orbs, I'm going to go back up Gaara, take Teki and these, and hide them.
Shikamaru: Got it.
Naruto left Shikamaru, and headed off, right behind Gaara.
Shikamaru: I'm Hokage, and I'm the one taking orders, and I'm babysitting...What a drag.....
Gaara and Naruto stood infront of a man in the same clothing as Teki. His left arm was infulfed in fire, and his right in lightening.
Keitio: So you'd da one's who messen wid my sister?
Naruto: Why are you attacking the village?
Keitio: Why'd you hurt Teki?
Naruto: We haven't yet!
Keitito: Like I'ma gonna beilve you! (Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain!
Naruto: Crap!
A sand sheild came between Gaara, Naruto, and the Fire jutsu.
Gaara: Let me handle this...[/size]