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Okay, a few things before the story: The inspiration of this story comes from my father (who is awesome, and reads Naruto) and what he thinks will happen in the story, at the very end. I just decided to take it to the next level. Depending on your feedback, determines if I continue writing this story. This first chapter is his theory, with a little of my own thrown in.
Naruto Kangen means: Naruto Revolution
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A young lady ran into the Hokage's office.
[size=+1]Lady: Mr. Hokage, there is someone here to see you. He say's it urgent.
Hokage: Send him in....
A few moments later, the man walked in the room, drenched in water from the rain.
Man: Nice to see you, 7th Hokage...Shikamaru.
Shikamaru: Hey Naruto, long time no see. Its been, what, four years since you stepped down as Hokage to become the Myobokuzan Sage?
Naruto: That's right. I've come to visit everyone. And to see my kid, of coarse.
Shikamaru: Well, I figure you'll find Sakura and Jiraiya in the park.
Naruto: Thanks. By the way, how are you and Temari?
Shikamaru: Not bad, we've been engaged for about three months now.
Naruto: Thanks...I think I wanna stop by the graves first, if you don't mind...
Shikamaru: Hinata's and Saskue's?
Naruto: Yeah.
Shikamaru: I still can't believed that happened....[/size]
[size=+1]Naruto and Saskue stood apart from each other, at the Final Valley, panting. Saskue had his Mangekyou Sharingan active, and his level two curse marks. Naruto had one tail of his demon cloak, and was in Sage mode. There was a small crowd, watching the battle unfold.
Saskue: You can't ever win, if you don't come at me to kill me. Konoha betrayed and wiped out the Uchiha Clan, and if that's what you stand for, I won't hesitate to kill you.
Naruto: I made a promise that I would bring you back, and I will, even if it kills me.
Saskue: Then Die!
The rushed at Naruto with an Amaterasu covered Chidori, the black flames and Lightning leaving a trail of destruction.
Sakura: NARUTO!!! I don't care about Saskue anymore; just don't die!
Naruto: Sakura...
Saskue: DIE!
Naruto: !!!
Sakura: !!!
Saskue: Stupid girl.
Hinata: I won't...won't let you kill Naruto.
Naruto: NO! Hinata!
Saskue: This is what happens when you deify me.
Naruto had stopped listening, instead, he found himself in the bleak sewer-like system he had become all to familiar with.
Kyuubi: What is it now, boy? Have you come to offer yourself up? Yes, let me have control. Now that your father is out of the way, you can brake the seal, and I will get revenge for you...
Naruto: SHUT UP! Listen, fox, my father sealed you in me, in the hopes that I would use your powers for good. Face it, if I die, you die. Now, give me all your strength, before I decide to take it from you.
Kyuubi: Very well...I will give you all of my power...Only if you agree to release me after this fight, and give me complete control...
Naruto: Fine, now give your power.
Naruto snapped back into reality. Saskue was staring at him, and flung Hinata's lifeless body to the side.
Naruto: I'm keeping my promise...I'm bringing you back...But with one change...It will be in a casket!!!
Naruto roared, and violent gust blew, as red chakra spiraled around him. The chakra envoloped him, turning into his nine-tailed form. But he was in complete control. As soon as his skin started to burn, he felt a fourth chakra.
It wasn't his own, Natural Energy, or the Fox's. Then he remembered.
Itachi: I've given you some of my power...I hope the day never comes where you have to use it.
Suddenly, Naruto found himself surrounded by Susano'o. The giant thing swirled around him, and became a part of the demon cloak. His skin stopped boiling, and he now wore Suasno'o's armor and weapons.
Naruto: Saskue...I'm sorry. Fuuton: RasenShuriken!
Saskue: Chidori!
Susano'o's sword melded into the RasenShuriken, and Naruto charged towards Saskue....[/size]
[size=+1]Naruto: I killed him with that move...And managed to re-seal the fox inside me forever with Susano'o's sword.
Shikamaru: Yeah, that battle...It was tough on everyone... Hey, why don't you go, I'm sure you better visit the graves before your wife catches wind that your here, and didn't come to see her first.
Naruto: Yeah, I'm sure Sakura would be mad about that. See you at the Kage's summit.
Shikmaru: Right...[/size]
[size=+1]Naruto: I'm sorry, my friend...But there was no way around it, but I wish there had been.
Sakura: You couldn't; don't blame yourself.
Naruto: Sakura. How've you two been?
Sakura: We've been good. Sai is now head of ANBU, and Ino and Chouji got married a few weeks ago. Tsunade is doing fine. I've missed you.
Naruto: I've missed you too. How's Jiraiya?
Sakura: Same as his father, well.
She hugged him.
Sakura: I thought you weren't coming back for a few months.
Naruto: Something's bothering me...I feel like there is something wrong with the other Demons Chakra...I'm going to raise the question at the Summit.
Sakura: Just don't get in anything you can't handle. You have a family now.
Naruto: I know, and I promise.[/size]
Naruto Kangen means: Naruto Revolution
[size=+3]Naruto Kangen: Arata Akebono
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Naruto Revolution: New Beginning
[/size]A young lady ran into the Hokage's office.
[size=+1]Lady: Mr. Hokage, there is someone here to see you. He say's it urgent.
Hokage: Send him in....
A few moments later, the man walked in the room, drenched in water from the rain.
Man: Nice to see you, 7th Hokage...Shikamaru.
Shikamaru: Hey Naruto, long time no see. Its been, what, four years since you stepped down as Hokage to become the Myobokuzan Sage?
Naruto: That's right. I've come to visit everyone. And to see my kid, of coarse.
Shikamaru: Well, I figure you'll find Sakura and Jiraiya in the park.
Naruto: Thanks. By the way, how are you and Temari?
Shikamaru: Not bad, we've been engaged for about three months now.
Naruto: Thanks...I think I wanna stop by the graves first, if you don't mind...
Shikamaru: Hinata's and Saskue's?
Naruto: Yeah.
Shikamaru: I still can't believed that happened....[/size]
[size=+2] Several Years Beforehand [/size]
[size=+1]Naruto and Saskue stood apart from each other, at the Final Valley, panting. Saskue had his Mangekyou Sharingan active, and his level two curse marks. Naruto had one tail of his demon cloak, and was in Sage mode. There was a small crowd, watching the battle unfold.
Saskue: You can't ever win, if you don't come at me to kill me. Konoha betrayed and wiped out the Uchiha Clan, and if that's what you stand for, I won't hesitate to kill you.
Naruto: I made a promise that I would bring you back, and I will, even if it kills me.
Saskue: Then Die!
The rushed at Naruto with an Amaterasu covered Chidori, the black flames and Lightning leaving a trail of destruction.
Sakura: NARUTO!!! I don't care about Saskue anymore; just don't die!
Naruto: Sakura...
Saskue: DIE!
Naruto: !!!
Sakura: !!!
Saskue: Stupid girl.
Hinata: I won't...won't let you kill Naruto.
Naruto: NO! Hinata!
Saskue: This is what happens when you deify me.
Naruto had stopped listening, instead, he found himself in the bleak sewer-like system he had become all to familiar with.
Kyuubi: What is it now, boy? Have you come to offer yourself up? Yes, let me have control. Now that your father is out of the way, you can brake the seal, and I will get revenge for you...
Naruto: SHUT UP! Listen, fox, my father sealed you in me, in the hopes that I would use your powers for good. Face it, if I die, you die. Now, give me all your strength, before I decide to take it from you.
Kyuubi: Very well...I will give you all of my power...Only if you agree to release me after this fight, and give me complete control...
Naruto: Fine, now give your power.
Naruto snapped back into reality. Saskue was staring at him, and flung Hinata's lifeless body to the side.
Naruto: I'm keeping my promise...I'm bringing you back...But with one change...It will be in a casket!!!
Naruto roared, and violent gust blew, as red chakra spiraled around him. The chakra envoloped him, turning into his nine-tailed form. But he was in complete control. As soon as his skin started to burn, he felt a fourth chakra.
It wasn't his own, Natural Energy, or the Fox's. Then he remembered.
Itachi: I've given you some of my power...I hope the day never comes where you have to use it.
Suddenly, Naruto found himself surrounded by Susano'o. The giant thing swirled around him, and became a part of the demon cloak. His skin stopped boiling, and he now wore Suasno'o's armor and weapons.
Naruto: Saskue...I'm sorry. Fuuton: RasenShuriken!
Saskue: Chidori!
Susano'o's sword melded into the RasenShuriken, and Naruto charged towards Saskue....[/size]
[size=+2] Present Day[/size]
[size=+1]Naruto: I killed him with that move...And managed to re-seal the fox inside me forever with Susano'o's sword.
Shikamaru: Yeah, that battle...It was tough on everyone... Hey, why don't you go, I'm sure you better visit the graves before your wife catches wind that your here, and didn't come to see her first.
Naruto: Yeah, I'm sure Sakura would be mad about that. See you at the Kage's summit.
Shikmaru: Right...[/size]
[size=+2]The tombstones
[/size][size=+1]Naruto: I'm sorry, my friend...But there was no way around it, but I wish there had been.
Sakura: You couldn't; don't blame yourself.
Naruto: Sakura. How've you two been?
Sakura: We've been good. Sai is now head of ANBU, and Ino and Chouji got married a few weeks ago. Tsunade is doing fine. I've missed you.
Naruto: I've missed you too. How's Jiraiya?
Sakura: Same as his father, well.
She hugged him.
Sakura: I thought you weren't coming back for a few months.
Naruto: Something's bothering me...I feel like there is something wrong with the other Demons Chakra...I'm going to raise the question at the Summit.
Sakura: Just don't get in anything you can't handle. You have a family now.
Naruto: I know, and I promise.[/size]
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