[Action] Naruto Juubi revival arc fanfiction part 10: infinite tsukyomi

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Sennin of Logic

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Naruto found himself inside infinite tsukyomi. His parents and teacher, Jiraya are alive inside of it. Naruto is unaware that this is infinite tsukyomi due to its effect on him, but he has little memories of the past.
Naruto: WEREN’T YOU?

Jiraya: WHAT?

Naruto: NEVERMIND. I’LL BE GOING OUT FOR A WHILE.

Naruto dashed to the top of the hokage mansion.

Naruto: TIME TO FIND OUT WHAT’S GOING ON. SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!

He then created shadow clones that spread all over the village.
One clone went to the Hyuga clan residence. He found Hinata, Neji, and their respective parents there. The clone dispersed.

Naruto: NEJI. ARGH!

Naruto’s head started to pound. He started to remember how Neji died. Another clone headed towards the Uchiha clan’s residence. He found Sasuke with Itachi and their parents as well as the rest of the clan. His head pounded again, and he remembered what actually happened to the clan. The shadow clone dispersed. Another clone met up with Sakura.

Naruto: SAKURA! WANT TO GO ON A DATE?

Sakura: SURE!

Naruto’s clone dispersed.

Naruto: I DON’T NEED A HEADACHE TO TELL SOMETHING’S WRONG WITH THAT!

Naruto’s clones continued to investigate the leaf. The real Naruto headed towards Sasuke

Naruto: SASUKE!

Sasuke looked up towards Naruto. He couldn’t have given a more sour look if 20 lemons were shoved in his face.
Sasuke: WHAT DO YOU WANT NARUTO?

Naruto: I NEED TO TALK WITH YOU PRIVATELY!

Naruto jumped away, and Sasuke followed him.

Naruto: HAVE YOU NOTICED SOMETHING STRANGE? THE MORE I LOOK AROUND THIS PLACE, THE MORE I GET THESE STRANGE HEADACHES AND THINK THAT THIS IS WRONG.

Sasuke: I KNOW.

Naruto: THEN WHY ARE YOU…

Sasuke: WHY TRY TO INVESTIGATE? REGARDLESS OF WHAT WE FIND, REGARDLESS OF OUR PASTS, EVERYTHING’S PERFECT HERE.

Naruto gave a look of pure confusion.

Naruto: BUT IT’S NOT REAL.

Sasuke: WHAT HAPPENED IN THE PAST WAS REAL, BUT WHAT’S HERE IS REAL NOW!
Naruto left. He went to the training ground where Kakashi tested them. His head started to ache again. He went into his subconscious. He found a person in shadows inside.

The mysterious man: SO I FINALLY GET TO MEAT YOU, CHILD OF PRHOPHECY.

The person had long and spiky hair and a face identical to Naruto’s. His cloak had 9 tomoe on its back with a swirl above.
Mystery man: I AM THE SAGE OF SIX PATHS.

Naruto had a look of surprise.

Naruto: YOU MEAN, YOU’RE THE GOD OF SHINOBI?! HOW ARE YOU EVEN HERE?!

SO6P: WHEN KILLER B TOUCHED YOU, HE TRANSFERRED A PIECE OF THE EIGHT TAIL’S CHAKRA INSIDE OF YOU. IT COMBINED WITH THE CHAKRA OF THE OTHER BIJU TO AWAKEN MY DORMANT CHAKRA THAT I PLACED INSIDE OF YOUR CLAN SO THAT ONCE THE TIME CAME, I’D MEET AND TRAIN YOU.

Naruto: TRAIN ME? TRAIN ME TO DO WHAT?

SO6P: I’LL TRAIN YOU HOW TO STOP THE INFINITE TSUKYOMI AND HOW TO USE CREATION OF ALL THINGS.

Naruto: AWESOME! HOW DO I LEARN IT?

Kurama: DIVIDE MY CHAKRA.

Naruto looked towards to the left.

Naruto: WHAT DO YOU MEAN?

Kurama: REMEMBER HOW MY CHAKRA USED TO BE BEFORE MINATO GAVE YOU SOME MORE? TRY MAKING THOSE 2 SEPARATE AGAIN.

Naruto made many clones and prepared to train with Kurama’s chakra. After several hours, he mastered it.
SO6P: NOW TRY USING KURAMA’S YIN CHAKRA TO FORM SOMETHING, THEN USE THE YANG CHARKA TO GIVE IT LIFE.
Naruto did as the Sage said. He began training to form objects. In a short period of time, he began to nearly create a sphere out of thin air.

Naruto: IT’S LIKE CREATING SHADOW CLONES AND MANIPULATING THE SEAL I USED AGAINST KURAMA.

SO6P: SO YOU KNOW THE BASICS, THAT’S GOOD. THEN I’LL BEGIN TO TELL YOUHOW TO USE THIS JUTSU IN BATTLE. ONE PRINCABLE IS TO USE IT LIKE A GENJUTSU, BUT HAVE IT PHYSICALLY EFFECT AN OPPONENT.

Naruto: BUT I STINK AT GENJUTSU.

SO6P: THE OTHER METHOD IS TO CREATE AN OBJECT OR JUTSU WITH ABSOLUTES. I’VE USED THE METHOD TO MAKE MY FAN THAT SUMMONS ALL NATURES, AS WELL AS MY GUANTLET, SWORD AND BOTTLE USED FOR SEALING. I ALSO USED IT TO MAKE MY SEALING POT AND THE TOSKA BLADE AND YATA MIRROR. IT ALSO ALLOWS FOR SEALING AND BARRIERS, WHICH YOU UNDOUBTEDLY HAVE A NATURAL TALENT FOR. THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN GENJUTSU CREATION OF ALL THINGS AND SEALING IS THAT GENJUTSU ALTERS ONE’S SURROUNDINGS WHILE SEALING MANIPULATES SPACE-TIME AND MAKES ITS OWN DIMENSION. THIS CAN BE USED FOR A VARIATY OF USES, SUCH AS TRAPPING PEOPLE INSIDE YOUR DIMENSION, ABSORBING ATTACKS, OR SUPRESSING THEM. HOWEVER, A SKILLED USER CAN USE IT TO MANIPULATE SPACE-TIME. SEALLING USUALLY REQUIRES CONTACT OF SOME SORT.

Naruto: OH COOL!

Naruto then began to master creation of all things. After he mastered it, he made a creation of all things variant of ransenshuriken.

After some time, people in the distance came towards Naruto. It was Minato, Itachi, Kushina and Jiraya. Naruto was happy to see them.

Naruto: HEY GUYS!
SO6P: WATCH OUT NARUTO!

All 3 of them started to charge Naruto.

Naruto: WHAT’S GOING ON?!

SO6P: THESE GUYS WERE DEAD PREVIOUSLY! THEY’RE NOTHING BUT PUPPETS!
Naruto’s heart sank when he released that they were the enemy. He activated biju mode. At the same time, Kushina transformed into a duplicate 9 tails, Itachi used a final susanoo, Minato set kunai on the ground, and Jiraya summoned Gamabunta.

Naruto fired a tailed beast bomb towards Itachi, but yata mirror deflected it. Kushina made an immense TBB and fired it towards Naruto. Naruto got a scroll and used sealing to absorb the TBB. He then waved the scroll towards Kushina and fired the TBB back towards her. The explosion was so powerful, it forced her to revert to human form, beaten. Naruto then used a shockwave to send Gamabunta and Jiraya flying away. However, Minato threw a kunai towards the ground Naruto was standing on and sealed the Kurama cloak. Itachi then, before Naruto could get his footing, stabbed him with toska blade.
SO6P: THIS IS BAD!

Naruto then made a seal on his hand. He hit the blade. It was a reverse seal that destroyed the entire toska blade. Naruto’s wound was then healed.
Naruto: CREATION RANSENSHURIKEN!

Naruto then revealed the ransenshuriken he created, and threw it towards Itachi’s susanoo. It became a whirlwind of creation blades that Naruto used to destroy Yata mirror from its basic creation of all things structure. The susanoo was destroyed as well. Itachi was paralyzed. Naruto made the whirlwind head towards Minato, but Minato used FTG to evade with ease. Naruto retracted the whirlwind to reform his creation ransenshruiken. However, it was missing one of its blades. It was behind Minato, in his blind spot. It hit Minato and paralyzed him when it became a whirlwind. Naruto then blitzed Jiraya with a reverse contract seal and a paralysis seal.

Naruto felt a cold rage he rarely felt for anyone.

Naruto: I’LL KILL HIM FOR THIS, BUT I NEED TO MAKE MORE TOOLS FIRST!
 

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The all caps don't help; in fact, they're irritating.
You spelled incorrectly easy words on several occasions. You spelled "meet" as it should have been in one situation, as "meat".

If you want to be taken seriously, please put more conscious effort into style and grammar.

Just some friendly words of advice.
 

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WOW...you rushed it...puting so much content in one only chapter...thats...not good. The idea is not questioned and explained better, why are only Naruto and Sasuke in this world? And the Rikudou too...he came out of nowhere...
 

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WOW...you rushed it...puting so much content in one only chapter...thats...not good. The idea is not questioned and explained better, why are only Naruto and Sasuke in this world? And the Rikudou too...he came out of nowhere...
The heartfelt explanation of infinite tsukyomi come next chapter. Also, I think that we've had enough hints that the sage's chakra was inside Naruto.
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However, your criticism was the most helpful. I'll keep what you said in mind, thank you.
 

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I'm sitting here in awe. Great job!!! XD but I would have to agree that the caps make it sound like everyone's yelling. I would write it in normal letters, but other than that I have no issues with it. Great job!!! :yayy:
 
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