Naruto: Jounin Adventures Chapter 2

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Naruto Jounin Adventures Prologue:
Naruto Jounin Adventures Chapter 1:
Naruto Jounin Adventures Chapter 2 Part 1:

Chapter Two Part Two: The Test
Later, outside of the same training zone that Kakashi first took Naruto too…

Naruto: Ok, Kameha, Patsuta, and Fukutsu, are you three ready to officially ready to become shinobi?

Naruto was excited to finally begin the test. His enjoyment could be seen in his expressions.

In unison: YES!

Naruto: Alright, let’s get to it. You’re objective is to retrieve these bells. But there’s a couple catches. 1. You must do so within 2 days, I will be providing you a survival pack. 2. I will disperse shadow clones, all have bells. But not all of them are real. So you’re going to have to find the real ones. And remember, internal fighting is the worst thing for a team. Are your ready to get started?

In Unison: Yes Naruto-sensei.

Naruto: Begin!

The team and Naruto dispersed into the forest, ready to go. Naruto was the most excited, as he would finally get a team. That is, if the three pass….

Fukutsu: Here’s the plan: We are going to need to get the shadow clones first. We don’t have any sensor ninja, so this will be a lot harder. As soon as we see one of the many Naruto, we need to attack.

Patsuta and Kameha: Right!

Fukutsu: Ok, let’s go then.

The three stumble upon a group of 4 clones. One is sitting on a rock, while the other three are conversing. They calmly hide in the bushes, ready for their first attack.

Fukutsu (in a hushed voice): Patsuta, you’re up. I’m going to do an Earth style, I want you to follow up with one of your Water Bullets. Kameha, if there are any left, use your kunai to take them out.

Patsuta: Right!

Kameha: OK!

Fukutsu is laying calmly in the bushes, prepared for an attack.

Fukutsu: Earth Style: Earth Disruption!
(Rumble.. Rumble)

All the Narutos’ look over. Unknowingly, Patsuta appears behind them

Patsuta: Water Style: Water Bullets!

About 2 clones are taken down, One uses a substitution jutsu, while the other dodges.

Patsuta: Damn...

Kameha then throws two kunai, one filled with chakra, the other normal. The normal one takes the clone that was dodging, while the chakra filled kunai manages to break through a tree, where the other clone was hiding.

Naruto Clone: Well done, you three seem to already have mastered some jutsu. However, this is far from over.

The clone evaporates (Which gives Naruto the experience of the fight).

Naruto: *Thinking* These three have shown great teamwork, as well as their already good jutsu. But, they still haven’t seen what their own sensei can do yet.
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The three are currently in a heavily wooded area. Tree's are about 3 to 4 people thick.
Fukutsu: Where could he be, I’m wondering if he even has any more clones. I say we go search for him.

Naruto: That would be a good idea, if I wasn't already behind you...

Naruto is currently holding a kunai to Fukutsu’s neck.

Naruto: Rule No.1 of combat, never let the enemies get behind you.

Fukutsu: Damn… *Thinking* How am I supposed to get out of this?

Patsuta winks at Fukutsu, telling him something’s about to happen.

Patsuta clone: Wind Style: Wind Cutter!

Naruto: Wind Style: Blade of Wind!

Naruto’s wind style pushes back Patsuta’s jutsu. However, that left Naruto vulnerable.

Fukutsu: Now Kameha!

Kameha throws two kunai at Naruto, one for distraction, and the other to cut off the bells.

Kameha: It worked!

The bells fall off of Naruto’s Belt, Kameha snags them. Naruto’s clone evaporates.

Kameha (with the bells in her hand): We did it! I’m too good with the kunai.

The bells evaporate.

All Three: Damn!

Fukutsu: I really thought we had him this time!

Kameha: This is tough…

Patsuta: My plan was fool proof…. But Naruto Sensei is so awesome!

Naruto (In the bushes near them): They almost had me there, if that was me instead of a clone, it would have been over. Maybe it’s time I pick it up.

Naruto: Shadow Clone Jutsu!

Naruto Clone 1: Fire Style: Phoenix Flower Jutsu!

Naruto Clone 2: Wind Style: Powerful Wind Wave!

This make the Phoenix Flowers’ faster and more powerful

Patsuta: Water Style: Water Bullets!

Patsutas’ Water bullets only take out 5 of the 10 Phoenix Flames. Fukutsu and Kameha dodge behind some rocks in an open field, next to the wooded area.

Fukutsu: That was close

Kameha: Yea, we could have been killed.

Fukutsu: We need to retreat, and plan our next attack.

Kameha: I agree, we can’t take him with our current condition if he’s this powerful.

Fukutsu: Right!

Fukutsu whistles to Patsuta. Patsuta hurries over.

Patsuta: So what’s the plan?

Fukutsu: We need to retreat and think of a strategy. I have an idea.

Patsuta: Sounds good.


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Do Naruto's three students realize that he has kurama to help him and he has sage mode making him a sensory type because if they do not then they are grossly underestimating him. Nice chapter.
 

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hope he does not because then his students will never get the bells.
He his doing the same test that Kakashi did with his team 7 so whats he going to have them do to pass it
Well, seeing as it's a test passed down from the 3rd-Jiraiya-Fourth-Kakashi-Naruto, I just added the shadow clone twist. But like I said, you'll have to wait and see.
 

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That was great but needs more of something but don't know what
Description. That's the word you're looking for. If it's all conversation and no description, it won't quite cut it.

Describe the surroundings and characters more. Adjectives. Narration. These things are important. Make sure to insert a good amount of detail.
 

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Description. That's the word you're looking for. If it's all conversation and no description, it won't quite cut it.

Describe the surroundings and characters more. Adjectives. Narration. These things are important. Make sure to insert a good amount of detail.
Ok, thanks. Will do. Have you read the other chapters?
 
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