well this is my first real fanfic xd so i want to hear your comment please and any advices you have
NARUTO :IN THE SHADOWS
Prologue: sasuke’s ordeal
Somewhere in the forest an avenger seeks its target. Sasuke walks towards konoha the only thing between he and his goal is time. His outer calm was belied by a crooked smile. Sasuke was displeased by his pace but this could not be rushed. All he could hide was his presence but his sinister chakra could be sensed by any sensor ninja a mile away.
“Itachi…,” Sasuke thought,” Mum Dad living happily on your sacrifices I will burn it all to the ground, and from its ashes the uchiha name shall restore its honor. Your freedom.”
Sasuke suddenly stops.”chidori”
“Show yourself!” instead of hearing an answer there the space before him begins to distort in a spiral pattern
“Calm down sasuke,” Tobi said,” I see your eyes have healed up nicely.
“I’m going to konoha, Now.” reaching for his sword.
“Tobi eyes widen (thinking) “so he dose not trust me completely yet”. Tobi eyes narrows slowly, “I see you want to test your eyes, well…but going to konoha might not be that satisfying
“why?”
“Seeing that they is a war”
“War!? ”eyes widens with surprised, then smiles.
“Well they was one”
“What do you want,” Sasuke asks with a frown.
“In time, but first”
Tobi jumps a few feet back, he does a bunch of hand seal places his hands on the ground “summoning technique, Gado-Mazo”. The ground shake and the gado-mazo emerges slowly from the earth , it towers over most of the trees around and tobi stand at top it.
“ Sasuke “ Tobi shouts, “ as promised”. Tobi lifts something from on top the Gado statue and throws it down.
An almost lifeless Naruto that is thrown by Tobi hits the ground,.” It’s unbelievable that he survived the extraction process with this little damage. Even back then, Kushina was in a near death, this is more like he’s really worn out. “So this is the power of the kyuubi, No! He probably had the kyuubi chakra infused with his own. Now having a large reserve of dormant nine tail chakra, this is interesting not that I didn’t know this but intriguing none the less. Naruto you definitely have the body of the sage of the six paths”.
Tobi jumps down and landing beside naruto’s unconscious body,” setting this up was a strenuous but they will be no better time because tonight I rule the world”, sasuke looks at naruto with narrowed eyes then at tobi. Tobi knowing sasuke most have figured it out just smiled.
“Naruto”, Sasuke whispers’, staring at naruto as he activates his Enternal Mayuoko Sharingan.
Sasuke frowns looking at Tobi “You extracted the nine tails?”
“Yes, you do have good eyes, but look a little deeper .”
“………, He still has the nine tail chakra”
“This might be a parting gift from the kyuubi or mere coincidence but this does not affect the plan in any way. I just need the consciousness and chakra of the tailed beast, sasuke fell free to go all out, and this should be interesting.
Sasuke signed. “yes I see, but this will not be worthy test for the power of the uchiha.” Sasuke voice becomes cold as he looks at naruto unconscious.
“Oh this,” Tobi queried, looking at sasuke.
“Such dark and sinister chakra could almost rival that of madara uchiha, such a massive killing intent a true uchiha, enough to harness the full power of the sage eyes,” Tobi says in thought. The power in his eyes.
The sun prepares to set and twilight draws near, the line across day and night, the unison of darkness and light, with this the paths of two elite shinobi crosses and destiny is about to be fulfilled. The power of the sage of the six path are gathered in one location. With this the aged old battle comes to its conclusion on the cross roads of destiny. That will decide the future of the ninja world either for peace or pain, the will of fire against the circle of hatred. Its that time again that good and evil meet to decide the future
NARUTO :IN THE SHADOWS
Prologue: sasuke’s ordeal
Somewhere in the forest an avenger seeks its target. Sasuke walks towards konoha the only thing between he and his goal is time. His outer calm was belied by a crooked smile. Sasuke was displeased by his pace but this could not be rushed. All he could hide was his presence but his sinister chakra could be sensed by any sensor ninja a mile away.
“Itachi…,” Sasuke thought,” Mum Dad living happily on your sacrifices I will burn it all to the ground, and from its ashes the uchiha name shall restore its honor. Your freedom.”
Sasuke suddenly stops.”chidori”
“Show yourself!” instead of hearing an answer there the space before him begins to distort in a spiral pattern
“Calm down sasuke,” Tobi said,” I see your eyes have healed up nicely.
“I’m going to konoha, Now.” reaching for his sword.
“Tobi eyes widen (thinking) “so he dose not trust me completely yet”. Tobi eyes narrows slowly, “I see you want to test your eyes, well…but going to konoha might not be that satisfying
“why?”
“Seeing that they is a war”
“War!? ”eyes widens with surprised, then smiles.
“Well they was one”
“What do you want,” Sasuke asks with a frown.
“In time, but first”
Tobi jumps a few feet back, he does a bunch of hand seal places his hands on the ground “summoning technique, Gado-Mazo”. The ground shake and the gado-mazo emerges slowly from the earth , it towers over most of the trees around and tobi stand at top it.
“ Sasuke “ Tobi shouts, “ as promised”. Tobi lifts something from on top the Gado statue and throws it down.
An almost lifeless Naruto that is thrown by Tobi hits the ground,.” It’s unbelievable that he survived the extraction process with this little damage. Even back then, Kushina was in a near death, this is more like he’s really worn out. “So this is the power of the kyuubi, No! He probably had the kyuubi chakra infused with his own. Now having a large reserve of dormant nine tail chakra, this is interesting not that I didn’t know this but intriguing none the less. Naruto you definitely have the body of the sage of the six paths”.
Tobi jumps down and landing beside naruto’s unconscious body,” setting this up was a strenuous but they will be no better time because tonight I rule the world”, sasuke looks at naruto with narrowed eyes then at tobi. Tobi knowing sasuke most have figured it out just smiled.
“Naruto”, Sasuke whispers’, staring at naruto as he activates his Enternal Mayuoko Sharingan.
Sasuke frowns looking at Tobi “You extracted the nine tails?”
“Yes, you do have good eyes, but look a little deeper .”
“………, He still has the nine tail chakra”
“This might be a parting gift from the kyuubi or mere coincidence but this does not affect the plan in any way. I just need the consciousness and chakra of the tailed beast, sasuke fell free to go all out, and this should be interesting.
Sasuke signed. “yes I see, but this will not be worthy test for the power of the uchiha.” Sasuke voice becomes cold as he looks at naruto unconscious.
“Oh this,” Tobi queried, looking at sasuke.
“Such dark and sinister chakra could almost rival that of madara uchiha, such a massive killing intent a true uchiha, enough to harness the full power of the sage eyes,” Tobi says in thought. The power in his eyes.
The sun prepares to set and twilight draws near, the line across day and night, the unison of darkness and light, with this the paths of two elite shinobi crosses and destiny is about to be fulfilled. The power of the sage of the six path are gathered in one location. With this the aged old battle comes to its conclusion on the cross roads of destiny. That will decide the future of the ninja world either for peace or pain, the will of fire against the circle of hatred. Its that time again that good and evil meet to decide the future
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