[Predictions] naruto finale

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shonersage

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Grey Clouds blanket most of the sky as the wake of its gloomy pastel near.emotion is dullified within the moment , silence takes a short breath that seems to stretch infinitely as if time itself was halted.drip.drop. dripp drip drop splash...crickle crack crash lightiniing pierces the darkness and lights even the dimmist crevices of the plain.A wave of dropletts crash down from the heavens the sound like a rushing waterfall growing nearer and closer until it completly surrounds everything.

Sasukes perfect sassano'o illuminates as the peices separate in mid air.
First the arms then the wrist all condense down until the pieces clad to sasuke like armor..
All the pieces eventually encompass his entire body now no longer as transparent yet more luminescent than ever .
Finally his sword crashes down into the stone where he stands and cracks the earth open.
Sasuke pulls the sword from the earth his eyes now apparent with rinnegan glowing with the same essence of color as his renewed armor
But the glare from the anger the in his eyes more apparent than anything on the battlefield.

Sasuke:We are no longer the children we once were, wouldn't you agree .
The games we would play trying to outdo each other are no longer a luxury we can afford.
Now we fight for meaning , for the purpose of achieving our goal.
For one of us on the other side the end of this battle is a dream realized for the other ,
Well for the other it truly is the end .you once told me that high level shinobi can understand one another without words
But I think we both had that ability before we ever reached truly high levels.
Now I want...I need you to understand that I will kill you .nothing will stand in my way!
Back down now....


Naruto reaches.clunk...
Sasukes sword down to narutos chest..
Spatters of blood slowly fall onto narutos face
Sasuke looks down to one of narutos hands
His clenched hand slowly opens up to reveal a folded paper
Sasuke slowley reaches and grabs the parchment
Upon opening he recognizes it as his team 7 photo
He flips it over to read the writing on the back

"My Family"
"Forever"
A tear rolls down sasuke face
As he looks down to see narutos other hand on his chest and his sword is clearly in the ground between narutos arm and chest.
Sasuke :you, you actually did...
Narutos hand drops and a small hole can be seen in sasukes chest then his back is shown and the hole is massive.
Sasuke falls backward and naruto rises to his feet
Naruto:when I told you that if we fight again both of us will die I wasn't lying
You of all people know I never go back on what I say so why ...why did you back out ...why didn't you follow through
Sasuke:its just.. were like brothers.. you know after all these years I never did break our bond........
Sasuke coughs and blood comes out his rinnegan twist and becomes a sharingan then fades to black then to grey.
Juugo arives and rushes to sasuke naruto just stands above them tears drip down his face.
Juugo:noo! Sasuke
Juugo pumps his curse into sasuke but there's no effect and he seems to have given up.
Then he gets a determined look on his face
Juugo:No, you are not a momento of kimimaru you are his reincarnation and you will not die here
Juugo transmits his entire body into sasuke sasukes chest pumps unaturally large then levels back down to normal and his breath is inhaled.the cursemark encompasses his wound and begins healing it instantly. He rises to his feet.sasuke:lets finish this already
 
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I don't think sasuke could beat naruto in a full fledge battle and I prefer narutos character my concept is that naruto will stop fighting back and die at his friends hand or for his friend
But thanks for the support lol
 

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Dramatic, but anticlimatic. If that's the end you think will happen, then pay Kishimoto and the Shonen Jump so they rename the manga to Sasuke.
 

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I don't really zee this story as a prediction as I I do me trying to expand my creativity however I'm a realist and don't see every story having a fantasy disney ending where everyone live and walks into the sunset holding hands in real life people die and I don't believe we should hide that in our stories
 

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Everyone is the main character of their own story and everyone will eventually die but should we all go to jubitos dream world were everything is fine and dandy I think not hiding from the truth only makes people weaker when forced to experience the loss of a loved one I believe everyone should speak their peace and never allow the crippling emotin of regret to hinder them write your own stories and cherish the time we have with one another as at any moment that could change
So sieze the moment share your emotion with your loved ones and live without regret
 

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I don't really zee this story as a prediction as I I do me trying to expand my creativity however I'm a realist and don't see every story having a fantasy disney ending where everyone live and walks into the sunset holding hands in real life people die and I don't believe we should hide that in our stories
There is a fatal flaw in your argument, my friend... This is a shounen manga. The ending is meant to be happy.
 

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There is a fatal flaw in your argument, my friend... This is a shounen manga. The ending is meant to be happy.
Actually I was more leaning toward statement than argument an argument is a debate of such I'm just telling it how it is I am aware its shounen but I was unaware shounen was all happy endings thats kinda lame.regardless I will continue writing mine as some people aren't scared of the shadows
 

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Actually I was more leaning toward statement than argument an argument is a debate of such I'm just telling it how it is I am aware its shounen but I was unaware shounen was all happy endings thats kinda lame.regardless I will continue writing mine as some people aren't scared of the shadows
Well, that's a valid point too. I wouldn't be surprised at all if Kishimoto brings us a dramatic ending, specially bringing to the table the concept of "hero".

And yes, if you think this manga will have a tragic ending then your opinion is respectable, and it is possible (although not very likely, but possible nonetheless).
 

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Well, that's a valid point too. I wouldn't be surprised at all if Kishimoto brings us a dramatic ending, specially bringing to the table the concept of "hero".

And yes, if you think this manga will have a tragic ending then your opinion is respectable, and it is possible (although not very likely, but possible nonetheless).
I'm a fan of kishis thus far and just hope that it doesn't draw to a dull or completly predictable ending
 
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