AfricanProdigy
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Hey guys, this is my first Fanfiction in a long time. I plan on making this at least 4/6 parts. This is not the final Part 1, this is only a prototype (as I have not made one in a while, I might be rusty) to see what you guys think I could do differently or keep. So, tell me how much you like it, and tell me what I could change, keep or add to it, and hopefully you enjoy!
It is a peaceful day in the Village Hidden in the Leaves, and Naruto is walking back from a mission...
Naruto: Ahhh, it feels great to be back in Konoha, ya know! And what better than to come back from a mission and have some Ramen?
......
Teuchi: Have as much ramen as you like! It's on me! A good shinobi must eat up, hahaha!
Naruto: *Sluuurp* *Gulp* *Munch Munch*
Teuchi: Not even a thank you....
.......
Naruto: Sakura-chan, Sakura-chan! Whatcha been up to?
Sakura: Naruto! How was the mission?
Naruto: Easy! Didn't break a sweat.
Sakura: Did you put my amazing, homeade Naruto soldier pills to good use?
Naruto: Ehhhh.....
Sakura: Well?!
Naruto: (Scary!) Oh..uh..worked like a charm, ya know!
Sakura: Good, good!
Naruto: Hey, hey it's Kakashi-sensei over there! Kakashi-sensei! Yo!
Kakashi: Oh? I see it's my number one unpredictable ninja, Naruto. And Sakura too. You guys on a date?
Naruto and Sakura: *Blush* OF COURSE NOT!!
Kakashi: Oh, oh, oh, only a joke. Now if you'll excuse me, I want to finish this chapter of Icha-Icha.
Naruto: Before we goooo.....
Sakura: (Grins) how about you show us what's under that mask?
Naruto: I think we've waited long enough to get the chance to see.
Kakashi: How about no....
Naruto: Then I have no choice....BUT TO SPOIL ICHA ICHA! THE ONE WHO IS REALLY BEING CHEATED ON IS...
Kakashi: Damn it! Stop! No! (Plugs ears)
Sakura: Hahaha, Channaro!!
Naruto: Hehe, Shadow Clone Jutsu!
Kakashi: Oh dear......
..........
* zzzzzzz *
Pain: Assemble
* zzzzzzz *
Zetsu: What is the meaning of this?
Deidara: Whatever this is, better make it quick, mm
Kisame: Hoho, a meeting at a time like this? Interesting, eh Itachi?
Itachi: .........
Tobi: Yessss!!!! Ultra top secret meeting!! Is it about me being a good boy?? Whaddya think Deidara-senpai?
Deidara: I think it'll be about your incompetence.....
Kakuzu: As long as it involves money, I have no problem.
Hidan: Who the fu*k even cares about your money Kakuzu?
Kakuzu: I swear I'll kill you...
Hidan: Too bad it's not even possible, moron!!
Kakuzu: Oh, you're asking for it now.............
Pain: Settle down everyone. This is important.
Rest of Akatsuki: ............
Pain: So as we all know, a change in plans of capturing the Jinchuuriki has been mentioned lately....
Zetsu: So it's "that" then...
Pain: Right. Hidan, you are vital to this plan, so listen. I shall go over it again....
Pain: We shall collect the blood of all the remaining Jinchuuriki, the Three-Tails, Four-Tails, Six-Tails, Eight-Tails and the Nine-Tails once every 3 days...
Itachi: .............
Pain: .....then with the collected blood, we will track down the Jinchuuriki one by one with the help of Zetsu, then we shall leave the Jinchuuriki near death by using Hidan's curse for each of the blood samples. Zetsu will bring the bodies back to base one by one, and we will start the ceremony once we collect them and this way, we can get even closer to our final goal than before
Hidan: Sounds good that I can smite as*holes like them. But how exactly do we get the ****ing blood from the Jinchuuriki in the first place???
Pain: With the help of Sasori's many spies that he has enlisted...
Deidara: But my man Sasori is dead, and he's the only one who knows where the spies are and he's the only one who the spies will obey......Hidan's got a point, mm
Kisame: Hohohoho, I have a feeling where we are going with this.....
Zetsu: But why would you be really planning on dealing with such scum like him?! Even you?
Pain: Anything that can easily get us closer to our goal I will accept. Besides, if he does not cooperate we can easily dispose of him and move on with our original plan. Killing him anyway would get rid of a hindrance to Akatsuki. And this just happens to be.........
Zetsu: ???
Deidara: Hm???
Itachi: ........
Kisame: Oh?
Tobi: Oooooh, who is it?
Kakuzu: Eh????
Hidan: What the fu*k??? Who?!
Pain: The only man still alive that can perform Edo Tensei.......
Deidara: Knew it...that bit*h, mm...
Pain: Orochimaru....
TO BE CONTINUED!!
It is a peaceful day in the Village Hidden in the Leaves, and Naruto is walking back from a mission...
Naruto: Ahhh, it feels great to be back in Konoha, ya know! And what better than to come back from a mission and have some Ramen?
......
Teuchi: Have as much ramen as you like! It's on me! A good shinobi must eat up, hahaha!
Naruto: *Sluuurp* *Gulp* *Munch Munch*
Teuchi: Not even a thank you....
.......
Naruto: Sakura-chan, Sakura-chan! Whatcha been up to?
Sakura: Naruto! How was the mission?
Naruto: Easy! Didn't break a sweat.
Sakura: Did you put my amazing, homeade Naruto soldier pills to good use?
Naruto: Ehhhh.....
Sakura: Well?!
Naruto: (Scary!) Oh..uh..worked like a charm, ya know!
Sakura: Good, good!
Naruto: Hey, hey it's Kakashi-sensei over there! Kakashi-sensei! Yo!
Kakashi: Oh? I see it's my number one unpredictable ninja, Naruto. And Sakura too. You guys on a date?
Naruto and Sakura: *Blush* OF COURSE NOT!!
Kakashi: Oh, oh, oh, only a joke. Now if you'll excuse me, I want to finish this chapter of Icha-Icha.
Naruto: Before we goooo.....
Sakura: (Grins) how about you show us what's under that mask?
Naruto: I think we've waited long enough to get the chance to see.
Kakashi: How about no....
Naruto: Then I have no choice....BUT TO SPOIL ICHA ICHA! THE ONE WHO IS REALLY BEING CHEATED ON IS...
Kakashi: Damn it! Stop! No! (Plugs ears)
Sakura: Hahaha, Channaro!!
Naruto: Hehe, Shadow Clone Jutsu!
Kakashi: Oh dear......
..........
* zzzzzzz *
Pain: Assemble
* zzzzzzz *
Zetsu: What is the meaning of this?
Deidara: Whatever this is, better make it quick, mm
Kisame: Hoho, a meeting at a time like this? Interesting, eh Itachi?
Itachi: .........
Tobi: Yessss!!!! Ultra top secret meeting!! Is it about me being a good boy?? Whaddya think Deidara-senpai?
Deidara: I think it'll be about your incompetence.....
Kakuzu: As long as it involves money, I have no problem.
Hidan: Who the fu*k even cares about your money Kakuzu?
Kakuzu: I swear I'll kill you...
Hidan: Too bad it's not even possible, moron!!
Kakuzu: Oh, you're asking for it now.............
Pain: Settle down everyone. This is important.
Rest of Akatsuki: ............
Pain: So as we all know, a change in plans of capturing the Jinchuuriki has been mentioned lately....
Zetsu: So it's "that" then...
Pain: Right. Hidan, you are vital to this plan, so listen. I shall go over it again....
Pain: We shall collect the blood of all the remaining Jinchuuriki, the Three-Tails, Four-Tails, Six-Tails, Eight-Tails and the Nine-Tails once every 3 days...
Itachi: .............
Pain: .....then with the collected blood, we will track down the Jinchuuriki one by one with the help of Zetsu, then we shall leave the Jinchuuriki near death by using Hidan's curse for each of the blood samples. Zetsu will bring the bodies back to base one by one, and we will start the ceremony once we collect them and this way, we can get even closer to our final goal than before
Hidan: Sounds good that I can smite as*holes like them. But how exactly do we get the ****ing blood from the Jinchuuriki in the first place???
Pain: With the help of Sasori's many spies that he has enlisted...
Deidara: But my man Sasori is dead, and he's the only one who knows where the spies are and he's the only one who the spies will obey......Hidan's got a point, mm
Kisame: Hohohoho, I have a feeling where we are going with this.....
Zetsu: But why would you be really planning on dealing with such scum like him?! Even you?
Pain: Anything that can easily get us closer to our goal I will accept. Besides, if he does not cooperate we can easily dispose of him and move on with our original plan. Killing him anyway would get rid of a hindrance to Akatsuki. And this just happens to be.........
Zetsu: ???
Deidara: Hm???
Itachi: ........
Kisame: Oh?
Tobi: Oooooh, who is it?
Kakuzu: Eh????
Hidan: What the fu*k??? Who?!
Pain: The only man still alive that can perform Edo Tensei.......
Deidara: Knew it...that bit*h, mm...
Pain: Orochimaru....
TO BE CONTINUED!!
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