NARUTO FANFIC: "The Clan Of Fire And Earth"

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Credits for the GFX-Art to Neliel Tu Odershvank aka Winter

Hi

[Author Note: MOST IMPORTANT: PLEASE LEAVE A USABLE FEEDBACK SO I CAN IMPROVE MY FANFIC SINCE IT IS MY FIRST ONE AND PLEASE BE HONEST ABOUT IT.
[Author Note: there may be some VIOLENCE in this fanfic and there sure will be people being killed, although I won't describe the deaths and killing detailed.]
[Author Note: I'm from Austria, which means I speak German. In German it is custom to begin Nouns with capital letters, so I will begin all important nouns with a Capital Letter]
[Author Note: Basically I write about the events of the Naruto series as well as the future and past of it when I am a character there and of course I and my clan influence the events]
[Author Note: Flashbacks are written cursive and bold. Dreams will be cursive written. Exceptions are headlines.]
[Author Note: Thoughts of the main character are written like he is speaking only in brackets, for example "(man what a drag) sure i will do it"]
[Author Note: Everything that happens after the Chunin Exams and more precisely the invasion of Orochimaru is purely my decision, because I already put so many changes in the present and the past of the series that I can't guarantee further accuracy to the storyline of the series. Alone ARC 5 containing Chapter 12 -14 changes major things in the Naruto storyline.]

The Clan Of Fire And Earth SAGAs and ARCs:
1. Introduction Saga:
1.a)ARC 1: Introduction: Chapters: one - Introduction
1.b) ARC 2 :Anko-Sensei: Chapters: four - Meeting Anko-Sensei, The Genin Trial, Rock vs Leaf, The Head Of The Clan


Saga 1

Arc 1,2

Chapter 1, 2, 3, 4, 5
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First Saga:

The Introducing Saga

First Arc:

Introduction

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ARC 1 - Inroduction

Chapter 1

Introduction

... Shit, how did I get into this mess? Oh, yeah, I made them believe that Mastoika was what they were looking for. I'm sorry for doing that, Mastoika. But at least the Hidden Leaf Village, Anko-Sensei, Hinata, Ino, Shizune and Naruto are safe. Well, they will come after Naruto eventually.

My name is Johannes from the Wenezokei Clan. You may be very confused, where I am at the moment, why I am here and how I got here.
Well one thing after another. I better start at the beginning.......

I graduated at the age of 13 at the Ninja Academy in the Hidden Leaf Village. I was very proud to be the first of my clan to do so here in the Leaf Village.

Like many of my Clan I already had awoken my Kekkai Genkai . Nevertheless I still was too impatient and couldn't handle my Chakra correctly in order to find the hidden powers of the Kekkai Genkai.

The first thing everyone is taught in our clan is how to harden and shape Chakra. Some of our really skilled members can make unbelievably hard Chakra Walls and unbelievably sharp Chakra Blades by using this technique.

Since our Dojutsu Kuckigan is only a rather weak Dojutsu it doesn't take much to awaken it. It only gives us the ability to see Chakra no matter how hard or concentrated it is, as long as it isn't covered up by something. The Chakra of our Clan has the ability to be invisible to the normal human eye no matter how hard or concentrated it is. Only users of the Sharingan, Byakugan and the Kuckigan can see it. But ninjas with good chakra control can sense it.

Since my closer family members were killed in the struggle between our Clan and the Hidden Rock Village (weeks after I was born) where we used to live, I was raised to be the new Head of the Clan.

Our Clan is divided into two parts: The Head Family and the Main Family. All members have the same rights and are treated equally. Everybody has his or her abilities and duties in the Clan. The only difference between the two families is that the Head Family administers the activities and knows how to open the Clan Library.

When the Village that gave my Clan a home or the Clan itself is in danger, the Head of my Clan gives orders that have to be followed by everyone. Everyone can ask about the reason and usefulness of the orders but has to obey them once they are given. When such a crisis occurs like just mentioned the women and children as well as the old people and craftsmen are evacuated immediately. After that the Head gives every member, that is able to fight direct and accurate orders what to do, which must be followed. Members that didn't want to do so left the Clan.

Despite this very strict structure there was only one member who left the Clan.

Shortly after Graduation from the Academy I became the Head of the Clan (the only person to be named Lord or -Sama inside the Clan). Outside the Clan nobody knows who the head is to prevent a planned assassination of the Head of the Clan by Tracking Ninjas of the Hidden Rock Village or Bounty Hunters. Neither the Hokage nor the Tsuchikage know or knew who the head of my Clan was.

I was assigned to the very scary Kunoichi Anko Mitarashi. Since only four (including me) students graduated, I was left without team members in my age.

In the next Chapter:

First I meet this strange guy with those unbelievably big eyebrows, then this arrogant Hyuga guy picks on me and then I'm told I don't have any squad members. What the hell is going on?

Meeting Anko-Sensei
 
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I like this. It's nicely written and there seems to be a good storyline to it.

The only thing I could say is that it was rather short, but nonetheless very nice to read already.
 
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thanks, that was only the introduction!

the next chapters introduce another main character as well as the surroundings in which Johannes lives!

And at chapter 6 the story kicks in!!

Here is chapter 2:

Second Arc:

Anko-Sensei!

Chapter Two:​

ARC 2 - Anko-Sensei

Chapter 2

Meeting Anko-Sensei

Before I became Head of my Clan, I had to become a Genin, because only an Accepted Ninja can become Head of the Clan.
About three hours after my graduation I was told to come to Classroom 8 in the Ninja Academy.
When I arrived a funny looking guy with far too big eyebrows already sat in the classroom.
I remembered that guy. He was the one who had always been mocked for not being able to use any kind of Gen- or Nin-Jutsu. But at the graduation he had impressed the proctors with his skills of Thai-Jutsu. Especially Guy-Sensei wanted him to graduate. Come to think of it they kinda look alike, although they're not related.
"Hi, Johannes of the Wenezokei Clan!", I greeted him and sat down next to him.
"Rock Lee! You seem different than the other guys...who always told me I wouldn't become a Ninja."
"Well the first time I noticed you outside school, was when I trained my summoning jutsu in the forest. Back then I saw you tearing yourself apart with training to become the best Thai-Jutsu Ninja ever born. And I have to say you absolutely kicked ass at the graduation.", I replied.
Shortly after that an arrogant looking guy with long brown hair and incredibly white eyes got in and sat down two rows in front of Lee and me without even saying a single word.
Lee got up and went to him to say hello.
Suddenly the guy turned, looked directly into Lee's eyes and said, "Neji of the Hyuga Sidebranch. Unlike both of you I'm a Genius and will always be above you two. I just hope there are coming some more Genin. I don't even want to wind up with one of you. In a squad you would just hold me back. So please save your breath and don't waste my time."
"Well... if this is the attitude of the Hyuga Clan, they can go straight to hell or is that just you, Neji Hyuga", I replied to him.
"Say what you want. I was born a pure Genius and you two were born fools and untalented. That's your fate. You can't change it.", Neji argued and then turned his back to us.
Lee wanted to charge at him, but I held him back and told him Neji wouldn't be worth the effort.
Ten minutes later the door opened and a cute girl came in. She had to be a fangirl of Neji because she went straight to Neji and told him something I and Lee couldn't understand. Not listening to her Neji ignored her completely and just kept staring at the desk in front of his face as if he was the only person in this room.
I heard of her. She is the best in throwing all kinds of blades and weapons. She never misses.
Suddenly the door opened again and Guy-Sensei together with a purple-haired, scary-looking Kinoichi appeared.
"OK, folks. You are the Youth, so live your life with the Power of Youth. It's time to assemble the squads." Guy-Sensei told us at the top of his lungs that I was afraid the sound-waves would tear down the walls of the room.
"Guy, you're hopeless. In your enthusiasm you forgot to introduce us. Then I'm going to do that", she said to Guy-Sensei touching her forehead with her right hand, turning to us she continued, "My name is Anko Mitarashi and that is "The Might Guy", as he calls himself. Normally you would be divided in squads of 3 people. But since only three mostly Thai-Jutsu using Ninja and one mostly Summoning Jutsu and Nin-Jutsu using Ninja graduated, we will form one squad of Thai-Jutsu Ninja under Guy and Johannes will be working as my student, until in 6 months the next Genin can graduate."
"Neji Hyuga, Tenten, Rock Lee. You come with me.", Guy told the three others and left the room.
When Lee walked past me I told him, "Don't get upset with Neji. He just envies you your willpower. Good luck, Pal." He stopped and turned back to me. I saw tears of happiness in his eyes.
"I wish you good luck, too. I envy you for having a Jonin teacher all for yourself. See ya later..." Lee replied happily.
"Johannes, I meet you in 30 minutes at the Front Gate. Got it. Not one second later.", Anko-Sensei interrupted Lee and also got out of the room. Lee got out of the room, too, to catch up with Guy-Sensei.
I went home and told Chris and Rayni, who trained with me for the graduation, about my assignment to Anko-Sensei.
Both agreed that the Ceremony for me becoming the Head of the Clan could wait another week.
"We will tell Kolecko (Head by proxy), you need to get to know your new Sensei."
With these words I grabbed my Ninja-Tools from my room and took off.
As expected Anko-Sensei was already waiting eating dumplings although I was ten minutes early...

In the next Chapter:


A Genin-Trial ? and only because some other Kids couldn't graduate and I have to be alone on a team with Anko-Sensei. If she wanna kick me back to the Academy with that she is messing with the wrong Genin!


The Genin Trial
 

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woop. nice storyline again.

Maybe, once people start discussion this you should make your chapters in new threads so we don't have to search in one thread for all the chapters. Just a thought tho.
 
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Chapter Three:
ARC 2 - Anko-Sensei

Chapter 3

The Genin Trial

"You're ten minutes early. Good first impression." Anko-Sensei greeted me. While leaving for the forest she continued talking, "I did some research on you so that I know, who I'm dealing with. Apparently you're the last surviving member of the Head Family of the Wenezokei Clan. This Clan was tried to be wiped out by the Hidden Rock Village and scattered all over the Ninja World. Furthermore you inherit the Kuckigan, which let's you see any Chakra that is not covered and your Clan has a Tradition in shaping and hardening Chakra. All members of your Clan have the Chakra Nature Magma that consist of Fire and Earth. In the Hidden Rock Village you were called the "Clan of Fire and Earth". Despite the fact that your Clan was different from any other Clan in the Hidden Rock, it was the biggest in that Village composed of 2500 Shinobi, 1000 Craftsmen, 1000 Civilians and 500 people with other occupations like simple workers or administrators of libraries, storages for Food, Weapons and Armor. Your Clan lived in an own district that was about a third of the Village at that time. That's all I found out....."-" ...and that's good so. Anko-Sensei. With all due respect, but there are things about my Clan that are private. There are Secrets that maybe the Hokage should know, but it ends there. And there are certain things that never left my Clan at all. (For example the story about the cave 16 years ago) For example who the Head of my Clan is. Even Lord Hokage doesn't know that." I interrupted her.
The rest of the walk to the glade we both spent in total silence.
Reaching it Anko-Sensei began to explain the test that was awaiting me.
"Johannes, it is a privilegde to have a Jonin-Sensei alone and not in a Three-Man squad. First I have to see if you are worthy of that." she ended her explanation. "So what shall I do to prove you right?", I asked.
"You sure heard of the technique to climb up trees only using your feet?" she replied. I nodded. She continued, "I want you to able to climb this tree" (she was pointing at an apparently 30 meter high tree) "at least 75% the way. You have two days time. In two days at 8 o'clock in the evening I'll come back and you have to show me if you did it. I'll mark the 75% mark with a Shurriken. If you don't pass this test you go back to the Academy and have to graduate again half a year later. Good luck. You will need it!! To be fair I left you two boxes of Ichiraku Instant Ramen (Ramen that is made by Ichiraku and gets heated by sending some Chakra through the box it's in)" She threw the Shurriken and disappeared.
I knew that Iruka-Sensei once had said that a skilled Ninja can send Chakra into every part of the body and focus it there. I concluded that if I focus my Chakra at the Bottom of my feet, I could do it.
At my first attempt I got three meters high but only because I took a run-up. My second attempt wasn't much better. I got five meters high but had so much Chakra at the bottom of my feet that I broke in the tree and almost got stuck in it.
It took me countless attempts to figure out that not the run-up is important but the exact right amount of Chakra.
That was, including the food and sleep pauses, one and a half day later.
I reached what I thought was the 85% mark five minutes before Anko-Sensei returned.
Without run-up I began to climb the tree in front of Anko-Sensei. Crossing the 75% mark where the Shurriken stuck Anko-Sensei called up to me, " Well done. It seems what Iruka said is true. You really go after your grandfather Herwig Wenezokei."
I couldn't believe it. First I passed this almost impossible test and second they both had known my grandfather.
He died three years after our escape from the Hidden Rock Village.....

In the next Chapter:

While waiting outside the mission assigning room I suddenly remember my first encounter with Naruto and the epic battle between his father and my grandfather.....

Leaf vs Rock
 
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Chapter Four:​

ARC 2 - Anko-Sensei

Chapter 4

Leaf vs Rock

Since I had become Anko-Sensei student, I was assigned one boring mission after another. Outside the mission assigning room after I brought back the seventh cat I remembered something:
I bet that guy I met three years ago at a playground, would have told them to go **** themselves if they didn't give him an cool mission. Back then I saw him alone sitting on a swing when I came back from my Chakrashaping training. I got up to him and started to talk to him. We became close friends, although I haven't seen him much since then. He told me he will become the greatest Hokage ever lived. When he told me his name I spit the soda I was drinking. He said he was called Naruto Uzumaki. The Son of the overwhelming Kushina Uzumaki and the legendary feared Minato Namikaze. Those two had been the Ones who made it possible for my Clan to flee from The Hidden Rock to the Hidden Leaf.
In the Third Great Shinobi War The Rock stood against The Leaf. A squad of four Ninjas was formed to eliminate the threat, that Minato stood for, once and for all. This squad consisted of my Grandfather Herwig Wenezokei and three Hidden Rock Tracking Ninja. They confronted the Minato squad two kilometers behind the Fire Country Border. At that time it consisted of Kakashi-Sensei, Rin, Obito and Minato. Kakashi, Rin and Obito took on the three Tracking Ninja, which left Minato and my Grandfather as Opponents. In the Hidden Rock my Grandfather was told to be one of the most gifted Shinobi ever lived. He personally never believed it.
The only things known about this fight is that Minato summoned Gamabunta and Gamahiro and my grandfather Mastoika (like Gamabunta Leader of his Clan of Eagles; He's rumored to be at least 115 Meters big) and Saboika (An Eagle with a huge Sword on his back and many kunais on his Belt. Is rumored to be about 89 Meters big) and that both Shinobi as well as the summoned Creatures went out of Chakra.
My Grandfather and Minato became friends and worked together in secret on a plan to end the war.
Only people in my Clan and Minatos Lover Kushina knew about the secret allianz.
My Granfather's last words before he died ten years ago were: "Don't let Minatos legacy go to waste, Johannes. He will be left alone in the darkness by the people of this village. You have to show him the light again."
Over these three years Naruto kept being a troublemaker, but at least he knew there were people who cared about him.

"Johannes, are you there??", I was shook awake by Anko-Sensei, who was back from the mission assigning room. "Another Cat?? What does this Village do to its Cats that they have so much Expierence in running away.", I said in a lightly cynical tone.
"No, it's a C-Rank mission to hunt down a few criminals in the southwest of the Waterfall Country, shouldn't be too ha....", she stocked when she saw my pale face. "Well I think I have to overcome this. That hopefully will be a short mission.(Near the border of the Earth Country. I have to be prepared for anything. For Rock Tracking Ninja as well as the NSA)", I replied and made my way home to prepare for the mission.

In the next Chapter:

The Ceremony for becoming the Head of the Clan finally begins. It is an event the whole Clan looked forward to. The Clan finally has a Chief again....

The Head of the Clan
 
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