Naruto doesn't compare to this...

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No arguing, naruto is the best manga ever (IMO)... i just wanted to know what you guys think of a manga idea i have been working on lately... I have made the first chapter of it and i have decided to call it REVERSE (name is because the story is being told from the future).

It takes a while to explain, but here is the 'concept' of REVERSE: (I've designed it so it can be slightly realistic, like it 'could' happen)...

Around 2020 there's a planetary alinement and a massive meteor crashes through all the planets braking them up into separate factions. The gas planets were solidified due to the heat and become like earth sorta... when the meteor hit the sun the magnetic forces repelled each other and it broke into a positive and negative charged large stone. one went beyond Pluto and the other stayed near the sun.

the stone by the sun was called earth stone, the one beyond pluto was called heaven stone. They contained alien powers within them.

most of earth survived and bridged the planet fractions together somehow. about 2000 years later technology was advanced and the fractions with their clans started war that killed the family of a teenager. the teenager grew up to become a great soldier, but he hated all the killing. so he went alone to heaven stone and the stone opened the gates of his soul.

he used his soul powers to destroy all technology and bring peace about the fractions. he had five sons each with the power of one of the five soul gates. (mind,body,spirit,nature,balance)

when the spirit gate son grew up he harvested the power of the earth and heaven stones and used it for evil. the 4 other brothers fraught him and sealed him in an artifact.

the story is about a teenager (descendant of the body gate son) trying to stop a formation that is trying to revive the spirit son and use his powers to kill things :shrug:

ANYWAY!!!! please please please comment what you think of it and weather you would read it if i continued making it and posted chapters online. :) :) :) THANKS!
 

Punk Hazard

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Sounds interesting.

Narutoisfarfrombestthough.
 

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naruto isn't the best manga,one piece is way better:|
 

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Your story sounds rather nice , Naruto sucks compared to many other manga/anime tho
 
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