Zee U
Jōnin Strategist 🧠
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First time trying.
"x: i'm here": character talking.
"x: he's strong": character thinking.
[he attacks with rasengan]: description of an action.
"x (surprised)": a character's mindset.
Editor's text
Sasuke reveals his resolve, the battle begins!
[A big panel, focusing on an air view of Naruto and Sasuke, with Hagoromo and Team 7 not far behind, the sun can be seen behind Naruto]
Sasuke: Naruto, i don't have time for your utopical reasonings. Get out of my way, or else...
[Sasuke activates EMS and closes his left hand]
Naruto: Sasuke... why do you always need to be like this...
[Naruto enters Rikudou Mode, glaring at Sasuke]
Sasuke: It can't be helped, you too will be erased, along with your twisted mentality.
[Sasuke forms a katana shaped chakra rod, Naruto jumps straight at him with two Gudoudama sticks]
[Hagoromo slowly closes his eyes, visibly saddened]
Kakashi: Rikudou Sennin, why did you give Sasuke your own power if you knew his idea? How could you...
[Kakashi clenches his fists, Sakura looks worried at him. Hagoromo doesn't answer and a flashback occurs]
Sakura: Sasuke... again, you...
[Where Hagoromo met Sasuke]
Sasuke: If you really want to know, then i'll tell you. The term Hokage i refer to isn't the one of this wrong system: i refer to Leader. The kages up till now have showed that they aren't capable of being leaders, raging into wars instead. A true leader is the one who can bring peace and order to the one who he leads.
[Hagoromo looks at Sasuke, whom stares at his Rinnegan]
Sasuke: I will destroy this system and bring a new forth, where there won't be new wars and conflicts.
Hagoromo: And how do you intend to prevent wars from rising up?
Sasuke: By taking back the chakra and watch over the world as Sasuke Uchiha, such is the calling of a true leader. There won't be motives to engage in war anymore.
[Hagoromo is visibly shocked, he smiles and the flashback ends]
[Back to Kakashi, Sakura and Hagoromo]
Hagoromo: Kakashi Hatake... i repeated the same mistakes the same time. It's time for me to go now, i'll leave it in the hands of Naruto. Farewell.
[Hagoromo slowly vanishes, visibly worried]
[Back to Naruto vs Sasuke. Naruto is behind Sasuke, with his Gudoudamas ready to strike his back]
Sasuke (calmly): Shinra Tensei!
[Naruto is sent back to the ground, full with bruises and with a cracked Gudoudama stick]
Naruto (pissed off): Shit... does he even have a recovery time like Nagato? He is way more powerful and his jutsus are improved... have you been holding back, you bastard?
[Naruto flash sunshin's to Sasuke and clashes with him, his Gudoudama stick is cut by Sasuke's chakra rod infused with Raiton, he manages to punch Sasuke's face and kick him in the stomach but the latter partly manifests Susanoo, punching Naruto away to a root of the Shinju]
Kurama: Naruto, his Rinnegan is different! He was probably not used to it during our fight with Kaguya, but now... we need to go all out, or we won't be able to defeat him!
[Sasuke calmly looks at Naruto, with his kimono full of cuts and dust and with a visible bruise on his left cheek, he spits out blood and looks at his enemy]
Sasuke: I'm getting used more and more to this eye of mine... Naruto, is this how you intend to defeat me?
[Naruto is suddenly pulled by a immensely powerful Bansho Tenin, along with the God Tree's root againts his back. Sasuke raises his left hand]
Naruto (panicking): S-shit... i must activate it!
[Sasuke uses a variant of Senpou: Inton Raiha, albeit on a way larger scale, effectively hitting Naruto and disintegrating the root]
[Naruto is shown enveloped in his Gudoudama orb, which resisted to the pull]
Kurama: Naruto, now or never!
[Big panel on Naruto getting out of the orb and looking down at Sasuke while flying, then being covered by a dense chakra avatar]
Naruto: Shukaku, Matatabi, Isobu, Son, Kokuo, Saiken, Chomei, Gyuki, Kurama, lend me your power! OOOOOAH!
[Closeup on Naruto's chakra avatar: it is very similar to Ashura's, but is much bigger and it carries traits of every Bijuu in each of his hands]
Naruto: SASUKEEEEEE!
[The avatar dashes forward Sasuke dwarfing his figure, and Sasuke is shown with Susanoo's chakra around him, a closeup on his Rinnegan]
Sasuke: Let's test it.
Naruto goes all out againts his old rival, the transmigrants' final battle begins!
"x: i'm here": character talking.
"x: he's strong": character thinking.
[he attacks with rasengan]: description of an action.
"x (surprised)": a character's mindset.
Editor's text
A LEADER
Sasuke reveals his resolve, the battle begins!
[A big panel, focusing on an air view of Naruto and Sasuke, with Hagoromo and Team 7 not far behind, the sun can be seen behind Naruto]
Sasuke: Naruto, i don't have time for your utopical reasonings. Get out of my way, or else...
[Sasuke activates EMS and closes his left hand]
Naruto: Sasuke... why do you always need to be like this...
[Naruto enters Rikudou Mode, glaring at Sasuke]
Sasuke: It can't be helped, you too will be erased, along with your twisted mentality.
[Sasuke forms a katana shaped chakra rod, Naruto jumps straight at him with two Gudoudama sticks]
[Hagoromo slowly closes his eyes, visibly saddened]
Kakashi: Rikudou Sennin, why did you give Sasuke your own power if you knew his idea? How could you...
[Kakashi clenches his fists, Sakura looks worried at him. Hagoromo doesn't answer and a flashback occurs]
Sakura: Sasuke... again, you...
[Where Hagoromo met Sasuke]
Sasuke: If you really want to know, then i'll tell you. The term Hokage i refer to isn't the one of this wrong system: i refer to Leader. The kages up till now have showed that they aren't capable of being leaders, raging into wars instead. A true leader is the one who can bring peace and order to the one who he leads.
[Hagoromo looks at Sasuke, whom stares at his Rinnegan]
Sasuke: I will destroy this system and bring a new forth, where there won't be new wars and conflicts.
Hagoromo: And how do you intend to prevent wars from rising up?
Sasuke: By taking back the chakra and watch over the world as Sasuke Uchiha, such is the calling of a true leader. There won't be motives to engage in war anymore.
[Hagoromo is visibly shocked, he smiles and the flashback ends]
[Back to Kakashi, Sakura and Hagoromo]
Hagoromo: Kakashi Hatake... i repeated the same mistakes the same time. It's time for me to go now, i'll leave it in the hands of Naruto. Farewell.
[Hagoromo slowly vanishes, visibly worried]
[Back to Naruto vs Sasuke. Naruto is behind Sasuke, with his Gudoudamas ready to strike his back]
Sasuke (calmly): Shinra Tensei!
[Naruto is sent back to the ground, full with bruises and with a cracked Gudoudama stick]
Naruto (pissed off): Shit... does he even have a recovery time like Nagato? He is way more powerful and his jutsus are improved... have you been holding back, you bastard?
[Naruto flash sunshin's to Sasuke and clashes with him, his Gudoudama stick is cut by Sasuke's chakra rod infused with Raiton, he manages to punch Sasuke's face and kick him in the stomach but the latter partly manifests Susanoo, punching Naruto away to a root of the Shinju]
Kurama: Naruto, his Rinnegan is different! He was probably not used to it during our fight with Kaguya, but now... we need to go all out, or we won't be able to defeat him!
[Sasuke calmly looks at Naruto, with his kimono full of cuts and dust and with a visible bruise on his left cheek, he spits out blood and looks at his enemy]
Sasuke: I'm getting used more and more to this eye of mine... Naruto, is this how you intend to defeat me?
[Naruto is suddenly pulled by a immensely powerful Bansho Tenin, along with the God Tree's root againts his back. Sasuke raises his left hand]
Naruto (panicking): S-shit... i must activate it!
[Sasuke uses a variant of Senpou: Inton Raiha, albeit on a way larger scale, effectively hitting Naruto and disintegrating the root]
[Naruto is shown enveloped in his Gudoudama orb, which resisted to the pull]
Kurama: Naruto, now or never!
[Big panel on Naruto getting out of the orb and looking down at Sasuke while flying, then being covered by a dense chakra avatar]
Naruto: Shukaku, Matatabi, Isobu, Son, Kokuo, Saiken, Chomei, Gyuki, Kurama, lend me your power! OOOOOAH!
[Closeup on Naruto's chakra avatar: it is very similar to Ashura's, but is much bigger and it carries traits of every Bijuu in each of his hands]
Naruto: SASUKEEEEEE!
[The avatar dashes forward Sasuke dwarfing his figure, and Sasuke is shown with Susanoo's chakra around him, a closeup on his Rinnegan]
Sasuke: Let's test it.
Naruto goes all out againts his old rival, the transmigrants' final battle begins!
