Uzumaki Menma
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Madara has stolen Kakashi's Sharingan and used Kamui to teleport to the cube world where Sakura and Obito both rest trying to destroy the Rinnegan! What will happen next?!
Madara: I won't let you! [Throws black rod]
Sakura: [Shocked]
Obito: Watch out! [Pushes Sakura out the way]
As the black rod flies towards Obito, he tries to use the situation and destroy the Rinnegan Madara is after. Lining up the eye with the sharp stick, he anticipates the puncture until . . .
Obito: What the --- ?! [Moves out of the way at the last second] [Rod smashes into wall behind him] I --- I can't move my body!
Black Zetsu: Why ye~s, how unfortunate for you, eh, Obito? Heh, heh, heh.
Obito: Shit! I lost focus when I saved Sakura. I gave control back over to Zetsu!
Madara: Hurry! I need the other Rinnegan! Those two brats in the other dimension have gained troublesome abilities and the only way to counter them is to use both of the powers of my eyes!
Black Zetsu: Of course! Just wait one second . . . [Reaches over to Obito who grimaces]
Sakura: I won't let you!
Bolting over to Black Zetsu, she throws out a fist narrowly missing by inches, smashing into some blocks ahead. Quickly, she regains her footing and attempts to strike again before Black Zetsu takes his prize, but this time, Madara get's involved.
Madara: I hope this works! Limbo!
Sakura: [Running] [Stops] [Is flung away]
A panel shows Madara's shadow standing where Sakura once was. It has many wounds including multiple Kunai and Shuriken within it's body.
Madara: They almost destroyed you, it seems. Lucky, I was able to pull you back to me, just in time. I'll have to be more careful when using Limbo around them. Zetsu! Are you done yet?!
Black Zetsu: [Rips out Obito's eye] Here! [Throws it]
Madara: [Catches it] Finally!!! [Takes out Kakashi's Sharingan and implants Rinnegan] Ahhhh! [A sinister smile] Now, merge with me. As you can see, that Uchiha boy managed to get a lucky shot in.
Black Zetsu: Of course! [Detaches from Obito and flies into Madara, crafting his lower half]
Madara: Now. [Looks at Obito and Sakura] I'll kill you two before heading back to the other world. Showing them your dead bodies is sure to deter them!
Obito: Fool! *Coughs How do you plan to do that without Kamui?!
Madara: Oh right. [Reaches up to forehead protector] [Rips it off] [A socket is revealed] [Plugs Kakashi's eye in] There we go!
Obito: Wha --- what the?!
Madara: [Serious] I've been nurturing a new eye. Until it is fully developed, I will use your old one, Obito. Now, time to die! First, "Shadow", come back to me.
The "other" Madara paces back, once it is directly in front of Madara, it is pushed aside and Sasuke stands before him, sword swinging already with Chidori running through it.
Madara: SHIT!!! Kamui! [Teleport's torso that is about to be sliced back to real world] [The sword travels through empty space] [Suddenly, Madara coughs up blood]
Back in the real world, Naruto was waiting for a body part to appear. He used the Sand Rasengan again and speed blitzed to the spot it had appeared in.
Naruto: Nice plan, Sasuke!
Sasuke: [In Kamui world] Now! Chidori Nagashi!
Electricity flickers off the blade and consumes the entire space Madara inhabits. The lighting overtakes him, shaking his body rigorously. Sasuke jumps back towards Obito and Sakura.
Madara: [Groaning] [Torso returns and is also shocked] [Falls on knees] Damn you!? What the --- !!!!?
Suddenly, a seal begins to overtake his body. As he looks down, he notices a wound in the middle of his torso. It has a seal mark on it that Naruto put there with his Rasengan.
Madara: I ... see; you (to Sasuke) put those Kunai and Shuriken in my shadow and in turn, used your eye ability to change places with one of them. Already close to me, you got me to transport a part of my body back to the real world where Naruto was waiting to strike and as he did, he placed a seal mark on my body to further restrict my movements like your Chidori did as well.
Sasuke: [Smiling] Obito, get up. Sakura, you too.
Obito: It's ... no use ... I can't ... move ... my body
Sakura: [Stands and runs over to Sasuke shakily] That was amazing! Now, we need to get out of here.
Obito: I don't know if I can use Kamui. [Weak]
Sasuke: It's alright. Just hold on to me.
Sakura: [Clutches onto Sasuke]
Obito: [Grabs his shoulder] What about Madara?
Sasuke: He's not going anywhere. [Transports to the Kunai Naruto had in his mouth]
Naruto: Sakura, Kakashi needs medical attention. You can bring Obito back there with you as well!
Sakura: Right! But wait .... where are you two going?
Naruto: We have to make sure Madara is sealed properly. We'll be going back to the Kamui verse.
Sakura: Let me go! It's too dangerous for the both of you!
Naruto: [Smiles] Sakura, don't worry! I'll take care of Sasuke for you! Heh, heh.
Sakura: Idiot! I'm worried about you too!
Naruto: Sure, sure!
Sasuke: Naruto! Let's go! I left my sword back there. We'll transport to it. [Holds out hand]
Naruto: [Grabs it] Right, let's go!
Sakura: [Worried] [They disappear]
Sasuke: [On a cube next to Naruto] !!! Where's he at?!
Naruto: He's gone?!
Sasuke: I left him kneeling here with your seal and my lightning bounding him in place!
Madara rushes to Sasuke, approaching him from behind. He has a black rod in his hand and is focused on using it to stab Sasuke through the heart. As he approaches nearer and nearer, until he reaches the small of Sasuke's back, Sasuke finally realizes and turns to late, but Suddenly, Madara is smashed into the ground, Naruto on top of him, a Acid Rasengan pressed firmly into his back.
Madara: What?!! How?!!
Naruto: [Serious] When I used my Rasengan on your body that appeared, I placed two seals on it!
Madara: [Blood] You can't mean . . . !!!?
Naruto: That's right! The Flying Thunder God: Hirashin!!!
Madara: I won't let you! [Throws black rod]
Sakura: [Shocked]
Obito: Watch out! [Pushes Sakura out the way]
As the black rod flies towards Obito, he tries to use the situation and destroy the Rinnegan Madara is after. Lining up the eye with the sharp stick, he anticipates the puncture until . . .
Obito: What the --- ?! [Moves out of the way at the last second] [Rod smashes into wall behind him] I --- I can't move my body!
Black Zetsu: Why ye~s, how unfortunate for you, eh, Obito? Heh, heh, heh.
Obito: Shit! I lost focus when I saved Sakura. I gave control back over to Zetsu!
Madara: Hurry! I need the other Rinnegan! Those two brats in the other dimension have gained troublesome abilities and the only way to counter them is to use both of the powers of my eyes!
Black Zetsu: Of course! Just wait one second . . . [Reaches over to Obito who grimaces]
Sakura: I won't let you!
Bolting over to Black Zetsu, she throws out a fist narrowly missing by inches, smashing into some blocks ahead. Quickly, she regains her footing and attempts to strike again before Black Zetsu takes his prize, but this time, Madara get's involved.
Madara: I hope this works! Limbo!
Sakura: [Running] [Stops] [Is flung away]
A panel shows Madara's shadow standing where Sakura once was. It has many wounds including multiple Kunai and Shuriken within it's body.
Madara: They almost destroyed you, it seems. Lucky, I was able to pull you back to me, just in time. I'll have to be more careful when using Limbo around them. Zetsu! Are you done yet?!
Black Zetsu: [Rips out Obito's eye] Here! [Throws it]
Madara: [Catches it] Finally!!! [Takes out Kakashi's Sharingan and implants Rinnegan] Ahhhh! [A sinister smile] Now, merge with me. As you can see, that Uchiha boy managed to get a lucky shot in.
Black Zetsu: Of course! [Detaches from Obito and flies into Madara, crafting his lower half]
Madara: Now. [Looks at Obito and Sakura] I'll kill you two before heading back to the other world. Showing them your dead bodies is sure to deter them!
Obito: Fool! *Coughs How do you plan to do that without Kamui?!
Madara: Oh right. [Reaches up to forehead protector] [Rips it off] [A socket is revealed] [Plugs Kakashi's eye in] There we go!
Obito: Wha --- what the?!
Madara: [Serious] I've been nurturing a new eye. Until it is fully developed, I will use your old one, Obito. Now, time to die! First, "Shadow", come back to me.
The "other" Madara paces back, once it is directly in front of Madara, it is pushed aside and Sasuke stands before him, sword swinging already with Chidori running through it.
Madara: SHIT!!! Kamui! [Teleport's torso that is about to be sliced back to real world] [The sword travels through empty space] [Suddenly, Madara coughs up blood]
Back in the real world, Naruto was waiting for a body part to appear. He used the Sand Rasengan again and speed blitzed to the spot it had appeared in.
Naruto: Nice plan, Sasuke!
Sasuke: [In Kamui world] Now! Chidori Nagashi!
Electricity flickers off the blade and consumes the entire space Madara inhabits. The lighting overtakes him, shaking his body rigorously. Sasuke jumps back towards Obito and Sakura.
Madara: [Groaning] [Torso returns and is also shocked] [Falls on knees] Damn you!? What the --- !!!!?
Suddenly, a seal begins to overtake his body. As he looks down, he notices a wound in the middle of his torso. It has a seal mark on it that Naruto put there with his Rasengan.
Madara: I ... see; you (to Sasuke) put those Kunai and Shuriken in my shadow and in turn, used your eye ability to change places with one of them. Already close to me, you got me to transport a part of my body back to the real world where Naruto was waiting to strike and as he did, he placed a seal mark on my body to further restrict my movements like your Chidori did as well.
Sasuke: [Smiling] Obito, get up. Sakura, you too.
Obito: It's ... no use ... I can't ... move ... my body
Sakura: [Stands and runs over to Sasuke shakily] That was amazing! Now, we need to get out of here.
Obito: I don't know if I can use Kamui. [Weak]
Sasuke: It's alright. Just hold on to me.
Sakura: [Clutches onto Sasuke]
Obito: [Grabs his shoulder] What about Madara?
Sasuke: He's not going anywhere. [Transports to the Kunai Naruto had in his mouth]
Naruto: Sakura, Kakashi needs medical attention. You can bring Obito back there with you as well!
Sakura: Right! But wait .... where are you two going?
Naruto: We have to make sure Madara is sealed properly. We'll be going back to the Kamui verse.
Sakura: Let me go! It's too dangerous for the both of you!
Naruto: [Smiles] Sakura, don't worry! I'll take care of Sasuke for you! Heh, heh.
Sakura: Idiot! I'm worried about you too!
Naruto: Sure, sure!
Sasuke: Naruto! Let's go! I left my sword back there. We'll transport to it. [Holds out hand]
Naruto: [Grabs it] Right, let's go!
Sakura: [Worried] [They disappear]
Sasuke: [On a cube next to Naruto] !!! Where's he at?!
Naruto: He's gone?!
Sasuke: I left him kneeling here with your seal and my lightning bounding him in place!
Madara rushes to Sasuke, approaching him from behind. He has a black rod in his hand and is focused on using it to stab Sasuke through the heart. As he approaches nearer and nearer, until he reaches the small of Sasuke's back, Sasuke finally realizes and turns to late, but Suddenly, Madara is smashed into the ground, Naruto on top of him, a Acid Rasengan pressed firmly into his back.
Madara: What?!! How?!!
Naruto: [Serious] When I used my Rasengan on your body that appeared, I placed two seals on it!
Madara: [Blood] You can't mean . . . !!!?
Naruto: That's right! The Flying Thunder God: Hirashin!!!
