Ahmed1993
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[ Chapter opens at Madara happy about his new body ]
Madara ( smiles) : Finally after all this time , i'm alive, i'm truly alive !!
Hashirama ( pants ) : So you lured us into thinking that we've beaten you , and in that time you were using the Rinne Tensei.
Madara ( smirks ): Exactly , prepare yourself Hashirama !
Hashirama ( pants ) : It doesn't... matter... i.m.. gonna..beat..you...like...last time * what's happening to me ? *
Madara ( smiles ) : So you didn't notice anything back then ? you disappoints me Hashirama.
Hashirama ( pants ) : What...are you...talking...about , i'm sure...that i... killed you.
Madara ( smiles ) : You're naive as ever Hashirama , right after your put the Kyuubi to sleep , i used the Fission Technique.
Hashirama ( shocked ) : Impossible !! when did you learn such technique ? and more importantly why didn't you show up after that ?
Madara ( smirks and points at his Rinnegan ) : Because i already got what i wanted from that fight !
Hashirama ( pants heavily ) : It... doesn't... matter , i'll ( falls to his knees )
Madara ( smirks ) : so it finally started to show effects !
Naruto (worried ) : Grand pa Shodaime !!
( Naruto notices the chakra rods impaled all around Hashirama's body )
Naruto ( shocked ) : Oh sh*t , not this again !
( Naruto rushes at the location of Hashirama )
Naruto : Hold on grand pa Shodaime , i'll release you from them !
Naruto : What the ?!
( Hashirama sends a powerful punch at Naruto but the latter sensed the attack and already putted his arms in guard mode )
(Hashirama gets up revealing Rinnegan eyes with SM markings )
Naruto ( angry ) :* That's one powerful punch , i felt it even in SM * Damn , i was too late he is controlled now !
Sai: Naruto lets regroup with the others , we have no chance against them alone.
Naruto : Tsch , fine !
( Naruto and Sai retreat to the SA and the Bijuu's location )
Madara ( smirks ) : As if i'll let you escape !
( Madara and Hashirama rushes to SA's location )
[ Scene changes to Obito , Minato and Kakashi ]
(Obito is barely breathing )
Minato/Kakashi ( worried ) : Are you alright Obito ?!
Obito ( breathing heavily ) : Yea...more or less....that...bastard..forced me...to revive him...via black Zetsu...
Kakashi ( angry ) : We have to stop Madara, Sensei stay close to Obito , Hey Sakura come here and heal him !
Sakura ( shocked ) : Are you serious about this Sensei !
Kakashi : Trust me on this one Sakura !
Sakura ( regains composure ) : Well if you say so !
Kakashi : Sasuke follow... huh... where is him ?
Minato : He must have went to fight Madara with the others , go Kakashi , i'll join you as soon as Obito is ok.
Kakashi : Right !
[ Scene changes to the SA ]
( Naruto and Sai lands next to the SA and the Bijuu )
Gaara : Naruto what are you doing here ?!
Naruto : No time to talk , Madara revived himself and he is controlling grand pa Shodaime.
( Shoots on the Kages and some random ninjas being shocked )
Naruto ( shoots ) : Prepare yourself , they are coming !!
( Suddenly Ay rushes to Hashirama in his V2 states and is about to hit him )
Ay : Sorry lord First !
( Hashirama blocks Ay's hand thanks to his SM sensing , bind his leg via Mokuton and delivers a powerful punch at Ay sending him flying )
( Mei Shoots lava at Madara but the latter dodges , and while his mid air , a Jinton wave is coming towards him ).
Onoki : You can't move mid air , you're finished Madara !
( Madara smirks and dodge the Jinton by levitating )
Madara ( smirks ) : You are not the only one capable of flying Onoki
Madara : Now then lets spice it up , Katon Cho Gouka Mekkyaku !
Mei ( shocked ) : I can't counter something of this magnitude !
Tobirama ( annoyed) : Tsch , i have to interfere !
( But before Tobirama can make a move , Madara's Katon is blocked by black fire )
( Everyone stares shocked at the black flames overpowering the Katon )
( Sasuke lands next to Naruto )
Sasuke ( cold glare ) : I'll be your opponent Madara !
Madara ( smirks ) : Interesting !
[ Scene changes back to the Shinju ]
( Madara is seeing running towards the top )
Madara ( smirks) : * Finally after all this years *
( Suddenly a mysterious figures cuts his way )
( Madara stops )
Madara: Huh ?
( The mysterious figures is shown to be Sasuke )
Madara : Ah i see , you left a clone fighting there just like me
( Sasuke takes out his sword and points it at Madara )
Sasuke ( Death glare ) : The fruit will be mine Madara.
Madara (smirks ) : Oh so you know about it too , this will be interesting !
End
What do you think guys ?
** Thoughts
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[ Chapter opens at Madara happy about his new body ]
Madara ( smiles) : Finally after all this time , i'm alive, i'm truly alive !!
Hashirama ( pants ) : So you lured us into thinking that we've beaten you , and in that time you were using the Rinne Tensei.
Madara ( smirks ): Exactly , prepare yourself Hashirama !
Hashirama ( pants ) : It doesn't... matter... i.m.. gonna..beat..you...like...last time * what's happening to me ? *
Madara ( smiles ) : So you didn't notice anything back then ? you disappoints me Hashirama.
Hashirama ( pants ) : What...are you...talking...about , i'm sure...that i... killed you.
Madara ( smiles ) : You're naive as ever Hashirama , right after your put the Kyuubi to sleep , i used the Fission Technique.
Hashirama ( shocked ) : Impossible !! when did you learn such technique ? and more importantly why didn't you show up after that ?
Madara ( smirks and points at his Rinnegan ) : Because i already got what i wanted from that fight !
Hashirama ( pants heavily ) : It... doesn't... matter , i'll ( falls to his knees )
Madara ( smirks ) : so it finally started to show effects !
Naruto (worried ) : Grand pa Shodaime !!
( Naruto notices the chakra rods impaled all around Hashirama's body )
Naruto ( shocked ) : Oh sh*t , not this again !
( Naruto rushes at the location of Hashirama )
Naruto : Hold on grand pa Shodaime , i'll release you from them !
Naruto : What the ?!
( Hashirama sends a powerful punch at Naruto but the latter sensed the attack and already putted his arms in guard mode )
(Hashirama gets up revealing Rinnegan eyes with SM markings )
Naruto ( angry ) :* That's one powerful punch , i felt it even in SM * Damn , i was too late he is controlled now !
Sai: Naruto lets regroup with the others , we have no chance against them alone.
Naruto : Tsch , fine !
( Naruto and Sai retreat to the SA and the Bijuu's location )
Madara ( smirks ) : As if i'll let you escape !
( Madara and Hashirama rushes to SA's location )
[ Scene changes to Obito , Minato and Kakashi ]
(Obito is barely breathing )
Minato/Kakashi ( worried ) : Are you alright Obito ?!
Obito ( breathing heavily ) : Yea...more or less....that...bastard..forced me...to revive him...via black Zetsu...
Kakashi ( angry ) : We have to stop Madara, Sensei stay close to Obito , Hey Sakura come here and heal him !
Sakura ( shocked ) : Are you serious about this Sensei !
Kakashi : Trust me on this one Sakura !
Sakura ( regains composure ) : Well if you say so !
Kakashi : Sasuke follow... huh... where is him ?
Minato : He must have went to fight Madara with the others , go Kakashi , i'll join you as soon as Obito is ok.
Kakashi : Right !
[ Scene changes to the SA ]
( Naruto and Sai lands next to the SA and the Bijuu )
Gaara : Naruto what are you doing here ?!
Naruto : No time to talk , Madara revived himself and he is controlling grand pa Shodaime.
( Shoots on the Kages and some random ninjas being shocked )
Naruto ( shoots ) : Prepare yourself , they are coming !!
( Suddenly Ay rushes to Hashirama in his V2 states and is about to hit him )
Ay : Sorry lord First !
( Hashirama blocks Ay's hand thanks to his SM sensing , bind his leg via Mokuton and delivers a powerful punch at Ay sending him flying )
( Mei Shoots lava at Madara but the latter dodges , and while his mid air , a Jinton wave is coming towards him ).
Onoki : You can't move mid air , you're finished Madara !
( Madara smirks and dodge the Jinton by levitating )
Madara ( smirks ) : You are not the only one capable of flying Onoki
Madara : Now then lets spice it up , Katon Cho Gouka Mekkyaku !
Mei ( shocked ) : I can't counter something of this magnitude !
Tobirama ( annoyed) : Tsch , i have to interfere !
( But before Tobirama can make a move , Madara's Katon is blocked by black fire )
( Everyone stares shocked at the black flames overpowering the Katon )
( Sasuke lands next to Naruto )
Sasuke ( cold glare ) : I'll be your opponent Madara !
Madara ( smirks ) : Interesting !
[ Scene changes back to the Shinju ]
( Madara is seeing running towards the top )
Madara ( smirks) : * Finally after all this years *
( Suddenly a mysterious figures cuts his way )
( Madara stops )
Madara: Huh ?
( The mysterious figures is shown to be Sasuke )
Madara : Ah i see , you left a clone fighting there just like me
( Sasuke takes out his sword and points it at Madara )
Sasuke ( Death glare ) : The fruit will be mine Madara.
Madara (smirks ) : Oh so you know about it too , this will be interesting !
End
What do you think guys ?
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