[Predictions] Naruto Chapter 641 Prediction

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HEY! c: This is my first ever prediction so please enjoy! :D

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(Bomb that came from Minato's arm is ready to explode)

Naruto :*We won't be fast enough to get away from it in time!*

Sasuke : *My Sussano could possibly dim the bombs radius, but I don't know about the others*

Minato :* I can't teleport us all away in time*

Harashima: (Wood Style: Great Oak Emergence)

*An Oak Tree forms around the bomb to reduce the damage*

Juubito : First Hokage...

Madara: Harashima! Pay attention to me! (Dashes up to him while doing handsigns)

(The bomb's damage is reduced Naruto, Sasuke, Minato and Gamamiki are blasted back a few inches)

Sakura : *What's going on!*

Tobirama : (The rest of his reanimated body is finishing to form) Hiruzen! We must hurry and apprehend the Jinchuriki!

Hiruzen : Right! (They jump off towards the others)

-Scene Changes to Harashima and Madara-

Harashima : Don't worry Madara, I haven't forgotten about you (Hand signs) Wood Style: Deep Forest Emergence!

Madara : (Jumps to dodge a few trees, slides down one, jumps and spins. While spinning his sussano arms are cutting down trees in his path) Foolish Harashima!

Harashima : (Makes branches from trees extend towards madara)

Madara : (Has Sussano Rib Cage protect him) *I'm close enough now* You're out of your prime Harashima! *Fire Style: Great Fire Annihil--*

Harashima : *Earth Style: Rapid Raising Pillar!* *Pillar appears from underneath Madara, Smacking him into the air* *Harashima jumps up with him*

-Scene back to Naruto and the others-

Obito : You all won't get away this time!

*Tobirama and Hiruzen appear coming from opposite directions at Obito*

Tobirama : Water Style: Raging Rapids!

Hiruzen: Fire Style: Fire Ball Jutsu!

(It attacks Obito leaving fog lingering, unable to see The Kages or Obito)

( A piercing noise is heard from fog) ( Black Spikes come shooting at Naruto and Sasuke )

Minato : Oh no! (Prepares to do flying rajin)

( Black Spike appears from underneath Minato and stabs into him causing him to fall to the group and have to reanimate )

Obito : (From out of the smoke) You won't escape this time!

Sasuke : *I don't have enough chakra to guard us both!*

(Spikes come shooting faster at them)

(Sand protects the both of them slowing down the rods, giving naruto and sasuke enough time to retreat)

(Gaara appears in front of them)

Gaara : Are we late?

(The rest of the kage appear alongside Gaara)

Naruto : No... You guys are just on time

Tsunade : Mizukage! Raikage! Tsuchikage! Kazekage! Prepare for an attack on the enemy!

Raikage: You don't have to tell me twice...

Mizukage: I guess it's time we melt you away

Tsuchikage: *In the current conditions we are in, I don't know how much longer we can last*

Tsunade: CHARGE!

(The Kages dash towards Obito)

-END-

I hope you guys liked my first Prediction! Tell me if you liked it. Give me suggestions cause I don't know if I want to do this again lol. Was it too short? too long? GO AHEAD! :D Sorry for the mistakes if there we any. I can see some xD
 

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well dude , it's like this: good prediction , but i think kishi has some other plans to make it better :). Anyways , he is the creator of the series , right? xd
 

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HEY! c: This is my first ever prediction so please enjoy! :D

() Actions
**Thought

(Bomb that came from Minato's arm is ready to explode)

Naruto :*We won't be fast enough to get away from it in time!*

Sasuke : *My Sussano could possibly dim the bombs radius, but I don't know about the others*

Minato :* I can't teleport us all away in time*

Harashima: (Wood Style: Great Oak Emergence)

*An Oak Tree forms around the bomb to reduce the damage*

Juubito : First Hokage...

Madara: Harashima! Pay attention to me! (Dashes up to him while doing handsigns)

(The bomb's damage is reduced Naruto, Sasuke, Minato and Gamamiki are blasted back a few inches)

Sakura : *What's going on!*

Tobirama : (The rest of his reanimated body is finishing to form) Hiruzen! We must hurry and apprehend the Jinchuriki!

Hiruzen : Right! (They jump off towards the others)

-Scene Changes to Harashima and Madara-

Harashima : Don't worry Madara, I haven't forgotten about you (Hand signs) Wood Style: Deep Forest Emergence!

Madara : (Jumps to dodge a few trees, slides down one, jumps and spins. While spinning his sussano arms are cutting down trees in his path) Foolish Harashima!

Harashima : (Makes branches from trees extend towards madara)

Madara : (Has Sussano Rib Cage protect him) *I'm close enough now* You're out of your prime Harashima! *Fire Style: Great Fire Annihil--*

Harashima : *Earth Style: Rapid Raising Pillar!* *Pillar appears from underneath Madara, Smacking him into the air* *Harashima jumps up with him*

-Scene back to Naruto and the others-

Obito : You all won't get away this time!

*Tobirama and Hiruzen appear coming from opposite directions at Obito*

Tobirama : Water Style: Raging Rapids!

Hiruzen: Fire Style: Fire Ball Jutsu!

(It attacks Obito leaving fog lingering, unable to see The Kages or Obito)

( A piercing noise is heard from fog) ( Black Spikes come shooting at Naruto and Sasuke )

Minato : Oh no! (Prepares to do flying rajin)

( Black Spike appears from underneath Minato and stabs into him causing him to fall to the group and have to reanimate )

Obito : (From out of the smoke) You won't escape this time!

Sasuke : *I don't have enough chakra to guard us both!*

(Spikes come shooting faster at them)

(Sand protects the both of them slowing down the rods, giving naruto and sasuke enough time to retreat)

(Gaara appears in front of them)

Gaara : Are we late?

(The rest of the kage appear alongside Gaara)

Naruto : No... You guys are just on time

Tsunade : Mizukage! Raikage! Tsuchikage! Kazekage! Prepare for an attack on the enemy!

Raikage: You don't have to tell me twice...

Mizukage: I guess it's time we melt you away

Tsuchikage: *In the current conditions we are in, I don't know how much longer we can last*

Tsunade: CHARGE!

(The Kages dash towards Obito)

-END-

I hope you guys liked my first Prediction! Tell me if you liked it. Give me suggestions cause I don't know if I want to do this again lol. Was it too short? too long? GO AHEAD! :D Sorry for the mistakes if there we any. I can see some xD
You made Naruto and Sasuke seem like noobs who just stand around and get protected. :rage: Why the heck would they be looking at a projectile coming at them instead of moving? :what: Also Naruto is faster than Raikage so he would just move and Sasuke would use susanoo. You're not utilizing Naruto's and Sasuke's moveset. You're just having them stand around and look at everything. You haven't involved them in the action. :NO:

Also why would Sasuke not have enough chakra to guard both Naruto and himself? :dafq: He did not do much, he should be fine in the chakra area.

Also the way you have the kages talking are completely wrong. Right now they wouldn't be so confident. Due to the fact that they wouldn't know the powers of Obito. So the would stay back and assist the other Hokages. They wouldn't be stupid enough to charge in. But you got Tsuchikages part right.

I'm not meaning to insult or embarrass you but give you constructive criticism. :sweat: It was fine for you're first but I believe you could have spent alittle more time on it. :bye:
 
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