Ballin Sasuke
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Maki woke up in someone's home. The kid he saw before he passed out was next to him and a 3rd child he hadn't met was next to him as well. The new kid was up sitting their meditating.
Kid: *turns around* good you up
The kids eyes were green and their was a sideways slit or block as the iris (Naruto's sage mode facing the other way). Maki backed up.
Kid: Oh I'm sorry my dad taought me a jutsu called sage mode
Maki stayed quite and nodded. The kid held his hand out to shake. Maki shook it. The kids name was Harko and he was also a jinchuriki but of the 9 tails. He explained how his father was Konahamaru and leader of their small village. Suddenly the other boy awoke from his slumber. Maki looked around for his sword but Harko held his hands still. The boy had long, long hair, down to his back. He stood up and looked at Maki with a frown. But the boys eyes were purple with so many rings.
Strange jinchuriki: Where am I?
Harko: In my rooom in my small village.
Konahamaru: *enters* Boys come with me I'm going to train you how to control your and your powers.
After weeks of training they all learned how to at least suppress their power of the bijuu and bring it out (didn't learn their bijuu mode yet). Maki discovered mangekyou sharingan and the young jinchuriki boy was name nikito and he learned his six paths because he had rinnegan. They were all becoming truely strong. Maki was now proficient in chidori and other lightning moves, and firestyle and konahamaru even taught him rasengan He also developd a new mankeyou sharingan jutsu where he could absorb information and power just by touching them. Harko could now hold sage mode for half an hour and use the kyuubi to strengthen it. Nikito always traveled with 5 shadow clones with different powers, summoning, genjutsu, taijutsu, ninjutsu with all chakra natures, jinchuriki powers, and himself could see everything and could use a weird type of force to repel people, bring them in, and even fight with it. Together they were unstopable but Konahamaru was still worried because he knew the new akatsuki would kill them without a doubt. They were planning something but what was the question.
While they were training it came on them like a thousand pound weight. It started with a Boom! A man ran to them he was hurt bad you could see him limp.
Man: Konahamaru! THE AKATSUKI!!! WE CANT HOLD THEM!!!!!
Konahamaru:*pulls out scroll* Summoning jutsu (A huge toad emerges from the scroll)
Gamakichi: Yooo Konohamaru.
Konahamaru: Take these children out of here and take them to him
Gamakichi: Ohh that ninja that were not supposed to talk about
Konahamaru: *sighs* YESSSS! Now leave.
Gamakichi: Don't have to yell!!
Smoke started form by the village. Harko started to cry. With tears in his eyes he screamed.
Harko: I won't leave you dad. I never have and I certainly won't now.
He started to run before. Maki held his sword in front of him restricting him from movement. The sword started to burn, fire surrounded the sword. Konahamaru looked at his son and showed a tear then he ran toward the smoke.
Gamakichi: Come on kids. Everyone jumped on the toad and Nikito retracted his clones.
To Konahamaru.....
Konhamaru ran while in sage mode. He stopped when he actually saw the akatsuki. They were all standing on the roof.
Leader( with sharingan, the betrayer of the Uchiha): Where are the jinchuriki.
Konahamaru: (smiles) I'll never tell!!
Two of the akasuki people jumped down off th roof one had four arms and two were ripping through the robe. The other had 3 swords a huge one on his back and two small katana's on each side. The swordsman pulled out the two katana and started heading for Konahamaru. Konhamaru stepped on the ground making it shake and jumped forward kicking the swordsman in the face the 4 armed man jumped in and punched Konahamaru a few feet back. Konhamaru landed on his feet.
Konahamaru: Shadow clone jutsu
The 2 akatsuki destroyed shadow clones left and right. When the real Konahamaru came in with a rasengan barrage, hitting both of them. After another akatsuki came in with a gourd of sand. The sand came in and started to take down Konhamaru. He came up and ran towards the sand guy with a kunai, he slashed it across the mans face and was thrown back with another load of sand. Konahamaru slowly got up the guy with sword slashed his katana threw him then the 4 armed man picked him up by the neck with 2 hands and punched him with the other two. The sand then came up and strangled Konahamaru's body. Then one more guy came down from the roof and put together hand signs.
4th akatsuki: blood seal...
Konahamaru then was stuck their with the sand up to his neck and swords in his stomach. The swordsman pulled out the swords but the pain didn't lessen and then chains came over the sand and got tighter and tighter.
Leader: Where are the jinchuriki!!!
Konhamaru: Your gonna have to kill me.
The leader caught him in a tsuyomiki and showed him how Naruto died and his village and eventually how he would kill his son. The chains finally crushed his body. The chains went back into the jutsu caster's sleeves and the sand went into the gourd.
Leader: His death could have been avoided ok now we will find the jinchuriki and rule the world but we can wait for those ones lets find the other 10.
Back to Harko...
Harko felt a cold chill and threw up some blood he's dead he though but did it matter he felt they would all be dead soon
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chpt. 2
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Maki woke up in someone's home. The kid he saw before he passed out was next to him and a 3rd child he hadn't met was next to him as well. The new kid was up sitting their meditating.
Kid: *turns around* good you up
The kids eyes were green and their was a sideways slit or block as the iris (Naruto's sage mode facing the other way). Maki backed up.
Kid: Oh I'm sorry my dad taought me a jutsu called sage mode
Maki stayed quite and nodded. The kid held his hand out to shake. Maki shook it. The kids name was Harko and he was also a jinchuriki but of the 9 tails. He explained how his father was Konahamaru and leader of their small village. Suddenly the other boy awoke from his slumber. Maki looked around for his sword but Harko held his hands still. The boy had long, long hair, down to his back. He stood up and looked at Maki with a frown. But the boys eyes were purple with so many rings.
Strange jinchuriki: Where am I?
Harko: In my rooom in my small village.
Konahamaru: *enters* Boys come with me I'm going to train you how to control your and your powers.
After weeks of training they all learned how to at least suppress their power of the bijuu and bring it out (didn't learn their bijuu mode yet). Maki discovered mangekyou sharingan and the young jinchuriki boy was name nikito and he learned his six paths because he had rinnegan. They were all becoming truely strong. Maki was now proficient in chidori and other lightning moves, and firestyle and konahamaru even taught him rasengan He also developd a new mankeyou sharingan jutsu where he could absorb information and power just by touching them. Harko could now hold sage mode for half an hour and use the kyuubi to strengthen it. Nikito always traveled with 5 shadow clones with different powers, summoning, genjutsu, taijutsu, ninjutsu with all chakra natures, jinchuriki powers, and himself could see everything and could use a weird type of force to repel people, bring them in, and even fight with it. Together they were unstopable but Konahamaru was still worried because he knew the new akatsuki would kill them without a doubt. They were planning something but what was the question.
While they were training it came on them like a thousand pound weight. It started with a Boom! A man ran to them he was hurt bad you could see him limp.
Man: Konahamaru! THE AKATSUKI!!! WE CANT HOLD THEM!!!!!
Konahamaru:*pulls out scroll* Summoning jutsu (A huge toad emerges from the scroll)
Gamakichi: Yooo Konohamaru.
Konahamaru: Take these children out of here and take them to him
Gamakichi: Ohh that ninja that were not supposed to talk about
Konahamaru: *sighs* YESSSS! Now leave.
Gamakichi: Don't have to yell!!
Smoke started form by the village. Harko started to cry. With tears in his eyes he screamed.
Harko: I won't leave you dad. I never have and I certainly won't now.
He started to run before. Maki held his sword in front of him restricting him from movement. The sword started to burn, fire surrounded the sword. Konahamaru looked at his son and showed a tear then he ran toward the smoke.
Gamakichi: Come on kids. Everyone jumped on the toad and Nikito retracted his clones.
To Konahamaru.....
Konhamaru ran while in sage mode. He stopped when he actually saw the akatsuki. They were all standing on the roof.
Leader( with sharingan, the betrayer of the Uchiha): Where are the jinchuriki.
Konahamaru: (smiles) I'll never tell!!
Two of the akasuki people jumped down off th roof one had four arms and two were ripping through the robe. The other had 3 swords a huge one on his back and two small katana's on each side. The swordsman pulled out the two katana and started heading for Konahamaru. Konhamaru stepped on the ground making it shake and jumped forward kicking the swordsman in the face the 4 armed man jumped in and punched Konahamaru a few feet back. Konhamaru landed on his feet.
Konahamaru: Shadow clone jutsu
The 2 akatsuki destroyed shadow clones left and right. When the real Konahamaru came in with a rasengan barrage, hitting both of them. After another akatsuki came in with a gourd of sand. The sand came in and started to take down Konhamaru. He came up and ran towards the sand guy with a kunai, he slashed it across the mans face and was thrown back with another load of sand. Konahamaru slowly got up the guy with sword slashed his katana threw him then the 4 armed man picked him up by the neck with 2 hands and punched him with the other two. The sand then came up and strangled Konahamaru's body. Then one more guy came down from the roof and put together hand signs.
4th akatsuki: blood seal...
Konahamaru then was stuck their with the sand up to his neck and swords in his stomach. The swordsman pulled out the swords but the pain didn't lessen and then chains came over the sand and got tighter and tighter.
Leader: Where are the jinchuriki!!!
Konhamaru: Your gonna have to kill me.
The leader caught him in a tsuyomiki and showed him how Naruto died and his village and eventually how he would kill his son. The chains finally crushed his body. The chains went back into the jutsu caster's sleeves and the sand went into the gourd.
Leader: His death could have been avoided ok now we will find the jinchuriki and rule the world but we can wait for those ones lets find the other 10.
Back to Harko...
Harko felt a cold chill and threw up some blood he's dead he though but did it matter he felt they would all be dead soon
