Ballin Sasuke
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ALright if you didn't read the prologue this is years after Naruto is living and the Uchiha were re populated Konah and the whole ninja war are in turmoil every village has suffered great tragedies and destruction also a mysterious being was making Bijuu and sealing them into young children. Their were a total of 77 and only 13 were alive at the moment now here is the story.
Maki was a young simple boy but he was an Uchiha, the new must ruthless clan of the rebuilding of Konah. All of the Uchiha were trained at birth to fight and at the time of 5 everyone had 3 tomoes or they would die. Maki and his best friend Boto were one of the strongest of their clan and they were only 10. But Maki was stronger out of the two of them. Today Maki went to train himself deep in the woods. His goal was to surpass the power of the once great Uchiha Sasuke, and Itachi but he didn't know how. But the biggest secret Maki had was that Maki was the 77 tailed jinchuriki and hid it for years.
Maki: (handsigns) Fire style Dragon Jutsu!
A dragon made of fire came out of Maki's mouth and destroyed 5 trees then went into the air and the fire just disappeared without leaving smoke or a trace of fire. Maki immediately did a back flip and took out his black sword out of his back where he stored the hilt. the sword was black itself and the hilt had black diamonds engraved into it and was covered with red cloth as grip.
Maki:Come out Boto.
Boto: It never fails
Boto lunged forward with a sword of his own. Maki blocked him with his own sword and turned it forcing Boto's sword out of his hand hitting the ground somewhere. Maki then stored his sword back in his hilt. he jumped forward and punched Boto across the face then in the stomach. Boto threw up blood. Then Boto smiled and Kunai came straight for Maki's back. Maki had the smoothest reaction time he had seen he then turned Boto making him recieve the Kunai in the back.
Maki: I saw the shadow clone a mile away (turns sharingan on and smiles)
Boto: (picks himself up from the floor) *sighs* I should've known.
They both reached for the projectile weapons. Maki grabbed 6 kunai and Boto grabbed 8 shuriken. They both threw them in a frenzy (like sasuke and Itachi battle) every time hitting the others weapon. Then Maki got hit by one and Boto kept throwing them hitting Maki each time. Maki fell with his arm extended. Boto smiled then frowned. Maki was behind Boto with his word over his friends neck.
Maki: I win
Boto: Damn your genjutsu
Maki lets his word tdown and Boto runs home.
hours later
Maki: Might as well get home.
Maki went home and found the whole village in ruin. Everything was completely destroyed and people were dead everywhere. Then Maki ran towards the Uchiha's side of town. He was too late everyone was dead except for a few people. Boto was still up fighting a man with a black robe on with red clouds. The man had a hood on and then somehow a black fire hit Boto burning him but then it retracted as the man saw Maki. The man then retreated to a whole group of men wearing the robes. And they all disappeared but the man who killed Boto was still an Uchiha he could tell by the eyes but they weren't usual. Maki ran to Boto he was still breathing with his eyes open and body was burnt.
Maki: What happened Boto?
Boto hissed something but Maki couldn't make it out his voice was to burned but he could make out "Kill me" Maki raised his sword and stabbed his best friend. he felt a horrible pain in his heart. He kept moving he wanted to see his family. His older brother was the only one still alive.
Brother: Maki they came in like horrible black hounds killing everyone in sight and then they made a hole down in the center of town to read something then they left but someone had betrayed us Maki someone has. Maki take my eyes I heard it makes you strong Maki take my eyes.
Maki slowly cut out his brothers eyes he kissed him on the forehead and then he kissed his mother and little sister. Maki stumbled onto the floor crying his heart out.
Maki: MOM!!! DAD!!! ANYBODY!! the tears couldn't stop and his bijuu KUNTA was starting to release some of his power into the bot. Maki screamed some more until he fell unconscious.
Maki: why us?
I hope I did good thank you
Maki was a young simple boy but he was an Uchiha, the new must ruthless clan of the rebuilding of Konah. All of the Uchiha were trained at birth to fight and at the time of 5 everyone had 3 tomoes or they would die. Maki and his best friend Boto were one of the strongest of their clan and they were only 10. But Maki was stronger out of the two of them. Today Maki went to train himself deep in the woods. His goal was to surpass the power of the once great Uchiha Sasuke, and Itachi but he didn't know how. But the biggest secret Maki had was that Maki was the 77 tailed jinchuriki and hid it for years.
Maki: (handsigns) Fire style Dragon Jutsu!
A dragon made of fire came out of Maki's mouth and destroyed 5 trees then went into the air and the fire just disappeared without leaving smoke or a trace of fire. Maki immediately did a back flip and took out his black sword out of his back where he stored the hilt. the sword was black itself and the hilt had black diamonds engraved into it and was covered with red cloth as grip.
Maki:Come out Boto.
Boto: It never fails
Boto lunged forward with a sword of his own. Maki blocked him with his own sword and turned it forcing Boto's sword out of his hand hitting the ground somewhere. Maki then stored his sword back in his hilt. he jumped forward and punched Boto across the face then in the stomach. Boto threw up blood. Then Boto smiled and Kunai came straight for Maki's back. Maki had the smoothest reaction time he had seen he then turned Boto making him recieve the Kunai in the back.
Maki: I saw the shadow clone a mile away (turns sharingan on and smiles)
Boto: (picks himself up from the floor) *sighs* I should've known.
They both reached for the projectile weapons. Maki grabbed 6 kunai and Boto grabbed 8 shuriken. They both threw them in a frenzy (like sasuke and Itachi battle) every time hitting the others weapon. Then Maki got hit by one and Boto kept throwing them hitting Maki each time. Maki fell with his arm extended. Boto smiled then frowned. Maki was behind Boto with his word over his friends neck.
Maki: I win
Boto: Damn your genjutsu
Maki lets his word tdown and Boto runs home.
hours later
Maki: Might as well get home.
Maki went home and found the whole village in ruin. Everything was completely destroyed and people were dead everywhere. Then Maki ran towards the Uchiha's side of town. He was too late everyone was dead except for a few people. Boto was still up fighting a man with a black robe on with red clouds. The man had a hood on and then somehow a black fire hit Boto burning him but then it retracted as the man saw Maki. The man then retreated to a whole group of men wearing the robes. And they all disappeared but the man who killed Boto was still an Uchiha he could tell by the eyes but they weren't usual. Maki ran to Boto he was still breathing with his eyes open and body was burnt.
Maki: What happened Boto?
Boto hissed something but Maki couldn't make it out his voice was to burned but he could make out "Kill me" Maki raised his sword and stabbed his best friend. he felt a horrible pain in his heart. He kept moving he wanted to see his family. His older brother was the only one still alive.
Brother: Maki they came in like horrible black hounds killing everyone in sight and then they made a hole down in the center of town to read something then they left but someone had betrayed us Maki someone has. Maki take my eyes I heard it makes you strong Maki take my eyes.
Maki slowly cut out his brothers eyes he kissed him on the forehead and then he kissed his mother and little sister. Maki stumbled onto the floor crying his heart out.
Maki: MOM!!! DAD!!! ANYBODY!! the tears couldn't stop and his bijuu KUNTA was starting to release some of his power into the bot. Maki screamed some more until he fell unconscious.
Maki: why us?
I hope I did good thank you
