NarutoLuffy313
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This is a oneshot.
I just found this story on my computer. This was my english 2 class project thats why it isn't really detailed. I wanted to write the part where Naruto and Luffy really really long and interesting but my teacher didn't want it to be long. I didn't plan on Electron losing so easily to them.
But enough about that:
Enjoy the Story:
I wanted more chracters in but there was little space. I hope you guys enjoyed it.
Don't be afraid to inform me about mistakes and plotholes.
I just found this story on my computer. This was my english 2 class project thats why it isn't really detailed. I wanted to write the part where Naruto and Luffy really really long and interesting but my teacher didn't want it to be long. I didn't plan on Electron losing so easily to them.
But enough about that:
Enjoy the Story:
Naruto and Luffy Meet: Electron Attacks
“It is a nice day to eat Ramen today. Hahaha. I can’t wait to get there, so that I can eat 500 bowls of Ramen,” Naruto said excitedly running to the ramen stand. He didn’t watch where he was going and he bumped into someone. That someone was wearing a straw hat. “Who in the world are you!!?” both of them yelled out loud. They both stood up and looked at each other, wondering who the other was. Naruto decided to introduce himself. “Hey, I’m Naruto Uzumaki and I like Ramen.” Naruto said. “Meat is better than ramen!! My name is Monkey D. Luffy. You can just call me Luffy. I love meat.” “Ramen is better than meat!!!” Naruto yelled. “Meat!” “Ramen!” “Meat Meat!” “Ramen Ramen Ramen!!!!” “Meat Meat Meat Meat!!!!!” Naruto was getting tired of arguing so he said “Hey Luffy, you know what? I’m going to take you to my favorite Ramen stand to show you why Ramen is better than meat.” “Okay then, let’s go.” The Ramen stand they went to was Naruto’s favorite ramen stand in The Leaf Village.
When they got there Naruto order 1,000 bowls of Ramen. “Luffy you take 500 bowls and I will take the other 500. Let’s see who can finish them first, Ready, Get set, and GO!!!” Naruto and Luffy were both eating like crazy. “Where do these guys put all that food?” said the Ayame jokingly. “These guys are monsters!” said the Ayame’s father. While Naruto and Luffy were eating, the lights and all the devices in the restaurant went off. “What is going on and why are all the electrical devices off?” Naruto asked. They heard and evil laugh outside and both Naruto and Luffy ran outside to check it out. While outside they noticed that the whole village’s light and electrical devices were out. “What happened to all the electricity?” Luffy asked. “I have a good feeling that that guy up there has something to do with it.” Naruto answered. “Hahahaha, Hello Leaf Village. I have taken your main energy source; Electricity. You people do not deserve this deserve it. I decided to take it because I needed the Electricity from this village to take over the world and become “THE GOD OF ELECTRICTY”. Oh my name is Electron. See you later.” Electron said.
“Hey get back here you bastard, you ruined my meal. Nobody ruins my meal.” Luffy said. “Who dares call Electron a bastard?” Electron said looking back down. “That would be us!” Naruto and Luffy both said at the same time. “We are going to take you down right here.” “Bring it on punks.” Luffy and Naruto proceeded to attack Electron. “Gomu Gomu Mega Punch!” Luffy said attacking. With this attack his arm stretched and hit Electron bit didn’t affect him. “Wow you can stretch your arm to attack.” Naruto said. “Yup, it’d because I’m a rubber man. I’m like this because I ate a Devil Fruit, which gives you powers but you can’t swim. Naruto was amazed. “Electrical Push” Electron said using his attack that created a wave electrical current. The current hit Luffy. “Are you okay Luffy?” Naruto asked. “Don’t worry Naruto, I’m a rubber man electricity doesn’t effect me at all.” Luffy explained. Naruto was relieved and mad at Electron for attacking Luffy. “We have to work together to defeat this guy Luffy. Let’s use one of our strongest attacks to beat him.” Electron was way up in the sky, so they had to find a way to get up there. “Multi Shadow Clone Jutsu!!” Naruto said creating 1000 clones of himself. All the clones started to form a ladder and both Naruto and Luffy climbed up. Naruto started to form an attack called the “Wind Style: Wind Blade”. It is a sword like attack that damages anything. Luffy and Naruto both hit Electron with their attacks but he got away. “I will get my revenge!” Electron said before he left completely.
“Oh man he got away.” Luffy said. “I know where he is going. I placed a tracking clone on him. We just don’t have a ship to get to his palace that is across that huge river.” Naruto explained. “Oh yeah, we can use my ship.” Luffy said. “You have a ship?” “Yes I do. I have a ship because I’m a Pirate. I’m going to be King of the Pirates one day.” Luffy said excited. “Hahaha, who ever thought an idiot like you would be a Pirate.” Naruto thought. “You have a dream too. I’m a ninja and I want to be Hokage.” Naruto said. “Hokage? Is that some type of meat or food?” Luffy asked. “You idiot!!! The Hokage is the strongest ninja in village and is the leader of the village. Is everything about food to you?” asked Naruto. “Yes hahaha, let’s get to my ship.” Naruto said.
When they got to the ship Naruto was amazed at the beauty of the ship. Also he noticed that the ship had meat everywhere. “Hey, why does your ship have meat everywhere on it?” Naruto asked. “Oh that, I was hungry and I forgot to clean up.” “You are a monster!” Naruto said laughing. “The same could be said about you.” Luffy said. “My clone is still with Electron and according to the information; it seems that Electron’s Palace is straight across this huge river and that the palace is heavily guarded. Also the Electro Tribe are the underlings of Electron and the leader of the group is called Captain Enel.” Naruto explained. “Wow that is so cool. You got all that information without even being there. Also this ship is powered by electricity.” “Okay let’s set sail?” Naruto said. “Uh Naruto, what is electricity?” “What you don’t know what electricity is but you know that it can’t affect rubber. You are really stupid. I can’t blame you, even I don’t know what it means.” Naruto said laughing.
“And you call me stupid.” Luffy said while laughing also. “We should be there in less than 2 hours.” Naruto said. “Okay then let’s get ready.” “How doe we get ready to fight?” Naruto asked Luffy.
“We prepare by putting meat in our pockets, so that we don’t get hungry. “Are you serious? Why don’t we just eat the meat right now,” Naruto suggested. “That wouldn’t be cool,” Luffy said. Naruto felt like he was with a child. During the 2 hours Naruto and Luffy were eating the meat that Luffy was trying to put into his pockets.
One hour later they finally arrived at Electron’s Palace. It was spooky and there were guards everywhere. “How do we get in there Luffy?” “I don’t know about you but I’m just charging in.” “I’m with you on that plan. We have to save Leaf Village’s electricity.” Naruto declared. Luffy was running as fast as he can while knocking out the guards that were coming at him. “Wow I don’t have to do anything but walk because Luffy’s got everything covered.” Naruto said. Naruto finally caught up with Luffy and they were inside the palace now. “Show yourself Electron so that we can beat you to a pulp.” Luffy screamed. “Man, I’m already hungry,” Luffy said. “What you just ate more than 50 pieces of meat,” Naruto said. “You ate more than that too!” Luffy said. “Wow, you two are complete idiots.” the mysterious person said.
“Who are you and we are not idiots!!!!!!!” Naruto said. “Well I’m Captain Enel of the Electro Tribe. To get to Electron you have to get passed us.” Enel said. “Naruto you want to take this while I eat the meat that I put in my pocket?” Luffy asked. “Yeah sure, this should take a minute. What! You put meat in your pocket when I told you not to!? How do you even fit those huge things in there?” Naruto aced. “I couldn’t help it.” said Luffy. “Just forget it. Just sit back and eat your meat.” Naruto was ready to fight Captain and his group. “1000 Clone Technique,” Naruto yelled. 100 clones of Naruto appeared and each out a kunai and cut Enel and his group into little pieces. “Wow that was easier than I thought.” Naruto said. Naruto thought he defeated them but something was happening. Their chopped of bodies were joining together with electricity.
“You can’t defeat us; we are made out of electricity. As long as we contain electrons in our bodies we can’t die. You could say we are immortal.” Captain Enel said laughing. “Wow, electricity is really scary“, both Naruto and Luffy said. “Nothing can defeat us because we are immortal!!!!” Enel said again. They started to attack Naruto and Luffy with a group attack called “Electrical Dragon.” Naruto started to use a wind technique called “Wind Cutter”. The attacks clashed and Naruto’s attack beat the other attack, Naruto new the electricity and lighting are weak against wind. Even thought Naruto’s attack hit them, they got right back up. “Didn’t I tell you, we are immortal we can not be defeated.” Enel said again. Naruto thought to himself, ‘If they are basically electricity in human form maybe we can use them as a real energy source to power up something. Yeah that should do work.’ “Hey Luffy I need your help. Get out an electronic device that will use up all the electricity from these freaks.” Naruto commanded Luffy. “Okay.” Luffy pulled out a television and a Xbox 360.
“You keep a TV and Xbox 360 in your pocket too? Just how much stuff can fit into those pockets” Naruto said to Luffy. “Yup, you never know when stuff like this comes in handy.” Luffy explained that to me later. Since they are made out of electricity maybe we can use them up as electrical energy to power up these devices.” Naruto explained. Naruto and Luffy both grabbed a device and hooked them up to the Captain Enel and his group. “Wow what is this suppose to do to us?” laughed Enel. “Look again.” Naruto said. Enel noticed that they were being sucked into the devices but he couldn’t do anything about because it was already to late. After they were sucked in Luffy put the stuff back into his pockets.
“Do you here that noise that is coming from the top of this building?” Luffy asked? “Yeah I do, it must be Electron.” Grab onto my hand Naruto. I’m going to stretch my arm so that we can sling shot ourselves to the top.” Luffy did it and made it to the top where Electron was. They saw electrical currents coming from a room. “It looks like Electron is in that room.” Naruto said. “I guess so. Ready!?” Naruto shook his head yes and they busted into the room. They both confronted Electron. “Haha you made it pass my guards and the Electro Tribe. I have been expecting you.” Electron said. “I will control this world with my ELECTRICAL CURRENT DRAGON. That is my goal for all the pain I suffered in my life!!” said Electron sadly thinking about all the pain in his life.
Flashback Starts:
It was a sunny day and Electron was 10 years old playing alone. He had no friends and everybody hated him. The only people who didn’t hate him was his parents. One day Electron was playing alone a mountain and he saw that the cloud were getting darker and grayer. “What is happening to the sky? Oh no it must be an electrical storm that might wipe out the whole village, I have to warn them.” Electron said. He ran to the village and warned everyone. “Everyone get to safety, there is going to an electrical storm that can wipe out the whole village.” “Get away from us child and don’t lie to us.” Nobody believed him not even his parents. Two hours later there was a large rumble in the sky. The whole village was struck by the Ultimate Electrical Charge. The whole village was wiped out except for electron that was hiding in the mountain. “My mom and my dad are gone.” Electron said crying. “From now on I will master Electricity and get revenge.” said Electron. From then on Electron has been training until he mastered it.
Flashback Ends
“Nobody cares your past. I have been through more pain than you and you don’t see me complaining or wanting revenge.” Naruto yelled. Naruto and Luffy started to attack. “You can’t defeat me !” Electron said. He punched both of them in the stomach with his Electrical Punch. Naruto and Luffy were blown away. “Naruto let’s combine your wind techniques with my rubber attacks. Naruto and Luffy charged their techniques and combined them to make Rubber Sword Wind Cycle. Electron charged his ultimate attack called Lightening Blade. “Ahhhgrrrrrr!” Naruto and Luffy said when they clashed with Electron. The attacks were so strong that it caused the Palace to crumbles and caused an earthquake around the area.
Luffy and Naruto overpowered Electron with will power. “You’re not going to Electron. This attack will finish you. “Naruto said. “Noooooooooo, this can’t be happening. I’m the one who is supposed to win” Electron was sent flying into the sky and into outer space. “Now Luffy lets go back to The Leaf Village.” They rode their ship back to Leaf Village and noticed that all the lights and electrical devices were working again. “What will happen to Electron Naruto?” Luffy asked. “I don’t know.” “You know what Naruto; let’s go to a restaurant to eat meat.” “Okay, let’s go idiot. Oh and Ramen is still better than Meat.” “Meat is always better!!” “We make the Ultimate Team!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Naruto and Luffy said at the same time.
“It is a nice day to eat Ramen today. Hahaha. I can’t wait to get there, so that I can eat 500 bowls of Ramen,” Naruto said excitedly running to the ramen stand. He didn’t watch where he was going and he bumped into someone. That someone was wearing a straw hat. “Who in the world are you!!?” both of them yelled out loud. They both stood up and looked at each other, wondering who the other was. Naruto decided to introduce himself. “Hey, I’m Naruto Uzumaki and I like Ramen.” Naruto said. “Meat is better than ramen!! My name is Monkey D. Luffy. You can just call me Luffy. I love meat.” “Ramen is better than meat!!!” Naruto yelled. “Meat!” “Ramen!” “Meat Meat!” “Ramen Ramen Ramen!!!!” “Meat Meat Meat Meat!!!!!” Naruto was getting tired of arguing so he said “Hey Luffy, you know what? I’m going to take you to my favorite Ramen stand to show you why Ramen is better than meat.” “Okay then, let’s go.” The Ramen stand they went to was Naruto’s favorite ramen stand in The Leaf Village.
When they got there Naruto order 1,000 bowls of Ramen. “Luffy you take 500 bowls and I will take the other 500. Let’s see who can finish them first, Ready, Get set, and GO!!!” Naruto and Luffy were both eating like crazy. “Where do these guys put all that food?” said the Ayame jokingly. “These guys are monsters!” said the Ayame’s father. While Naruto and Luffy were eating, the lights and all the devices in the restaurant went off. “What is going on and why are all the electrical devices off?” Naruto asked. They heard and evil laugh outside and both Naruto and Luffy ran outside to check it out. While outside they noticed that the whole village’s light and electrical devices were out. “What happened to all the electricity?” Luffy asked. “I have a good feeling that that guy up there has something to do with it.” Naruto answered. “Hahahaha, Hello Leaf Village. I have taken your main energy source; Electricity. You people do not deserve this deserve it. I decided to take it because I needed the Electricity from this village to take over the world and become “THE GOD OF ELECTRICTY”. Oh my name is Electron. See you later.” Electron said.
“Hey get back here you bastard, you ruined my meal. Nobody ruins my meal.” Luffy said. “Who dares call Electron a bastard?” Electron said looking back down. “That would be us!” Naruto and Luffy both said at the same time. “We are going to take you down right here.” “Bring it on punks.” Luffy and Naruto proceeded to attack Electron. “Gomu Gomu Mega Punch!” Luffy said attacking. With this attack his arm stretched and hit Electron bit didn’t affect him. “Wow you can stretch your arm to attack.” Naruto said. “Yup, it’d because I’m a rubber man. I’m like this because I ate a Devil Fruit, which gives you powers but you can’t swim. Naruto was amazed. “Electrical Push” Electron said using his attack that created a wave electrical current. The current hit Luffy. “Are you okay Luffy?” Naruto asked. “Don’t worry Naruto, I’m a rubber man electricity doesn’t effect me at all.” Luffy explained. Naruto was relieved and mad at Electron for attacking Luffy. “We have to work together to defeat this guy Luffy. Let’s use one of our strongest attacks to beat him.” Electron was way up in the sky, so they had to find a way to get up there. “Multi Shadow Clone Jutsu!!” Naruto said creating 1000 clones of himself. All the clones started to form a ladder and both Naruto and Luffy climbed up. Naruto started to form an attack called the “Wind Style: Wind Blade”. It is a sword like attack that damages anything. Luffy and Naruto both hit Electron with their attacks but he got away. “I will get my revenge!” Electron said before he left completely.
“Oh man he got away.” Luffy said. “I know where he is going. I placed a tracking clone on him. We just don’t have a ship to get to his palace that is across that huge river.” Naruto explained. “Oh yeah, we can use my ship.” Luffy said. “You have a ship?” “Yes I do. I have a ship because I’m a Pirate. I’m going to be King of the Pirates one day.” Luffy said excited. “Hahaha, who ever thought an idiot like you would be a Pirate.” Naruto thought. “You have a dream too. I’m a ninja and I want to be Hokage.” Naruto said. “Hokage? Is that some type of meat or food?” Luffy asked. “You idiot!!! The Hokage is the strongest ninja in village and is the leader of the village. Is everything about food to you?” asked Naruto. “Yes hahaha, let’s get to my ship.” Naruto said.
When they got to the ship Naruto was amazed at the beauty of the ship. Also he noticed that the ship had meat everywhere. “Hey, why does your ship have meat everywhere on it?” Naruto asked. “Oh that, I was hungry and I forgot to clean up.” “You are a monster!” Naruto said laughing. “The same could be said about you.” Luffy said. “My clone is still with Electron and according to the information; it seems that Electron’s Palace is straight across this huge river and that the palace is heavily guarded. Also the Electro Tribe are the underlings of Electron and the leader of the group is called Captain Enel.” Naruto explained. “Wow that is so cool. You got all that information without even being there. Also this ship is powered by electricity.” “Okay let’s set sail?” Naruto said. “Uh Naruto, what is electricity?” “What you don’t know what electricity is but you know that it can’t affect rubber. You are really stupid. I can’t blame you, even I don’t know what it means.” Naruto said laughing.
“And you call me stupid.” Luffy said while laughing also. “We should be there in less than 2 hours.” Naruto said. “Okay then let’s get ready.” “How doe we get ready to fight?” Naruto asked Luffy.
“We prepare by putting meat in our pockets, so that we don’t get hungry. “Are you serious? Why don’t we just eat the meat right now,” Naruto suggested. “That wouldn’t be cool,” Luffy said. Naruto felt like he was with a child. During the 2 hours Naruto and Luffy were eating the meat that Luffy was trying to put into his pockets.
One hour later they finally arrived at Electron’s Palace. It was spooky and there were guards everywhere. “How do we get in there Luffy?” “I don’t know about you but I’m just charging in.” “I’m with you on that plan. We have to save Leaf Village’s electricity.” Naruto declared. Luffy was running as fast as he can while knocking out the guards that were coming at him. “Wow I don’t have to do anything but walk because Luffy’s got everything covered.” Naruto said. Naruto finally caught up with Luffy and they were inside the palace now. “Show yourself Electron so that we can beat you to a pulp.” Luffy screamed. “Man, I’m already hungry,” Luffy said. “What you just ate more than 50 pieces of meat,” Naruto said. “You ate more than that too!” Luffy said. “Wow, you two are complete idiots.” the mysterious person said.
“Who are you and we are not idiots!!!!!!!” Naruto said. “Well I’m Captain Enel of the Electro Tribe. To get to Electron you have to get passed us.” Enel said. “Naruto you want to take this while I eat the meat that I put in my pocket?” Luffy asked. “Yeah sure, this should take a minute. What! You put meat in your pocket when I told you not to!? How do you even fit those huge things in there?” Naruto aced. “I couldn’t help it.” said Luffy. “Just forget it. Just sit back and eat your meat.” Naruto was ready to fight Captain and his group. “1000 Clone Technique,” Naruto yelled. 100 clones of Naruto appeared and each out a kunai and cut Enel and his group into little pieces. “Wow that was easier than I thought.” Naruto said. Naruto thought he defeated them but something was happening. Their chopped of bodies were joining together with electricity.
“You can’t defeat us; we are made out of electricity. As long as we contain electrons in our bodies we can’t die. You could say we are immortal.” Captain Enel said laughing. “Wow, electricity is really scary“, both Naruto and Luffy said. “Nothing can defeat us because we are immortal!!!!” Enel said again. They started to attack Naruto and Luffy with a group attack called “Electrical Dragon.” Naruto started to use a wind technique called “Wind Cutter”. The attacks clashed and Naruto’s attack beat the other attack, Naruto new the electricity and lighting are weak against wind. Even thought Naruto’s attack hit them, they got right back up. “Didn’t I tell you, we are immortal we can not be defeated.” Enel said again. Naruto thought to himself, ‘If they are basically electricity in human form maybe we can use them as a real energy source to power up something. Yeah that should do work.’ “Hey Luffy I need your help. Get out an electronic device that will use up all the electricity from these freaks.” Naruto commanded Luffy. “Okay.” Luffy pulled out a television and a Xbox 360.
“You keep a TV and Xbox 360 in your pocket too? Just how much stuff can fit into those pockets” Naruto said to Luffy. “Yup, you never know when stuff like this comes in handy.” Luffy explained that to me later. Since they are made out of electricity maybe we can use them up as electrical energy to power up these devices.” Naruto explained. Naruto and Luffy both grabbed a device and hooked them up to the Captain Enel and his group. “Wow what is this suppose to do to us?” laughed Enel. “Look again.” Naruto said. Enel noticed that they were being sucked into the devices but he couldn’t do anything about because it was already to late. After they were sucked in Luffy put the stuff back into his pockets.
“Do you here that noise that is coming from the top of this building?” Luffy asked? “Yeah I do, it must be Electron.” Grab onto my hand Naruto. I’m going to stretch my arm so that we can sling shot ourselves to the top.” Luffy did it and made it to the top where Electron was. They saw electrical currents coming from a room. “It looks like Electron is in that room.” Naruto said. “I guess so. Ready!?” Naruto shook his head yes and they busted into the room. They both confronted Electron. “Haha you made it pass my guards and the Electro Tribe. I have been expecting you.” Electron said. “I will control this world with my ELECTRICAL CURRENT DRAGON. That is my goal for all the pain I suffered in my life!!” said Electron sadly thinking about all the pain in his life.
Flashback Starts:
It was a sunny day and Electron was 10 years old playing alone. He had no friends and everybody hated him. The only people who didn’t hate him was his parents. One day Electron was playing alone a mountain and he saw that the cloud were getting darker and grayer. “What is happening to the sky? Oh no it must be an electrical storm that might wipe out the whole village, I have to warn them.” Electron said. He ran to the village and warned everyone. “Everyone get to safety, there is going to an electrical storm that can wipe out the whole village.” “Get away from us child and don’t lie to us.” Nobody believed him not even his parents. Two hours later there was a large rumble in the sky. The whole village was struck by the Ultimate Electrical Charge. The whole village was wiped out except for electron that was hiding in the mountain. “My mom and my dad are gone.” Electron said crying. “From now on I will master Electricity and get revenge.” said Electron. From then on Electron has been training until he mastered it.
Flashback Ends
“Nobody cares your past. I have been through more pain than you and you don’t see me complaining or wanting revenge.” Naruto yelled. Naruto and Luffy started to attack. “You can’t defeat me !” Electron said. He punched both of them in the stomach with his Electrical Punch. Naruto and Luffy were blown away. “Naruto let’s combine your wind techniques with my rubber attacks. Naruto and Luffy charged their techniques and combined them to make Rubber Sword Wind Cycle. Electron charged his ultimate attack called Lightening Blade. “Ahhhgrrrrrr!” Naruto and Luffy said when they clashed with Electron. The attacks were so strong that it caused the Palace to crumbles and caused an earthquake around the area.
Luffy and Naruto overpowered Electron with will power. “You’re not going to Electron. This attack will finish you. “Naruto said. “Noooooooooo, this can’t be happening. I’m the one who is supposed to win” Electron was sent flying into the sky and into outer space. “Now Luffy lets go back to The Leaf Village.” They rode their ship back to Leaf Village and noticed that all the lights and electrical devices were working again. “What will happen to Electron Naruto?” Luffy asked. “I don’t know.” “You know what Naruto; let’s go to a restaurant to eat meat.” “Okay, let’s go idiot. Oh and Ramen is still better than Meat.” “Meat is always better!!” “We make the Ultimate Team!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Naruto and Luffy said at the same time.
I wanted more chracters in but there was little space. I hope you guys enjoyed it.
Don't be afraid to inform me about mistakes and plotholes.
You will surely improve during time