Naruto: A New Revolution

[Ace]

(The setting takes place Twenty years after Akatsuki is defeated.) "Dad, dad!" two voices chorused. "Shhh!" a gentle voice commanded. "Your dads filling out some very important papers for the village." Hinata said. "What's on your mind Namazi, Nomari? Naruto Uzamaki inquiered. "Imachi and Sanuli Uchiha are on our team!" Namazi explained. "And that's not all!" Nomari chimed in. "Sai's gonna be our Sensei!"

I know this is short but i'll have a longer chapter up soon.

 

[-Damon-]

not a bad idea but say a sensei maybe

 

[BishamonSama]

Lol! Sai is their sensei!! XD

That's RICH! XD

 

[musicgenesis]

Lol...Sai as a sensei..haha..i bet he's gonna read a book to see how to teach them as well...XD

 

[Ace]

Not a bad idea huh? Well I'll update it every other day. MusicGenesis mind if I borrow your idea? Also, post how to make story better.

 

[Ace]

"So, Sai's to be your sensei huh?" Naruto mumbled. "Namazi could you come here so I could tell you something?" Naruto asked. "Yeah, what's up?" Namazi whispered. "I don't know if you noticed, but your sister's got quite a bit of techniques up her sleeve." Naruo paused. "Have you been training lately?" "Of course, dad!" Namazi replied."I wouldn't let Nomari surpass me!" he said. "Besides I got some techniques up my sleeve that I've just created!" He smiled "Alright then you and Nomari can spar tonight, and I'll evaluate you guys!" Naruto said.

"Nomari, come out to training ground 7!" Namazi called out. "Wer'e suppossed to go there, so dad can see what we can do." Namazi explained. " Is that the case, huh!" She smirked. "Don't expect me to go easy on you!" she said. They Landed, and their dad watched from the shadows. "When ever your ready!" Naruto shouts. Nomari made a straight beeline towards Namazi. She jumped in the air, and Shouts " Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!"( Shadow clone Jutsu). Namazi does the same, and throws three kunai. He and the three of his clones jump toward the kunai, and Nomari panics. ( What should I do.... ) she grabs one of her clones, and kicks them toward the kunai. She lands daintly on the ground, and quickly throws red, blue, and green seeds at the ground. ( What's she thinking this time) Namazi wonders.

Will update in a few. Comment please.

 

[Aki]

Interesting...

 

[Shodaime]

yep really intersting.

 

[Rei]

wow, Naruto just watching and not jumping at the battle? I would really really like to see that... It's nice

 

[Ace]

Namazi's three clones land, in front of him as he pants heavily. ( I didn't want to use THAT technique yet, but it seems that I might not have a choice!) As Nomari held her breath out came a big wave of water. The wave cascaded over the field, as Namazi and his clones pulled out a long metal pole. Digging the pole into the ground firmly, Namazi jumped onto all of his clones. ( I've got to stop her from completing her jutsu!) He throws three shurikens directly at Nomari. She flips out of the way, and the water stops coming out. "Huh" Namazi smirked. Suddenly he, and his clones were grabbed from behind. As Namazi looked straight at Nomari he turned around in shock. She's got a hold of me through vines?! Namazi started to feel weak. His Clones dissapated, and Nomari cheerfully looked at him. "It's draining your chakra, you know!" she laughed. "Get out of this one Namazi!" ( Guess I have no choice but to use it he thought).

Next Chapter soon . Please comment

 

[Ace]

Namazi grabbed a kunai, and tried to cut the vines. "They'll only tighten if you struggle!" Nomari sighed. Namazi put his hands in the eight trigrams 64 protective palms stance. As Nomari looked on in disbelief, Namazi removed the vines at speeds which she had never seen. As the vines cleared, Namazi grabbed, his pole and got in the same stance. ( Now it's time!) As he rushed to Nomari she threw kunais at him. They pathetically missed him , and as she prepared for him to fnish his assualt, she drew back her breath and held it. (Got to make this quick) Namazi thought. He was a few feet away, and then he started his new techinique.

"Eight Trigrams 64 Palms!" Nomari gasped as the blows hit her she felt pain, that was all to real for her. "2 Palms!" He had only tapped her, but it felt like she was being stabbed. "4 Palms!" Her chakra system was shutting off. (I can't take much more of this) she thought grimly. "8 Palms!" She staggered back, and hit a tree. "16 Palms!" Her insides felt like they were about to explode! "32 Palms" Namazi was winning, but he hadn't wanted it to be this way. Just as he was about to finish the move, his mom called out for him to stop. Naruto looked beside him in the bushes, and asked "When did you get here!". I used one of your special kunai's." she said. "Nomari is hurt, I don't think we should continue this battle." She explained. "I could see you guys training from inside the house, and saw Namazi performing that attack." "My byakugan showed me that her body's not strong enough to take that attack." "We should rest up any way." Naruto said.

"Hey Namazi!" Naruto called. He appeared in front of Naruto, half asleep. "Yeah?" he mumbled. "Get your mom and Nomari, we're going to train before you guys have to team up with Sai." "I'm leaving Sasuke in charge of the village while wer'e gone." Naruto said. "I don't want Sanuli, and Imachi to surpass you two." Naruto said."Hey, Naruto!" Hinata called.
"I think it would be better if I trained Nomari, and you Namazi" she suggested. " Hmm, I guess your on to something." Naruto said. " Alright" he said as they all hugged each other. "Stay safe, and when we all come back we'll be stronger than we were before!" Naruto said.

Next Chapter Preview: "So Sai Sensei, what is our first training session going to be on?" Sanuli asked. "Well since your so eager to know, I'll tell you." Sai calmly said. "I have three bells on me." He said. " Yet, there are four of you." He casually said. "Who ever doesn't grab a bell won't become a ninja!"

 

[Ace]

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As the wind rushed past Sanuli's face, as she raced to training ground 7. (I'm gonna have to pick up the pace if I wanna win)he thought. As he came to the training grounds, he saw Imachi and Nomari already there. As he forced his legs to hurry and make the finish line, he saw Namazi out the corner of his eye.( There is no way I'm gonna lose to him!) Sanuli thought. He pushed the last ounce of strength in him, and finally made it. "Yes, I made it!" Sanuli shouted. "Looks like your buying us ramen, Namazi!" Imachi and Nomari giggled. "Yeah, yeah." he gruffed. "When the stupid teacher gonna get here already?!" Namazi whined. "Yeah, I'm tired of waiting!" Imachi said. " Well, lets see what we have here!" a voice said from above them. " So far, I guess I know we have two whiney ninjas." Sai said. As they turned in awe, they saw their mentor. "If your'e quite done with critisizing others, we can start your first training session!" Sai said. At once they all were standing up straight, and had big smiles on their faces."So Sai Sensei, what is our first training session going to be on?" Sanuli asked. "Well since your so eager to know, I'll tell you." Sai calmly said. "I have three bells on me." He said. " Yet, there are four of you." He casually said. "Who ever doesn't grab a bell won't become a ninja!" He finished. As all of them looked around at each other with worried looks, they finally turned back to Sai. "We proudly accept your challenge!" They chorused together. " Well then, let the games begin Sai replied.

 

[Zegram]

This is great so far.

 

[Ace]

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Sanuli pulled out three huge shurikens, and threw one five meters above the ground, one seven meters above the ground, and nine meters above the ground. Sai looked at the shurikens, and stepped aside. Suddenly the shurikens stopped a few inches away from him, halted by a piece of paper he pulled out. The shurikens clanked onto the ground, and Sanuli looked around grimly. " I guess that we'll have to use our sharingan!" Imachi said. Their eyes changed, and one tomeo was shown in Sanuli's eyes, while two were in Imachi's eyes. "Byakugan!" Namazi, and Nomari shouted. "Imachi, Sanuli copy this technique! Namazi said. " Shadow Clone jutsu!" As each of them produced three clones, Sai started to look interested. The clones circled around him, and Namazi's clones pulled out four metal poles. Two fanned out, while the others charged at Sai. The two clones shoved the pole in the ground, while Namazi aimed for his head, and the other clone aimed for his feet. Sai pulled out another durable sheet of paper, and firmly held the weight of the poles. Sai quickly steeped on the bottom of the scroll, and rolled another sheet of paper up. He warded the poles off with his hand, and foot. As Namazi struggled to push the pole through the paper, Sai took out a brush. He dipped it in some ink kept in his jacket, and wrote on the paper. The paper glowed bright red, as Namazi looked on in horror....

 

[Aki]

Its a great story... keep it up...

 

[Ace]

Naruto: A New Revolution.

The paper glowed a bright red, as it suddenly burst into flames. Namazi made a startled jump backwards, as Nomari fought to put it out. "Water Cannon jutsu!" came out her mouth as a powerful spray of water hit the flames. As the flames died out, Sai pulled out a sheet of paper that covered the entire battle field. He got four large bottles of ink out, and threw them in the air. He picked up one of the large shurikens, and shattered the bottles. Ink splashed every where, as Sai made difficult hand signals. "Space Ink Blot jutsu!" He called out. He dissappeared into the ink, as everyone looked on in astonishment. "What now?" Sanuli asked.

 

[Ace]

Naruto: A New Revolution.

"Well, he set his paper on fire before right?" Imachi suggested. "All we've got to do is set his paper on fire!" They jumped onto Namazi's poles. "Get ready!" Imachi said to Sanuli. He nodded. They drew their breath in, and out came their Great Fireball Jutsu. The flames hit the paper, but failed to catch on fire. "Didn't work." They said grimly. All but Nomari, jumped down from the poles. As she surveyed the battlefield, she saw something out the corner of her eye. Hundreds kunai's whistled through the air, as she cried out her warning. "Watch out!" she called. They frantically dodged the projectiles, as they scrambled up the metal poles. " I think they came from the ink!" Imachi guessed. "Your right." a deep voice sounded through the forest. " I'm one with the ink!" Sai said. "How will you get the bells now?" He questioned. They looked at each other, and yelled "Shadow Clone Jutsu!" Namazi's clones pulled out enough poles for all of them, and he bent the tops out of them. They stood on makeshift footings, and surveyed the land. A hand popped out of every blot of ink, and threw shurikens at them. Namazi used kaiten, while Nomari used 8 trigrams 64 protective palms. Imachi made hand signs, and the earth around her raced to surround her from the flying kunai's. Sanuli pulled out two swords, and fended off the whizzing projectiles. " Iv'e got it!" He said. " I know how to beat him!"

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[Ace]

"Why didn't I see this sooner!" Sanuli said. He created a whirlwind with his swords. Kunais flew out of his way. The projectiles stopped flying, and Sanuli grabbed two kunai. He pulled out a piece of paper ripped it in half, wrote on it, and tied them to the kunai knifes. He threw one at Imachi, and one at Nomari. As they looked at the paper, they both understood. Namazi looked at them, and said "Where do I come in?" "Just wait until he shows, then get the bells. Namazi watched as the other three gathered in their breath, and used waterstyle jutsu.

 

[Ace]

The waves cascaded over the paper, as it got wrinkled up, and the ink washed off. They stopped, and watched as the ink came together to form Sai. Sais hands reached down to grab for some kunais, but looked in suprise as they were caught on something. "Vines?" he says. They all walked up to him laughing, and said "What's an artist without his hands?" They all reached for the bells, and realized that there wouldn't be enough. "All right!" Sai says. " The moment of truth." They all looked at each other. "If none of us can become a ninja then, so be it." Sanuli said. " I thought of that." Sai said. " So, all of you pass!" They all smiled. " Now then Namazi!" Nomari said. " How about you buy us some ramen!"

They slurped their ramen up, and listened while Sai talked to them. "You guys have come a long way, now get some rest." They finished up, and went home. The next day the stood in front of Naruto, waiting to get their first mission. "Okay, you guys need to go to the Land of Waterfalls, and help the stop their dam from overflowing." Imachi scowled, and said " Why do we have to get this lame mission?" Naruto smiled and said " I picked you guys because you seem to be the best team for the job." "Sai can draw well, so that may come in handy if you need to revise the architecture of the dam." he said. "You three each have your own abilities that will help this mission go smoothly also." he said. "That said, you guys can get your stuff ready and meet me at the gate." Sai announced. They all started to leave, but Naruto called Namazi and Sanuli back. "Protect your sisters from the danger that may come in the following mission." He said. They turned and left.