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Naruto 668: Konoha's Noble Red Beast
Naruto 668- Konoha’s Noble Red Beast
(Actions/Thoughts)
{Scenery}
Gai- The Green days of Konoha are over. The time has come to become the Red Beast.
Kakashi- (shocked) Are you serious about this Gai?
Gai- Yes. Right now I am the only one capable of taking on Madara. The Eighth Gate is the best chance we have. I don’t know how long I will be able to delay him, but this must be done regardless of the cost.
Lee- (crying) But Gai-Sesei….
Gai- Lee, the Alliance needs time to recuperate and every second I can delay him will be crucial.
Lee- (determined) Then I will go with you and together we can…
Gai- (serious) No Lee! You must stay alive to pass on the teachings of Youth to the next generation and show the world that you can become a great shinobi as a master of taijutsu.
{Ten-Ten lands next to Gai and Lee}
TenTen- Gai-Sensei are you really going to use that?!
Gai- Yes but I want the both of you to know that I am very proud of you both. Kakashi it looks like our rivalry is coming to an end. (Smiles and gives everyone two thumbs up before turning to face Madara)
Lee/Tenten- Thank you sensei.
Minato- (solemn) I’m sorry that you were forced to resort to this Gai.
Gai- It would be best if you all stand back. (Gai crosses his arms in the stance used when opening the gates.
Gai- First Gate: Gate of Opening. Open!
Gai- Second Gate: Gate of Healing. Open!
Kakashi- We need to get away now! (Kakashi and the rest of the group move to a safe distance.)
(Kakashi looks back at Gai and remembers)
(Kakashi and Gai fighting together during the sand/sound invasion)
(Gai arriving to aid Kakashi, Asuma and Kurenai against Itachi and Kisame)
(Kakashi and Gai fighting together against the seven swordsmen)
Gai- Third Gate: Gate of Life. Open!
Gai- Fourth Gate: Gate of Pain. Open!
(Lee remembers everything that Gai has done for him)
(Gai promising to make Lee an incredible shinobi even with his inability to use ninjutsu)
(Gai teaching Lee how to perform the Hidden Lotus/Gates)
(Gai promising to die with Lee should he not survive his spinal surgery)
Gai- Fifth Gate: Gate of Limit. Open!
Gai- Sixth Gate: Gate of View. Open!
(TenTen remembers her time with Gai as a sensei)
(Gai showing TenTen how to wield various ninja tools)
(TenTen dealing with Gai and Lee’s eccentricities but still having a smile on her face)
Gai- Seventh Gate: Gate of Wonder. Open!
{The wind begins to pick up as Kakashi’s group is once again forced to cover their faces from the force}
Madara- (If he unleashes the last gate here it could cause damage to the Shinju! I should be able to take care of him without much difficulty now that I possess the power of the Six Paths, but I need to move away from this location. However this could be quite entertaining while I wait for my other Rinnegan to return.)
{Madara is shown with rape face as he flies away from the Shinju}
Gai- Eighth Gate: Gate of Death. Open!!!
{A very powerful shockwave emits from Gai as the final gate opens and the green aura turns red. Kakashi’s group is nearly knocked over by the incredible force that is coming from Gai. Scene changes to the Alliance as the Kages, several sensory shinobi, as well as Spiral Zetsu are shown turning towards the source of the chakra with surprised and weary expressions as a tremor passes through their location}
Hiruzen- This is the…
Tsunade- I see. (Gai is going to use that technique)
Shizune- Tsunade-sama is this power of the last gate?!
Tsunade- Yes I’m afraid so.
Shizune- But if Gai-san opens the last gate he will…!
Tsunade- Gai of all people knows what is at stake now.
{Scene switches to team Taka, Kabuto and Tobirama}
Juugo- (This power!)
Suigetsu- (How did I ever get roped into coming here? I’m surrounded by freaks of nature.)
Karin- What in the world, these chakras I’m sensing are off the charts?
!
Orochimaru- (smirks) This is the power of the…
Orochimaru/Tobirama- Eighth Inner Gate of Death
Suigetsu- (confused) The eigth what?
Orochimaru- The Eight Inner Gates are a forbidden technique that allows the user to open eight pathways in the chakra network that expand the flow of chakra allowing for incredible increases in physical ability for short periods of time.
Tobirama- However with each gate opened the strain on the body increases and causes extreme damage. Unlike the first seven gates, once the eighth gate is opened it cannot be closed. The eighth gate focuses increasingly more powerful bursts of chakra through the heart leading to unimaginable strength. The heat caused from this deteriorates the blood vessels causing massive internal bleeding and increased heart-rate. The blood seeps through the pores of the skin and evaporates creating the appearance of a red steam. Eventually the heart cannot handle the intense physical strain and gives out, leading to the death of the user.
{Scene shows Gai standing in a massive crater with veins even more pronounced than in the other gates. Blood can be seen pouring out of his skin and mixing with the green aura of the seventh gate}
Gai-(serious) Now Madara you must face Konoha’s Noble Red Beast of Battle during the culmination of his YOUTH!!!! (Gai rushes towards Madara at unimaginable speeds)
Madara-(grinning evilly) Let’s just see how well the Red Beast can dance.
Madara doesn’t seem fazed at all… What will Gai do against such overwhelming odds?
This is my first prediction so I don't know how good its going to be. I think that Kishi will stall all next chapter then open the last gate at the end.
Naruto 668- Konoha’s Noble Red Beast
(Actions/Thoughts)
{Scenery}
Gai- The Green days of Konoha are over. The time has come to become the Red Beast.
Kakashi- (shocked) Are you serious about this Gai?
Gai- Yes. Right now I am the only one capable of taking on Madara. The Eighth Gate is the best chance we have. I don’t know how long I will be able to delay him, but this must be done regardless of the cost.
Lee- (crying) But Gai-Sesei….
Gai- Lee, the Alliance needs time to recuperate and every second I can delay him will be crucial.
Lee- (determined) Then I will go with you and together we can…
Gai- (serious) No Lee! You must stay alive to pass on the teachings of Youth to the next generation and show the world that you can become a great shinobi as a master of taijutsu.
{Ten-Ten lands next to Gai and Lee}
TenTen- Gai-Sensei are you really going to use that?!
Gai- Yes but I want the both of you to know that I am very proud of you both. Kakashi it looks like our rivalry is coming to an end. (Smiles and gives everyone two thumbs up before turning to face Madara)
Lee/Tenten- Thank you sensei.
Minato- (solemn) I’m sorry that you were forced to resort to this Gai.
Gai- It would be best if you all stand back. (Gai crosses his arms in the stance used when opening the gates.
Gai- First Gate: Gate of Opening. Open!
Gai- Second Gate: Gate of Healing. Open!
Kakashi- We need to get away now! (Kakashi and the rest of the group move to a safe distance.)
(Kakashi looks back at Gai and remembers)
(Kakashi and Gai fighting together during the sand/sound invasion)
(Gai arriving to aid Kakashi, Asuma and Kurenai against Itachi and Kisame)
(Kakashi and Gai fighting together against the seven swordsmen)
Gai- Third Gate: Gate of Life. Open!
Gai- Fourth Gate: Gate of Pain. Open!
(Lee remembers everything that Gai has done for him)
(Gai promising to make Lee an incredible shinobi even with his inability to use ninjutsu)
(Gai teaching Lee how to perform the Hidden Lotus/Gates)
(Gai promising to die with Lee should he not survive his spinal surgery)
Gai- Fifth Gate: Gate of Limit. Open!
Gai- Sixth Gate: Gate of View. Open!
(TenTen remembers her time with Gai as a sensei)
(Gai showing TenTen how to wield various ninja tools)
(TenTen dealing with Gai and Lee’s eccentricities but still having a smile on her face)
Gai- Seventh Gate: Gate of Wonder. Open!
{The wind begins to pick up as Kakashi’s group is once again forced to cover their faces from the force}
Madara- (If he unleashes the last gate here it could cause damage to the Shinju! I should be able to take care of him without much difficulty now that I possess the power of the Six Paths, but I need to move away from this location. However this could be quite entertaining while I wait for my other Rinnegan to return.)
{Madara is shown with rape face as he flies away from the Shinju}
Gai- Eighth Gate: Gate of Death. Open!!!
{A very powerful shockwave emits from Gai as the final gate opens and the green aura turns red. Kakashi’s group is nearly knocked over by the incredible force that is coming from Gai. Scene changes to the Alliance as the Kages, several sensory shinobi, as well as Spiral Zetsu are shown turning towards the source of the chakra with surprised and weary expressions as a tremor passes through their location}
Hiruzen- This is the…
Tsunade- I see. (Gai is going to use that technique)
Shizune- Tsunade-sama is this power of the last gate?!
Tsunade- Yes I’m afraid so.
Shizune- But if Gai-san opens the last gate he will…!
Tsunade- Gai of all people knows what is at stake now.
{Scene switches to team Taka, Kabuto and Tobirama}
Juugo- (This power!)
Suigetsu- (How did I ever get roped into coming here? I’m surrounded by freaks of nature.)
Karin- What in the world, these chakras I’m sensing are off the charts?
!
Orochimaru- (smirks) This is the power of the…
Orochimaru/Tobirama- Eighth Inner Gate of Death
Suigetsu- (confused) The eigth what?
Orochimaru- The Eight Inner Gates are a forbidden technique that allows the user to open eight pathways in the chakra network that expand the flow of chakra allowing for incredible increases in physical ability for short periods of time.
Tobirama- However with each gate opened the strain on the body increases and causes extreme damage. Unlike the first seven gates, once the eighth gate is opened it cannot be closed. The eighth gate focuses increasingly more powerful bursts of chakra through the heart leading to unimaginable strength. The heat caused from this deteriorates the blood vessels causing massive internal bleeding and increased heart-rate. The blood seeps through the pores of the skin and evaporates creating the appearance of a red steam. Eventually the heart cannot handle the intense physical strain and gives out, leading to the death of the user.
{Scene shows Gai standing in a massive crater with veins even more pronounced than in the other gates. Blood can be seen pouring out of his skin and mixing with the green aura of the seventh gate}
Gai-(serious) Now Madara you must face Konoha’s Noble Red Beast of Battle during the culmination of his YOUTH!!!! (Gai rushes towards Madara at unimaginable speeds)
Madara-(grinning evilly) Let’s just see how well the Red Beast can dance.
Madara doesn’t seem fazed at all… What will Gai do against such overwhelming odds?
This is my first prediction so I don't know how good its going to be. I think that Kishi will stall all next chapter then open the last gate at the end.
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