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Naruto 682: Never Again
(Thoughts)
{Actions}
[Descriptions]
*Flashbacks*
Naruto and Sasuke disengage from Black Zetsu and prepare to go on the offensive!! This sealing jutsu is!?
Page 1
[Naruto and Sasuke are both shown levitating away from Kaguya as both parties silently observe their opposition]
[Sasuke is shown standing on the platform Naruto made for him last chapter and Naruto is shown with his 5 TSBs behind him]
Sasuke- Naruto, we’ve lost a considerable amount of chakra to her. We must be more careful from now on if we intend to seal her.
Naruto- Yea I understand! Do you have a plan?
Page 2
Sasuke- She has the ocular abilities of all three dojutsu. Like the Hyuuga she can use the Byakugan to view the chakra system.
*Panel shows two senbon striking Sasuke’s hawk’s internal chakra points*
Sasuke- She can also exert chakra from any point around her body with the ability to change its range, density, and power level within an instant.
*Panel shows her shaping chakra into fists to counter Naruto’s chakra punches, and her using a chakra shockwave from her body in order to blow away Susano’o*
Sasuke- And then the ability she used to shift herself behind us…
Page 3
Sasuke- It appears that she can create dimensional rifts to teleport any part of her body to the point of her choosing. We need a way to cover our blind spots.
Naruto- I have just the thing for that!! {makes the cross-seal for the Kage Bunshin}
[Four Naruto clones appear and scatter to different areas on the battlefield while hovering in the air]
Naruto- With this, any time she attempts to teleport in our blind spots, my clones can instantly call out her positions.
Sasuke- Once we are able to injure her, we can prepare to use the Yin/Yang Release: Celestial Creation Seal.
Naruto- [serious expression] Let’s do this Sasuke! Everyone is counting on us, and we can’t let them down!
Page 4
Kaguya- {looks at Sasuke and thinks} (He is just like Hamura: perceptive and intuitive. And the other {looks at Naruto} is just like Hagoromo: caring and compassionate.)
[Sasuke is shown activating his v2 Susano’o and preps an Enton Arrow]
Sasuke- I will buy you a few seconds in order to power up, move me as close to her as possible.
Naruto- Got it Sasuke!!
[Naruto manipulates the TSB platform to move it and Sasuke towards Kaguya]
Page 5
[Sasuke launches the arrow at Kaguya]
[Kaguya creates a black portal which she fades into to dodge the arrow and disappears]
[Naruto in his base mode is shown standing in his mindscape surrounded by all nine bijuu]
Naruto- {punches his fists together} Alright everyone, I’m going to need all of your help now.
Page 6
[Full page shows a panel of each of the nine bijuu holding their various limbs into seals in order to mold chakra]
Shukaku- Let’s kick this crazy woman’s ass!!
Matatabi- We are with you!!
Isobu- Let’s do it!!
Son Goku- Of course Naruto!!
Kokuo- Yes together we will defeat her!!
Saiken- We will win!!
Chomei- Luck is on our side!!
Gyuuki- Go Naruto!!
Kurama- {smiles} I guess the old man’s words have finally come to pass.
[Naruto is shown in the center panel with a grin on his face]
Naruto- Thank you guys, for everything!!
Page 7
Sasuke- Damn where did she go?!
[A black rift is shown opening in the space above Sasuke]
[One of the Naruto clones spots the signs of Kaguya’s technique and calls it out]
Naruto clone- {yells} Sasuke above you!!!
[Sasuke immediately looks up just as Kaguya tries to ensnare him with her hair, and a panel of Sasuke’s Rinnegan is shown]
[The space previously occupied by Sasuke is suddenly replaced by the Enton arrow which had missed earlier]
Page 8
Kaguya- What?!
[Kaguya immediately forms her hair into a shield to block the arrow which connects with its target, but doesn’t pierce it]
[The Enton Flames from the arrow begin to spread around Kaguya’s hair]
Kaguya- So these are the black flames of Amaterasu that my child had recorded. How pitiful…
[Kaguya hair begins to twist and coil around before suddenly expanding outward, which disperses the flames]
Sasuke- [standing on the TSB platform above Kaguya] So it had no effect at all. She was able to react to the arrow at such a short range.
Page 9
[Naruto is shown covered by a surge of dark-orange chakra which bursts forth into a form similar to Ashura’s. The avatar is shown with three heads which look similar to Kurama and six arms holding 5 TSBs]
[The avatar wears a necklace with 9 beads with the kanji for the numbers 1-9, representing the 9 bijuu. The Senjutsu of the Six Paths symbol is visible on the avatar’s back]
Naruto- [forms two TSBs into staves and charges at Kaguya] Take this!!!
[Naruto charges at Kaguya who raises her palm creating a chakra shield right as Naruto swings both staves at Kaguya]
Kaguya- Indra, Ashura, all your attacks are futile against me. Obey your mother and return your chakra to me.
Page 10
Naruto- If there’s one thing you don’t already know about me {grins} it’s that I’m not the kind of person who would give up so easily.
Sasuke- {smirks} Hmph!
[Naruto begins to condense the enlarged TSB in between the avatar’s two middle hands]
[Naruto fires the attack in the form of a beam similar to the Juubi laser which slightly pushes Kaguya back]
Sasuke- Naruto now!!!
Page 11
[Panel shows two pairs of two Naruto clones which were created earlier]
Naruto clone 1&2- Shukaku!!
[Two massive Sage Art: Magnet Release Rasengans are formed]
Naruto clone 3&4- Gyuuki!!
[Two massive Sage Art: Ink Release Rasengans are formed]
[All the clones fly toward Sasuke as he readies a Black Chidori Nagashi]
Page 12
[Naruto is just about to be overpowered as all four of his clones reach Sasuke’s postion]
[All the clones aim their attacks toward Sasuke and Sasuke widens his Rinnegan]
Sasuke- Go Naruto my jutsu should be able to restrain her momentarily!
[They are teleported right at Kaguya’s location. Sasuke’s Chidori electrocutes Kaguya who is only partially affected]
Naruto clone 1&2- Take this Sage Art: Great Magnet Release Rasengan!!!
[Both clones thrust the techniques into Kaguya and the marks of Shukaku’s sealing jutsu begin to form over Kaguya’s body]
Page 13
Naruto clone 3&4- And this, Sage Art: Great Ink Release Rasengan!!!
[Kaguya’s body is covered in the Eight Tails black ink which begins to quickly harden]
Sasuke- {activates PS} Naruto we must begin the sealing jutsu now!!
Original Naruto- Yea we need to hurry!!
[Sasuke’s Susano’o is shown with the hand extended; the black crescent moon marking is visible]
[Naruto’s bijuu avatar is shown with one of its right hands extended; the white sun marking is visible]
[A red flame appears out of Naruto’s marking while a blue flame appears from Sasuke’s]
Page 14
[Naruto and Sasuke push chakra into their markings making the flames grow in size while aiming at Kaguya]
Naruto/Sasuke- Yang/Yin Release: Celestial Creation Seal!!!
[The flames from both Naruto and Sasuke begin to surround Kaguya and mix forming what looks like the Yin/Yang symbol]
[The red and blue colors disappear as the chakra surrounding Kaguya turns black and shrinks in size]
Page 15
Naruto/Sasuke- Aahhhhhhh!!!!
[Inside the chakra sphere, Kaguya is shown with her Byakugan activated as she sees the glowing markings on both the hands of Naruto and Sasuke]
Kaguya- No, I won’t be sealed again. Never again will I allow my own blood to betray me in this manner.
[Kaguya begins to frantically scream producing a deafening sound similar to the Juubi, as well as a powerful shockwave]
[The black sphere begins to crack apart and beams out light are emitted from them]
[In one last burst of chakra, the technique is cancelled as Naruto and Sasuke’s avatars are knocked back by the incredible force which also disperses the 4 clones on the battlefield]
Page 16
Sasuke- We failed…
[Scene switches to the one Naruto clone who was watching Kakashi, Sakura, and Obito]
Sakura- [fearful] What in the world is going on out there?
Kakashi- Sakura there is no longer anything we can do. {turns to Naruto} Naruto I see an entrance to a structure above us. You should take us there. That way we won’t be in your way.
Naruto- Alright Kakashi-sensei let’s go, but first…
[Naruto is shown placing his right palm onto Obito’s chest in order to save his life]
Naruto- There that should do it, now let’s go.
Page 17
[Scene shows the two Rikudou tools on the ground with the Amber Purifying Pot shown with its lid open]
[The back of a man is shown who wears a similar white outfit to Hagoromo. The back has the same 9 tomoes but the marking above them looks like a spiral rather than the Rinnegan]
????- Brother it appears our greatest fear has come to pass. Mother somehow managed to preserve her essence and now, her dark will once again threatens the peace and order of this realm.
[Tobirama, Minato and Hiruzen all notice the sudden appearance of this new presence]
All 3- What is this chakra?!!
Page 18
[Hashirama lands right next to this mysterious person]
Hashirama- Who are you?!
[The man turns around and his face with two long horns protruding from the forehead are shown along with two Byakugan eyes]
????- {presses his axe staff into the ground} My name, successor of Ashura, is Hamura Ōtsutsuki.
The sealing jutsu has failed!! And Hamura will!?
(Thoughts)
{Actions}
[Descriptions]
*Flashbacks*
Naruto and Sasuke disengage from Black Zetsu and prepare to go on the offensive!! This sealing jutsu is!?
Page 1
[Naruto and Sasuke are both shown levitating away from Kaguya as both parties silently observe their opposition]
[Sasuke is shown standing on the platform Naruto made for him last chapter and Naruto is shown with his 5 TSBs behind him]
Sasuke- Naruto, we’ve lost a considerable amount of chakra to her. We must be more careful from now on if we intend to seal her.
Naruto- Yea I understand! Do you have a plan?
Page 2
Sasuke- She has the ocular abilities of all three dojutsu. Like the Hyuuga she can use the Byakugan to view the chakra system.
*Panel shows two senbon striking Sasuke’s hawk’s internal chakra points*
Sasuke- She can also exert chakra from any point around her body with the ability to change its range, density, and power level within an instant.
*Panel shows her shaping chakra into fists to counter Naruto’s chakra punches, and her using a chakra shockwave from her body in order to blow away Susano’o*
Sasuke- And then the ability she used to shift herself behind us…
Page 3
Sasuke- It appears that she can create dimensional rifts to teleport any part of her body to the point of her choosing. We need a way to cover our blind spots.
Naruto- I have just the thing for that!! {makes the cross-seal for the Kage Bunshin}
[Four Naruto clones appear and scatter to different areas on the battlefield while hovering in the air]
Naruto- With this, any time she attempts to teleport in our blind spots, my clones can instantly call out her positions.
Sasuke- Once we are able to injure her, we can prepare to use the Yin/Yang Release: Celestial Creation Seal.
Naruto- [serious expression] Let’s do this Sasuke! Everyone is counting on us, and we can’t let them down!
Page 4
Kaguya- {looks at Sasuke and thinks} (He is just like Hamura: perceptive and intuitive. And the other {looks at Naruto} is just like Hagoromo: caring and compassionate.)
[Sasuke is shown activating his v2 Susano’o and preps an Enton Arrow]
Sasuke- I will buy you a few seconds in order to power up, move me as close to her as possible.
Naruto- Got it Sasuke!!
[Naruto manipulates the TSB platform to move it and Sasuke towards Kaguya]
Page 5
[Sasuke launches the arrow at Kaguya]
[Kaguya creates a black portal which she fades into to dodge the arrow and disappears]
[Naruto in his base mode is shown standing in his mindscape surrounded by all nine bijuu]
Naruto- {punches his fists together} Alright everyone, I’m going to need all of your help now.
Page 6
[Full page shows a panel of each of the nine bijuu holding their various limbs into seals in order to mold chakra]
Shukaku- Let’s kick this crazy woman’s ass!!
Matatabi- We are with you!!
Isobu- Let’s do it!!
Son Goku- Of course Naruto!!
Kokuo- Yes together we will defeat her!!
Saiken- We will win!!
Chomei- Luck is on our side!!
Gyuuki- Go Naruto!!
Kurama- {smiles} I guess the old man’s words have finally come to pass.
[Naruto is shown in the center panel with a grin on his face]
Naruto- Thank you guys, for everything!!
Page 7
Sasuke- Damn where did she go?!
[A black rift is shown opening in the space above Sasuke]
[One of the Naruto clones spots the signs of Kaguya’s technique and calls it out]
Naruto clone- {yells} Sasuke above you!!!
[Sasuke immediately looks up just as Kaguya tries to ensnare him with her hair, and a panel of Sasuke’s Rinnegan is shown]
[The space previously occupied by Sasuke is suddenly replaced by the Enton arrow which had missed earlier]
Page 8
Kaguya- What?!
[Kaguya immediately forms her hair into a shield to block the arrow which connects with its target, but doesn’t pierce it]
[The Enton Flames from the arrow begin to spread around Kaguya’s hair]
Kaguya- So these are the black flames of Amaterasu that my child had recorded. How pitiful…
[Kaguya hair begins to twist and coil around before suddenly expanding outward, which disperses the flames]
Sasuke- [standing on the TSB platform above Kaguya] So it had no effect at all. She was able to react to the arrow at such a short range.
Page 9
[Naruto is shown covered by a surge of dark-orange chakra which bursts forth into a form similar to Ashura’s. The avatar is shown with three heads which look similar to Kurama and six arms holding 5 TSBs]
[The avatar wears a necklace with 9 beads with the kanji for the numbers 1-9, representing the 9 bijuu. The Senjutsu of the Six Paths symbol is visible on the avatar’s back]
Naruto- [forms two TSBs into staves and charges at Kaguya] Take this!!!
[Naruto charges at Kaguya who raises her palm creating a chakra shield right as Naruto swings both staves at Kaguya]
Kaguya- Indra, Ashura, all your attacks are futile against me. Obey your mother and return your chakra to me.
Page 10
Naruto- If there’s one thing you don’t already know about me {grins} it’s that I’m not the kind of person who would give up so easily.
Sasuke- {smirks} Hmph!
[Naruto begins to condense the enlarged TSB in between the avatar’s two middle hands]
[Naruto fires the attack in the form of a beam similar to the Juubi laser which slightly pushes Kaguya back]
Sasuke- Naruto now!!!
Page 11
[Panel shows two pairs of two Naruto clones which were created earlier]
Naruto clone 1&2- Shukaku!!
[Two massive Sage Art: Magnet Release Rasengans are formed]
Naruto clone 3&4- Gyuuki!!
[Two massive Sage Art: Ink Release Rasengans are formed]
[All the clones fly toward Sasuke as he readies a Black Chidori Nagashi]
Page 12
[Naruto is just about to be overpowered as all four of his clones reach Sasuke’s postion]
[All the clones aim their attacks toward Sasuke and Sasuke widens his Rinnegan]
Sasuke- Go Naruto my jutsu should be able to restrain her momentarily!
[They are teleported right at Kaguya’s location. Sasuke’s Chidori electrocutes Kaguya who is only partially affected]
Naruto clone 1&2- Take this Sage Art: Great Magnet Release Rasengan!!!
[Both clones thrust the techniques into Kaguya and the marks of Shukaku’s sealing jutsu begin to form over Kaguya’s body]
Page 13
Naruto clone 3&4- And this, Sage Art: Great Ink Release Rasengan!!!
[Kaguya’s body is covered in the Eight Tails black ink which begins to quickly harden]
Sasuke- {activates PS} Naruto we must begin the sealing jutsu now!!
Original Naruto- Yea we need to hurry!!
[Sasuke’s Susano’o is shown with the hand extended; the black crescent moon marking is visible]
[Naruto’s bijuu avatar is shown with one of its right hands extended; the white sun marking is visible]
[A red flame appears out of Naruto’s marking while a blue flame appears from Sasuke’s]
Page 14
[Naruto and Sasuke push chakra into their markings making the flames grow in size while aiming at Kaguya]
Naruto/Sasuke- Yang/Yin Release: Celestial Creation Seal!!!
[The flames from both Naruto and Sasuke begin to surround Kaguya and mix forming what looks like the Yin/Yang symbol]
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Page 15
Naruto/Sasuke- Aahhhhhhh!!!!
[Inside the chakra sphere, Kaguya is shown with her Byakugan activated as she sees the glowing markings on both the hands of Naruto and Sasuke]
Kaguya- No, I won’t be sealed again. Never again will I allow my own blood to betray me in this manner.
[Kaguya begins to frantically scream producing a deafening sound similar to the Juubi, as well as a powerful shockwave]
[The black sphere begins to crack apart and beams out light are emitted from them]
[In one last burst of chakra, the technique is cancelled as Naruto and Sasuke’s avatars are knocked back by the incredible force which also disperses the 4 clones on the battlefield]
Page 16
Sasuke- We failed…
[Scene switches to the one Naruto clone who was watching Kakashi, Sakura, and Obito]
Sakura- [fearful] What in the world is going on out there?
Kakashi- Sakura there is no longer anything we can do. {turns to Naruto} Naruto I see an entrance to a structure above us. You should take us there. That way we won’t be in your way.
Naruto- Alright Kakashi-sensei let’s go, but first…
[Naruto is shown placing his right palm onto Obito’s chest in order to save his life]
Naruto- There that should do it, now let’s go.
Page 17
[Scene shows the two Rikudou tools on the ground with the Amber Purifying Pot shown with its lid open]
[The back of a man is shown who wears a similar white outfit to Hagoromo. The back has the same 9 tomoes but the marking above them looks like a spiral rather than the Rinnegan]
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[Tobirama, Minato and Hiruzen all notice the sudden appearance of this new presence]
All 3- What is this chakra?!!
Page 18
[Hashirama lands right next to this mysterious person]
Hashirama- Who are you?!
[The man turns around and his face with two long horns protruding from the forehead are shown along with two Byakugan eyes]
????- {presses his axe staff into the ground} My name, successor of Ashura, is Hamura Ōtsutsuki.
The sealing jutsu has failed!! And Hamura will!?
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