LUMOS ULTIMATUM
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Page 1
SFX: Eruption
Kakashi: What did she do?
Sakura(terrified): No way!
Sasuke: Naruto, get as far away as possible!
Naruto: I will get Kakashi sensei and Sakura first!
Sasuke: Just leave them!
Kakashi: (He may want to become hokage but his heart is still filled with darkness. Sasuke, what are your true motives?)
Naruto(angry): Sasuke! In that case...
Kaguya: Do not move and I will make your pain quick.
Page 2
SFX: Hand seal
Naruto: Kage Bunshin No Jutsu!
2 kage bunshins appear.
Kage Bunshins: Let's go!
Kaguya: I don't care about your friends. The original is all that matters.
SFX: Dash
Kaguya: I will take back the chakras of Indra and Ashura. All chakra in this world belongs to me!
Sasuke teleports in front of Kaguya and swings his sword.
Kaguya avoids the sword easily, catches Sasuke mid air in a swift movement and squeezes him by the throat.
Kaguya: I can clearly perceive your thoughts.
Page 3
Naruto jumps behind Kaguya with two black chakra rods in both hands.
SFX: Clash
Naruto(shocked): (She did that alone with her hair. What on earth is she?)
Kaguya(to naruto): Calm down!
Thousands of hairs fly wildly and slash through the ground, targetting Naruto.
SFX: Quick steps
Naruto moves back, barely dodging Kaguya's attacks.
SFX: Slice!
Naruto: (My left arm is bleeding. I can't keep up with her attacks)
SFX: Twist
Naruto: Damn!
Several hairs shoot forward and entwine him.
Page 4
Kaguya(to sasuke): I will take back that chakra of yours!
Sasuke: Don't speak too candidly. Susanoo!
Kaguya: It is useless!
Sasuke: (Susanoo won't come forth) What did you do?
Kaguya: With my byakugan, I can perceive your tenketsus,easily predict when you are going to use your techniques and block your tenketsus with my own chakra. I can even deduce that your techniques are related to your eyes.
Sasuke: ( She is on another level than Madara)
Kaguya: Do not compare me to the likes of Madara.
Sasuke: ( So, she can really perceive thoughts)
Page 5
Kaguya: It seems I cannot absorb indra's chakra while you are using the senjutsu of six paths. At the very least, it doesn't matter.
SFX: Impale
Kaguya stabs Sasuke through the chest
Sasuke(coughing blood): Gaaah!
Naruto: Sasuke!
Kaguya: You are next!
SFX: Hairs contracting
Naruto is pulled at high speed.
Naruto: Damn!
Page 6
SFX: Sword Swing
Sasuke suddenly appears and liberates Naruto from Kaguya's grip.
Naruto: !!!
Sasuke(holding left eye): (This pain is unbearable. )
Kaguya: Yin-Yang power. So, Hagoromo passed more than fragments of his power.
Naruto: I thought you were-
Sasuke: As long as my left eye is active, I can use the izanagi, yet a weak version.
Naruto: Izanagi?
Kaguya: Both of you are struggling way too hard. You are no match for me.
Page 7
Scene changes to Sakura
Kage bunshins: We finally made it! I thought we were going to be caught in the lava.
Sakura: Where are we?
Kakashi: Don't tell me this place is-
Sakura: What's happening?
Kakashi: We have been teleported from Earth.
Sakura: What????
Kakashi: We are on the moon!
Sakura looks around her
The landscape is deserted and shows no sign of any life forms.
Page 8
Sakura: But this can't-
Kage bunshin: Sakura chan!
Naruto's kage bunshin points upwards towards a blue planet in space.
Sakura: No way!
Kakashi: It is unknown how we were teleported but we are definitely on the moon!
Kage bunshin: I have to relay this information to my original.
SFX: Disappear
Page 9
Scene changes to Kaguya
Naruto: ( This is-)
Sasuke: What is it?
Naruto: We are on the moon.
Sasuke: ( At first, I had my doubts but it was in fact true) We were teleported.
Naruto: But how are we able to breathe?
Kaguya: I am the moon goddess. If I am sealed, this place dies out and become unable to support life forms. Now, that I am back, everything would be restored to how it was in the past.
Sasuke: Everything?
Kaguya: You do not need to know.
Page 10
Kaguya: You are hindrances to my plan but if you give up here, you may become my subordinates.
Naruto: The old hermit was right! You are a greedy old woman!
Kaguya: You are bent on dying, hence I shall grant your wish.
SFX: Ground shaking! Rapid Air currents! Thunder storm!
Sasuke: !!!
Naruto: !!!
Kaguya: Come forth, shinju!
Page 11
Naruto: Kurama!
Sasuke: Susanoo!
Page 12
Scene changes to Kakashi and Sakura
A destructive way is directed at them.
Sakura: (What if...) Yin release- Byakugou no jutsu
Kakashi: What are you trying to do?
SFX: Jump
Sakura: I will protect Kakashi Sensei too!
Kage Bunshin: Get away, Sakura!
Sakura: (If I concentrated all my chakra in my two hands, this could work) Shanaro!
SFX: Punch
Sakura smashes the ground with both hands, producing a destructive shockwave.
Kakashi: It stopped!
Kage bunshin: Nice, Sakura chan!
Sakura(panting): We are saved.
Page 13
Scene changes to Kaguya
Naruto is in bijuu avatar mode and Sasuke is surrounded by perfect susanoo.
Naruto: This is
Sasuke: This tremendous chakra, it is
SFX: Roar
the Juubi!
SFX: Eruption
Kakashi: What did she do?
Sakura(terrified): No way!
Sasuke: Naruto, get as far away as possible!
Naruto: I will get Kakashi sensei and Sakura first!
Sasuke: Just leave them!
Kakashi: (He may want to become hokage but his heart is still filled with darkness. Sasuke, what are your true motives?)
Naruto(angry): Sasuke! In that case...
Kaguya: Do not move and I will make your pain quick.
Page 2
SFX: Hand seal
Naruto: Kage Bunshin No Jutsu!
2 kage bunshins appear.
Kage Bunshins: Let's go!
Kaguya: I don't care about your friends. The original is all that matters.
SFX: Dash
Kaguya: I will take back the chakras of Indra and Ashura. All chakra in this world belongs to me!
Sasuke teleports in front of Kaguya and swings his sword.
Kaguya avoids the sword easily, catches Sasuke mid air in a swift movement and squeezes him by the throat.
Kaguya: I can clearly perceive your thoughts.
Page 3
Naruto jumps behind Kaguya with two black chakra rods in both hands.
SFX: Clash
Naruto(shocked): (She did that alone with her hair. What on earth is she?)
Kaguya(to naruto): Calm down!
Thousands of hairs fly wildly and slash through the ground, targetting Naruto.
SFX: Quick steps
Naruto moves back, barely dodging Kaguya's attacks.
SFX: Slice!
Naruto: (My left arm is bleeding. I can't keep up with her attacks)
SFX: Twist
Naruto: Damn!
Several hairs shoot forward and entwine him.
Page 4
Kaguya(to sasuke): I will take back that chakra of yours!
Sasuke: Don't speak too candidly. Susanoo!
Kaguya: It is useless!
Sasuke: (Susanoo won't come forth) What did you do?
Kaguya: With my byakugan, I can perceive your tenketsus,easily predict when you are going to use your techniques and block your tenketsus with my own chakra. I can even deduce that your techniques are related to your eyes.
Sasuke: ( She is on another level than Madara)
Kaguya: Do not compare me to the likes of Madara.
Sasuke: ( So, she can really perceive thoughts)
Page 5
Kaguya: It seems I cannot absorb indra's chakra while you are using the senjutsu of six paths. At the very least, it doesn't matter.
SFX: Impale
Kaguya stabs Sasuke through the chest
Sasuke(coughing blood): Gaaah!
Naruto: Sasuke!
Kaguya: You are next!
SFX: Hairs contracting
Naruto is pulled at high speed.
Naruto: Damn!
Page 6
SFX: Sword Swing
Sasuke suddenly appears and liberates Naruto from Kaguya's grip.
Naruto: !!!
Sasuke(holding left eye): (This pain is unbearable. )
Kaguya: Yin-Yang power. So, Hagoromo passed more than fragments of his power.
Naruto: I thought you were-
Sasuke: As long as my left eye is active, I can use the izanagi, yet a weak version.
Naruto: Izanagi?
Kaguya: Both of you are struggling way too hard. You are no match for me.
Page 7
Scene changes to Sakura
Kage bunshins: We finally made it! I thought we were going to be caught in the lava.
Sakura: Where are we?
Kakashi: Don't tell me this place is-
Sakura: What's happening?
Kakashi: We have been teleported from Earth.
Sakura: What????
Kakashi: We are on the moon!
Sakura looks around her
The landscape is deserted and shows no sign of any life forms.
Page 8
Sakura: But this can't-
Kage bunshin: Sakura chan!
Naruto's kage bunshin points upwards towards a blue planet in space.
Sakura: No way!
Kakashi: It is unknown how we were teleported but we are definitely on the moon!
Kage bunshin: I have to relay this information to my original.
SFX: Disappear
Page 9
Scene changes to Kaguya
Naruto: ( This is-)
Sasuke: What is it?
Naruto: We are on the moon.
Sasuke: ( At first, I had my doubts but it was in fact true) We were teleported.
Naruto: But how are we able to breathe?
Kaguya: I am the moon goddess. If I am sealed, this place dies out and become unable to support life forms. Now, that I am back, everything would be restored to how it was in the past.
Sasuke: Everything?
Kaguya: You do not need to know.
Page 10
Kaguya: You are hindrances to my plan but if you give up here, you may become my subordinates.
Naruto: The old hermit was right! You are a greedy old woman!
Kaguya: You are bent on dying, hence I shall grant your wish.
SFX: Ground shaking! Rapid Air currents! Thunder storm!
Sasuke: !!!
Naruto: !!!
Kaguya: Come forth, shinju!
Page 11
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Naruto: Kurama!
Sasuke: Susanoo!
Page 12
Scene changes to Kakashi and Sakura
A destructive way is directed at them.
Sakura: (What if...) Yin release- Byakugou no jutsu
Kakashi: What are you trying to do?
SFX: Jump
Sakura: I will protect Kakashi Sensei too!
Kage Bunshin: Get away, Sakura!
Sakura: (If I concentrated all my chakra in my two hands, this could work) Shanaro!
SFX: Punch
Sakura smashes the ground with both hands, producing a destructive shockwave.
Kakashi: It stopped!
Kage bunshin: Nice, Sakura chan!
Sakura(panting): We are saved.
Page 13
Scene changes to Kaguya
Naruto is in bijuu avatar mode and Sasuke is surrounded by perfect susanoo.
Naruto: This is
Sasuke: This tremendous chakra, it is
SFX: Roar
the Juubi!
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