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Naruto 675 - The Second Rinnegan
Madara suddenly attacks!
PAGE ONE
[First scene shows black rod thrown from the just appearing Madara ]
Madara: I won't let you !
[Obito turns slightly his face to notice incomming black rod]
Obito(widden his MS eye): ?! *shit !*
Sakura: ?! * Madara ?! shit, I won't be able to move in time !*
[Obito turns his face back to Sakura as he push her backwards ]
[Black rod fly between Obito and Sakura leaving swoosh sound]
Madara: Not bad. Now hand me over the Rinnegan ! *Black Zetsu deattach from him the moment I will be close !*
Black Zetsu: ?! *Lord Madara, Neither me or Obito can move as we are using all our power to keep each other in check.*
PAGE TWO
[Zoom in Obito's right hand closing to ground as flares appears around it.]
Obito: Uchiha Flame Formation ! (put his hand on the ground as flares erupt around him)
[Flaming cylindrical barrier encloses Obito and Sakura inside as it forms]
[Madara bursts out flying in their's direction]
Madara(narrows his eyes): ?! *Damn... I am not used to move only with half of my body.. ?! The Uchiha barrier, do you really think it will work on me Obito*
[Sakura gets up from the ground as she rushes towards Obito ]
Sakura: Obito !, what now ?!
Obito: Just hurry up and destory this cursed Rinnegan, or else...
PAGE THREE
[Burnt skin of someone is shown entering through the flaming barrier as the deadly intense flames float around new figure. Smokes floating around figure who's skin is totally burnt while so flames still stick to figure resembles devil figure.]
Madara(evil smirks): I will finish both you before (emerges from flamming barrier)
[Both Obito and Sakura are shown looking teriffied at Madara who is just few inches from them. ]
Sakura: I will crush the Rinnegan before ! (moves fast to Obito)
Obito: hurry up ! *I can not even move any part of the body... looks like black Zetsu is about to take over*
Madara: don't even try ! (eyes Sakura with his single right Rinnegan)
Sakura: ?! (stops in her movement as her body totally freezes) *The pressure... I can not even move*
PAGE FOUR
[Scene shifts back to real word. Naruto aiding Kakashi while kneeling next to him Sasuke is standing next to them as he clenches his fists. ]
Naruto: Kakashi- Sensei, Are you feeling better now ?
Kakashi: I am fine (get up on his feet) thanks to you
Kakashi(smiles): Naruto (clutches his empty eyesocket with hand put over it)
Kakashi(becomes serious): How can you and Sasuke be so powerfull, Naruto...
Naruto: Heh, We meet The Sage old man.
Kakashi: Do you mean Sage of six paths ?!
Sasuke(breaks in): Exactly, but leave the talk for later. Cursed Madara got away to get his other eye. *Just a bit longer*
PAGE FIVE
[Zoom in Sasuke's eye with three tomoes begin to reform around the smallest ripple in his Rinnegan eye]
Naruto: Sasuke is right, we have to find fast way to save Obito and Sakura before it will be too late ! (clenches his fist which glows)
[Scene shifts back to Kamui dimenssion. Madara's upper body is floating in front of kneeling on knee Obito] [Madara put his right hand on left shoulder of Obito's body where blackness cover entire half of Obito's body]
Madara: You brought me a lot of the trouble, Obito. (the skin regenerates as burnt marks fade away)
Obito: ?! *Damn... I barerly withstand black Zetsu, my body is about to fall down any moment*
[Zoom in Madara's mouth moving as only lower part of Madara's face is shown]
Madara: It is time for me to regain what was rightfully mine...
PAGE SIX
[Scene shifts back to real world showing Naruto and Sasuke talking something]
Sasuke(calm): Do you get it, Naruto ?
Naruto(displeased but serious): Yeah
[Zoom in Sasuke's Rinnegan eye with Three tomoes as swirl pattern comes from the smallest ripple]
[Scene shifts back to Kamui Dimenssion]
Sasuke: Kamui !
Madara(excited): Black Zetsu, The Time to rejoin has finally come.
[Blackness overlapping entire left's side of Obito's body is shown moving forwards stretching a bit. While blackness moves it bring The Rinnegan eye also outside of Obito's body]
Obito: ARGH !
Black Zetsu: I have been waiting for this moment, my Master.
PAGE SEVEN
[The blackness completly covers entire left side of Madara's upper body. Sakura is shown standing frozen in place very close to them. Obito begin to restore control over his body as his body quaver]
Sakura: *No... I will return the favour Obito* ( frequently quavers as she forces hereself ot move)
[The Blackness sink into entire left side of Madara's upper body as nothing is left from Black Zetsu anymore. The Rinnegan falls in Madara's left hand]
Obito: ?! *I get control over my body back !*
[Obito moves to attack floating Madara's upper body ]
Madara: ?! (turns around and grab Obito's by throat)
Obito: ?! *Damn... he... is too... fast*
Madara(eyes Obito entire figure): Seems like you have forgotten your place, Obito. *I will not have any use of him, I should finish him*
PAGE EIGHT
[Madara chokes Obito as he keep him hanging in air by throat]
Obito(in pain): Gah... *I am too weak to do anything, forgive me Naruto*
[Top view of Sakura hanging mid-air after jump as she clenches her fist prepearing to punch Madara]
Madara: ?! (senses danger comming)
[Madara releases grip on Obito's neck as he moves back]
[Sakura smashes her fist with full force hitting the ground between Madara and Obito]
Obito: ?! (get pushed back by Sakura's free hand)
[Obito falls down on his back while Sakura pulls her hand back from small crater below her feet ]
[Madara creates black rod in his left hand ]
[Swirl pattern forms in front of Sakura]
PAGE NINE
[Madara flies straight at Sakura with black rod thrusted straight at her heart]
Madara(serious glare): You are first girl *I will get rid of them, before return to real world*
[Swirl patten fully expands as blurred figure begin to emerge]
[Black rod thrusted straight at Sakura's heart is shown]
[black lightining lance slices black rod]
[Sasuke appears in front of the Sakura with his left hand imbued with black lightining lance]
Madara: You ?!
[Zoom in Sasuke's eye with three tomoes fading away completly leaving only rippled patern in Sasuke's left eye]
PAGE TEN
[Scene shifts back to real world, Naruto supports Kakashi with Kakashi's arm coiled over Naruto's shoulder]
[Naruto and Kakashi land in front of Lee and Gaara. On the ground recovering Gai is shown as his body slowly returns back to normal.]
Lee/Gaara: Naruto ?!
Lee(notices Kakashi's carried by Naruto): What did happen to Kakashi-san ?
Gaara(notices Kakashi clutching one of his hand over eye as blood comes from it): I see...
Naruto: Takes care of Kakashi's sensei. (puts Kakashi on ground)
Naruto(turns around): I need to be ready for Madara *Curse you Madara, you are gonna pay for it*
Yin Kurama: Naruto, why didn't you go after Madara bastard ?!
Naruto(shocked): Kurama ?!
PAGE ELEVEN
Naruto(angry): Madara went to Other dimenssion... I have no mean to go there in opposite to Sasuke (clench his fists)
Bijuu: Wrong !, do not forget the Senjutsu of six paths power you got from our father.
Naruto: Senjutsu of six paths ?!
Yin Kurama: That right fool. Remember when you came in contact with Madara's body, Naruto ?!
Naruto: Well, now you bring it, yeah.
Yin Kurama: The Supreme eyes and Supreme body keep balance. In other words you can also enter other Dimenssion with Supreme body, just focus your sense to get small trail of Madara's chakra then you will get teleported there.
Naruto: Wow, so is it something like Flying Thunder God Technique ?!
PAGE TWELVE
Yin Kurama: Exactly, but you don't need to mark someone, being in contact is enough as long as you can pinpoint location where to go. Now stop wasting time and go !
Naruto: Yosh !(clap his right hand closed in fist against his opened palm of left hand)
[Naruto is shown focused as he closes his eyes]
[Glowing figures of Madara, Sasuke, Sakura and Obito are shown in other dimenssion. Obito's chakra signature fades away slowly]
Naruto: There *I need to hurry up* (entire body glows)
[Scene shifts back to Kamui Dimenssion]
[Sasuke is shown crouching in front of Sakura. In front of Sasuke Madara is floating as Obito is somewhere in background behind Sakura.]
Sakura(shocked and happy): Sasuke ?!
PAGE THIRTEEN
Obito: Sasuke ?! *How can he enter this place ?*
Madara(narrows his eyes): How can you get here ?
Sasuke(cheeky): who knows (smirks)
Madara(glare at Sasuke): *I see..., this is another ability of his cursed eye...*
[Suddenly Madara stretches his hands forward as powerfull black lightining get shooted at Sasuke]
Sasuke: ?!
[Sasuke raises his left hand which imbued with black lightining on his own counter with black lightining lance]
[Black lightinings clashes against each other destroying everything around. The cubes are shown teared apart]
[The dust cloud forms obscuring Sasuke's vision]
[Suddenly powerfull sphere of black flames emerges from dust curtain straight at Sasuke]
PAGE FOURTEEN
[Sasuke grabs Sakura in fast way as he jumps with her under his arm out of the way.]
[Sphere of black flames fly by terrified and kneeling Obito]
[Sphere burst out into massive black flames which burn anything in range]
Madara: Damn.. he is fast, however...
[Panel shows Madara flying very fast towards defenceless Obito.]
Madara: I much faster !
Sakura: Oh no Obito !
[Zoom in Sasuke's eye with three tomoes reformed]
Sasuke: Shit ! *At this way I don't have chance to get in time*
Sasuke: Kotoamatsukomi !*
PAGE FIFTEEN
[Madara turns his face sligtly to direction of Sasuke voice as he keep flying]
Madara: ?! *I am being drawn into something...
[The world around Madara begins to disort]
Sasuke: I got him...(smirks)
[Zoom in Sasuke's left eye with tomoes fading away leaving regular Rinnegan]
[The world around Madara turns back to normal]
Sasuke(shocked): ?! *No way*
Madara(looking at Sasuke): *Shisui's genjtusu..., it wouldn't work on Perfect Jinchurki, and it is compeletly useless against Juubi Jinchurki... but how can he use unique MS techniques ?! *
PAGE SIXTEEN
Madara: *Doesn't matter, Now I will end Obito's life then I will go back and put Rinnegan back*
[Helpless Obito raises his head watching as Madara is about to slice his head with black rod ]
Obito: *Farewell, especially you... Naruto Uzumaki*
[Flash of light appears in front of Obito as it blind everyone around]
Everyone: ?!
[Blurred Figure of Naruto emerges from flash of light as he about to smash Madara in face with right fist]
[Naruto smashes his fist in Madara's face ]
[Madara get sent flying backwards]
Naruto: Leave Obito, alone !
Sakura/Obito/Sasuke: Naruto ?!
PAGE SEVENTEEN
Obito: There is not time for questions, Let's get out of here ! (forces himself to put all his power in right eye)
[Sasuke along with Sakura land in front of Obito as Madara get up from ground]
Obito: Kamui !
Madara: You won't get away from me (throws black rod at Obito)
[Naruto throws black rod beforehand to counter Madara's black rod as The swirl drawn everyone inside ]
Madara(serious): *You won't get too far* Kamui !
[Madara get drawn inside swirl]
[Scene shifts back to real world as Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura and Obito land on the ground]
Obito: ARGH ! (coughs blood and fall down on ground)
Naruto: Obito (rushes to aid him)
PAGE EIGHTTEEN
[Swirl pattern appear in front of Everyone ]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?!
[Madara's upper body fully remerges from swirl as it fades away]
Madara(evil grins): Did you miss me ?!
[Naruto and Sasuke take battle stances as Obito, Sakura look in fear]
[Zoom in Madara taking out Sharingan eye from his left eyesocket.]
[Naruto and Sasuke are shown about to rush as Madara's lower body get up]
[Madara's lower body kicks Naruto and Sasuke at the same time caughting them off guard]
Naruto/Sasuke: ?!
[Madara's upperbody and lowerbody rejoin as Madara removes his hand slowly from left eye. The Left Rinnegan is shown glowing through Madara's left hand fingers]
