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Ok first prediction. Here we go.

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Dialogue will have no indication


Madara: [Throws rod] I wont let you. [Kamui portal closes and Madara hits the floor and his body begins to regenerate his bottom half]


[Rod hits Sakura's Kunai out her her hand]


Sakura: [Turns to see Madara and becomes startled and freezes up from fear] (Madara!!! Why is he here? What happened to the others?)


Obito: [Sees Kakashi's Sharingan, Black Zestu begins taking over the rest of Obito's body] (He took Kakashi's sharingan and now he is here for his eye. I failed, No we were too late- )


[Sakura's chakra scalpel shoots up into the Rinnegan slicing it in half]


Madara: [Angered] NO! [Clenches fist]


Sakura: YOU LOSE! [Glares at Madara] (I wont fear you anymore, I wont let you- )


Madara: [Madara appears before her in a matter of seconds finally his body regenerated and grabs her throat and picks her up] You are going to pay for that you little *****


Sakura: [Cant breathe from being choked] (At least I did my job) [Losing consciousness]


Obito: [Stabs Madara through the heart with his staff and absorbs Sakura in his Kamui] (I was finally able to save someone Rin. I wished you could have seen that)


Madara: (Black Zestu still doesnt have control, Obito you were stronger than I thought) Not dead yet huh Obito [Grins]

-----------[Battlefield]

Kakashi: [Holding his eye socket in pain] I am sorry guys, I did not even see him coming.


Sasuke: Shit! I hadnt even realized what he was trying to do, he is going for his other eye.


Naruto: Sakura-Chan is there!! We have to find a way to get there now, they wont have a chance against Madara.


Kakashi: Naruto dont worry, Obito will protect her.


[Kamui portal opens and Sakura abrutly falls through]


Sakura: [Panting and sees the three of them, realizing where she is] (Obito)


Naruto: [Runs to her side] Sakura-Chan, Are you ok?


Sasuke: What happened? Where is Madara?


Sakura: Yeah, I am, Obit-


[Another Kamui portal opens and Obito's dead body is thrown through]


Kakashi: Obito!!


Madara: [Appears through with Obito's staff no longer angry] Well things havent always worked out for me, but I always find a way through that, it seems Obito's staff had a little more chakra left and that should suffice enough until I get your eye Sasuke.
 
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I think that the reactions of the characters were a bit random. First Sakura is sh*tting her pants out of fear for Madara, and out of the blue she managed to destroy Obito's eye so easily, something that she hadn't managed to do for quite some time. The she acts as if she can put up a fight while it was completely obvious some chapters ago that she's completely terrified. Later, while you have first depicted Obito to lose control, then he immediately regains it back stabbing Madara at his back, helping Sakura to return to the real world. But the main problem was Kakashi's certainty of Sakura's safe because of Obito. Dude, Obito is on the brink of death while Madara is the 10 tails Jin, how much can he do? In any case, since this is your first prediction, it's not such a big deal but the important thing was the lack of flow. The characters' dialogues weren't always natural and it was kind of abrupt how thing were changing so suddenly based on what it was first appearing to be your aim.

Sorry for being strict but that's my style, no hard feeling :)
 
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Byron123 said:
I think that the reactions of the characters were a bit random. First Sakura is sh*tting her pants out of fear for Madara, and out of the blue she managed to destroy Obito's eye so easily, something that she hadn't managed to do for quite some time. The she acts as if she can put up a fight while it was completely obvious chapters that she's completely terrified. Later, while you have first depicted Obito to lose control, then he immediately regains it back stabbing him at his back, helping Sakura to return to the real world. But the main problem was Kakashi's certainty of Sakura's safe because of Obito. Dude, Obito is on the brink of death while Madara is the 10 tails Jin, how much can he do? In any case, since this is your first prediction, it's not such a big deal but the important thing was the lack of flow. The characters' dialogues weren't always natural and it was kind of abrupt how thing were changing so suddenly based on what it was first appearing to be your aim.

Sorry for being strict but that's my style, no hard feeling :)
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Its cool. All I can say is character development, I mean Kishi showed her to be scared a lot and now she is going to do something. I thought it was obvious in my prediction she finally found the strength to fight. "I wont fear you anymore"

As for Obito, it was his last will of strength, he was able to do one last thing even with BZ having so much control over him.

Obito was able to save Naruto and was able to put his hand into Madara's stomach to take some power when no one could do anything, he turned a new leaf, Kakashi knew no matter what he was going to save his student.
 
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PawsX said:
Its cool. All I can say is character development, I mean Kishi showed her to be scared a lot and now she is going to do something. I thought it was obvious in my prediction she finally found the strength to fight. "I wont fear you anymore"

As for Obito, it was his last will of strength, he was able to do one last thing even with BZ having so much control over him.

Obito was able to save Naruto and was able to put his hand into Madara's stomach to take some power when no one could do anything, he turned a new leaf, Kakashi knew no matter what he was going to save his student.
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Anyway, since I read yours, care to take a look at mine? :)
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I haven't written one though in quite some time so don't have high hopes XD
 
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Good but there's no way madara to get sasuke's rinnengan so

madara will have he's rinnengan back

he will need it to fight naruto and sasuke
 
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