[Predictions] Naruto 674: Back and Better Than Ever

[Zealous Sparks]

Excellent, breathtaking, amazing and indoubtly well-constructed prediction.

It had all: great characterization, epic description of scenes, Well described animations and all of that was well put together.

HOWEVER, There is one stuff which I don't like , actually I say I despise/hate this stuff:

Yata Mirror - I am one of the fans who hate Kishi to bring such legendary weapon without proper introduction explaining it's origin etc., also Lack of the limit put on the Yata Mirror made Itachi fanboys so much annoying that I began to dislike Itachi character.

I don't mind Sasuke getting Yata Mirror, even although I would say these weapons are irrelevant anymore. However I didn't like how you make Sasuke pull them out of his ass, then MADE NO LIMIT FALLACY HYPE OF YATA MIRROR TRUE... which reminds me how much I despise these stupid legendary weapons. You should be wise and make them break/crack or being ineffective againt ULTIMATE POWER OF JUUBI JINS..., or even truth seeking balls, It could make sense as it would finally put limit how much Yata can withstand and finally hype would be cleared and justified instead of leaving it with NO LIMIT FALLACY.

Besides It would be also perfect moment to explain Yata Mirror and Totsuka blade's origin which be explained, with for example reveal of Kagyua being creater/maker of these holy weapons which would further justify it's hype. AFTER IT, you would make it break with statement that finally created stuff meet it's creator which broke/destroyed it.


Sorry for harsh criticism about one stuff, but I hate Yata && Totsuka. Even then I respect everything else in your prediction.

GREAT WORK and really well done, KEEP IT UP

Thanks I'm glad you liked it. I always enjoyed reading the predictions on this site (especially yours) and decided to start writing them myself.

About the Yata Mirror/Totsuka Blade, I was having a discussion about their origins in a thread so I decided to give it to Sasuke. I also hope that Kishi somehow clarifies their origins whether it be Kaguya/Hagoromo/The Un-named Brother/Indra. I agree that there will be some limit to them if Sasuke if going to get it. I remember in the databook it said that it was "imbued with all nature transformations" or something like that so it could have trouble against combo elemental attacks like the Yoton: Rasenshuriken and or the Truth-Seeking balls, which if Hiruzen is to be believed is compromised of at least 4 natures.

And don't worry constructive criticism can only help a person improve. Again thanks for the feedback!

 

[manufran02]

Excellent, breathtaking, amazing and indoubtly well-constructed prediction.

It had all: great characterization, epic description of scenes, Well described animations and all of that was well put together.

HOWEVER, There is one stuff which I don't like , actually I say I despise/hate this stuff:

Yata Mirror - I am one of the fans who hate Kishi to bring such legendary weapon without proper introduction explaining it's origin etc., also Lack of the limit put on the Yata Mirror made Itachi fanboys so much annoying that I began to dislike Itachi character.

I don't mind Sasuke getting Yata Mirror, even although I would say these weapons are irrelevant anymore. However I didn't like how you make Sasuke pull them out of his ass, then MADE NO LIMIT FALLACY HYPE OF YATA MIRROR TRUE... which reminds me how much I despise these stupid legendary weapons. You should be wise and make them break/crack or being ineffective againt ULTIMATE POWER OF JUUBI JINS..., or even truth seeking balls, It could make sense as it would finally put limit how much Yata can withstand and finally hype would be cleared and justified instead of leaving it with NO LIMIT FALLACY.

Besides It would be also perfect moment to explain Yata Mirror and Totsuka blade's origin which be explained, with for example reveal of Kagyua being creater/maker of these holy weapons which would further justify it's hype. AFTER IT, you would make it break with statement that finally created stuff meet it's creator which broke/destroyed it.


Sorry for harsh criticism about one stuff, but I hate Yata && Totsuka. Even then I respect everything else in your prediction.

GREAT WORK and really well done, KEEP IT UP

KCM has spoken, couldnt have said it better . As for the weapons , good addition but you gave no background
To it , like lets say the moment Sasuke took them out , you should of had Madara in astonishment or in his all knowing persona
Say something about them and who had them first.

 

[Byron123]

You my friend have a lot of talent. It's not everyday that you get to see a prediction which doesn't only have flashy attacks but it also incorpates things that we know from previous chapters. I give it a 4.5/5 and that's because I usually like it having more emotions but other than that it was really good!

 

[The Ramen Guy]

Wish I could rep you again bro

 

[Zealous Sparks]

KCM has spoken, couldnt have said it better . As for the weapons , good addition but you gave no background
To it , like lets say the moment Sasuke took them out , you should of had Madara in astonishment or in his all knowing persona
Say something about them and who had them first.

Thanks for the input. I agree that I should have created at least a small backstory on that particular tool. I had originally had Sasuke use a Perfect Tsukoyomi in a combo with Naruto to fool Madara. But I figured that people would say that Madara would not fall for a genjutsu and changed it to Yata Mirror.

Though if Naruto happens to obtain his father's FTG technique, Sasuke would most probably get one or both of Itachi's weapons.

 

[Zealous Sparks]

You my friend have a lot of talent. It's not everyday that you get to see a prediction which doesn't only have flashy attacks but it also incorpates things that we know from previous chapters. I give it a 4.5/5 and that's because I usually like it having more emotions but other than that it was really good!

Thanks, when I first started to writing these (this one is the 7th I've written) I put in way too much dialogue. I'll try to put more expressions and emotions in the next one. As they say "A piece of writing is never complete" you always have room for improvement.

 

[Zealous Sparks]

The prediction is top notch

great prediction

Thanks for the comments guys!

Wish I could rep you again bro

No problem the rep doesn't really matter to me. I write these for everyone else to enjoy and my own entertainment.

 

[Anna]

Awesome Prediction! +rep! =D

 

[Byron123]

Thanks, when I first started to writing these (this one is the 7th I've written) I put in way too much dialogue. I'll try to put more expressions and emotions in the next one. As they say "A piece of writing is never complete" you always have room for improvement.

True, well in my case - in contrast to others- I believe that a good dialogue can be cooler than a very good fight. For instance, I have written a prediction -that I consider it my best after the final fight that I have at my sig- which even though now it is completely outdate, it's chapter 652, I still enjoy reading it, really REALLY much XD Take a look

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[Zealous Sparks]

True, well in my case - in contrast to others- I believe that a good dialogue can be cooler than a very good fight. For instance, I have written a prediction -that I consider it my best after the final fight that I have at my sig- which even though now it is completely outdate, it's chapter 652, I still enjoy reading it, really REALLY much XD Take a look

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I've actually read that one before when it was first posted, back when I was still a guest. I'll be happy to read over it again though!

 

[Byron123]

I've actually read that one before when it was first posted, back when I was still a guest. I'll be happy to read over it again though!

Haha thanks, and yes that's the other thing with the opened registrations. Back then, all I could was a number of guests but now to actually have the chance you hear your opinion is so much better =D

 

[KCMNaruto]

Thanks I'm glad you liked it. I always enjoyed reading the predictions on this site (especially yours) and decided to start writing them myself.

About the Yata Mirror/Totsuka Blade, I was having a discussion about their origins in a thread so I decided to give it to Sasuke. I also hope that Kishi somehow clarifies their origins whether it be Kaguya/Hagoromo/The Un-named Brother/Indra. I agree that there will be some limit to them if Sasuke if going to get it. I remember in the databook it said that it was "imbued with all nature transformations" or something like that so it could have trouble against combo elemental attacks like the Yoton: Rasenshuriken and or the Truth-Seeking balls, which if Hiruzen is to be believed is compromised of at least 4 natures.

And don't worry constructive criticism can only help a person improve. Again thanks for the feedback!

Well what Can I say ? You are welcome.

Really great masterpiece 4.5/5 - it was perfect except Yata Mirror part with no backstory or limit.

@ the bold part, so pretty so strong words - You just earned my full respect, great attitude buddy. keep it up and you will be one of the best writter soon as you are already excellent at writting it.

KCM has spoken, couldnt have said it better . As for the weapons , good addition but you gave no background
To it , like lets say the moment Sasuke took them out , you should of had Madara in astonishment or in his all knowing persona
Say something about them and who had them first.

^^ Exactly my fellow friend has spoken

He as always bring good room for people to improve on writting predictions

You my friend have a lot of talent. It's not everyday that you get to see a prediction which doesn't only have flashy attacks but it also incorpates things that we know from previous chapters. I give it a 4.5/5 and that's because I usually like it having more emotions but other than that it was really good!

^^ Byron has spoken ,

OP, you treally amaze me, and looks like not just me . I see great future ahead of you

 

[Byron123]

Well what Can I say ? You are welcome.

Really great masterpiece 4.5/5 - it was perfect except Yata Mirror part with no backstory or limit.

@ the bold part, so pretty so strong words - You just earned my full respect, great attitude buddy. keep it up and you will be one of the best writter soon as you are already excellent at writting it.



^^ Exactly my fellow friend has spoken

He as always bring good room for people to improve on writting predictions



^^ Byron has spoken ,

OP, you treally amaze me, and looks like not just me . I see great future ahead of you

Haha you used me as an example of a professional, now I'm blushing XD

 

[KCMNaruto]

Haha you used me as an example of a professional, now I'm blushing XD

No problem I am just stating the facts, no lie

 

[Waindo]

I just dislocated my jaw! Fantastic prediction!

 

[keshav31]

this is called a prediction,Very well +rep

 

[Zealous Sparks]

I just dislocated my jaw! Fantastic prediction!

this is called a prediction,Very well +rep

Thanks guys!

 

[manufran02]

Great job , keep it up.