Zealous Sparks
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If anyone hasn't already seen the 673 spoiler pages go check them out in the Spoilers thread before reading. Thanks to @knightflame for the spoiler translation for the first 3 pages. Enjoy Reading!
Note: Pages 1-3 are the spoilers we got already. Everything else is just my predictions.
I attempted to add all the bijuu in this chapter at least once whether it be abilities or just talking. If anyone comes up with a better name for that combo technique please tell me. I really couldn't think of anything.
Note: Pages 1-3 are the spoilers we got already. Everything else is just my predictions.
Naruto 673: Everyone Together
(Thoughts)
{Actions}
[Descriptions]
*Flashbacks*
Naruto has arrived! What new abilities will he show!?
Page 1
[Naruto is shown facing Madara with Gai’s body lying on the ground next to him]
[Madara sees Gai’s chakra system with his Rinnegan]
Madara- {shocked} (The chakra at the Eighth Gate’s pressure point hasn’t vanished. How in the world was he able to do that? It’s as if he stopped the after effects of the eight inner gates.)
[Naruto jumps forward to attack Madara]
[The Gudou-Dama kicked by Naruto in the previous chapter returns to Madara’s newly regenerated hand and forms a new staff]
Page 2
[Naruto is shown charging at Madara at a very high speed and Madara blocks the punch with his staff]
[The branch that Madara was leaning on is shown cracked by the force of Naruto’s senjutsu enhanced punch]
Madara-(Is he able to keep pace with me because I am still recovering? No. His power is continually increasing.)
Naruto-{raises his right hand with the sun symbol} Son, lend me some of your chakra Dattebayo!!
Son Goku- Of course.
Page 3
[Madara senses the build-up of chakra in Naruto’s hand and is shocked]
[A Rasenshuriken is shown forming but this one has a ball of lava at the center and the smoke from the lava is spun around by the fast rotation of the technique]
[Madara flees as the Rasenshuriken is shown multiplying several times in size as it cuts through the spot where Madara was previously standing]
Naruto- Sage Art: Lava Style Rasenshuriken!!
Madara- (This isn’t good. If that attack hits…! Rinbo Hengoku!!)
Naruto- Aaahh!!
Page 4
Kurama- I can sense that Madara is building up a large amount of chakra in his right eye.
Matatabi- It must be the same technique he used to knock all of us back before.
Gyuuki- If that’s the case we will need to block his line of sight.
Kurama- Shukaku use your sand now!
Shukaku- Hmph. Who made you the boss of me!?
[Scene switches out of Naruto’s mindscape to the battle]
Page 5
[Naruto is shown extending his left hand with a look of concentration as sand begins to swirl around Madara]
Naruto-{grins} And Gaara always makes this look so easy!
Madara- (He’s trying to block my field of vision to prevent me from using my technique)
Naruto-(Isobu and Chomei please lend me some of your chakra!)
Isobu/Chomei- Ok Naruto!!
Page 6
[The sand surrounding Madara begins to thin out and a new Rasenshuriken is shown flying through the sand towards Madara]
[The new technique is the same size as a normal FRS except it has a center which is made out of coral]
Madara- Something like that won’t work against me. Rinbo Hengoku!!
[Madara’s technique disperses the sand and the center of Naruto’s technique is shown cracking apart from the gravitational force]
Page 7
[The coral center cracks open and a gold powder which begins to sparkle is shown being blown around in the wind near Madara]
Madara- What is this!?
Naruto- Sage Art: Spiral Windmill Coral Flash Bomb!!
[The powder explodes in a flash of light that blinds Madara and forces him to close his eye]
Page 8
Madara-(I see that last attack was only a diversion that forced me into using Rinbo. Now I can't open my eyes to absorb the attack) Damn you Naruto!!
Naruto- You shouldn’t underestimate all of us when we work together!
*Naruto remembers his conversation with the bijuu earlier.
Kurama- I can sense that Madara is building up a large amount of chakra in his right eye.
Matatabi- It must be the same technique he used to knock all of us back before.
Naruto- If that technique Madara used is similar to Nagato’s Shinra Tensei then it can repel my attack. But it can only be used once every few seconds. We need to create a diversion and aim for the short interval in between attacks.*
Page 9
Naruto- Let’s hope this works. {throws the Lava Rasenshuriken}
[Madara still blinded tries to block the attack with his staff but it cracks due to Senjutsu chakra being infused into the attack]
[The LRS explodes and the blast radius consumes Madara’s body. Red glowing lava that was amplified by the wind style can be seen surrounding the battlefield]
[Madara’s entire body is shown encased in a slowly cooling tomb of lava]
Page 10
[Scene switches to Kakashi/Gaara/Lee/Minato]
[They see the explosion in the distance]
Gaara- Who is fighting Madara now? Gai couldn’t have had yet another technique.
Minato-{senses the battlefield and instantly recognizes the chakra} That chakra, there’s no mistaking it, it’s Naruto!
Lee- Naruto-kun is back?
Minato- I’m positive that it is him, but his chakra feels much more powerful now. Let’s go.
[Scene switches to Naruto’s mindscape with the bijuu]
Page 11
Chomei- We were lucky that he fell for that diversion.
Kurama- That won’t be enough to finish him but it was a good plan. But really Naruto, Sage Art: Spiral Windmill Coral Flash Bomb, you just might be worse than your father when it comes to naming things.
Naruto-{pouts} Well I thought it was a cool name.
Saiken- It wasn’t that bad.
Kokuo- I think that the name suits what the technique does quite well.
Page 12
[Minato’s group lands next to Naruto]
Minato- Naruto I’m glad that you’re fine now.
Naruto- Well I feel better than ever now. Thanks everyone for helping to save me.
Lee/Kakashi-{looks at Gai’s crumbling body sadly} Gai-Sensei/Gai!
[Lee and Kakashi notice the small circle mark on Gai’s chest as the black markings coming from it begin to spread across his body]
Page 13
Lee/Kakashi- What’s going on?
Minato- (The stress on the body from using the eighth gate should reduce it to ashes. What is going on?) Naruto was this your doing?
Naruto- Yea it’s a new ability of mine. I’ll tell you guys about it once all the stragglers show up.
Lee-[Hopeful] Naruto-kun can you really save Gai-Sensei?
Naruto-{Smiles} Of course Dattebayo. I’ll do whatever it takes to protect my comrades.
Lee-{tears up} Thank you Naruto-kun!!
Page 14
[Sasuke and his group sans Kabuto as well as Sakura and Obito arrive at Naruto’s location]
Naruto- Late again, eh Sasuke! I was beginning to think you’d never show up.
Sasuke- Hn! Whatever you say moron!
[Sasuke looks toward Minato and walks towards him]
[Sasuke places his left palm on Minato’s shoulder and a black crescent mark appears on his body]
Minato- What are you doing?
Page 15
[Panel shows a close up of the marks on Minato and Gai’s bodies]
[Split panel shows Minato’s arms beginning to regenerate as white lines spread across his body coming from the black crescent mark]
[The other side shows Gai’s bones beginning to fuse back together and his skin is healing as black lines spread across his body coming from the white sun mark]
Madara-{breaks out of the hardening lava and sees Gai and Minato} Impossible the eighth gate should have killed him, and the Onmyouten should have destroyed the Edo-Tensei arms forever. How did those two gain such powers?
Page 16
[Scene switches to the Alliance vs. Spiral Zetsu]
[All of Hiruzen’s clones surround the Buddha statue and make hand seals]
Hiruzen/clones- Fire Style: Dragon Flame Bombs!
[The statue is ignited by the flames but takes little damage as the Wood Style’s chakra absorbing abilities kick in and the flames recede]
Spiral-Now it’s my turn. {Makes the snake seal} Wood Style: Birth of a World of Tress!
[Many branches appear coming from the ground at a fast pace toward the alliance]
Five Kage- We don’t have enough chakra to stop that attack!!
Page 17
[Suddenly a voice is heard]
????- Sage Art: Inorganic Animation
[A large wall enhanced with Senjutsu appears in front of the attack and halts it]
Five Kage- It can’t be!!!
[Last panel shows Kabuto with his snake looking over his shoulder coming toward the alliance]
Two opposing forces have finally come together to confront Madara! And Kabuto is going to!?
(Thoughts)
{Actions}
[Descriptions]
*Flashbacks*
Naruto has arrived! What new abilities will he show!?
Page 1
[Naruto is shown facing Madara with Gai’s body lying on the ground next to him]
[Madara sees Gai’s chakra system with his Rinnegan]
Madara- {shocked} (The chakra at the Eighth Gate’s pressure point hasn’t vanished. How in the world was he able to do that? It’s as if he stopped the after effects of the eight inner gates.)
[Naruto jumps forward to attack Madara]
[The Gudou-Dama kicked by Naruto in the previous chapter returns to Madara’s newly regenerated hand and forms a new staff]
Page 2
[Naruto is shown charging at Madara at a very high speed and Madara blocks the punch with his staff]
[The branch that Madara was leaning on is shown cracked by the force of Naruto’s senjutsu enhanced punch]
Madara-(Is he able to keep pace with me because I am still recovering? No. His power is continually increasing.)
Naruto-{raises his right hand with the sun symbol} Son, lend me some of your chakra Dattebayo!!
Son Goku- Of course.
Page 3
[Madara senses the build-up of chakra in Naruto’s hand and is shocked]
[A Rasenshuriken is shown forming but this one has a ball of lava at the center and the smoke from the lava is spun around by the fast rotation of the technique]
[Madara flees as the Rasenshuriken is shown multiplying several times in size as it cuts through the spot where Madara was previously standing]
Naruto- Sage Art: Lava Style Rasenshuriken!!
Madara- (This isn’t good. If that attack hits…! Rinbo Hengoku!!)
Naruto- Aaahh!!
Page 4
Kurama- I can sense that Madara is building up a large amount of chakra in his right eye.
Matatabi- It must be the same technique he used to knock all of us back before.
Gyuuki- If that’s the case we will need to block his line of sight.
Kurama- Shukaku use your sand now!
Shukaku- Hmph. Who made you the boss of me!?
[Scene switches out of Naruto’s mindscape to the battle]
Page 5
[Naruto is shown extending his left hand with a look of concentration as sand begins to swirl around Madara]
Naruto-{grins} And Gaara always makes this look so easy!
Madara- (He’s trying to block my field of vision to prevent me from using my technique)
Naruto-(Isobu and Chomei please lend me some of your chakra!)
Isobu/Chomei- Ok Naruto!!
Page 6
[The sand surrounding Madara begins to thin out and a new Rasenshuriken is shown flying through the sand towards Madara]
[The new technique is the same size as a normal FRS except it has a center which is made out of coral]
Madara- Something like that won’t work against me. Rinbo Hengoku!!
[Madara’s technique disperses the sand and the center of Naruto’s technique is shown cracking apart from the gravitational force]
Page 7
[The coral center cracks open and a gold powder which begins to sparkle is shown being blown around in the wind near Madara]
Madara- What is this!?
Naruto- Sage Art: Spiral Windmill Coral Flash Bomb!!
[The powder explodes in a flash of light that blinds Madara and forces him to close his eye]
Page 8
Madara-(I see that last attack was only a diversion that forced me into using Rinbo. Now I can't open my eyes to absorb the attack) Damn you Naruto!!
Naruto- You shouldn’t underestimate all of us when we work together!
*Naruto remembers his conversation with the bijuu earlier.
Kurama- I can sense that Madara is building up a large amount of chakra in his right eye.
Matatabi- It must be the same technique he used to knock all of us back before.
Naruto- If that technique Madara used is similar to Nagato’s Shinra Tensei then it can repel my attack. But it can only be used once every few seconds. We need to create a diversion and aim for the short interval in between attacks.*
Page 9
Naruto- Let’s hope this works. {throws the Lava Rasenshuriken}
[Madara still blinded tries to block the attack with his staff but it cracks due to Senjutsu chakra being infused into the attack]
[The LRS explodes and the blast radius consumes Madara’s body. Red glowing lava that was amplified by the wind style can be seen surrounding the battlefield]
[Madara’s entire body is shown encased in a slowly cooling tomb of lava]
Page 10
[Scene switches to Kakashi/Gaara/Lee/Minato]
[They see the explosion in the distance]
Gaara- Who is fighting Madara now? Gai couldn’t have had yet another technique.
Minato-{senses the battlefield and instantly recognizes the chakra} That chakra, there’s no mistaking it, it’s Naruto!
Lee- Naruto-kun is back?
Minato- I’m positive that it is him, but his chakra feels much more powerful now. Let’s go.
[Scene switches to Naruto’s mindscape with the bijuu]
Page 11
Chomei- We were lucky that he fell for that diversion.
Kurama- That won’t be enough to finish him but it was a good plan. But really Naruto, Sage Art: Spiral Windmill Coral Flash Bomb, you just might be worse than your father when it comes to naming things.
Naruto-{pouts} Well I thought it was a cool name.
Saiken- It wasn’t that bad.
Kokuo- I think that the name suits what the technique does quite well.
Page 12
[Minato’s group lands next to Naruto]
Minato- Naruto I’m glad that you’re fine now.
Naruto- Well I feel better than ever now. Thanks everyone for helping to save me.
Lee/Kakashi-{looks at Gai’s crumbling body sadly} Gai-Sensei/Gai!
[Lee and Kakashi notice the small circle mark on Gai’s chest as the black markings coming from it begin to spread across his body]
Page 13
Lee/Kakashi- What’s going on?
Minato- (The stress on the body from using the eighth gate should reduce it to ashes. What is going on?) Naruto was this your doing?
Naruto- Yea it’s a new ability of mine. I’ll tell you guys about it once all the stragglers show up.
Lee-[Hopeful] Naruto-kun can you really save Gai-Sensei?
Naruto-{Smiles} Of course Dattebayo. I’ll do whatever it takes to protect my comrades.
Lee-{tears up} Thank you Naruto-kun!!
Page 14
[Sasuke and his group sans Kabuto as well as Sakura and Obito arrive at Naruto’s location]
Naruto- Late again, eh Sasuke! I was beginning to think you’d never show up.
Sasuke- Hn! Whatever you say moron!
[Sasuke looks toward Minato and walks towards him]
[Sasuke places his left palm on Minato’s shoulder and a black crescent mark appears on his body]
Minato- What are you doing?
Page 15
[Panel shows a close up of the marks on Minato and Gai’s bodies]
[Split panel shows Minato’s arms beginning to regenerate as white lines spread across his body coming from the black crescent mark]
[The other side shows Gai’s bones beginning to fuse back together and his skin is healing as black lines spread across his body coming from the white sun mark]
Madara-{breaks out of the hardening lava and sees Gai and Minato} Impossible the eighth gate should have killed him, and the Onmyouten should have destroyed the Edo-Tensei arms forever. How did those two gain such powers?
Page 16
[Scene switches to the Alliance vs. Spiral Zetsu]
[All of Hiruzen’s clones surround the Buddha statue and make hand seals]
Hiruzen/clones- Fire Style: Dragon Flame Bombs!
[The statue is ignited by the flames but takes little damage as the Wood Style’s chakra absorbing abilities kick in and the flames recede]
Spiral-Now it’s my turn. {Makes the snake seal} Wood Style: Birth of a World of Tress!
[Many branches appear coming from the ground at a fast pace toward the alliance]
Five Kage- We don’t have enough chakra to stop that attack!!
Page 17
[Suddenly a voice is heard]
????- Sage Art: Inorganic Animation
[A large wall enhanced with Senjutsu appears in front of the attack and halts it]
Five Kage- It can’t be!!!
[Last panel shows Kabuto with his snake looking over his shoulder coming toward the alliance]
Two opposing forces have finally come together to confront Madara! And Kabuto is going to!?
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