LUMOS ULTIMATUM
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Page 1
SFX: Panting
Gai: Huff Huff Naruto, is that you?
Naruto: Hang on just a little longer bushier brows sensei.
A figure appears behind Naruto
Gai: Who is this?
Naruto(smiling): You are late, Sasuke!
Page 2
Gai: Sasuke?
SFX: Walking
Sasuke walks towards gai and places his hand on gai's body.
Gai: It's already over for me!
Naruto: We won't let you die just yet. I will protect my friends. I don't go back on my words.
Sasuke: I am nearly done!
Madara: It's quite amazing to see you are back Uzumaki Naruto. I sense that you have something else besides the bijuu's chakra. What happened up there?
Page 3
Naruto: I met Hagoromo while I was unconscious.
SFX: Hand seals
Naruto: Kage Bunshin No Jutsu
Hundreds of clones appear and dash towards Madara
Naruto: (This should buy enough time)
SFX: Kicks
Five clones are kicked in the air and disappear with a faint smoke.
SFX: Swirl
Madara slashes through 6 clones with his staff
Page 4
Naruto: Hurry up, Sasuke!
Sasuke: It's done. Let's go!
SFX: Standing
Gai's body has recovered from the injury from the gates and he is getting up.
Gai(amazed): What was this just now?
Sasuke: It's the ability to create form out of nothing. I have restored your body to a point it will not crumble anymore.
Madara has eliminated all the clones.
Madara: Is it over already? Waste of time!
Page 5
Naruto and Sasuke stand before Madara.
Naruto: Yang Formation
Sasuke: Yin Formation
Naruto and Sasuke: Shift!!!
A cloak of chakra forms around Naruto and gives him a necklace of 6 Magatamas, a white cloth and a staff with a full circle in one of his hands. Sasuke's eye changes from eternal mangekyou into the rinnegan and he is covered by purple chakra that takes the shape of a susanoo but which is the same size of Sasuke's body. In Sasuke's hand, a staff with a crescent moon on the top forms.
Page 6
Madara(smiling): I hope it's more interesting this time.
SFX: Blitz! Kick!
Two kicks by Naruto and Sasuke strike against Madara's chest which blows apart.
SFX: Moving back
Madara recedes and falls on the ground.
Madara(coughing blood): These powers.....
Sasuke: Uchiha Madara, you are a disgrace of the Uchiha Clan. You are a pathetic loser who was vanquished by Hashirama senju and who sought other people's powers. You are just a relic of the past that seeks to destroy the present.
Naruto looks at Sasuke with disbelief: (And he told me to not get full of myself earlier!)
Page 7
Madara: Provoking me, huh? I guess I that I have tested the Juubi's powers too much. Now is the real show.
SFX: Regeneration
Madara regenerates instantly and faster than before
SFX: Powering
An aura of chakra grows stronger little by little around Madara
Madara: Witness true terror!
Madara is covered by a black chakra cloak.
Sasuke: (Earlier then, this had just been his base form?)
Page 8
Madara: Beware of the power of creation! Banbutsu Sozo!
SFX: Ground shaking
Sasuke: What's happening?
Naruto: This is bad!
Sasuke: Naruto!
Naruto: I get it!
Naruto joins his hand with Sasuke so that their palms are facing towards each other.
SFX: Shockwave
Page 9
Everything around Madara gets blasted apart.
The landscape is annhilated and rocks crumble apart into ashes.
Mountains are destroyed into giant boulders
SFX: Silence
Madara: I don't believe it! They nullify it!
Sasuke and Naruto: When two opposite powers unite, only then can peace be achieved.
Page 10
Madara: There is nothing as peace! What you believe in is a mere illusion that can never be incarnated into reality. I hope you was half as foolish as Naruto, uchiha boy but in the end, you turned out to a similar trash. I am the one who will get rid of all the trash and carry out the infinite tsukuyomi.
Scene changes to Kakashi
Gai is being healed by Sakura.
Gai: I have to head back to fight Madara again.
Kakashi pats gai on his shoulder
Kakashi: Don't overdo it. We will go together after you have fully recovered.
Page 11
Scene changes to Sasuke and Naruto
SFX: Running
Sasuke and Naruto charge towards Madara.
Sasuke: Susanoo!
SFX: Halt
Naruto stops behind Sasuke who is still running
Naruto: Bijuu dama
A giant bijuu dama forms from the humanoid cloak itself.
Page 12
Madara: (I have seen through their strategy. In that case, I will take the attack head on)
SFX: Shoot
Naruto launches the bijuu dama which makes it way towards Madara.
SFX: Explosion
Madara emerges unscathed
Naruto(smiling): AAAAAH, this cloak is just like kurama's one.
Sasuke in a mist of smoke: (He took the full blast head on with the help of the chakra around his body which means that he probably saw through it )
SFX: Fire
Sasuke shoots a susanoo arrow.
Madara: It's useless! Only senjutsu works on me!
Madara grabs the arrow but his hand is injured
Madara: I see...It's how I feared. So, you have obtained the power to erase anything out of existence.
Page 13
Madara eyes the arrow which disappears.
Madara: It still isn't enough to stop me. I can use both of your powers combined.
Sasuke: Do you recognise this susanoo?
Madara: The perfect susanoo that causes destruction upon its victim. How did you attain this power?
Sasuke: Madara, I am going to surpass you!
SFX: Blitz! Clash!
Madara's staff clashes against Sasuke's one.
Madara: Your speed is impressive.
SFX: Rapid attacks
Sasuke: Your power is equal to mine.
Page 14
Sasuke(smiling): However..... Susanoo
Perfect susanoo forms around Sasuke.
SFX: Slash
Madara is sent crashing on the ground.
Madara : Huff!
Naruto: Tailed beast bomb barrage!
SFX: Shooting
SFX: BOOM!!!
Page 15
Sasuke jumps and lands besides Naruto.
Sasuke: He was caught in the blast.
Naruto: Are you sure? I can still feel his chakra
Sasuke: I saw it with the rinnegan.
A figure appears behind Naruto and Sasuke.
Naruto: Damn!
Sasuke: Shinra Tensei!
SFX: Blast
Madara and Naruto are sent crashing on the ground
Sasuke(What was this right now? I did it on instinct)
Naruto: This hurts like hell Sasuke.
SFX: Getting up
Page 16
Naruto and Madara rise at the same time.
Naruto: He should have been in a critical situation after being caught in the explosion. What happened?
Sasuke: What is this? Izanagi?
Sasuke remembers the time he was fighting danzo
Madara: Izanagi is an incomplete form of the creation of all things. What I am doing is the real thing. Only those who possess the juubi's powers and master hagoromo's techniques can use a power similar to the izanagi without harm.
Naruto: It won't be easy to defeat him, that's for sure. Sasuke, let's stop with the tactless strategies and just concentrate on fighting.
Sasuke(smiling): Don't overdo it though or we will both get killed.
SFX: Panting
Gai: Huff Huff Naruto, is that you?
Naruto: Hang on just a little longer bushier brows sensei.
A figure appears behind Naruto
Gai: Who is this?
Naruto(smiling): You are late, Sasuke!
Page 2
Gai: Sasuke?
SFX: Walking
Sasuke walks towards gai and places his hand on gai's body.
Gai: It's already over for me!
Naruto: We won't let you die just yet. I will protect my friends. I don't go back on my words.
Sasuke: I am nearly done!
Madara: It's quite amazing to see you are back Uzumaki Naruto. I sense that you have something else besides the bijuu's chakra. What happened up there?
Page 3
Naruto: I met Hagoromo while I was unconscious.
SFX: Hand seals
Naruto: Kage Bunshin No Jutsu
Hundreds of clones appear and dash towards Madara
Naruto: (This should buy enough time)
SFX: Kicks
Five clones are kicked in the air and disappear with a faint smoke.
SFX: Swirl
Madara slashes through 6 clones with his staff
Page 4
Naruto: Hurry up, Sasuke!
Sasuke: It's done. Let's go!
SFX: Standing
Gai's body has recovered from the injury from the gates and he is getting up.
Gai(amazed): What was this just now?
Sasuke: It's the ability to create form out of nothing. I have restored your body to a point it will not crumble anymore.
Madara has eliminated all the clones.
Madara: Is it over already? Waste of time!
Page 5
Naruto and Sasuke stand before Madara.
Naruto: Yang Formation
Sasuke: Yin Formation
Naruto and Sasuke: Shift!!!
A cloak of chakra forms around Naruto and gives him a necklace of 6 Magatamas, a white cloth and a staff with a full circle in one of his hands. Sasuke's eye changes from eternal mangekyou into the rinnegan and he is covered by purple chakra that takes the shape of a susanoo but which is the same size of Sasuke's body. In Sasuke's hand, a staff with a crescent moon on the top forms.
Page 6
Madara(smiling): I hope it's more interesting this time.
SFX: Blitz! Kick!
Two kicks by Naruto and Sasuke strike against Madara's chest which blows apart.
SFX: Moving back
Madara recedes and falls on the ground.
Madara(coughing blood): These powers.....
Sasuke: Uchiha Madara, you are a disgrace of the Uchiha Clan. You are a pathetic loser who was vanquished by Hashirama senju and who sought other people's powers. You are just a relic of the past that seeks to destroy the present.
Naruto looks at Sasuke with disbelief: (And he told me to not get full of myself earlier!)
Page 7
Madara: Provoking me, huh? I guess I that I have tested the Juubi's powers too much. Now is the real show.
SFX: Regeneration
Madara regenerates instantly and faster than before
SFX: Powering
An aura of chakra grows stronger little by little around Madara
Madara: Witness true terror!
Madara is covered by a black chakra cloak.
Sasuke: (Earlier then, this had just been his base form?)
Page 8
Madara: Beware of the power of creation! Banbutsu Sozo!
SFX: Ground shaking
Sasuke: What's happening?
Naruto: This is bad!
Sasuke: Naruto!
Naruto: I get it!
Naruto joins his hand with Sasuke so that their palms are facing towards each other.
SFX: Shockwave
Page 9
Everything around Madara gets blasted apart.
The landscape is annhilated and rocks crumble apart into ashes.
Mountains are destroyed into giant boulders
SFX: Silence
Madara: I don't believe it! They nullify it!
Sasuke and Naruto: When two opposite powers unite, only then can peace be achieved.
Page 10
Madara: There is nothing as peace! What you believe in is a mere illusion that can never be incarnated into reality. I hope you was half as foolish as Naruto, uchiha boy but in the end, you turned out to a similar trash. I am the one who will get rid of all the trash and carry out the infinite tsukuyomi.
Scene changes to Kakashi
Gai is being healed by Sakura.
Gai: I have to head back to fight Madara again.
Kakashi pats gai on his shoulder
Kakashi: Don't overdo it. We will go together after you have fully recovered.
Page 11
Scene changes to Sasuke and Naruto
SFX: Running
Sasuke and Naruto charge towards Madara.
Sasuke: Susanoo!
SFX: Halt
Naruto stops behind Sasuke who is still running
Naruto: Bijuu dama
A giant bijuu dama forms from the humanoid cloak itself.
Page 12
Madara: (I have seen through their strategy. In that case, I will take the attack head on)
SFX: Shoot
Naruto launches the bijuu dama which makes it way towards Madara.
SFX: Explosion
Madara emerges unscathed
Naruto(smiling): AAAAAH, this cloak is just like kurama's one.
Sasuke in a mist of smoke: (He took the full blast head on with the help of the chakra around his body which means that he probably saw through it )
SFX: Fire
Sasuke shoots a susanoo arrow.
Madara: It's useless! Only senjutsu works on me!
Madara grabs the arrow but his hand is injured
Madara: I see...It's how I feared. So, you have obtained the power to erase anything out of existence.
Page 13
Madara eyes the arrow which disappears.
Madara: It still isn't enough to stop me. I can use both of your powers combined.
Sasuke: Do you recognise this susanoo?
Madara: The perfect susanoo that causes destruction upon its victim. How did you attain this power?
Sasuke: Madara, I am going to surpass you!
SFX: Blitz! Clash!
Madara's staff clashes against Sasuke's one.
Madara: Your speed is impressive.
SFX: Rapid attacks
Sasuke: Your power is equal to mine.
Page 14
Sasuke(smiling): However..... Susanoo
Perfect susanoo forms around Sasuke.
SFX: Slash
Madara is sent crashing on the ground.
Madara : Huff!
Naruto: Tailed beast bomb barrage!
SFX: Shooting
SFX: BOOM!!!
Page 15
Sasuke jumps and lands besides Naruto.
Sasuke: He was caught in the blast.
Naruto: Are you sure? I can still feel his chakra
Sasuke: I saw it with the rinnegan.
A figure appears behind Naruto and Sasuke.
Naruto: Damn!
Sasuke: Shinra Tensei!
SFX: Blast
Madara and Naruto are sent crashing on the ground
Sasuke(What was this right now? I did it on instinct)
Naruto: This hurts like hell Sasuke.
SFX: Getting up
Page 16
Naruto and Madara rise at the same time.
Naruto: He should have been in a critical situation after being caught in the explosion. What happened?
Sasuke: What is this? Izanagi?
Sasuke remembers the time he was fighting danzo
Madara: Izanagi is an incomplete form of the creation of all things. What I am doing is the real thing. Only those who possess the juubi's powers and master hagoromo's techniques can use a power similar to the izanagi without harm.
Naruto: It won't be easy to defeat him, that's for sure. Sasuke, let's stop with the tactless strategies and just concentrate on fighting.
Sasuke(smiling): Don't overdo it though or we will both get killed.
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He does repeat himself though.
