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I heard that that Night Moth might have been a mistranslation and that *********** could have been correct. I based the last technique off the promotion page for 672 that was posted earlier.
Naruto 672: The Final Attack
(Thoughts)
{Actions}
[Descriptions]
*Flashbacks*
Naruto and Sasuke have been entrusted with power from the Sage of the Six Paths himself. Gai’s final attack will…?!
Page 1
[First panel shows Gai facing Madara as he is panting from the physical stress and pain of the eighth gate]
Madara- Come now Red Beast. Don’t you have anything else that can further entertain me.
Gai- (Just how strong is he. The Evening Elephant wasn’t enough to defeat him, but I still have time for one final attack.){Gai claps his hands together}
[The red flames around his body condense as his chakra level suddenly spikes. Blood can be seen pouring out his body as it mixes with the red aura. The chakra suddenly explodes outward and the outline of dragon’s head can be seen]
Madara- That’s good. Show me how well you can dance.
Page 2
[Scene switches to Gaara, Lee and Kakashi. Kakashi is observing the battle with his left eye closed]
Kakashi- That attack wasn’t able to finish Madara. What is Gai planning to do now?
Gaara- If a power of that caliber didn’t work how do you think we can defeat Madara?
[Minato is shown appearing next to Kakashi via the FTG kunai he gave to him earlier. Several holes can be seen in his jacket where the Onmyouton orbs brushed against his back]
Minato- I was able to prevent any further damage to my body from the black orbs using the Hiraishin.
Page 3
Kakashi- Sensei what can we do now? Gai used his strongest attack and Madara is merely toying with him.
Lee- No the Evening Elephant is not Gai-sensei’s strongest attack.
[Everyone else looks to Lee in surprise]
Minato- Lee-kun what does this technique do?
Lee- It is called the Night Gai and is Gai-sensei’s own original technique.
[Panel shows Gai’s chakra forming two massive blood red wings and the ground cracking from the pressure of Gai’s chakra.
Page 4
Lee- The Night Gai is a finishing move that concentrates all the user’s power into a single, incredibly powerful and fast thrust.
Minato-*Remembers his fight with Ay and dodging his max speed* If that’s the case, we will have to provide a distraction to make sure that the attack hits.
Lee- Of course, I would be honored to aid Gai-Sensei during the prime of his youth.
Minato- The weakness to a linear strike such as this is that it can be easily predicted and evaded if the target has enough speed. Here’s what we will do…
[Scene switches to Sasuke’s group]
Page 5
[Sasuke is shown sitting up as Karin is holding him in her arms crying]
Sasuke- Karin. Please get off of me.
Karin-[sobbing] Sas..kue I’m.. so glad that you’re ok now.
Suigetsu- Geez I hate being around Karin when she’s in one of her moods.
{Suigetsu spots something in the distance and walks away}
{Sasuke sees Kabuto and turns towards him}
Kabuto- I am glad that you are awake now Sasuke-kun.
Page 6
Sasuke- Kabuto were you the one who saved me?
Kabuto- Yes Sasuke-kun your brother helped me realize my true self. I healed you as thanks for what Itachi did for me, and to help atone for my transgressions in this war.
Sasuke-(stands up) Itachi wanted to give you the chance that he did not have in life, so I will abide by his wishes. But [glares at Kabuto] if you get in my way, I will not hesitate to bring you down.
Kabuto- Of course Sasuke-kun, I’m now a changed man.
Page 7
[Sasuke looks in the distance and sees the Buddha statue created by Spiral]
Sasuke-(I will go and aide the alliance for now, it will be the first step in implementing my…)
{Suigetsu returns with Sasuke’s sword in hand}
Suigetsu- Hey what’s up Sasuke look what I brought for you.
{Sasuke grabs the sword from Suigetsu without even sparing him a glance}
Sasuke- Let’s go. There’s something I wish to test out.
Orochimaru-{smiles evilly} (Kukuku… I can tell that there’s something different about Sasuke-kun now.)
[Scene switches to the Spiral vs Alliance fight]
Page 8
[Panel shows Hiruzen swinging Enma’s staff form which destroys several hands of the Buddha statue]
Spiral- Let’s see how you handle this one.
[Two masks on the statue release streams of fire and wind to create a massive scale Katon jutsu that goes toward the alliance]
{Hiruzen spins his staff rapidly in front of him to counter the jutsu}
Hiruzen-{pants} I can’t keep this up much longer. I’m almost out of chakra.
Spiral- That was impressive, but you weren’t good enough.
Page 9
[Suddenly roots spring up around Hiruzen and bind him in place. Hiruzen barely manages to break free of the wooden binds. Before he can retreat a lightning jutsu from Spiral hits him destroying his entire left arm and shoulder]
Shikamaru- Damn. Everyone hasn’t recovered enough yet to battle that thing, and with the Third down were going to be in trouble.
Spiral- Now that he has been taken care of will anyone care to answer my question on what it feels like to poo.
[The Buddha statue launches several dozen punches at the alliance as a jutsu of each element is once again prepared]
{Spiral suddenly senses something and jumps off the Buddha}
Page 10
[A massive blade covered in Enton is shown easily slicing through all the Mokuton hands]
[Sasuke is shown in the forehead of a massive purple Perfect Susanoo that even rivals Madara’s in size]
[Sasuke is shown glaring at Spiral with a smirk on his face. Sasuke’s eyes are shown to have changed to a purple spiral pattern and he is holding a black crescent staff in his left hand. His bow is shown loaded with an Enton arrow aimed at Spiral]
[Team Taka as well as Orochimaru and Kabuto land in front of Sasuke]
Spiral- I guess I finally found the answer to my question.
[Scene switches to Gai vs. Madara]
Page 11
Madara-{smirks} Things are finally getting interesting again.
Gai- {yells} Now you will feel the full power of my youth!!
[Gaara is shown flying on a platform of sand and moves his hands to manipulate the sand near Madara]
Gaara- Desert Whirlwhind!
[Madara is shown surrounded by a mini-sandstorm created by Gaara]
[Lee is shown holding on to Kakashi’s arm and uses the physical strength granted by the Gate of View to spin and hurl Kakashi towards Madara with a Raikiri in hand]
Page 12
Madara- [Annoyed] How bothersome. {Flares his chakra and the sand disperses}
{Madara spots Kakashi coming towards him as the lighting jutsu is launched forward}
{Madara disperses the technique with his staff, punches Kakashi in the gut who drops something before being revealed as a lightning clone}
Madara- You all should have learned by now that ninjutsu is useless against me and I can see through a petty clone jutsu.
[Madara sees Gai approaching at an incredible rate and transforms his staff into a shield to cover himself from the attack]
Page 13
[The lone object that was dropped by Kakashi is shown to be a FTG kunai and Minato teleports to it]
[Minato flips in midair and his feet land on the black shield as if he is about to spring off of it before teleporting the shield away]
Madara-[shocked] Damn them!!!
Gai- NIGHT GAI!!!
[The massive red dragon is shown approaching Madara who has just lost his last defense. Gai’s hands are shown clasped together pointing at Madara]
Page 14
Madara-(I underestimated them again, but I have to admit that I had a lot of fun with this little dance routine.)
[Gai’s hands pierce through Madara’s chest and Madara is shown spitting out blood while being consumed by the mouth of the dragon and being rocketed back down to the earth where a massive explosion occurs and a dust cloud forms in the air]
Lee/Kakashi/Gaara/Minato- Did he get him?
[Scene switches to Naruto, Sakura and Obito in the Kamui dimension]
Page 15
[Naruto sits up and looks confused as to where he is]
Sakura-{crying} Naruto you idiot, don’t you dare scare me like that ever again. {Sakura hugs him}
Naruto- I’m sorry that I worried you Sakura-chan.
Obito- I’m glad to see that you have recovered Naruto.
Naruto- I have to thank the both of you for saving my life, and I’m glad that you were able to return to your old self Obito.
Obito- It was all thanks to you Naruto, but for now we need to stop Madara.
[Obito suddenly freezes as Black Zetsu tries to regain control]
Page 16
[Naruto activates his v2 chakra mode which now resembles Ashura’s outfit. He holds the same staff as Obito in his right hand and his seal now has nine triangles surrounding the outermost ring--Like the cover from Volume 60--]
[Naruto taps the staff on Obito’s left side and Black Zetsu is shown receding as a chakra cloak forms around Obito]
Naruto-{smiles} Let’s go back shall we.
Sakura/Obito-[amazed] How did you?
Naruto- I’ll tell you guys later but we need to go back to help everyone.
Obito-Very well, both of you put your hands on me.
[Naruto and Sakura touch Obito and they are all sucked into the vortex created by Kamui]
Naruto and Sasuke finally return to the battle field to confront Madara! And Gai’s technique was able to!?
(Thoughts)
{Actions}
[Descriptions]
*Flashbacks*
Naruto and Sasuke have been entrusted with power from the Sage of the Six Paths himself. Gai’s final attack will…?!
Page 1
[First panel shows Gai facing Madara as he is panting from the physical stress and pain of the eighth gate]
Madara- Come now Red Beast. Don’t you have anything else that can further entertain me.
Gai- (Just how strong is he. The Evening Elephant wasn’t enough to defeat him, but I still have time for one final attack.){Gai claps his hands together}
[The red flames around his body condense as his chakra level suddenly spikes. Blood can be seen pouring out his body as it mixes with the red aura. The chakra suddenly explodes outward and the outline of dragon’s head can be seen]
Madara- That’s good. Show me how well you can dance.
Page 2
[Scene switches to Gaara, Lee and Kakashi. Kakashi is observing the battle with his left eye closed]
Kakashi- That attack wasn’t able to finish Madara. What is Gai planning to do now?
Gaara- If a power of that caliber didn’t work how do you think we can defeat Madara?
[Minato is shown appearing next to Kakashi via the FTG kunai he gave to him earlier. Several holes can be seen in his jacket where the Onmyouton orbs brushed against his back]
Minato- I was able to prevent any further damage to my body from the black orbs using the Hiraishin.
Page 3
Kakashi- Sensei what can we do now? Gai used his strongest attack and Madara is merely toying with him.
Lee- No the Evening Elephant is not Gai-sensei’s strongest attack.
[Everyone else looks to Lee in surprise]
Minato- Lee-kun what does this technique do?
Lee- It is called the Night Gai and is Gai-sensei’s own original technique.
[Panel shows Gai’s chakra forming two massive blood red wings and the ground cracking from the pressure of Gai’s chakra.
Page 4
Lee- The Night Gai is a finishing move that concentrates all the user’s power into a single, incredibly powerful and fast thrust.
Minato-*Remembers his fight with Ay and dodging his max speed* If that’s the case, we will have to provide a distraction to make sure that the attack hits.
Lee- Of course, I would be honored to aid Gai-Sensei during the prime of his youth.
Minato- The weakness to a linear strike such as this is that it can be easily predicted and evaded if the target has enough speed. Here’s what we will do…
[Scene switches to Sasuke’s group]
Page 5
[Sasuke is shown sitting up as Karin is holding him in her arms crying]
Sasuke- Karin. Please get off of me.
Karin-[sobbing] Sas..kue I’m.. so glad that you’re ok now.
Suigetsu- Geez I hate being around Karin when she’s in one of her moods.
{Suigetsu spots something in the distance and walks away}
{Sasuke sees Kabuto and turns towards him}
Kabuto- I am glad that you are awake now Sasuke-kun.
Page 6
Sasuke- Kabuto were you the one who saved me?
Kabuto- Yes Sasuke-kun your brother helped me realize my true self. I healed you as thanks for what Itachi did for me, and to help atone for my transgressions in this war.
Sasuke-(stands up) Itachi wanted to give you the chance that he did not have in life, so I will abide by his wishes. But [glares at Kabuto] if you get in my way, I will not hesitate to bring you down.
Kabuto- Of course Sasuke-kun, I’m now a changed man.
Page 7
[Sasuke looks in the distance and sees the Buddha statue created by Spiral]
Sasuke-(I will go and aide the alliance for now, it will be the first step in implementing my…)
{Suigetsu returns with Sasuke’s sword in hand}
Suigetsu- Hey what’s up Sasuke look what I brought for you.
{Sasuke grabs the sword from Suigetsu without even sparing him a glance}
Sasuke- Let’s go. There’s something I wish to test out.
Orochimaru-{smiles evilly} (Kukuku… I can tell that there’s something different about Sasuke-kun now.)
[Scene switches to the Spiral vs Alliance fight]
Page 8
[Panel shows Hiruzen swinging Enma’s staff form which destroys several hands of the Buddha statue]
Spiral- Let’s see how you handle this one.
[Two masks on the statue release streams of fire and wind to create a massive scale Katon jutsu that goes toward the alliance]
{Hiruzen spins his staff rapidly in front of him to counter the jutsu}
Hiruzen-{pants} I can’t keep this up much longer. I’m almost out of chakra.
Spiral- That was impressive, but you weren’t good enough.
Page 9
[Suddenly roots spring up around Hiruzen and bind him in place. Hiruzen barely manages to break free of the wooden binds. Before he can retreat a lightning jutsu from Spiral hits him destroying his entire left arm and shoulder]
Shikamaru- Damn. Everyone hasn’t recovered enough yet to battle that thing, and with the Third down were going to be in trouble.
Spiral- Now that he has been taken care of will anyone care to answer my question on what it feels like to poo.
[The Buddha statue launches several dozen punches at the alliance as a jutsu of each element is once again prepared]
{Spiral suddenly senses something and jumps off the Buddha}
Page 10
[A massive blade covered in Enton is shown easily slicing through all the Mokuton hands]
[Sasuke is shown in the forehead of a massive purple Perfect Susanoo that even rivals Madara’s in size]
[Sasuke is shown glaring at Spiral with a smirk on his face. Sasuke’s eyes are shown to have changed to a purple spiral pattern and he is holding a black crescent staff in his left hand. His bow is shown loaded with an Enton arrow aimed at Spiral]
[Team Taka as well as Orochimaru and Kabuto land in front of Sasuke]
Spiral- I guess I finally found the answer to my question.
[Scene switches to Gai vs. Madara]
Page 11
Madara-{smirks} Things are finally getting interesting again.
Gai- {yells} Now you will feel the full power of my youth!!
[Gaara is shown flying on a platform of sand and moves his hands to manipulate the sand near Madara]
Gaara- Desert Whirlwhind!
[Madara is shown surrounded by a mini-sandstorm created by Gaara]
[Lee is shown holding on to Kakashi’s arm and uses the physical strength granted by the Gate of View to spin and hurl Kakashi towards Madara with a Raikiri in hand]
Page 12
Madara- [Annoyed] How bothersome. {Flares his chakra and the sand disperses}
{Madara spots Kakashi coming towards him as the lighting jutsu is launched forward}
{Madara disperses the technique with his staff, punches Kakashi in the gut who drops something before being revealed as a lightning clone}
Madara- You all should have learned by now that ninjutsu is useless against me and I can see through a petty clone jutsu.
[Madara sees Gai approaching at an incredible rate and transforms his staff into a shield to cover himself from the attack]
Page 13
[The lone object that was dropped by Kakashi is shown to be a FTG kunai and Minato teleports to it]
[Minato flips in midair and his feet land on the black shield as if he is about to spring off of it before teleporting the shield away]
Madara-[shocked] Damn them!!!
Gai- NIGHT GAI!!!
[The massive red dragon is shown approaching Madara who has just lost his last defense. Gai’s hands are shown clasped together pointing at Madara]
Page 14
Madara-(I underestimated them again, but I have to admit that I had a lot of fun with this little dance routine.)
[Gai’s hands pierce through Madara’s chest and Madara is shown spitting out blood while being consumed by the mouth of the dragon and being rocketed back down to the earth where a massive explosion occurs and a dust cloud forms in the air]
Lee/Kakashi/Gaara/Minato- Did he get him?
[Scene switches to Naruto, Sakura and Obito in the Kamui dimension]
Page 15
[Naruto sits up and looks confused as to where he is]
Sakura-{crying} Naruto you idiot, don’t you dare scare me like that ever again. {Sakura hugs him}
Naruto- I’m sorry that I worried you Sakura-chan.
Obito- I’m glad to see that you have recovered Naruto.
Naruto- I have to thank the both of you for saving my life, and I’m glad that you were able to return to your old self Obito.
Obito- It was all thanks to you Naruto, but for now we need to stop Madara.
[Obito suddenly freezes as Black Zetsu tries to regain control]
Page 16
[Naruto activates his v2 chakra mode which now resembles Ashura’s outfit. He holds the same staff as Obito in his right hand and his seal now has nine triangles surrounding the outermost ring--Like the cover from Volume 60--]
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Naruto-{smiles} Let’s go back shall we.
Sakura/Obito-[amazed] How did you?
Naruto- I’ll tell you guys later but we need to go back to help everyone.
Obito-Very well, both of you put your hands on me.
[Naruto and Sakura touch Obito and they are all sucked into the vortex created by Kamui]
Naruto and Sasuke finally return to the battle field to confront Madara! And Gai’s technique was able to!?
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