Of course the prediction was great due to your impressive writting skills including all elements as: descriptions of surroundings, detailed scene, description of full paced action scense easily to visualize and follow.
You also proved your great knowledge and having good eye while reading the manga. You proved to be able to catch even details in entire scene which is rare skill.
Anyway, Comming finally to plot or just essence of your prediction, Sorry but I don't like:
- Gai pushing and pummeling Rikudou Madara around
- Gai pulling new move out of his ass(He should only have night-time elephant and having possibility of using it as parts or entire elephant to as finishing move.)
- Orochimaru is unnecessary at this point, he is only watching, besides Kabuto would intercept any action Orochimaru took.
It should include:
- Sage of six paths should be revealed to Naruto
- Kurama or also Gyuuki/Shukaku as chakra avatars should appear to Naruto in his mindscape.
- Rikudou Madara should either power up or tap more Ten tails chakra to match or finish Gai
- At least one panel should mention/shows Sasuke.
What I already liked:
- clear and well developed/detailed descriptions of scene or actions
- Great characterization of each characters
- well chose amount of content(not too short or too long)
- well pace of plot.
+ rep for efforts
, even alhtough It didn't fit my like/taste
You also proved your great knowledge and having good eye while reading the manga. You proved to be able to catch even details in entire scene which is rare skill.
Anyway, Comming finally to plot or just essence of your prediction, Sorry but I don't like:
- Gai pushing and pummeling Rikudou Madara around
- Gai pulling new move out of his ass(He should only have night-time elephant and having possibility of using it as parts or entire elephant to as finishing move.)
- Orochimaru is unnecessary at this point, he is only watching, besides Kabuto would intercept any action Orochimaru took.
It should include:
- Sage of six paths should be revealed to Naruto
- Kurama or also Gyuuki/Shukaku as chakra avatars should appear to Naruto in his mindscape.
- Rikudou Madara should either power up or tap more Ten tails chakra to match or finish Gai
- At least one panel should mention/shows Sasuke.
What I already liked:
- clear and well developed/detailed descriptions of scene or actions
- Great characterization of each characters
- well chose amount of content(not too short or too long)
- well pace of plot.
+ rep for efforts
, even alhtough It didn't fit my like/taste
