Rama Saravanan
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Page 1
<Naruto's seal>
Naruto : Where am i?
Kurama : Finally you are up.
*Naruto remembers his fight with Madara*
Naruto : Where is that bastard madara?!
Kurama : Stop asking questions already!
[I think the time has come]
(Kurama closes his eyes and the place changes)
Page 2
[An old man appears]
Naruto : What the hell is going on here?!
Kurama : Naruto,your destiny is here.
Kurama : Long time no see old man.
?????? : Yes,it is.
[The old man and Kurama bump fists with each other]
Naruto : You know Kurama?!
?????? : you like to ask questions Naruto,don't you?
Page 3
?????? : My name is Hagaromo Otsutsuki.
Naruto : How do you know my name?
?????? : Because when i created bijuus,i left parts of my chakra with a ultimate power and some
of my life energy in all bijuus,so that i can meet you.
Naruto : What does a old man like you wants from me?
?????? : To bring true peace...
Page 4
<Taka,Orochimaru and Kabuto>
(Sasuke wakes up with his hands covering his face)
Karin : Sasuke,are you all right?
(Sasuke groans)
Karin : I am sensing a different chakra from Sasuke!
Kabuto : I knew it...
Orochimaru : As i thought...But that is an outstanding feet still.That is why i want you
Sasuke-kun.
Suigetsu : ... [Here he goes again]Even i am sensing this...
Juugo : Same here.What the hell is going on with you Sasuke?!
Page 5
<Gai v.s Madara>
Madara : Is that all you got?
Gai : Issoku
Niisoku
Sansoku
Yonsoku
Gosoku!!!
(Madara falls down)
Gai : Did i get him?
(Madara stands up)
Page 6
(Madara heals that it becomes visible to Gai's eyes)
Gai : Damn you...
(Suddenly Madara stops healing)
Kakashi: It seems air pressure of night elephant is slowing down the Madara's healing ability.
Page 7
Madara : [I think the time has come to get serious]
Madara : Your name is Gai,isn't it?I admit your'e strong.But the playtime's over.
Gai : He just said he was playing?!!
Madara : Let me free you from your pain.
Page 8
(Kakashi,Gai and everyone start to feel a change in Madara's chakra)
(Madara gets behind Gai and strikes him with his staff)
(Gai falls on ground)
Gai : Too fast!
Page 9
Gai gets up
Gai : [My body almost wore out]
Madara : You are going to rot...
Gai : [The time has come to use it]
Page 10
Gai : Double night elephant!!!
(Gai's hands are covered with red chakra and he starts moving with ultra speed)
(Gai hits Madara's stomach with his and in an instant the red chakra takes form of two tusks
and pierces through Madara)
Madara : aarrgghh!!!
Page 11
(Madara takes out Gai's hand from his stomach and punches him hard)
(Gai falls on the ground)
(Blood comes out through Gai's mouth)
Gai : Is this how far i can go?
Page 12
Madara : You still had a technique like this on your sleeve?!
Madara : You are a truly worthy opponent.
(Madara concentrates his chakra on healing)
(Gai gets up with a great effort)
Madara : You are sure a persistent guy.
Page 13
<Spiral zetsu,allied shinobi force>
Hiruzen : Gai's chakra is fading...
Tsunade : We should hurry up in finishing this bastard.
Spiral Zetsu : I can't believe that Gai actually is fighting Madara-sama
[Still Madara-sama could end it if he truly wants to]
Page 14
Orochimaru : I can sense Gai's chakra fading.
Kabuto : We should hurry up and help them.
Orochimaru : No.We have no choice but to wait till Sasuke-kun opens his eyes.
(Sasuke slowly removes his hands from his face)
Page 15
<Naruto's seal>
Naruto : Yes,i wish to bring true peace.
?????? : I am glad to hear that.
Kurama : Time is running out old man.
?????? : Yeah.I know.
Page 16
?????? : Naruto,i wish you to know my past,so that you can obtain an clear image of
the true peace which i always wanted to establish.
Naruto : ahh... I have to fight Madara,you know?
Kurama : Shut up and listen to him Naruto.
?????? : Don't worry Naruto.I will use genjutsu to tell my past quickly.
Page 17
(Sasuke's eyes have ripple pattern,which glow brighter)
Orochimaru : So Sasuke-kun finally awakened rinnegan...
Karin : Rinnegan?!!!...
(suigetsu and Juugo stare at Sasuke in awe)
Kabuto : Now Sasuke-kun has the ultimate doujutsu.
Sasuke : Let's go!
-------------Chapter's end--------------
Please share your thoughts about this prediction.I predicted Sasuke awakens rinnegan because i am
starting to think Madara v.s Gai is going to stop very soon.
()-Actions
**-Flashbacks
<>-Places
Page 1
<Naruto's seal>
Naruto : Where am i?
Kurama : Finally you are up.
*Naruto remembers his fight with Madara*
Naruto : Where is that bastard madara?!
Kurama : Stop asking questions already!
[I think the time has come]
(Kurama closes his eyes and the place changes)
Page 2
[An old man appears]
Naruto : What the hell is going on here?!
Kurama : Naruto,your destiny is here.
Kurama : Long time no see old man.
?????? : Yes,it is.
[The old man and Kurama bump fists with each other]
Naruto : You know Kurama?!
?????? : you like to ask questions Naruto,don't you?
Page 3
?????? : My name is Hagaromo Otsutsuki.
Naruto : How do you know my name?
?????? : Because when i created bijuus,i left parts of my chakra with a ultimate power and some
of my life energy in all bijuus,so that i can meet you.
Naruto : What does a old man like you wants from me?
?????? : To bring true peace...
Page 4
<Taka,Orochimaru and Kabuto>
(Sasuke wakes up with his hands covering his face)
Karin : Sasuke,are you all right?
(Sasuke groans)
Karin : I am sensing a different chakra from Sasuke!
Kabuto : I knew it...
Orochimaru : As i thought...But that is an outstanding feet still.That is why i want you
Sasuke-kun.
Suigetsu : ... [Here he goes again]Even i am sensing this...
Juugo : Same here.What the hell is going on with you Sasuke?!
Page 5
<Gai v.s Madara>
Madara : Is that all you got?
Gai : Issoku
Niisoku
Sansoku
Yonsoku
Gosoku!!!
(Madara falls down)
Gai : Did i get him?
(Madara stands up)
Page 6
(Madara heals that it becomes visible to Gai's eyes)
Gai : Damn you...
(Suddenly Madara stops healing)
Kakashi: It seems air pressure of night elephant is slowing down the Madara's healing ability.
Page 7
Madara : [I think the time has come to get serious]
Madara : Your name is Gai,isn't it?I admit your'e strong.But the playtime's over.
Gai : He just said he was playing?!!
Madara : Let me free you from your pain.
Page 8
(Kakashi,Gai and everyone start to feel a change in Madara's chakra)
(Madara gets behind Gai and strikes him with his staff)
(Gai falls on ground)
Gai : Too fast!
Page 9
Gai gets up
Gai : [My body almost wore out]
Madara : You are going to rot...
Gai : [The time has come to use it]
Page 10
Gai : Double night elephant!!!
(Gai's hands are covered with red chakra and he starts moving with ultra speed)
(Gai hits Madara's stomach with his and in an instant the red chakra takes form of two tusks
and pierces through Madara)
Madara : aarrgghh!!!
Page 11
(Madara takes out Gai's hand from his stomach and punches him hard)
(Gai falls on the ground)
(Blood comes out through Gai's mouth)
Gai : Is this how far i can go?
Page 12
Madara : You still had a technique like this on your sleeve?!
Madara : You are a truly worthy opponent.
(Madara concentrates his chakra on healing)
(Gai gets up with a great effort)
Madara : You are sure a persistent guy.
Page 13
<Spiral zetsu,allied shinobi force>
Hiruzen : Gai's chakra is fading...
Tsunade : We should hurry up in finishing this bastard.
Spiral Zetsu : I can't believe that Gai actually is fighting Madara-sama
[Still Madara-sama could end it if he truly wants to]
Page 14
Orochimaru : I can sense Gai's chakra fading.
Kabuto : We should hurry up and help them.
Orochimaru : No.We have no choice but to wait till Sasuke-kun opens his eyes.
(Sasuke slowly removes his hands from his face)
Page 15
<Naruto's seal>
Naruto : Yes,i wish to bring true peace.
?????? : I am glad to hear that.
Kurama : Time is running out old man.
?????? : Yeah.I know.
Page 16
?????? : Naruto,i wish you to know my past,so that you can obtain an clear image of
the true peace which i always wanted to establish.
Naruto : ahh... I have to fight Madara,you know?
Kurama : Shut up and listen to him Naruto.
?????? : Don't worry Naruto.I will use genjutsu to tell my past quickly.
Page 17
(Sasuke's eyes have ripple pattern,which glow brighter)
Orochimaru : So Sasuke-kun finally awakened rinnegan...
Karin : Rinnegan?!!!...
(suigetsu and Juugo stare at Sasuke in awe)
Kabuto : Now Sasuke-kun has the ultimate doujutsu.
Sasuke : Let's go!
-------------Chapter's end--------------
Please share your thoughts about this prediction.I predicted Sasuke awakens rinnegan because i am
starting to think Madara v.s Gai is going to stop very soon.
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