Hata Hideaki
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Hey guys this is my first prediction. I hope you guys will like it. =D
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Naruto- !! (Where am I?!!.)
Naruto- Ughh.!!!
[Naruto tries to stand up but struggles. Looks around and thinks where he might be?!.]
Naruto- What is this place?. It looks similar to the place where I met the bijuu.
[Naruto walks around, and then suddenly a flash of images appears in his mind.]
Naruto- Wh-whats happening?!!.
SCENE CHANGES TO THE BATTLEFIELD.
Kakashi- (No way, is he asking for more?).
Gaara- !!.
SCENE CHANGES TO MINATO FAR AWAY FORM KAKASHI & CO..
Minato- (This should be far enough for these black shape shifting balls to get out of control.)
BACK TO THE BATTLEFIELD.
Kakashi- Guy are you alright..?!. [pants [pants]
Guy- Kakashi please move back. I don't want my comrades to get suck up in my next attack.
Lee- Guy-sensei..!!.
[Minato appears next to Gaara.]
Minato- So it didn't affect him at all.
Gaara- Just how strong is he?!.
Madara-..
[Guy moves to a safe distance and takes a form where he crosses his hands across his face.]
Madara- So are you ready for the next round?!.
Guy- .. (I'm good for at-least two more attacks. The pain caused by opening the last gate is unbearable.)
Guy- Get ready Madara..
Madara- You better not disappoint me. (I need to make sure his next attack wont hit me directly. My healing ability is slow because of the damage caused by the air pressure. I better prepare for defense.)
Madara- Wh-what the?!!. Where are my black shape shifting balls?. ( I see, back then Fourth hokage transported them far away from me so that I would loose control over them. Not bad.)
Guy- [Releases large amount of force which results in forming a big crater around him.)
Minato & Co. - [They embrace themselves against the force exerted by Guy.]
Madara- (His composure looks different than before.)
Madara- [Smirks] Good that's it. Come at me with all you got.
Guy- [Disappears.]
Madara- !! (He is faster than before.)
[Guy suddenly appears in front of Madara.]
Madara- !! [Tries to shield himself.]
Guy- Take this. (Evening Elephant Version 2.)
Guy- [As he punches Madara in his stomach the attack takes the shape of tusks which pierce right through Madara.]
Madara- Aaargghh..[coughs blood]
Lee- That's...
Kakashi- What is it Lee-kun?!.
Lee- That's Guy-sensei's Evening Elephant Version 2.
Kakashi- !!!.
Guy- [Prepares for another attack but he predicts with his animal instincts that Madara will shield the next attack. Disappears.]
Madara- (I see, his animal instincts are far beyond than that of a normal beast.)
Madara- [He see's his black shape shifting balls coming his way.]
Madara- (Good, now I can shie- !!.)
Guy- [Appears above Madara before he could shield.]
Guy- (Evening Elephant Version 2.) [Punches Madara, where the tusks pierce right through his hands and pin him down on the ground.]
Madara- (My hands.... they are numb.)
Guy- This is it Madara. (Evening Elephant.)
Madara- Sh-shit..!!!.
Guy- [First step, Second step, Third step, Fourth step, Fifth step.]
Guy -Argggghhh.. [coughs blood]
Lee- Guy sensei.!!!.
Gaara- Did he get him?!.
Minato- Lets go..
Kakashi- Yes..!!.
SCENE CHANGES TO KAMUI DIMENSION.
Sakura- Wh-whats happening..!!.
Obito- Don't worry. Everything will be alright.
Sakura- [worried face] [moves forward and begins healing Obito.]
Obito- You don't have to do that. I won't last much longer. Save your chakra so you can heal Naruto when he comes back.
Sakura- Shut up.... as a medical ninja I need to fulfill my duty.
Obito- (see's an image of Rin in Sakura.)
Obito- (Rin....)
SCENE CHANGES TO NARUTO'S SUBCONSCIOUSNESS.
Naruto- What's going on..??.
Naruto- I don't understand. What is this all about?. Whats happening to me?!.
(Naruto see's images of SO6P- being born, everyone in the village ignores him (just like Naruto in his childhood), struggles hard to get acknowledged by the village people, thinking about peace, fighting juubi, whole world praising him, getting married, raising his two sons, deciding his successor, talking with 9 bijuus.)
Naruto- !!.
Naruto- [Looks around, suddenly he is covered by bright light.]
Naruto- [Covers his face with his hands.]
Naruto- {He see's a person sitting at a distance.}
Naruto- Who's there?!.
SO6P- So the savior has finally arrived!!.
[Naruto walks towards him.]
Naruto- Who are you old man?!!.
Tell me how it is. Based on your suggestions I will try to improve when I write my next predictions.
[ ] Actions
( ) Thoughts
{ } Description
Naruto- !! (Where am I?!!.)
Naruto- Ughh.!!!
[Naruto tries to stand up but struggles. Looks around and thinks where he might be?!.]
Naruto- What is this place?. It looks similar to the place where I met the bijuu.
[Naruto walks around, and then suddenly a flash of images appears in his mind.]
Naruto- Wh-whats happening?!!.
SCENE CHANGES TO THE BATTLEFIELD.
Kakashi- (No way, is he asking for more?).
Gaara- !!.
SCENE CHANGES TO MINATO FAR AWAY FORM KAKASHI & CO..
Minato- (This should be far enough for these black shape shifting balls to get out of control.)
BACK TO THE BATTLEFIELD.
Kakashi- Guy are you alright..?!. [pants [pants]
Guy- Kakashi please move back. I don't want my comrades to get suck up in my next attack.
Lee- Guy-sensei..!!.
[Minato appears next to Gaara.]
Minato- So it didn't affect him at all.
Gaara- Just how strong is he?!.
Madara-..
[Guy moves to a safe distance and takes a form where he crosses his hands across his face.]
Madara- So are you ready for the next round?!.
Guy- .. (I'm good for at-least two more attacks. The pain caused by opening the last gate is unbearable.)
Guy- Get ready Madara..
Madara- You better not disappoint me. (I need to make sure his next attack wont hit me directly. My healing ability is slow because of the damage caused by the air pressure. I better prepare for defense.)
Madara- Wh-what the?!!. Where are my black shape shifting balls?. ( I see, back then Fourth hokage transported them far away from me so that I would loose control over them. Not bad.)
Guy- [Releases large amount of force which results in forming a big crater around him.)
Minato & Co. - [They embrace themselves against the force exerted by Guy.]
Madara- (His composure looks different than before.)
Madara- [Smirks] Good that's it. Come at me with all you got.
Guy- [Disappears.]
Madara- !! (He is faster than before.)
[Guy suddenly appears in front of Madara.]
Madara- !! [Tries to shield himself.]
Guy- Take this. (Evening Elephant Version 2.)
Guy- [As he punches Madara in his stomach the attack takes the shape of tusks which pierce right through Madara.]
Madara- Aaargghh..[coughs blood]
Lee- That's...
Kakashi- What is it Lee-kun?!.
Lee- That's Guy-sensei's Evening Elephant Version 2.
Kakashi- !!!.
Guy- [Prepares for another attack but he predicts with his animal instincts that Madara will shield the next attack. Disappears.]
Madara- (I see, his animal instincts are far beyond than that of a normal beast.)
Madara- [He see's his black shape shifting balls coming his way.]
Madara- (Good, now I can shie- !!.)
Guy- [Appears above Madara before he could shield.]
Guy- (Evening Elephant Version 2.) [Punches Madara, where the tusks pierce right through his hands and pin him down on the ground.]
Madara- (My hands.... they are numb.)
Guy- This is it Madara. (Evening Elephant.)
Madara- Sh-shit..!!!.
Guy- [First step, Second step, Third step, Fourth step, Fifth step.]
Guy -Argggghhh.. [coughs blood]
Lee- Guy sensei.!!!.
Gaara- Did he get him?!.
Minato- Lets go..
Kakashi- Yes..!!.
SCENE CHANGES TO KAMUI DIMENSION.
Sakura- Wh-whats happening..!!.
Obito- Don't worry. Everything will be alright.
Sakura- [worried face] [moves forward and begins healing Obito.]
Obito- You don't have to do that. I won't last much longer. Save your chakra so you can heal Naruto when he comes back.
Sakura- Shut up.... as a medical ninja I need to fulfill my duty.
Obito- (see's an image of Rin in Sakura.)
Obito- (Rin....)
SCENE CHANGES TO NARUTO'S SUBCONSCIOUSNESS.
Naruto- What's going on..??.
Naruto- I don't understand. What is this all about?. Whats happening to me?!.
(Naruto see's images of SO6P- being born, everyone in the village ignores him (just like Naruto in his childhood), struggles hard to get acknowledged by the village people, thinking about peace, fighting juubi, whole world praising him, getting married, raising his two sons, deciding his successor, talking with 9 bijuus.)
Naruto- !!.
Naruto- [Looks around, suddenly he is covered by bright light.]
Naruto- [Covers his face with his hands.]
Naruto- {He see's a person sitting at a distance.}
Naruto- Who's there?!.
SO6P- So the savior has finally arrived!!.
[Naruto walks towards him.]
Naruto- Who are you old man?!!.
Tell me how it is. Based on your suggestions I will try to improve when I write my next predictions.
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