[Predictions] Naruto 668: Entrusting the youth

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Naruto Manga 668: Entrusting The Youth
*/scene starts with Obito filling Naruto with Kurama's yin half chakra and 1 and 8th tails chakra/*
*Naruto's face lighten up and again his heart beat starts.#sfx duk duk duk duk..*
Sakura : (analysing Naruto's Nerves) Naruto, I knew you'd never give up *with tears uttering with gentle crying voice*
Obito : *Improvising his emotions to normal* Naruto, this is the least I can do for you now but I want to improve things now and make everything better. I need your help and thats what friends are for, aren't they?
/scene switches to Sasuke/
Karin: *with confused eyes* so You've really changed ? *suddenly her eyes rages with fury* If you're planning anything fishy then kabuto you're gonna regret it...
Kabuto : *whispering with collected and calm emotions* Come-on Sasuke, wake up. You cant leave, especially not now. #sfx zuzuzuzu.
Suigetsu : *feeling under-rated and roling his eye-balls up* This is totally sounding like dramatic dream burrrrrrr....
Orochimaru : *jumping towards Tobirama* #sfx swooosh,
So old man, you're all wrecked up!!, let me give you some hands. I dont get this chance everyday.
Tobirama: I am already dead. Help that poor child 1st
Orochimaru : He'll be saved. *pulling out black chakra rods out of tobirama* hmm... so this black rods are the same used by nagato...
/scene switches to Madara battle field/
Kakashi : *with shocked wide eyes* Gai, you want to die this soon?
Gai : Kakashi I am not dying. I shall be always alive with My spirits , will of fire and my youth engraved in the hearts of coming generation. Atleast i can entrust those precious assets to young people. *letting out a slight smile*
Minato : You've really strong youth and will of fire inside you. But may be you're not ready. Your movements will surely not allow you.
lee: *with tears and crying voice* Sensei, why do you wanna leave us? Neji's gone and now you. But sensei if you're going, i've always got your back[/green]
Gai : lee dont tell like that. There's still time for you. You need to teach the coming generation the power of youth that never fades and our motto. You're not allowed to die now. Okay now let me go.
Madara: I should be more careful, I cant let my guard down. He's undoubtly stronger. But he's understimating me. He'll know who i am!
Gai : okay i'm leaving now
/kakashi, Minato, Lee , and Gaara to their shock cant utter a word and remains silent to the decision Gai made and Gai jumps towards Madara/
Gai: Madara, dont think that i'm lousy and weak. Be preapared for the thunder
/Madara look out Gai with narrow eyes and Suddenly Gai lifts up his arms and crosses both of his arms and his Aura turns into burning red/
Gai : *whispering slowly* This is the time i've been being ready for all my life. I cant ruin this. I'll make my power of youth shine forever. *With Louder and strong voice* HAICHIMON UNLEASING THE FINAL GATE: THE GATE OF DEATH
/the surrounding atmoshphere starts to burn with the overwhelming burning red aura. Gai's eyes and his breaths are gushing out burning red vapours/
/Gai Rushes towards Madara with unbeleivably high speed and kicks him that sends out Madara flying into the air. In the Mid air, Gai lets out his arms and kicks out and splat them unifying/
Gai : Madara eat this, Mid Night: Dragon
/all of the red aura and burning flames of Gai turns into huge burning red Dragon with thunder coating the Dragon that heads out high in the sky and move towards Madara with Powerful gust and devoures Madara in one go./
Gaara: So this is what Gai have saved all his life, this is unbeleivably fierceful.
Lee: *with tears but determination in voice* Sensei, I promise i'll never let end the Power of our youth. It'll be passed to next generations.
/Kakashi runs towards Gai and catches his falling body/
Kakashi : you're my strongest rival and always will be. You've finally won me in the competetion.
/scene Switches to Naruto/
Obito: I sense blast of strong Chakra in other dimension, i think we should hurry
Naruto: Lets go now, i've rested much. Thanks obito
/scene turns to Sasuke/
/Orochimaru, Kabuto and karin shocks when they sense the chakra going out in the other battlefield/
Sasuke : *with weak sound* we should now head towards the battle,no time to rest.
THE END
 

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Good but could have been better
 

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It's a good prediction but make it bit longer next time and that yellow lines hurts my eyes .
 

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The coloring was all right, but Minato's color was not good, because yellow and white can't be clearly seen together.

You need to work on spacing the paragraphs as well.

...the personalities were all right, but the prediction felt kind of cheesy.

Finally... the word "Mid Night", I don't know if it is correct. I think "Midnight" works better.
 

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Thanks alot to you all for so sweet advices and i'm grateful to you all :)
 

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There were some good points but it still needs some work . Don't worry you'll get it
 
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